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人教版（2024）七年级下册英语各单元作文指导Unit1AnimalFriends一、 写作目标及话题分析能对某种动物进行简单描述， 内容包含动物的信息、 喜欢或不喜欢的理由、动物危险 处境与解决方法等。二、 高分作文My favorite animal is a three-year-old(三岁)panda Beibei.It comes from Sichuan,China.It is black and white.It likes eating lots of bamboo every day.I like it because it looks really lovely.And it can climb hills and swim very well.But it is a little shy,so please take care of it.But the pandas are in great danger.Today there are only about 1,600 pandas in the world.They don't have many babies and baby pandas often die.People cut down bamboo and they don't have enough food.The panda is one of China's symbols(象征).We must save them.I hope people can plant more trees and bamboo.四、 篇章训练你知道华南虎(South China Tiger)吗?请你根据以下表格内的信息写一篇文章，介绍 华南虎 Lolo。 词数 80 词左右。NameSouth China Tiger LoloAge5Place to liveIn the south of ChinaLooks and charactersBrown and black,long tail,strong and fierce(凶猛的)Do you know South China tigers?Here is a South China Tiger,and its name is Lolo.It comes from the south of China,but now it lives in Shanghai Zoo.It is brown and black.It has a long tail.It is strong and fierce.I love it because it can run fast and catch small animals.It's good at swimming.It's the king of animals.But the tigers are in great danger.People kill them for fur and cut down trees.So they are losing their homes and don't have enough food to eat.As a result,there are only about 100 South China tigers.I think we must save them.I hope people can stop killing tigers and we must stop cutting down trees.And we mustn't buy the things made of fur.AbilitiesCatch animals,run fast,swimAmount(数量)Only about 100ProblemsPeople kill them for fur(皮毛)，cut down trees,lose their homes...SolutionsStop killing,must not cut down trees...Unit2NoRules,NoOrders一、 写作目标及话题分析能描述校规、家规等规则或其他规章制度。1.能用祈使句、 “can/can't/have to/must ”描述规则或规章制度 ;2. 能用形容词 “terrible,important,helpful,strict,relaxing,boring ” 等表达对 规则或规章制度的感受 ;3.写作微技能 : (1)能运用不同句式表达规则或规章制度，体现语言的丰富性 ; (2)初步 认识文本的结构 : (3)过程写作习惯的初步形成。二、语言积累(一)Family rules请观察下面两个方框内的家规，根据要求完成下列各题。1.请阅读以下两个家规，家规(1)是父母写的，家规(2)是孩子写的(填数字)两个家规所使用的句型有何不同?父母写的规则可以用祈使句，而孩子写的规则不能用 祈使句 。2.请观察家规(2)中的粗体字，作者用了哪些句式表达家规? 请罗列 can/can't,have to/don't have to,must/mustn't3.家规中有不同的时间，请罗列 on school nights,on weekends,every morning,after dinner every day,when I get home,on Sunday...4.思考:在表达规则或规章制度时需要说明事情、 时间、地点等，对吗?是(二)School rules▲请根据你校的实际情况，用 “have to,don't have to,can,can't,must,mustn't ” 等表达你的校规。1.I can't arrive late for class.I must be on time.2.I have to keep my hair short and wear a school uniform.3.I must/have to listen to my teachers carefully in class.I can't/mustn't talk with my partner.4.I can't/mustn't make noise in the classroom.I must/have to keep quiet.5.I can't/mustn't eat snacks in the classroom.I can't/mustn't eat in the dining hall,either.6.I must/have to speak English in my English class.7.I can't talk quietly in the library.8.I must tell my teacher about it when I have to be absent from class.9.I can't wear a hat in class.10.I can't/mustn't run in the hallways.And I can't/mustn't fight with my classmates in school.▲请用形容词 “terrible,important,helpful,strict,relaxing,boring ” 等表达对 校规的看法。11.I think they are___________12.I think it's___________to have these rules.▲请将以上的规则组合成一篇文章，加上开头与结尾。Beginning (开头) :从下列句子中选择你喜欢的开头，或你自己创作。