2020版一轮复习英语译林全国版学案:选修7Unit2Fitforlife
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(一)课前自主学习
Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意
1.surgeon n. 外科医师
2.lifesaving adj. 救命的,救生的
3.revolution n. 巨变,大变革;革命;旋转,天体运行
4.counter n. 柜台;计数器;反驳
vt. 反驳;抵制,抵消
5.acid n. 酸,酸性物质
adj. 酸的,酸性的;酸味的;尖酸的
6.stroke n. 中风,_脑溢血;(打、击等的)一下,
一击;轻抚;笔画_
vt. 轻抚,抚摸
7.diabetes n. 糖尿病
8.symptom n. 症状;征兆
9.outcome n. 结果,后果
10.swell vi.&vt. 肿胀,膨胀;(使)凸出,鼓起
11.stainless adj. 不生锈的
12.organ n. 器官;管风琴,风琴;机构,团体
13.alcoholic n. 酒鬼
adj. 酒精的,含酒精的
14.mass adj.
n.[纵联1] 大规模的;数量极多的
一团,一堆;许多;(物理)质量
15.complex adj. 复杂的,难懂的
n. 建筑群;相关联的一组事物;情结
Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形
1.phenomenon n. 现象
2.bestselling adj. 畅销的
3.approval n. 批准,通过;赞成,同意
4.unable adj.[纵联2] 不能,无法
5.vital adj. 对……极重要的,必不可少的
6.potential n. 可能性,潜在性;潜力,潜能
adj. 潜在的,可能的
7.bleed vi. 流血,失血
8.subscribe vi. 定期订购或订阅
9.possess vt. 拥有,具有
10.astonish vt. 使十分惊讶,使吃惊
11.sickness n. 疾病;恶心,呕吐
12.relate vt.& vi. 联系,把……联系起来;叙述,讲述
13.beneficial adj. 有益的,有用的
14.sharp adj.[纵联3] 锋利的;急剧的;灵敏的;尖锐的,
严厉的
15.arrangement n. 排列,布置;安排;约定,协议
Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变
1.chemist n.药剂师,药商;化学家→chemistry n.化学→chemical adj.化学的
2.circulate vi.& vt.循环;传播;传递,传阅→circulation n.循环;传播
3.effective adj.有效的;实际的;生效的→effect n.效果,作用;影响
4.abnormal adj.不正常的,反常的→normal adj.正常的
5.application n.应用,运用;申请,申请表;涂抹,外敷→apply vt.应用,使用 vi.申请,请求→applicant n.申请人
6.accelerate vt.& vi.(使)加速,加快→acceleration n.加快;增速
7.reasonable adj.合理的;公道的→reasonably adv.合乎逻辑地;明智地→reason n.原因,理由vt.推理
8.applaud vi.& vt.鼓掌;称赞,赞许→applause n.鼓掌,喝彩
9.addicted adj.上瘾;入迷→addict v.使沉溺,使入迷n.吸毒成瘾的人,对……入迷的人→addiction n.瘾;嗜好→addictive adj.使人上瘾的
纵联1.mass搭配点点记
①a mass of 许多;大量
②be a mass of 充满;布满
③in the mass 总体上
④the masses 群众;大众
纵联2.攻克“un前缀”高频词
①unable 不能的
②unimportant 不重要的
③unlucky 不幸运的
④unfortunate 不幸的
⑤unpleasant 令人不愉快的
⑥unexpectedly 没有预料到地
⑦undoubtedly 毫无疑问地
⑧unlike 不像……
⑨unfair 不公平的
纵联3.速记成对反义词
① ②
③ ④
单元话题——医疗技术的进步
子话题1 保持健康
①right food 合理饮食
②regular exercise 规律锻炼
③enough sleep 睡眠充足
④a balanced diet 平衡饮食
⑤fresh fruit and vegetables 新鲜水果蔬菜
⑥proper activities 适当的活动
⑦keep a good mind 保持好的心态
⑧quit smoking/alcohol 戒烟/酒
子话题2 疾病与治疗
①unwell adj. 不适的
②affection n. 感染
③scar n. 伤痕
④diagnosis n. 诊断
⑤prescription n. 处方药
⑥lose consciousness 失去知觉
⑦blood transfusion 输血
⑧cough medicine 止咳药
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一) 阅读中的词汇应用
1.(2015·江苏高考阅读C)Once people begin to volunteer, what leads them to remain in their positions over time? To answer this question, researchers have conducted followup studies in which they track volunteers over time. For instance, one study followed 238 volunteers in Florida over a year. One of the most important❶ factors that influenced their satisfaction as volunteers was the amount of suffering they experienced in their volunteer positions. Although this result❷ may not surprise you, it leads to important practical❸ advice. The researchers note that attention should be given to “training methods that would prepare volunteers for troublesome situations or provide them with strategies for coping with the problem they do experience”.
