统考版2021高考英语二轮专题复习35分写作规范抢分练四含解析新人教版20201209244

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第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
[2020·广州高三调研]Last week, I quarrel with my parents abut spending t much time in my cellphne. I felt exhausting that day, and became very angry even thugh they talked t me in a friend way.
I nw feel ashamed and am writing with this article t aplgize. There are peple in the wrld I value, such as teacher and friends. Mrever, the mst imprtant peple t me is my parents. It is them wh raise me and give me a happy life. I want them t knw that I'm deeply srry and will try t be gd persn and make them prud.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2020·贵阳市高三适应性考试(一)]据世界卫生组织(Wrld Health Organizatin)统计，全球81%的青少年缺乏锻炼。假定你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语准备一篇发言稿，在一次国际学生交流活动中发言。
1．青少年缺乏运动的原因；
2.运动的好处；
3.如何制定运动计划。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear fellw students，
Accrding t the Wrld Health Organizatin, 81% f teenagers have a lack f exercising. ________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank yu!
35分写作规范抢分练(四)
第一节
答案与解析：
Last week, I eq \(quarrel,\s\d16(①quarreled)) with my parents abut spending t much time eq \(in,\s\d16(②n)) my cellphne. I felt eq \(exhausting,\s\d16(③exhausted)) that day, and became very angry even thugh they talked t me in a eq \(friend,\s\d16(④friendly)) way.
I nw feel ashamed and am writing eq \(,\s\d16(⑤)) this article t aplgize. There are peple in the wrld I value, such as eq \(teacher,\s\d16(⑥teachers)) and friends. eq \(Mrever,\s\d16(⑦Hwever))， the mst imprtant peple t me eq \(is,\s\d16(⑧are)) my parents. It is eq \(them,\s\d16(⑨they)) wh raise me and give me a happy life. I want them t knw that I'm deeply srry and will try t be eq \(∧,\s\d16(⑩a)) gd persn and make them prud.
①quarrel改为quarreled。动词时态误用。根据该句的时间状语“last week”可知，该句陈述的动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
②in改为n。介词误用。spend time n sth.为固定搭配，意为“在……上花费时间”。
③exhausting改为exhausted。形容词误用。根据该句主语I可知，该处应用形容词exhausted，表示“筋疲力尽的”，形容人；exhausting表示“令人筋疲力尽的”，通常修饰物。
④friend改为friendly。名词和形容词混用。形容词修饰名词，故该处应用形容词修饰名词way，表示“友好的方式”，故可知答案。
⑤删除with。介词多用。write为及物动词，后面直接接宾语，故删除介词with。
⑥teacher改为teachers。名词的单复数误用。根据该句中的“There are”和“friends”并结合语境可知，作者珍视的老师和朋友都不止一人，故用复数形式。
⑦Mrever改为Hwever。副词误用。前一句是说，在这个世界上有我珍视的人，比如老师和朋友。该句是说，对我来说最重要的人是我的父母。根据前后句句意可知，前后句之间为逻辑上的转折关系，故应用副词Hwever。
⑧is改为are。主谓不一致。该句主语为“the mst imprtant peple”，为复数形式，故谓语动词也应用复数形式。
⑨them改为they。人称代词误用。分析该句结构可知，该句使用了强调句结构，被强调的部分是主语，应用代词的主格，故用they。
⑩gd前加a。冠词漏用。该处泛指“一个好人”，故用不定冠词，且gd的发音以辅音音素开头，故用a。
第二节
参考范文：
Dear fellw students，
Accrding t the Wrld Health Organizatin, 81% f teenagers have a lack f exercising. And it will lead t the health prblems. In my pinin, we shuld exercise every day.
As we all knw, mst f us think exercising is a waste f time, fr we are having much hmewrk in high schl. We prefer smart phnes t sprts. Hwever, sprts can strengthen ur bdy and make us energetic, which is beneficial t ur study. S, I want all f yu t make a plan fr daily exercise after hearing my speech. Yu can chse a sprt yu like and make a reasnable time fr ding it. Make sure yu can insist, therwise yu cannt gain the effect.
Anyhw, I hpe all f yu can change yur mind and spend sme time exercising.
That's all. Thank yu!