13.There are many rules in my school.I think they are strict but helpful.14.I have lots of strict but helpful school rules.15.Different schools have different rules.Now I would like to tell you about my school rules.16.你自己的开头___________________________________________________________Body (主体部分) :17.请用连接词 “first,second,third,what's more,last,but,because,so ”等，完成 下面的校规的主体部分，使其流畅，可读性强。First,I mustn't be late for school.I have to be on time.So I have toget up early.Second,I have to keep my hair short and wear a school uniform.It is boring.Third,I can't run in the hallways.and,I mustn't fight with my classmates in school.I think it's good for students.I can't eat snacks in the classroom.Because we must keep the classroom clean.I must tell my teacher about it when I have to be absent from class.I think it's a good idea.What's more,I can't listen to music in class,but I can listen to it after class.It's relaxing.Last,I am very happy to say I can do sports after school.I often play basketball with my students.It's very important to do sports.18.粗体部分表达的是作者的感受。 我们可以将这种写作策略称为 “ 1+1 ”写作拓展策 略。Ending (结尾) :Schools make rules to help students.I think rules are very important.So students must follow them.三、 篇章训练在我们生活中有许多规则或规章制度，如家规、校规、班规等 。假如你是 Lingling， 请给你的美国笔友 John 写封电子邮件，介绍其中的一个规则或规章制度，并说说你的 感受。Dear John,Thanks for your letter!You would like to know my class rules.Now let me tell you.I have lots of strict but helpful class rules.First,I can't be late for class.I must be on time for every class.So I have to get up early.Second,I must listen to teachers carefully in class.I can't talk with my partner.I must be quiet in class.Third,I can't listen to music in class,but I can listen after class.What's more,I mustn't eat snacks in the classroom because it makes the classroom dirty.So I have to eat in the dining hall.Yours, LinglingFamily rules(1)1.Don't watch TV on school nights.But you can watch it on weekends.2.Don't play computer games.3.Make your bed every morning.Family rules(2)1.I can't watch TV on school nights.But I can watch it on weekends.2.I can't play computer games.3.I have to make my bed every morning.4.Do the dishes after dinner every day.5.Do your homework after school.6.Go to bed before 9 o'clock and get up early.You don't have to get up early on weekends.7.Don't go out and see friends.8.Learn to play the piano on Sunday and practice it for half an hour every day.4.I must do the dishes after dinner every day.5.I have to do my homework first whenI get home.6.I must go to bed before 9 o ’clock and get up early.But I don't have to get up on weekends.7.I can't hang out with my friends on weekdays.8.I have to practise the piano on Sunday before I play basketball.Unit3KeepFit一、 写作目标及话题分析本单元的话题与保持健康相关，表达出做运动和锻炼的频率和运动如何帮助你保持健 康。写作要求会用 :句型① “My favourite sport is...”描述自己最喜欢的运动 句型② “I+动词+频率副词或词组 ”描述自己做该运动的频率句型③ “I never...,but I like... ” “My mom says...,so I...” “I think...” 描述他人或自己对生活习惯的看法在写作过程中适当描述自己的感受，用上相应的连接词二、语言积累(一)Basic information.▲运动和锻炼名称将下列运动名称译成英文，并勾出你喜欢的运动。1.棒球 baseball 7.乒乓球 ping-pong2.跳绳 jump rope 8.游泳 swimming3.网球 tennis 9.篮球 basketball4.羽毛球 badminton 10.足球 football5.排球 volleyball 11.慢跑 jogging6.滑板运动 skateboarding 12.仰卧起坐 sit-up▲频率副词短语1.一星期一次 once a week 5.每天 every day2.一年几次 a few times a year 6.一星期两次 twice a week3.一个月两次 twice a week 7.几乎不 hardly ever4.一天三次 three times a day 8.每天晚上 every night9.很少 seldom 10.有时 sometimes▲其他短语1.