①写出加黑词在本单元的同义词:vital,意为“重要的”。
②加黑词可用本单元单词 outcome进行升级。该加黑词的常用短语:as_a_result,意为“结果”;result_in意为“导致”;result_from意为“由……所致”。
③写出加黑词在本单元的近义词:beneficial,意为“有益的”,其后通常与介词to连用。
2.(2013·江西高考阅读B)More than the help that one nation can give to another during a disaster, it would be more __❶__ (effect) to give other forms of help during normal❷ times.A common proverb says, “Give me a fish and I eat for a day, teach me to fish and I eat for a lifetime.” If we follow this wise saying, it would be right to teach people from less developed nations to take care of themselves ...Even a small country is able❸ to help less developed nations.
①用所给词的适当形式填空:effective,意为“有效的”。其名词effect,意为“影响,结果,后果”,构成短语bring/put sth. into effect“使某物开始生效”;in effect“事实上”。
②写出加黑词在本单元的反义词:abnormal
③写出加黑词在本单元的反义词:unable,该词可以构成短语be_unable_to_do_sth.意为“不能够做某事”。
高考采撷(二) 写作中的词汇应用
(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)
1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我希望这些建议对你有益。我相信你会玩得很开心的。(beneficial)
I_hope_these_suggestions_would_be_beneficial_to_you.I'm_sure_you_will_have_a_great_time.
2.(2010·福建高考书面表达)首先,我认为一个有效的方法是用科学的方式来节约水资源。(effective)
Firstly,_an_effective_way,_I_think,_is_to_reserve_water_in_a_scientific_way.
(二)课堂重点释疑
1.possess vt.拥有,具有;支配
[记牢]
(1)be possessed of 具有(某品质、能力等)
be possessed by 为……所支配
(2)possession n. [C](常作复数)所有;财产
[U]具有,拥有
in possession of 占有;拥有;持有
in sb.'s possession = in the possession of sb.
为某人所有;在某人的控制下
get/take/gain possession of 拥有;占有
[练通]
片段语法填空
①He is diligent, honest and down to earth.Gradually, he accumulated a great many possessions (possess).Nowadays, he is in possession (possess) of two famous companies.
单句改错
②Technical progress would put our firm in the possession of the home market.去掉第一个the
③We have already bought the house, but we won't take the possession of it until May.去掉第二个the
[用准] possession表示“所有;财产”时,通常用复数;表示“具有,拥有”时,为不可数名词。
[写美]
④(2014·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)那时候我将28岁了。将有自己的家庭,也许会有一个可爱的孩子。
I_will_be_twentyeight_years_old_by_then.I_will_possess_my_own_family,_probably_with_a_lovely_child.
2.vital adj.对……极重要的,必不可少的
[记牢]
be vital for/to sth. 对……极为重要
It is vital to do sth. 做某事很重要
It is vital that ... (should) do sth. ……是十分重要的
[练通] 完成句子
①It's_vital_that we should never lower safety standards as life is the most important in the world.
