统考版2021高考英语二轮专题复习35分写作规范抢分练五含解析新人教版20201209245

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第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
[2020·成都市高三第一次诊断性检测]Last summer I decided t get my first jb. This was pssible ne f the hardest tasks. Fr me, it was anther step mved frm a dependent child t a fairly independent adult. I had never hld a jb befre because f my parents wanted me t fcus n schl. S I had never wrked the day in my life. At first, it is extremely tugh. I sent applicatins hping t get my first cuple f chice. Yet I gt neither calls r emails. Luckily, halfway thrugh the third week, I finally gt a call. It was nt my first chice, but we culd nt say n. And after the interview, I was mre than ready start wrking the fllwing Mnday.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2020·“四省八校”高三第二次质量检测]假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Zack将要来中国旅游，回国前想给家人和朋友买一些有中国特色的礼物，他给你发邮件寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐礼物；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Chinese characteristic中国特色
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35分写作规范抢分练(五)
第一节
答案与解析：
Last summer I decided t get my first jb. This was eq \(pssible,\s\d16(①pssibly)) ne f the hardest tasks. Fr me, it was anther step eq \(mved,\s\d16(②mving)) frm a dependent child t a fairly independent adult. I had never eq \(hld,\s\d16(③held)) a jb befre because eq \(,\s\d16(④)) my parents wanted me t fcus n schl. S I hard never wrked eq \(the,\s\d16(⑤a)) day in my life. At first, it eq \(is,\s\d16(⑥was)) extremely tugh. I sent applicatins hping t get my first cuple f eq \(chice,\s\d16(⑦chices)). Yet I gt neither calls eq \(r,\s\d16(⑧nr)) emails. Luckily, halfway thrugh the third week, I finally gt a call. It was nt my first chice, but eq \(we,\s\d16(⑨I)) culd nt say n. And after the interview, I was mre than readyeq \(∧,\s\d16(⑩t)) start wrking the fllwing Mnday.
①pssible改为pssibly。形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处在句子中作状语，故应用副词形式。
②mved改为mving。非谓语动词误用。在本句中，was为谓语动词，mve与其逻辑主语构成主谓关系，作step的后置定语，故应用mving。
③hld改为held。动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，本句时态为过去完成时，基本结构为had dne, hld的过去分词为held，故应用held。
④删除because后的f。介词多用。because是连词，其后接句子；because f是介词，其后接名词、代词等。此处后接的是一个句子，故应把f删除。
⑤the改为a。冠词误用。此处表示在这之前我连一天都没工作过，此处表泛指，且day的发音以辅音音素开头，故应用a。
⑥is改为was。动词时态误用。根据首句中的时间状语Last summer和语境可知，该处描述的是发生在过去的事，应用一般过去时，故把is改为was。
⑦chice改为chices。名词的单复数误用。cuple f表示“几个……”，后接可数名词复数，故应把chice改为chices。
⑧r改为nr。固定搭配误用。此处表示我既没有接到电话，也没有收到邮件。“既不……也不……”为固定搭配，故把r改为nr。与其易混淆的搭配为：“或者……或者……”。
⑨we改为I。代词误用。此处表示它不是我的第一选择，但是我不能拒绝。此处人称应为我，而非我们，故应把we改为I。
⑩ready后加t。不定式符号漏用。be ready t d sth.意为“准备好做某事”为固定用法，故在ready后加t。
第二节
参考范文：
Dear Zack，
I am mre than happy t knw that yu are planning t travel t China. Welcme! And I am very willing t recmmend sme gifts with Chinese characteristics t yu.
Firstly, I suggest that yu buy sme silk prducts. As is knwn, China is famus fr silk. Yu may find a variety f silk prducts, which are light and easy t carry, such as scarfs and handkerchiefs. Secndly, paper cutting wrks are als gd chices. They are a symbl f traditinal Chinese flk culture and gd decratins fr rms. Lastly, sme lcal snacks are als wrth buying.
I hpe my suggestins are f help t yu. If yu want t knw any ther bjects, dn't hesitate t ask me.
Yurs，
Li Hua