对...有好处 be good for 3.保持健康 keep fit/healthy2.去游泳 go swimming 4.成功地发展 ;解决 work out5.保持健康最好/最喜欢的方式 the favourite way of keeping fit▲句子积累根据中文，完成句子。1.我最喜欢的运动是慢跑。My favourite sport is jogging.2.我喜欢在早上慢跑。I like jogging in the morning.3.我认为最好的保持健康的方式是游泳。I think the favourite way of keeping fit is swimming to work out.4.运动有益于身心健康。Exercise is healthy for the body and the mind.5.我每周打乒乓球两三次。I play ping-pong twice or three times a week.6.棒球可以培养团队精神。Baseball can build team spirit.7.打篮球对我们的身体有好处。Playing basketball is good for my body.8.我放学后也会经常练习， 因为它让我们保持健康，帮助我打得更好。We also exercises a lot because it keeps us fit and helps us play better.9.和朋友在水里游泳和玩耍很有趣。It's fun swim and play with friends in the water.三、 高分作文Volleyball is one of the most popular sports in China.It's my favourite,too.It's a good way of exercise,and it's easy for me to play.It's fun to play with my friends after class.We usually practise three times a week after school.We often play matches and Our team always win.I think ours is the best.I like volleyball because it makes me focus on doing one thing and keep us fit.Volleyball also builds team spirit.We are a team,and we are also friends.四、 篇章训练你最喜欢的健身方式是什么?请说出喜欢它地理由，你健身的频率以及这项运动为什么 对你有好处，请列举。Some people love to play badminton,some love to play football,others love swimming,but my favourite sport is basketball.I think playing basketball is very cool and interesting.My friends and I practise it at school after class every day.We are good team.Playing basketball is not only good for our health,but also helping us make friends.Basketball also builds team spirits.It is good exercise for our body.I think everyone should try it.Unit4EatWell一、 写作目标及话题分析能描述自己的饮食善恶及习惯。能列举具体的做法改善你的饮食习惯。二、语言积累(一)Introduce your good habits▲短语储备1.及时 on time 5.好的选择 good choices2.许多 a lot of3.各种各样的 all kinds of4.对...有好处 be good for6.健康的饮食习惯 healthy diet 7.例如 such as8.关注 focus on9.做健康均衡的饭菜 make healthy balanced meals10.代替 instead of(二)Introduce your bad habits▲短语储备 :1.吃快餐 have fast food 6.尝起来味道不错 taste good2.发胖 put on weight 7.喝水 drink water3.各种各样的 all kinds of 8. 口渴 get thirsty4.导致心脏问题 cause heart problems 9.太多/太少 too much/less5.软饮料 soft drinks 10.垃圾食品 junk food11.在早上什么也不吃 not eat anything at all12.太忙以至于什么都不吃 too busy to eat anything▲常用句型请仿造句型，根据所给中文信息，表达句子。1.It is+adj.+for sb+to do sth 对某人来说最某事.=v-ing 作主语，谓语动词用单数①吃快餐对我来说简单又美味。It is easy and delicious for me to eat fast food.=Eating fast food is easy and delicious for me.②有一个健康的饮食习惯对我们来说非常重要。It is very important for us to have a healthy diet.=Having a healthy diet is important for me.③喝太多软饮料对我来说不好因为这里面有大量的糖分。It's bad for me to drink too many soft drinks because they're have a lot of sugar.=Drinking too many soft drinks is bad for me because they're have a lot of sugar.2.It's better to do sth.最好去做某事..①最好在我口渴之前喝水。 It's better to drink before I get thirsty.②你最好在想吃小吃时吃一些水果代替。 It's better to have some fruit instead when you want to eat snack.3.I(like)...because...①我喜欢吃垃圾食品因为他们味道很好。I like eating junk food because they taste so good!②我不吃肉因为这会使我发胖。 I don't eat meat because it makes me put on weight.4.In the future,I should/shouldn't...①在未来，我应该多喝水来代替喝软饮料。 In the future,I should drink more water instead of drinking soft drinks.开头句 : (总括)It is important for us to have a good eating habit.对我们来说有一个好的饮食习惯很重要。Healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind.健康的饮食对健康的 身心很重要。