我们绝不能降低安全标准,这是至关重要的,因为在世界上生命是最宝贵的。
②Enough sleep is_vital_for/to the students' wellbeing and health.
充足的睡眠对学生的身心健康是非常重要的。
③It_is_vital_to_keep_calm in an emergency.
在情况紧急的时候,保持镇静是至关重要的。
[用准] 在句型“It is vital/important that ...”中,从句谓语动词要用虚拟语气,即“should+动词原形”,should可以省略。
[写美]
④(2010·福建高考书面表达)采取有效措施,阻止水资源污染是很重要的。
It_is_vital_to_take_effective_measures_to_stop_polluting_the_water_resources.
3.potential n.可能性,潜在性;潜力,潜能 adj.潜在的,可能的
[记牢]
(1)have the potential to do sth. 有做某事的潜力
achieve one's (full) potential (充分)发挥某人的潜力
(2)the potential danger 潜在的危险
[练通] 完成句子
①Chinese have_the_potential_to shape Web commerce and culture of their own.
中国人有能力建立他们自己的网络商业和文化。
②All we can do is to find the_potential_danger and try to decrease it.
我们所能做的是找到这些潜在的危险,并设法减少这种危险。
③The school strives to treat students as individuals and to help each one to achieve_their_full_potential.
学校力图因材施教,并帮助每位学生充分发挥他们的潜能。[写美]
④(2010·江西高考书面表达)魔力词汇能够帮助我们构建更和谐的生活空间。
The_magic_words_have_the_potential_to_build_a_more_harmonious_space_of_life.
4.astonish vt.使十分惊讶,使吃惊
[记牢]
(1)It astonishes sb. that ... 令某人感到吃惊的是……
What astonishes sb. is ... 使某人吃惊的是……
(2)astonished adj. 吃惊的(多修饰人)
be astonished at/by ... 对……感到惊讶
be astonished to do sth. 做某事感到惊讶
be astonished that ... 对……感到惊讶
astonishing adj. 令人吃惊的(多修饰物)
(3)astonishment n. 惊讶,吃惊
to one's astonishment 让某人感到惊讶的是
in astonishment 惊讶地
[练通]
单句语法填空
①We were astonished to_find (find) the temple still in its original condition.
②Here is an astonishing (astonish) and significant fact: mental work alone can't make us tired.
③The audience was inexpressibly astonished at/by the brilliant performance.
一句多译
使我惊讶的是他取得了如此快的进步。
④What_astonished_me_was_that_he_made_such_rapid_progress.(what astonishes sb. is ...)
⑤To_my_astonishment,_he_made_such_rapid_progress.(astonishment)
⑥I_was_astonished_that_he_made_such_rapid_progress.(be astonished that ...)
[写美]
⑦(2012·广东高考书面表达)令我们惊讶的是,他在80多岁时决定学习法律,并于2006年获得硕士学位。
To_our_astonishment,_he_decided_to_study_law_in_his_eighties_and_got_a_master's_degree_in_2006.
5.relate vt.& vi.联系,把……联系起来;叙述,讲述
[记牢]
(1)relate ... to ... 把……和……联系在一起
relate sth. to sb. 向某人叙述/讲述某事
relate to ... 和……有关联;和……合得来
(2)related adj. 相关的;有(亲属)关系的
be related to ... 和……有关的;和……有联系的
(3)relation n. 关系
in/with relation to 关于;与……相比
relationship n. 关系,联系
[练通]
单句语法填空
①It is difficult to relate his argument to the facts.
②He found it difficult to sustain good relationship (relate) with them.
③Putting up signs related (relate) to banning smoking was advised by the government.
完成句子
④It is requested that all the articles should be_related_to the students' life.
据要求所有的文章都要与学生的生活有关。
⑤The state has staged a series of policy measures in/with_relation_to western region development.
国家已经出台了一系列有关西部发展的政策措施。
[写美]
⑥(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)剪纸有一千五百多年的历史,与中国的传统文化紧密联系在一起。
Papercutting_is_closely_related_to_the_traditional_culture_of_China,_and_has_a_history_of_more_than_1,500_years.
