统考版2021高考英语二轮专题复习35分写作规范抢分练一含解析新人教版20201209246

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第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
[2020·昆明市“三诊一模”高考模拟考试]Lucy, the 5th grader, has a lve f writing letters. She wrte t her mailman t express her thanks in last week. “Dug, yu may knw me as a persn wh wrte lts f letters and decrates the envelpes t. I want thank yu fr taking my letters and delivering it. I make peple happily with my letters, but yu d t，” Lucy wrte.
The next day, Lucy gt a letter frm Dug thanking her fr recgnizing which he had dne and the imprtances f his jb. Feeling mved and inspiring, Dug shared Lucy's letter nline. It received mre than 200, 000 likes.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2020·沈阳市教学质量监测三]假定你是李华，为让学生更好地了解儒家文化，你校将邀请李教授到学校做“儒学”讲座。请你给在你校就读的外国学生写份英文通知，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容安排；
3．注意事项。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔子Cnfucius；儒学Cnfucianism
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Student Unin
June 17th, 2020
35分写作规范抢分练(一)
第一节
答案与解析：
Lucy, eq \(the,\s\d16(①a)) 5th grader, has a lve f writing letters. She wrte t her mailman t express her thanks eq \(,\s\d16(②)) last week. “Dug, yu may knw me as a persn wh eq \(wrte,\s\d16(③writes)) lts f letters and decrates the envelpes t. I want eq \(∧,\s\d16(④t)) thank yu fr taking my letters and delivering eq \(it,\s\d16(⑤them)). I make peple eq \(happily,\s\d16(⑥happy)) with my letters, eq \(but,\s\d16(⑦and)) yu d t，” Lucy wrte.
The next day, Lucy gt a letter frm Dug thanking her fr recgnizing eq \(which,\s\d16(⑧what)) he had dne and the eq \(imprtances,\s\d16(⑨imprtance)) f his jb. Feeling mved and eq \(inspiring,\s\d16(⑩inspired))， Dug shared Lucy's letter nline. It received mre than 200, 000 likes.
①the改为a。冠词误用。grader是可数名词，又是第一次在文中出现，所以应用不定冠词修饰。
②删除in。介词多用。表时间的名词前带有last，next，this，these，that等指示性限定修饰语且其前没有冠词时，其前要省略介词。
③wrte改为writes。动词时态误用。根据and提示可知，此处与decrates呼应，故用一般现在时形式。
④want后加t。不定式符号t漏用。want t d sth.想要做某事，是固定搭配，故用不定式作宾语。
⑤it改为them。代词误用。此处them与前面的复数名词letters呼应。
⑥happily改为happy。形容词和副词混用。make sb.＋形容词，是固定搭配，形容词作宾语补足语。
⑦but改为and。连词误用。根据语境中的yu d t可知，上下句表示并列关系，而非转折关系。
⑧which改为what。名词性从句中引导词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个宾语从句，what在从句中作had dne的宾语，表示事物的概念。
⑨imprtances改为imprtance。名词形式误用。imprtance是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
⑩inspiring改为inspired。非谓语动词误用。根据Feeling可知，此处与mved并列作表语，且表示人的感受，故用过去分词。
第二节
参考范文：
Ntice
In rder t help students learn mre abut Cnfucian culture, ur schl will invite a distinguished expert, Prfessr Li, t give a lecture entitled “Cnfucianism” in ur schl hall n June 25th.
The lecture will last abut tw hurs frm 2 p．m. t 4 p．m. cvering three aspects: First cmes the general intrductin t Cnfucianism, including its rigin, cre ideas and influence. During the lecture, Cnfucius and his anecdtes will als be included, which is gd news fr his admirers. The final part is the questin and answer sessin, in which Prfessr Li will help the audience apply Cnfucianism t slve practical prblems.
All are welcme and please be punctual and disciplined.
Student Unin
June 17th, 2020