统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练一（附解析）

这是一份统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练一（附解析），共2页。试卷主要包含了每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；，只允许修改10处，多者不计分等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·河南省洛阳市高三二模]
你校正在组织英文作文比赛， 请以“Hw t be an utstanding student”为题， 写一篇短文参赛， 内容包括：
1．你心中优秀学生的标准；2.如何成为优秀的学生。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目和首句已为你写好。
Hw t be an utstanding student
Every student wants t be utstanding.













35分写作规范练（一）
写作
第一节
第二节
参考范文：
Hw t be an utstanding student
Everystudentwantstbeutstanding. We students are the builders and masters f the cuntry. It is imprtant fr us t knw hw t be an utstanding student. An utstanding student, I think, shuld be diligent in his studies. The harder he studies, the mre he will increase his knwledge. Withut enugh knwledge, we cannt make great cntributins t the mdernizatin f ur cuntry. T take care f ne's wn bdy is anther imprtant thing fr utstanding students t d. Anyne, wh hasn't gt a strng bdy, can d nthing fr his cuntry, even if he has much knwledge. Lastly, t cultivate ne's wn virtue is mst imprtant. Virtue is the essence f a nble and gd character. When learned peple g astray, they d mre harm than gd t sciety. We shuld draw lessns frm this. I believe yu will be excellent students.