[词汇过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1.One day, the chemist (化学家) dissolved some material in hot water.
2.What she possesses (拥有) is the ability to get straight to the core of a problem.
3.We are aware of the potential (潜在的) problems and have taken every precaution (预防).
4.In my mind, switching from coal to gas is a good decision, which is beneficial (有益的) to energy conservation and environment protection.
5.Poor educational performance is related (有关的) to emotional disturbance.
6.My main reason for subscribing (订阅) to New Scientist is to keep in touch with advances in science.
7.The police stopped the car and they were astonished (吃惊的) to find the driver was a sixyearold boy.
8.Think carefully before you insure against accident, sickness (疾病) and redundancy.
9.And thanks to its architecture, it is still probably the bestselling (畅销的) product of its kind in the world.
10.The oceans are a key part of the natural carbon cycle, in which carbon dioxide is circulated (循环) between the land, seas and atmosphere.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.I am busy preparing for my final exam, which is vital for/to me.
2.It is astonishing (astonish) how much the state of the body influences the powers of the mind.
3.It is reported that the temperature will decline sharply (sharp) in one or two days.
4.John was addicted (addict) to Chinese culture, so he decided to learn Chinese in a night school.
5.The letter put me in possession (possess) of some important information.
6.The application (apply) must be made within twentyfour hours, or it will not be attended to.
7.Many people have expressed their dissatisfaction with the arrangement (arrange).
8.Teachers can only be expected to do what is reasonable (reason) and practicable.
Ⅲ.单句改错
1.When the man came in, gun in hand, we all stood there, astonishing.
astonishing→astonished
2.The average person has potential to become a millionaire in today's world. potential前加the
3.As is wellknown to us, reading is vital importance in language learning.vital前加of
4.A relaxing holiday is thought to be benefit to his health and mind. benefit→beneficial
5.We must relate these principles with our everyday work.with→to
Ⅳ.完成句子
1.Those buildings are now in_the_possession_of our university.
现在那些楼房归我们大学所有。
2.We believe that every student has the ability to_achieve_their_full_potential and be successful in their career.
我们相信每位学生都有能力发挥他们的全部潜力,并在他们的职业生涯中取得成功。
3.We think he will not be_addicted_to_computer_games any longer.
我们认为他将不会再沉溺于电脑游戏了。
4.Health problems are_closely_related_to bad eating habits and a lack of exercise.
健康问题与不良的饮食习惯和缺乏锻炼密切相关。
5.I spotted a shooting star which, to_my_astonishment,_was bright green in colour.
我看见一颗流星,使我惊奇的是,它居然是鲜亮的绿色。
(一)课前自主学习
1.try_out[串记1] 测试,试验;参加选拔
2.wear_sb.out 使筋疲力尽;使厌烦
3.let_out 放出,发出
4.swell_up 肿胀,膨胀
5.subscribe_to 同意,赞成
6.open_up 打开
7.be_cautious_about 对……小心谨慎
8.look_out_for 当心;留心
9.fade_away 逐渐消失
10.be_connected_with 和……有联系
11.block_...from_... 阻止……
12.due_to 由于,因为
13.carry_out 执行,实施
14.pick_out 挑选,挑出
15.relate_...to_... 把……与……相联系
16.be_addicted_to[串记2] 对……上瘾,成瘾
17.play_an_important_role_in 在……中起重要作用
18.be_aware_of 意识到
[同根短语串记]
串记1.“v.+out”短语集锦
①try out 测试,试验
②run out 用光,耗尽
③give out 分发;耗尽,用光
④break out 爆发,发生
⑤make out 理解,辨认出
⑥work out 制定,解决,结果
串记2.走进“be+adj.+to”短语圈
①be addicted to 对……上瘾
②be accessible to 容易接近,易到达
③be equal to 与……相等
④be familiar to 被(人)熟知
⑤be sensitive to 对……敏感
⑥be thankful to 对……感激
1.prove beneficial to mankind 证明对人类有益
2.the standard of people's health 人们的健康标准
3.have pictures of his or her body parts taken
对他/她的身体部位拍片
4.have a fever and keep coughing 发烧并一直咳嗽
5.key words linked to the topic 与主题有关的关键词
6.go to a consulting room 去咨询室
7.find information on the subject 找到有关这个话题的信息
8.according to the symptoms 根据症状
1.Have you ever seen a doctor? If_so,_what happened?
