专题18 由灵璧县渔沟中学事件看校园欺凌和青少年安全-备战2022高考英语书面表达热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)(3)

这是一份专题18 由灵璧县渔沟中学事件看校园欺凌和青少年安全-备战2022高考英语书面表达热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)(3)，共17页。
1．（2021·河北唐山·二模）校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：（1）What can yu see in the picture？
（2）What d yu think f schl bullying?
（3）What will yu d if yu are bullied r yu see smebdy else being bullied?
要求：1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥；
2、词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：mental health prblems（心理问题）bullies（仗势欺人者）
In the picture, I can see ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022·全国·二模）近来，青少年学生的安全备受社会关注。在全国中小学安全教育宣传日来临之际,当地报社请你以“Hw t Keep Us Safe？”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈青少年学生应该如何保障自身的安全。
提示:
(1) What shuld yu d at hme?
(2) What shuld yu d n the way t schl?
(3) What shuld yu d at schl?
要求:
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数：80左右。(短文开头已给出，不计人总词数)
Hw t Keep Us Safe?
Safety is imprtant t us all. As teenagers, we must learn t prtect urselves.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2022·浙江省浦江中学高一阶段练习）随着网络的普及，网络诈骗，网络欺凌等青少年网络安全问题成为大家关注的一个焦点，李华所在的班级围绕“网络安全问题”召开主题班会，假定你是李华，以“Hw t stay safe nline”为标题，写一篇发言稿。主要包括以下内容：
1. 强调网络安全的重要性；
2. 提出建议（如保护好个人隐私、文明上网等）；
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（河南省南阳市六校2021-2022学年高二下学期三月份联考英语试题）近日，中国青年报社会调查中心通过题客网和民意中国网，对10112人进行了一项题为“为什么经常运动的青少年越来越少”的调查，73. 4％的受访者坦言自己身边青少年的体质“越来越差”。排名第一的原因是“沉迷网络游戏等不健康的娱乐活动”；其次是“学习和工作的压力太大”；其他还有：“缺乏坚持的毅力”等。
1.现请你用英文写一篇调查报告，并就“如何才能让青少年经常参加体育运动”给出自己的建议。
2.注意：可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；词数100左右。
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5．（2015·江西南昌·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”活动。你们班为此要组织一次主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：
1．安全意识的重要性；
2．在校内要注意人身安全；
3．运动时要注意安全；
4．同学之间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety at Schl
My dear classmates,
There is n denying that safety plays an imprtant part in ur daily life. Recently ur schl has carried ut a prgram aimed at making ur campus a safe place t stay n.
6．（2022·天津实验中学一模）最近，很多关于青少年因过度使用手机而对身体和心理健康产生影响的事例多次出现在网上，作为晨光中学的学生会主席，你想通过广播向同学们发出科学合理使用手机的倡议。内容如下：
1、合理使用手机，使之为学习、生活服务；
2、避免沉溺于手机游戏或网络聊天等；
3、放下手机，更多阅读书籍或走近自然。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
Dear students,
May I have yur attentin，please？____________________________________________________________
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7．（2022·江苏·扬州中学高三阶段练习）假如你是李华，半年前你参加了《健康报》关于“健康与生活方式选择”的夏令营，开始反思自己的不良生活方式，现在请你给该报编辑写一封信投稿，内容包括：
1.你过去的一种不良生活方式及其对你的影响；2.你如何改变这种不良方式；
3.改变这种方式后你的感受。
Dear Editr,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2022·安徽·霍邱县第一中学高一开学考试）假定你是李华，最近你收到一封来自英国笔友Edward的邮件，询问你的健康生活方式。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 健康生活的意义；
2. 你对如何养成健康生活方式的建议（不少于3点）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头与结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Edward,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
9．（2021·福建福州·高一期中）假设你是李强，你的朋友Jenny向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他发一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 注意合理饮食。多吃鱼、肉、豆类等，特别是新鲜蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。
2. 注意锻炼身体。劳逸结合， 多参加体育活动。
3. 保证充足的睡眠。不要熬夜,每天至少睡8个小时。
注意:1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
Dear Jenny,
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Yurs,
Li Qiang
10．（2022·江苏·泰州中学高一阶段练习）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校组织了一场关于抗击新冠状病毒的校园安全讲座，请你就此写一则通知，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间、地点；
2.讲座的主要内容；
3.其他注意事项。
参考词汇：新冠状病毒nvel crnavirus
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考答案：
1．例文：
In the picture, I can see tw girls are bullying ne girl. Bullying ften ccurs in schls.