A healthy eating habits can provide the energy for us and help us stay healthy. 一个健康的饮食习惯可以为我们提供能量并且帮我们保持健康。Let's talk about our eating habits.让我们来谈论我们的饮食习惯。中间句:第一段 : (好的饮食习惯)I have some good eating habits.我有一些好的饮食习惯。I eat all kinds of vegetables.我吃各种蔬菜。Why don't you have some fruit?为什么不吃水果呢?第二段 : (不好的饮食习惯)However,I have some bad eating habits,too.然而，我有一些不好的饮食习惯。 I don't drink enough water.我没有喝足够的水。It's easy to feel sleepy and find it hard to focus on our work or studies if we don't eat breakfast.如果我们不吃早餐，我们会很容易感到昏昏欲睡，进而感到难以集中精力工作或学习。结尾句 : (总结)you're what you eat.人如其食。I shouldn't eat too much sweet food in future.我今后不应该吃太多甜食。Everyone should keep healthy eating habits.每个人都应该保持健康的饮食习惯。四、 高分作文My name i s Li Hua.I have some good eating habits and bad ones. (点明主题， 指出 “我 ”有好的饮食习惯，也有不好的饮食习惯。)I have three meals a day and I have them on time.I like vegetables and havethem every day.I like fruit too.I often have apples,pears and bananas. (介绍 “ 我 ” 好的饮食习惯。 )However,I have some bad eating habits too. (巧妙使用 however, 过 渡 到 “ 我 ” 不 好 的 饮 食 习 惯。 )I like fast food.It tastes really delicious,so I often have it.But fast food has lots of salt,fat and sugar.Eating too much fast food can cause health problems.Also,I like sweet food very much. (介绍 “ 我 ” 不好的饮食习惯。 )It is not good for my teeth.In future,I shouldn't eat so much fast food or sweet food. (叙述自己将如何改掉不好的饮食 习惯。)Keeping fit is important for us,so everyone should keep good eating habits. (指出保持健康的重要性，号召大家保持良好的饮食习惯 。)五、 篇章训练假如你是王琳，你的英国笔友 Luey 发来电子邮件告诉你，她为了减肥(lose weight)， 不吃早餐和肉，只吃水果和蔬菜。请你给她回复一封电子邮件，告诉她这样做的害处， 并建议她保持良好的饮食习惯。Dear Lucy,I'm glad to get your email.I don't think it's good for you to do that.Having no breakfast or meat but only having fruit and vegetables may help you lose weight,but it's not good for your health.Breakfast and meat can give you energy.If you don't have them,you may not get enough energy.Vegetables and fruit are good for your health.However,if you only have them,you can't get enough energy either.To lose weight,you need to have healthy balanced meals and exercise more.If you want to keep fit,you must have good eating habits.Hope you can succeed in losing weight and keeping healthy.Best wishes!Yours, Wang LinUnit5HereandNow一、 写作目标及话题分析本单元地写作话题是 “谈论人们正在进行的事情 ” ，要求同学们能灵活运用现在进行 时描述家人、朋友在不同地点正在做的事情以及根据所给图片或汉语提示描述场景中 人们正在做的事情，并适当谈及活动氛围与人们的感受。二、语言积累▲短语储备1.现在 ;此刻 at the moment 6.期待 look forward to2.做 ;从事 work on 7.匆忙 in a hurry3.捎个口信 take a message 8.例如 such as4.留个口信 leave a message 9.并排 ;并肩地 side by side5.回电话 call back10. (开车)把某人接送到某处 pick up and drop off11. (上下班时的)交通高峰期 rush hour 13.忙于做某事 be busy doing sth12.仓促去做某事 rush to do 13.世界各地 around the world▲句子储备1.他正在超市购物 。He ’s shopping in the supermarket.2.我正在做作业。 I'm doing my homework.3.我期待很快见到你。 I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.4.我正在平遥给你写信。 I'm writing to you from Pingyao!▲常用句型请仿造句型，根据所给中文信息，表达句子。1.Some people...Many others 有些人...另一些人...①一些人在市场上买礼物，例如画和包，许多其他的人在公园里散步。Some people are shopping for gifts,such as paintings and bags,in themarkets.Many others are walking in the parks.②有些人在公园里慢跑、散步和骑自行车，其他的人在咖啡馆喝咖啡、 吃早餐。Some people are jogging,walking,and riding bikes in the park.Others are drinking coffee and eating breakfast in coffee shops.2.be doing 正在做...①学生们正在读书 。Students are reading books.②许多人正赶往地铁。Many people are rushing to the subway.3.There be...doing...有什么...正在做某事①有一些孩子正在公园做滑板运动。