你曾经看过医生吗?如果看过的话,发生了什么事?
2.If you open up any medicine cupboard or go to any medicine counter in the world, it_is_likely_that you will find aspirin and penicillin.
倘若你打开世界上任何一个药柜或去任何一家药店的柜台,都很有可能找到阿司匹林和青霉素。
3. Some acupuncturists insert needles at or near the body part affected by the disease, while others select points according to the symptoms that the patient has.
一些针灸医师在疾病感染的身体患病处或在患病处附近扎针,而另外一些则根据病人的病症选择扎针的位置。
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一) 阅读中的词块和句式(完成句子)
1.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ阅读D)Nurses and other caregivers need to be_aware_of (意识到) the possible meanings of silence when they come across the personal anxiety their patients may be experiencing.
2.(2015·安徽高考完形)Our appetite for new products also contributes to the problem.We are_addicted_to (对……上瘾) buying new things.
高考采撷(二) 写作中的短语和句式
1.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我计划先帮你学习一些唐诗,它在中华文明中起着重要作用。(用“play an important role in”翻译句子)
I_plan_to_help_you_study_some_poems_of_the_Tang_Dynasty,_which_play_an_important_role_in_Chinese_civilization.
2.(2014·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think maybe my life will be very different in ten years.(用it is likely that句式改写句子)
→I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future.It_is_likely_that_my_life_will_be_very_different_in_ten_years.
(二)课堂重点释疑
[短语集释]
1.try out测试,试验;参加选拔
[记牢]
try out for 参加……选拔(或试演)
try for 试图获得,力争赢得
try on 试穿
[练通] 选用上述短语填空
①Why don't you try_out_for the basketball team?You have nothing to lose.
②It is very pleasant for him to travel and to try_out and explore whatever is new.
③I try_on the beautiful overcoat, but it is too tight.
[写美]
④(2018·北京高考书面表达)他们洗了茶壶,加了茶叶,往茶杯里倒了些水,他们按照我的指导,试着学习泡茶的技巧。
Washing_the_tea_pots,_adding_tea_leaves,_and_pouring_water_into_the_cups,_they_followed_my_instruction_and_were_trying_for_the_skills_of_making_tea.
2.let out放出,释放;发出(声音);放大(衣服);泄露
[辨清] 写出下列句中let out的含义
①He let out a long sigh, mainly of relief, partly of sadness.发出
②The waist of the pants needs to be let out.放大
③Who let out the exam results? They were supposed to be confidential until tomorrow.泄露
④If he was given five years' imprisonment, he could be let out after three years.释放
[记牢]
let alone 更不用说
let down 放下,降低;使失望
let go (of) 放开,松手
let off 宽恕,免除;燃放
[练通] 选用上述短语填空
⑤Don't let_off fireworks near the house.It's dangerous.
⑥In a voice full of reproach, she told the naughty boy that he had let_down the whole class.
⑦Its water is so contaminated that in some areas it is unsafe even to touch, let_alone use for irrigation or drinking.
⑧Don't let_out your secret to those who easily become expansive after a few drinks.
[写美]
⑨(2015·广东高考书面表达)他们不关心别人。更不用说主动帮助同学了。
They_don't_care_about_others.Let_alone_give_an_offer_to_help_other_classmates.