In my pinin, schl bullying is a serius prblem that has gt mre and mre attentin in sciety. Being bullied can make students feel scared r upset. Sme students are afraid f ging t schl. Schl bullying can even lead t mre serius mental health prblems. S hw shuld we stp schl bullying? If I see smebdy being bullied r I am bullied, I will tell the teachers r my parents at nce. It is nt a gd idea t d any bad things t the bullies n my wn.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：观察所给图片，根据所给提示和要求写一篇有关校园欺凌方面的短文，文中必须包含所给提示要点，可适当发挥，但短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
2.写作指导：本文主要是发表观点，提出处理方法，所以时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。写作时，可先描述图片中的现象，再发表自己的观点以及处理方法。保证内容完整、行文连贯、表达准确、书写规范。
2．例文
Hw t Keep Us Safe?
Safety is imprtant t us all. As teenagers, we must learn t prtect urselves. When we are at hme, we shuld be careful when we use electricity. Befre answering the dr, we first see whether she/he is a stranger. On the way t schl, we must pay special attentin t the traffic and bey the rules in the street. We must always ride the bicycles n the right and stp when the lights are red. When we are at schl, we never run arund the hallway. It’s n gd fr us t fight with each ther ver small matter.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目中所给提示问题写一篇文章。首先认真审题，看清提示问题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及可能用到的表达。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时。在写作过程中，注意句与句之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列等连词，使文章过渡平稳、自然流畅。最后检查是否有拼写、语法结构错误，以及词数是否符合要求等。
3．A pssible versin:
Gd afternn, my dear classmates/fellw students!
With the wide spread f the Internet, we have easy access t almst everything we want t knw. Meanwhile, there are als hidden/ptential dangers that we can’t see thrugh. Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline?
First f all, dn’t click n any strange link s as t avid prperty lss. Secnd, prtect yur privacy. Dn’t give away yur persnal infrmatin like name r address, and never see strangers yu meet nline. Finally, always be plite in the virtual wrld. Try nt t be a target fr a cyberbully.
Only when we bey the rules abve can we build a healthy and harmnius nline wrld.
Thank yu!
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于发言稿，要求考生以“Hw t stay safe nline”为标题，写一篇发言稿。主要包括以下内容：1. 强调网络安全的重要性；2. 提出建议（如保护好个人隐私、文明上网等）。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
保持：stay→keep
私人的：persnal→private
遵守：bey→bserve
首先：first f all→first and fremst
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First f all, dn’t click n any strange link s as t avid prperty lss.
拓展句：First f all, dn’t click n any strange link, the purpse f which is t avid prperty lss.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Meanwhile, there are als hidden/ptential dangers that we can’t see thrugh.(运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Only when we bey the rules abve can we build a healthy and harmnius nline wrld.(运用了nly位于句首引起的部分倒装句)
4． The scial survey center f China Yuth Daily cnducted a survey f 10,112 peple n Tike.cm and Cny.cm entitled “Why are fewer and fewer teenagers taking regular exercise?”
Accrding t the survey, 73.4 percent f respndents admitted that the health f teenagers arund them was “getting wrse and wrse”. The N.1 reasn was indulging in unhealthy entertainment activities such as nline games. The secnd is that they have t much pressure frm study and wrk. Others say they lack f perseverance.
As far as I am cncerned, ur teachers can leave students less hmewrk s that they can have mre time t take part in sprts. Besides, schls can rganize mre sprts activities fr them.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇调查报告，并就“如何才能让青少年经常参加体育运动”给出自己的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
做：cnduct→d
压力：pressure→stress
就我所知：As far as I am cncerned→As far as I knw
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The secnd is that they have t much pressure frm study and wrk;
拓展句：The secnd reasn why they have n time t take exercise is that they have t much pressure frm study and wrk.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The secnd is that they have t much pressure frm study and wrk. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】As far as I am cncerned, ur teachers can leave students less hmewrk s that they can have mre time t take part in sprts. (运用了s that引导目的状语从句)
5．My dear classmates,
There is n denying that safety plays an imprtant part in ur daily life. Recently ur schl has carried ut a prgram aimed at making ur campus a safe place t stay n.