There are some children skateboarding at the park.②有一个男孩正躺在床上 。There is a boy lving the bed.▲开头句 : (时间、地点)I'm spending my holiday in Nanjing.我正在南京度假。I'm having a good time in Nanjing.我正在南京玩得很愉快。▲中间句 : (人物活动)Some tourists are walking around.我正在南京度假。Some tourists are enjoying the beautiful city.一些游客正在欣赏这座美丽的城 市。Some are sharing the sights with their friends on WeChat.一些(人)正在微信上 与朋友分享风景。They're singing and dancing under the big tree.他们正在大树下唱歌、跳舞。 Many people are rushing to the subway.很多人正在奔向地铁。▲结尾句 : (感受)Everyone is doing what they need to do here.每个人都在这儿做他们需要做的事。They are enjoying their life in the beautiful city.他们正在这座美丽的城市里 享受生活。I like the interesting life here.我喜欢这里有趣的生活。▲谚语积累1.Life is real !Life is earnest!2.Home is where the heart is.四、 高分作文My name i s Li Hua.I'm taking a holiday in Nanjing.It's10 o ’clock on Sunday morning.I am walking in the park. (介绍了时间、地点)There are many people in the park. (过渡句,为下面介绍人物的活动情况做铺 垫)Some tourists are walking around.They are enjoying the nice sights here.Some are taking photos and sharing them with their friends on WeChat. (叙述了公园 里游客的活动情况)There are some children in the park too.They are flying kites. (介绍了孩子在公园里玩耍的情况)Some old people are singing and dancing under the big tree. (描述了公园里老人的活动情况)Everyone is having a good time.I like the relaxing life here. (表达了作 者的感受)五、 篇章训练①假如你是李华，现在是早上六点半，你正在从家里步行去学校，请你把沿途看到的 情况记录下来，在本周的英语口语课上与大家分享。My name i s Li Hua.It's half past six in the morning.I'm walking to school from my home.The city is getting busy at the moment.Many people are rushing to the subway or the bus stop.They are going to work or school.Many taxis are busy pickingup and dropping off passengers.There are a lot of food shops along the street.Many people are having breakfast in them.Everyone is doing what they need to do.I like the morning life of the city.Unit6RainandShine一、 写作目标及话题分析本单元地写作话题是 “描述天气状况及人们正在做的事情 ” ，要求同学们能准确地表 达自己对某种天气的喜好、 说明原因及叙述人们在不同的天气进行的活动。二、语言积累▲短语储备1.不论是雨或晴 rain or shine 6.情绪高涨 in high spirits2.待在家里 stay in 7.因为 because of3.感觉像 feel like 8.在顶部 at the top4.休息区 a rest area 9.现在 ;立刻 right now5.取得进展 make good progress 10.将来 ;有朝一日 some day▲句子储备1.雨下的很大。 It's raining heavily.2.天气寒冷多雪。 It's cold and snowy.3.他现在在打沙滩排球 。He's plaving beach volleyball right now..▲常用句型请仿造句型，根据所给中文信息，表达句子。1.It seems that...似乎...①似乎风筝像游客们讲述了有关他们的历史地故事。It seems that kites tell visitors stories about their history.②似乎他们一点儿也不累。It seems that they are not tired at all.2.think+宾语从句认为...①我认为每个人都喜欢放风筝。 I think everyone likes flving a kite.②我认为他很喜欢这次经历,并且他也鼓励我 。I think that he is enjoying theexperience and he also encourages me.3.be doing 正在做某事①有些人在给不同的风筝拍照。Some people are talking photos of different kites.②他在湖周围散步 ， 并且他认为散步是帮助他保持健康的好方法。 He is walking around the lake and he thinks walking is a good way to help him keep fit.4.when 引导的时间状语从句当多云天气时他们感觉很悲伤 。They feel sad when It's cloudy.▲开头句 : (时间、地点)I'm having a holiday in Hainan.我正在海南度假。I'm having a great time visiting Harbin.我正在参观哈尔滨，玩得很开心。▲中间句 : (人物活动)We're wearing warm clothes and hats.我们穿着暖和地衣服，戴着帽子。We feel like we are in an icy world.我感觉我们在一个冰冷的世界里。We are swimming in the sea.我们正在海里游泳。Some of them are playing beach volleyball.他们中的一些人正在打沙滩排球。▲结尾句 : (感受)We are having a good time.我们玩得很开心。We are having great time.我们玩得很开心。