3.wear sb.out使筋疲力尽;使厌烦
[记牢]
(1)wear (sth.) out 穿破;用坏
wear (sth.) away (因重复使用而)变薄;磨损
wear down (通过不断攻击或施加压力)使衰弱,使意志薄弱
(2)worn adj. 用坏的;用旧的;筋疲力尽的
be worn out (人)精疲力竭;(物)破烂不堪
[练通]
用wear的相关短语填空
①Every time she consulted her watch, she wondered if the batteries were wearing_out.
②The young people run around kicking a ball, wearing themselves out.
③Water can still wear_away rocks after a long time, even though the rock is harder.
④We hope your persuasion will wear_down his opposition.
完成句子
⑤You have been working for a whole day without a rest.You must_be_absolutely_worn_out.
你工作了一整天都没有休息,一定累坏了。
⑥These teeth do hard work a great deal of the time, and they are continually wearing_away.
这些牙齿长时间进行费力的咀嚼,因而不断被磨损。
[写美]
⑦(2009·北京高考书面表达)看到一排排的树,我们都有一种成就感,虽然我们有点累了。
Seeing_the_lines_of_trees,_we_all_had_a_sense_of_achievement_although_we_were_a_bit_worn_out.
[句式集释]
1.if省略结构
[教材原句] Have you ever seen a doctor? If_so,_what happened?
[悟拓展例句]
(1)You can come to Beijing for a holiday. If_so,_I'll show you around the Summer Palace.
你可以来北京度假。如果你来的话,我将带你参观颐和园。
(2)If_possible,_try and go to bed and wake up at the same time every day.
如果可能的话,尝试每天都在同一时间睡觉和起床。
(3)Please keep in mind to correct my mistakes if_any.
请记住如果有错的话,给我纠正过来。
[析用法规则]
用法归纳
(1)if省略结构:若if从句的主语与主句的主语一致,且从句中有be动词时,可将从句主语与be动词省略;
(2)if省略结构的惯用表达:
if not 如果不是这样的话
if ever 若曾经有的话
if any 如果真有的话;即使有(任何)……
if necessary 如有必要
if possible 如有可能
if anything 如果有……的话
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2015·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)If possible, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning.(要点句)
(2)(2015·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals.You can write anything relevant if any.(要点句)
2.并列连词while
[教材原句] Some acupuncturists insert needles at or near the body part affected by the disease, while others select points according to the symptoms that the patient has.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)Some people waste food while others haven't enough.
有些人浪费粮食,然而有些人却吃不饱。
(2)While_we_were_swimming in the river, we saw a fish jump out of the water.
当我们正在河中游泳时,看见一条鱼跃出了水面。
(3)While_the_Internet_is_of_great_help_to_us,_I don't think it is a good idea to spend too much time on it.
尽管互联网对我们有很大的帮助,我认为在这方面花太多的时间并不是个好主意。
(4)We can surely overcome these difficulties while_we_are_closely_united.
只要我们紧密地团结在一起,一定能克服这些困难。
[析用法规则]
用法归纳
(1)while用作并列连词,意为“而,然而”,表前后意义上的对比或转折。
(2)用作从属连词,引导时间状语从句,意为“当……时候,和……同时”。
(3)用作从属连词,引导让步状语从句,意为“尽管”。
(4)用作从属连词,引导条件状语从句,意为“只要”。
注意事项
(1)while引导时间状语从句时,从句谓语动词必须是延续性的动词;
(2)while引导让步状语从句时,一般放在句首,不放在句末。
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2016·江苏高考满分作文)Some people benefit from it, while others feel puzzled at who to vote.(要点句)
(2)(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.(要点句)
[词块、句式过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.选词填空
try out, be cautious about, due to, pick out, carry out, subscribe to, open up, let out
1.Some people subscribe_to as many as two or three different newspapers every year.
2.Oxygen is let_out through the leaves and roots of the plants.
3.All the important sentences in the article were picked_out in red lines.
4.They opened_up large areas of wasteland and turned them into farmland.