I cnsider this as indeed a gd practice, which will make us aware that safety shuld always cme first in ur daily life, whether when we stay at schl r utside it. When we are ding sprts, we shuld attach imprtance t the safety and avid being hurt. Furthermre, when we get int truble with ur classmates, we shuld remain calm and avid any frm f fighting, which may nly bring suffering and pain t us mentally and physically.
As far as I'm cncerned, I feel all the students and teachers shuld wrk hard and creatively t keep the "safety at schl" activity in mind. Besides, we are suppsed t bserve the law discipline where we are at any mment.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”活动。你们班为此要组织一次主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：1．安全意识的重要性；2．在校内要注意人身安全；3．运动时要注意安全；4．同学之间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意： 1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】There is n denying that safety plays an imprtant part in ur daily life.there be句型和同位语从句的结合；I cnsider this as indeed a gd practice, which will make us aware that safety shuld always cme first in ur daily life, whether when we stay at schl r utside it.非限制性定语从句、宾语从句和whether--- r引导的让步状语从句完美结合；When we are ding sprts, we shuld attach imprtance t the safety and avid being hurt.句中使用了时间状语从句；Furthermre, when we get int truble with ur classmates, we shuld remain calm and avid any frm f fighting, which may nly bring suffering and pain t us mentally and physically.时间状语从句和非限制性定语从句在同一句中出现，另外Furthermre的运用也很到位；As far as I'm cncerned, I feel all the students and teachers shuld wrk hard and creatively t keep the "safety at schl" activity in mind.运用了As far as I'm cncerned,这样的方式状语从句；Besides, we are suppsed t bserve the law discipline where we are at any mment.运用了where引导的定语从句。
考点：考查话题类作文
6．Dear students，
May I have yur attentin please？As yu have nticed，there are mre and mre students addicted t cellphnes，which des harm t their health mentally and physically. In rder t avid such phenmena，I'd like t share with yu sme practical advice n hw t use cellphnes prperly.
Cellphne，as is knwn t us，serves as a tl，ffering us access t a better life. Therefre，using it in an apprpriate way des cme first. We shuldn't be bsessed with cellphne games r nline chatting，which is nt nly a waste f time，but als a hazard t ur eyes. Instead，try t set cellphnes aside. Only in this way，can we read mre meaningful bks and get clser t beautiful nature.
I sincerely hpe what I have mentined abve will make a big difference t yu. Wish all f yu a bright future！
Thank yu.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇倡议书。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇倡议书：最近，很多关于青少年因过度使用手机而对身体和心理健康产生影响的事例多次出现在网上，作为晨光中学的学生会主席，你想通过广播向同学们发出科学合理使用手机的倡议。内容如下：1、合理使用手机，使之为学习、生活服务；2、避免沉溺于手机游戏或网络聊天等；3、放下手机，更多阅读书籍或走近自然。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；cellphne（手机），mentally（心理上），physically（身体上），avid（避免）， phenmena（现象），practical（实用的），prperly（适当地），serve（服务），waste（浪费），meaningful（有意义的），nline chatting（上网聊天）及hazard（风险）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be bsessed with（沉迷于），in rder t（为了），access t (进入)，d harm t（对……有害），set aside（搁置）以及make a difference（有影响），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“there are mre and mre students addicted t cellphnes，which des harm t their health mentally and physically”，及“Cellphne，as is knwn t us，serves as a tl，ffering us access t a better life.”，状语从句“In rder t avid such phenmena，I'd like t share with yu sme practical advice n hw t use cellphnes prperly”，宾语从句“I sincerely hpe what I have mentined abve will make a big difference t yu.”，倒装句“Only in this way，can we read mre meaningful bks and get clser t beautiful nature.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
7．Dear Editr，
As I attended the summer camp abut health and lifestyle chices, I started t analyze them seriusly, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects n my life.
Half a year ag, I felt stressed ut and always relaxed with cmputer games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even mre wrn ut afterwards! After the camp, I realized that it was time t adjust my lifestyle by finding ther ways t relax. Rck climbing and playing basketball were the things I thught f ding instead. Thugh it was a big struggle, I made it with great determinatin.
After six mnths f trying ut, I feel mre energetic nw. I believe that I can change myself fr the better.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给《健康报》的编辑写一封信讲述自己之前不健康的生活方式，如何改变这种生活方式以及改变之后的感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：attend → jin
分析：analyze→ study
影响：effect→ influence
调整：adjust→mdify
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Half a year ag, I felt stressed ut and always relaxed with cmputer games day and night.