三、 高分作文My name is Mike.Gina is my good friend.We are having holidays in different places. (开篇点题，点明人物和事件)I am having a great time visiting Harbin.The weather is cold and snowy.I am wearing warm clothes and a hat.I am so happy to see the white world.There are so many things made of ice here.I feel like I am in an icy world.There are many people here.Some are skating and some are having a snowball fight.I'm building a snowman.We are all having fun. (介绍了麦克在哈尔滨度假的情况)My friend Gina is in Hainan.It's warm and sunny there.A lot of people are on the beach.Some are swimming.Some are playing beach volleyball.Gina is sunbathing. (介绍了吉娜在海南度假的情况)Although we are having holidays in different places,we are having a good time. (首尾呼应，写出了度假的感受)四、 篇章训练今天是星期天 ，天气晴朗 。Black 一家在公园玩得很开心:Lucy 在湖边放风筝;Tom 在 一棵大树下弹吉他;Mr Black 在散步;Mrs Black 在骑自行车。请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文， 向学校的英文报刊投稿。It's Sunday today.The weather is fine.The temperature is25℃.The Blacks are in the park near their house.Lucy,a cute girl,is flying a kite by the lake.Tom likes music and the guitar is his favourite.Now he i s playing the guitar under a big tree.Mr Black is walking around the lake.He thinks walking is a good way to help him keep fit.What about Mrs Black?She likes riding a bike.She thinks it's good exercise.Now she is riding a bike on the road around the lake.They are all having a good time.Unit7ADaytoRemember一、 写作目标及话题分析本单元地写作话题是 “谈论过去的事情 ” ，要求同学们能够用一般过去时描述学校旅 行的活动情况，并能与同伴口头交流或以日记、 书信的形式记录活动情况。二、语言积累▲短语储备1.进行学校旅行 go on s school trip 7.因为 because of2.从...到...from...to... 8.用手工作 work with one's hand3.对...感兴趣 be interested in 9.去旅行 go on a trip4.在农场 on the farm 10.进行研学旅行 go on a study trip5.取得进展 make progress 11.写下 ;记下 write down6.从...中学习 learn from 12.考虑 think of/think about▲句子储备1.粒粒皆辛苦。Every grain comes from hard work.2.那儿有一些蔬菜大棚 。There were some large tents with vegetables there.3.我们采摘了一些新鲜蔬菜。We picked some fresh vegetables.4.农场主教我们如何给蔬菜浇水 。The farm taught us how to water the vegetables.▲常用句型请仿造句型，根据所给中文信息，表达句子。1.It was+adj.+(for sb)to do sth 对某人来说做某事是...①对我们来说从植物上采摘水果和从土里挖蔬菜很有趣。It was interesting to pick them from the plants or dig them out of the earth.2.start to do sth 开始做...熊资料库①当我们到达那里时，我们开始爬山 。When we arrived there,we started to climb the mountain.3.when 引导的时间状语从句①当我们坐过山车时我们非常激动。We were very excited when we rode roller coaster.▲开头句We went on a school trip to Sunshine Farm last Sunday.上周六我们区阳光农场 进行了一次学校旅行。Last Sunday,we had a great school trip.上周六，我们进行了一次很棒的学校旅行。▲中间句We went there by bike 我们骑自行车去了那里。In the morning,we explored the farm.早上我们考察了农场。 We went for a walk on the farm.我们在农场散步。We learned a lot from the farmer.我们从农场主那里学到了很多。▲结尾句It was a really great school trip.这真是一次很棒的学校旅行。It was a day to remember.这是值得记录的一天。三、 高分作文Last Saturday,I went on a school trip to Sunshine Farm with my teachers and classmates. (点明主题，介绍了学校旅行的时间、地点和人物)We went there by bus. (点明了学校旅行的交通方式)In the morning,we explored some large tents with vegetables there.We also picked many vegetables,such as red tomatoes,green cucumbers and orange carrots.All the vegetables were very fresh.It was interesting to pick them from the plants or dig them out of the earth. (点明了上午的活动情况)In the afternoon,we went for a walk on the farm.We talked with the farmer and he told us something about the farm. (介绍了下午的活动情况)We learnt a lot and had a good time on the farm.The trip was tiring but great fun and meaningful!It made me think of the saying : “Every grain comes from hard work.”It was really a day to remember. (描述了自己参加这次学校旅 行的感受)四、 篇章训练请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，记录你们学校的一次旅行。