5.Attendance at the meeting was small, partly due_to the absence of teachers.
6.All these experiments are carried_out with practical rather than scientific aims in view.
7.The method seems good but it needs to be tried_out.
8.Doctors are_cautious_about this new treatment, which is understandable.
Ⅱ.一句多译
1.活泼的孩子更可能成为活跃和健康的成年人。
①It_is_more_likely_that physically active children become active and healthy adults.
②Physically active children are_more_likely_to become active and healthy adults.
2.如果可能的话,最好还是挑选有机食品。
①It is always best to choose organically grown foods if_it_is_possible.
②It is always best to choose organically grown foods if_possible.
Ⅲ.分步写作
你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会,要在学校广播中宣布此事,并欢迎大家参加。请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下:
目的
欢迎美国来的朋友
组织者
学生会
时间
8月15日(星期六)晚7:30
地点
主楼屋顶花园
活动
内容
音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品(请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上祝福的话语)
注意:1.广播稿约100词,开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.应包括以上要点,但不要逐字翻译。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention please?I have an announcement to make.
第一步:准确审题,理行文脉络,拟写作要点
本文属于应用文写作中的广播通知,时态为一般将来时,人称为第一、二人称。文章题目所给的要点比较齐全,总体可提炼为以下三方面:一、宣布活动的组织者、时间、地点和目的;二、点出活动的内容及要求;三、提示重点注意事项,总结活动的意义。
要点1:学生会将在8月15日在主楼屋顶花园组织一场晚会欢迎来自美国的朋友。(hold, welcome)
The_Students'_Union_is_going_to_hold_a_party_on_August_15th_to_welcome_the_friends_from_the_United_States_in_the_roof_garden_of_the_main_building.
要点2-①:活动内容:将会有许多有趣的活动,你们也可以交换礼物。(masses of, exchange)
There_will_be_masses_of_interesting_activities_and_you_can_also_exchange_gifts.
要点2-②:活动要求:任何一个去那儿的人都要带一份小礼物。(anyone who, bring a gift)
Anyone_who_will_be_there_should_bring_a_small_gift.
要点3:你会发现很有趣,并且会从中受益的。(find, benefit)
You'll_find_it_very_funny_and_you_will_benefit_from_it.
第二步:添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼
为使文章档次得到提升,我们可对要点进行适当的补充、升级。例如,要点1,可将时间更具体化,且因信息过多,可将地点进行单独表述。要点2,可具体点出有哪些活动项目,细化对所带礼物的要求。要点3,添加细节,将场景描写生动,并用上定语从句简化表达。
拓展1-①:为了欢迎我们来自美国的朋友,学生会将在8月15日,星期六的晚上组织一场晚会。(so that ...)
The_Students'_Union_is_going_to_hold_a_party_on_Saturday_evening,_August_15th,_so_that_we_can_welcome_our_friends_from_the_United_States.
拓展1-②:晚会被安排在主楼屋顶花园。(arrange)
The_party_will_be_arranged_in_the_roof_garden_of_the_main_building.
拓展2-①:不仅有音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏等多种活动,你们还可以交换礼物。(not only ...but also)
Not_only_will_there_be_masses_of_activities_such_as_music,_dancing,_singing_and_games_but_you_can_also_exchange_gifts.
拓展2-②:记得把它包起来,签上你的名字并写上几句祝福的话。(wrap ...up, sign)
Remember_to_wrap_it_up,_sign_your_name_and_write_a_few_words_of_good_wishes.
拓展3:请按我说的去做。你一到现场就会发现晚会很有趣,并且你会从中受益的。(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Please_do_as_I've_said,_and_on_your_arrival,_you'll_find_the_party_very_funny,_from_which_you_will_benefit.