拓展句：Half a year ag, feeling stressed ut, I always relaxed myself with cmputer games day and night.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As I attended the summer camp abut health and lifestyle chices, I started t analyze them seriusly, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects n my life.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Rck climbing and playing basketball were the things I thught f ding instead（运用了动名词作主语以及省略that的定语从句）
8．Dear Edward,
It's great t hear frm yu. Learning that yu're curius abut my pinins n a healthy lifestyle, I'd like t share sme with yu. In my judgment, a healthy lifestyle lays the fundatin f gd health which is very essential t ur daily life and ur future develpment.
T frm a healthy lifestyle, we shuld nt nly have a well-balanced diet which cnsists f different kinds f fds but als have three meals regularly. Besides, we are suppsed t take a psitive attitude twards things and peple arund us s that we can keep mentally healthy. Furthermre, I strngly suggest taking regular exercise, like swimming, jgging, yga, etc, which is beneficial t building up a strng bdy.
I hpe we bth can have a healthy lifestyle, thus living healthily and happily.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，最近你收到一封来自英国笔友Edward的邮件，询问你的健康生活方式。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→advise
必要的：essential→necessary
此外：furthermre/besides→in additin
有益的：beneficial→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T frm a healthy lifestyle, we shuld nt nly have a well-balanced diet which cnsists f different kinds f fds but als have three meals regularly.
拓展句：We shuld nt nly have a well-balanced diet which cnsists f different kinds f fds but als have three meals regularly s that we can frm a healthy lifestyle.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Learning that yu're curius abut my pinins n a healthy lifestyle, I'd like t share sme with yu. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Furthermre, I strngly suggest taking regular exercise, like swimming, jgging, yga, etc, which is beneficial t building up a strng bdy. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear Jenny,
In rder t stay healthy, here are sme suggestins fr yu. T start with, we are suppsed t have a healthy balanced diet such as eating mre fish, meat and beans, especially fruit and vegetables, aviding fd rich in sugar and fat, etc. Mrever, we have t get rid f thse bad habits that damage ur health, such as staying up late. We shuld sleep fr abut 8 hurs at night. Last but nt least, we’d better exercise every day t build up ur bdies.
If yu fllw the suggestins given abve, yu will lead a healthy life.
Yurs,
Li Qiang
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jenny回信，就如何保持健康给出合理建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
保持健康：stay healthy→keep healthy
首先：T start with → T begin with
此外：Mrever→Futhermre/Besides
建议：suggestins→ advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In rder t stay healthy, here are sme suggestins fr yu.
拓展句：Here are sme suggestins fr yu in rder that yu can stay healthy.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Mrever, we have t get rid f thse bad habits that damage ur health, such as staying up late. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If yu fllw the suggestins given abve, yu will lead a healthy life.(运用了if引导的状语从句)
10． NOTICE
A lecture n hw t fight against nvel crnavirus will be held in the schl hall at 3:30 this Friday afternn and it will last tw hurs. Everyne is welcme t attend the lecture.
The lecture mainly invlves 2 aspects, the first f which is abut hw the virus spreads and its effects n peple. Meanwhile, there are experts’ suggestins n hw t prtect yurselves against the virus, including ways t wash yur hands thrughly and apprpriate exercise t build up yur bdy. I think yu will benefit a lt frm the lecture and have a better understanding f nvel crnavirus.
If yu are interested in the lecture, please enter the schl hall ahead f time and keep quiet during the lecture.
The Students’ Unin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校组织了一场关于抗击新冠状病毒的校园安全讲座，请你就此写一则通知。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
演讲：speech→lecture
影响：affect→effect
建议：advice→suggestin
感兴趣：take interest in=be interested in
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：A lecture n hw t fight against nvel crnavirus will be held in the schl hall at 3:30 this Friday afternn and it will last tw hurs.
拓展句：A lecture n hw t fight against nvel crnavirus will be held in the schl hall at 3:30 this Friday afternn, which will last tw hurs.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The lecture mainly invlves 2 aspects, the first f which is abut hw the virus spreads and its effects n peple. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If yu are interested in the lecture, please enter the schl hall ahead f time and keep quiet during the lecture. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)