提示 :1.上周二 ， 我和我的同学们 ， 老师们乘坐公共汽车去了儿童游乐园(Children ’s Amusement Park) ;2.在门口照相，坐过山车(roller coaster) ;3.中午在餐馆里吃面条 :4.下午购物 ;返回。Last Tuesday,I went to the Children's Amusement Park with my classmates and teachers.We took a bus to the park.At the gate we took some photos.After that,we rode the roller coaster.We were all excited when we rode it.At noon,we were hungry,so we went to a restaurant to eat noodles.In the afternoon,we went shopping and bought some gifts.Then we took the bus back to school.We enjoyed ourselves.We hope to go there again.Unit8Onceuponatime一、 写作目标及话题分析本单元地写作话题是 “讲故事 ” ，要求同学们能够从 “人物、 时间、地点、起因和情 节发展 ”几个方面展开合理想象，运用一般过去时续写故事并与同学进行分享与交流。二、语言积累▲短语储备1.等待 wait for 4.出乎某人的意料 to one's surprise2.放弃 give up 5.而不是 ;代替 instead of3.从那天起 from that day 6.回去 go back▲句子储备1.他意识到了自己的错误 。He realized his mistake.2.他回去工作了 。He went back to work.▲常用句型请仿造句型，根据所给中文信息，表达句子。1.there be...doing...有...在做...①从前，有一个农民在他的田里干活。Once upon a time,there was a farmer working in his field.2.be+adj.+to do sth 做某事很...①农民看到野兔非常兴奋The farmer was very excited to see the hare.3.teach sb that...教给我们...①这个故事告诉我们，我们不能只依靠运气。The story teaches us that we can't only depend on luck.4.When 引导的时间状语从句①当它在田里工作时，他看到一一只野兔。when he was working in the field,he saw a hare.②当他们正在玩耍时，一个孩子掉进了水缸里。When they were playing,one child fell into the tank.5.so...that..如此... 以至于...①它跑的飞快以至于撞到了木桩上。It ran so quickly that its head knocked against the stump.▲开头句From that day on...从那天开始...Since then...从那时起...▲中间句He stopped working in the field.他停止了在田里干活。He stayed by the stump and waited for hares to come again.他守在树桩旁边， 等待着野兔的再次到来。He never saw another hare.他再也没有见过另一只野兔。There was only grass in his field.他的田里只有草。▲结尾句The story is trying to show us...这个故事试图向我们表明...What do you think of...?你认为...怎么样?The story tells us...这个故事告诉我们....We can succeed only if we work hard.只有努力工作我们才能成功。三、 高分作文Once upon a time,a farmer worked hard in the field every day.One day,when he was working in the field,he saw a hare.The hare ran so quickly.Its head hit the stump.And it died.The farmer picked up the dead hare and took it home happily.From that day on,he stopped working in the field. (引出农夫接下来的行为)He stayed by the stump and waited for hares to come again. (叙述了农夫为了再次 得到兔 子所采取的行 动)After days of waiting,he never saw another hare.He finally realized his mistake.So he decided to go back to work in the field. (介 绍了农夫等待兔子的结果)But there was only grass in his field.How silly he was!(叙述了农夫的行为造成的后果)The story tells us “No pain,no gain ”.We can succeed only if we work hard. (介 绍了这个故事带给自己的启示)四、 篇章训练①学校的英文报刊正在举行以 “ 中华传统文化故事 ”为主题的征文活动。 李华打算参 加此次征文活动。 下文是他写的《司马光砸缸》 (Sima Guang hit the tank)的开头, 请你帮他把故事补充完整。Once Sima Guang was playing with some of his friends in the garden behind his house.There was a big water tank there.It was full of water.When they were playing,one child fell into the tank.Other children were scared and shouted for help.Some even ran away.However,Sima Guang was different.He thought it over and then had an idea.He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang! ”The tank broke and the water ran out.The child was saved.The story tells us that we should keep calm when we face danger or when we are in trouble.And we should try our best to find ways to solve the problem.