第三步:连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡
广播稿的表达力求简洁明了,浅显易懂,不需额外添加过渡词汇。但为了体现文体特点,可在总结段中重申重点注意事项,并在文章结束时加入客套语。
Boys_and_girls,
May_I_have_your_attention_please?_I_have_an_announcement_to_make.The_Students'_Union_is_going_to_hold_a_party_on_Saturday_evening,_August_15th,_so_that_we_can_welcome_our_friends_from_the_United_States.The_party_will_be_arranged_in_the_roof_garden_of_the_main_building.
It_will_begin_at_7:30_pm.Not_only_will_there_be_masses_of_activities_such_as_music,_dancing,_singing_and_games_but_you_can_also_exchange_gifts.Anyone_who_will_be_there_should_bring_a_small_gift.Remember_to_wrap_it_up,_sign_your_name_and_write_a_few_words_of_good_wishes.
Don't_forget:7:30_pm,_Saturday_evening,_roof_garden,_the_main_building.Please_do_as_I've_said,_and_on_your_arrival,_you'll_find_the_party_very_funny,_from_which_you_will_benefit.
Thank_you_for_your_listening.
理清句间结构之(四) 举例
一般来说,议论文和说明文都需要一些例子来支持作者的论证和说明,这些例子往往与作者的说明和论述有很大的关联,考纲中明确提出考生需要掌握区分论点与论据的能力,因此这也成了考题出处的热点。要牢记一般文章举例处的前后句就是与该例子相关的作者论点,所以在做此类题目的时候就需要追本溯源,寻找观点,才能保证所选答案的正确率。举例标志性词汇:for example, for instance, take ...as an example, such as, like等。
[高考典例1] 2018·全国卷Ⅰ·D篇
So what's the solution (解决方案)? The team's data only went up to 2007, but the researchers also explored what would happen if consumers replaced old products with new electronics that serve more than one function, such as a tablet for word processing and TV viewing. They found that more ondemand entertainment viewing on tablets instead of TVs and desktop computers could cut energy consumption by 44%.
Q:Which of the following uses the least energy?
A.The boxset TV. B.The tablet.
C.The LCD TV. D.The desktop computer.
[分析] 该段中用such as举例说明在平板电脑上观看更多的点播娱乐节目,而不是看电视和台式电脑,可以将能耗降低44%。故选B。
[高考典例2] 2017·天津卷·D篇
I read somewhere that we spend a full third of our lives waiting. But where are we doing all of this waiting, and what does it mean to an impatient society like ours? To understand the issue, let's take a look at three types of “waits”.
The very purest form of waiting is the WatchedPot Wait. It is without doubt the most annoying of all. Take filling up the kitchen sink (洗碗池) as an example. There is absolutely nothing you can do while this is going on but keep both eyes fixed on the sink until it's full. During these waits, the brain slips away from the body and wanders about until the water runs over the edge of the counter and onto your socks. This kind of wait makes the waiter helpless and mindless.
Q:While doing a WatchedPot Wait, we tend to ________.
A.keep ourselves busy B.get absentminded
C.grow anxious D.stay focused
[分析] 该段以灌满洗碗池为例,说明在“看着水壶式的等待”中,我们的大脑常会离开我们,到处飘移,这与B项陈述吻合。
[高考典例3] 2012·北京卷·C篇
“Stress affects how people learn, ” says Professor Mara Mather.“People learn better about positive than negative outcomes under stress.”
For example, two recent studies looked at how people learned to connect images (影像) with either rewards or punishments.In one experiment, some of the participants were first stressed by having to give a speech and do difficult math problems in front of an audience; in the other, some were stressed by having to keep their hands in ice water.In both cases, the stressed participants remembered the rewarded material more accurately and the punished material less accurately than those who hadn't gone through the stress.
Q:We can learn from the passage that people under pressure tend to ________.
A.keep rewards better in their memory
B.recall consequences more effortlessly
C.make risky decisions more frequently
D.learn a subject more effectively
[分析] 文章引用了一个观点“People learn better about positive than negative outcomes under stress”,接着用“For example”举例说明,引出两项研究,即能够承受压力的被施压的参与者更加精确地记住奖励而非惩罚。故选A。