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      英语牛津译林版 (2020)Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good优秀一课一练

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      这是一份英语牛津译林版 (2020)Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good优秀一课一练,共19页。试卷主要包含了词数80个左右;,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,      整形手术,      此外,hit v等内容,欢迎下载使用。
      对整形手术发表看法
      写作题目
      最近,社会上的整形医院越来越多,一些人,尤其是年轻人,热衷于整形手术。请你对此现象发表看法,并对自己的观点加以论证。
      注意:
      1.词数80个左右;
      2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
      Shuld yung peple have plastic surgery?
      Recently, plastic surgery hspitals have sprung up all ver the sciety.







      思路点拨
      遣词造句
      Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
      1. n.美,美丽;美人,美好的东西
      2. n.影响
      3. 整形手术
      4. 此外
      答案 1.beauty 2.effect 3.plastic surgery 4.in additin
      Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
      1.完成句子
      第一段: 引出整形手术的话题
      (1)Sme peple, especially yung peple, (渴望接受) plastic surgery.
      (2)In this regard, I want t (表达我的观点).
      第二段:发表看法并对自己的观点加以论证
      (3)I dn’t (赞同这一社会趋势) that yung peple g fr plastic surgery.
      (4)Plastic surgery deepens the bad effect f (以貌取人).
      (5)The beautiful appearance f a persn cannt (弥补)the lack f inner beauty.
      第三段:表达希望
      (6) I hpe yung peple can (做慎重的决定) n plastic surgery.
      答案 (1)are eager t have (2)express my views (3)agree with the scial trend
      (4)judging peple by appearance (5)make up fr (6)make a careful decisin
      2.句式升级
      (7)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含原因状语从句的句子



      (8)用n matter hw将句(5)改写为主从复合句



      答案 (7)I dn’t agree with the scial trend that yung peple g fr plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect f judging peple by appearance.
      (8)N matter hw beautiful the appearance f a persn is, it cannt make up fr the lack f inner beauty.
      连句成篇
      Shuld yung peple have plastic surgery?
      Recently, plastic surgery hspitals have sprung up all ver the sciety. Sme peple, especially yung peple, are eager t have plastic surgery. In this regard, I want t express my views.
      I dn’t agree with the scial trend that yung peple g fr plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect f judging peple by appearance. In additin, accrding t the news abut the death caused by plastic surgery in recent years, a large number f irregular plastic surgery hspitals in the sciety cannt guarantee the life safety. I think true beauty cmes frm the heart. N matter hw beautiful the appearance f a persn is, it cannt make up fr the lack f inner beauty.
      Therefre, I hpe yung peple can make a careful decisin n plastic surgery.
      写作积累
      表达观点的增分佳句
      1.引出话题
      ①Recently the prblem been brught int fcus. 最近……问题引起了关注。
      ②Recently ur class has had a heated discussin abut... 最近,我们班就……展开了热烈的讨论。
      ③ becme a prblem we have t face.现在……已成为我们不得不面对的问题。
      2.发表看法并加以论证
      ①Every cin has tw sides n exceptin. It has bth advantages and disadvantages.事物都有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
      ②As the ld saying ges,...老话说,……
      ③There are different pinins amng peple as peple think that...关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
      ④ brught a lt f harm t ur daily life. First,... Secnd,... What makes things wrse is that...现在……给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……其次,……使事情更为糟糕的是……
      3.总结
      ①Frm what has been discussed abve, we can safely draw the cnclusin that...通过以上讨论,我们可以有把握地得出结论……
      ②Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if...在我看来,如果……会更好。
      ③In a wrd, it is nt a gd way t judge a persn by appearance.总之,以貌取人不是一个好方法。
      ④In my pinin/As far as I am cncerned, a persn’s appearance des nt always reflect his character.在我看来/就我而言,一个人的外表并不总是反映他的性格。
      实战演练1
      现如今,整形手术越来越受年轻人的欢迎。他们认为改善外表可以使他们增加自信。但是,整形手术有很多弊端:手术费用高、存在健康风险、整形效果不一定令人满意等。结论:年轻人没有必要接受整形手术,内在美比外在美更重要。
      注意:
      1.词数100个左右;
      2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
      Plastic surgery: beauty r beast?









      读后续写
      写作题目
      阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
      Jack and his wife Tnya were sailing arund Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing bat. It was mving fast. “Hell!” they shuted. The men n the bat lked at them angrily. Max lked carefully at the bat.
      “Smething is wrng with their fishing net,”he said. They gt nearer t the net. “What’s that?” said Tnya. “There is smething in the net. It’s alive.” Very slwly, they mved nearer.
      “I can see it nw,” said Tnya. “It’s a killer whale—it’s hurt. There’s bld in the water. Hw can we help it?” “I can see it t. It’s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.
      Jack jumped int the water. “I can get the net ff its fin,” he said.
      Jack gt the net ff the baby killer whale. There was a big cut n its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were ther killer whales near the bat.
      “Jack!Get in quickly,” shuted Tnya.
      Jack swam t the bat as fast as he culd. “I’m ging t call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.
      As they mved away, it began t rain harder and harder.
      Jack said, “We must get away frm the wind. I can see a twn ver there. Let’s g.”
      The twn gt nearer but the waves gt bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the bat.
      “Is everyne OK?” shuted Jack. “Tnya?... She’s nt in the bat,” said Sasha. “She’s in the water.”
      They lked int the cld, dark water fr hurs. “Tnya! Say smething, Tnya. Where are yu?” shuted Max.
      The wind gt strnger and the bat was full f water. Anther big wave hit the bat. “Jack, d yu want us all t die?” said Max. “We can’t d any mre. Tnya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let’s sail t the twn.”
      Mments later the bat hit a beach. They went ut. Max and Sasha lay n the beach. Jack sat near the water, lking at the sea and thinking f Tnya.
      注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
      At that time, Tnya was five hundred meters away in the sea.





      Jack was walking alng the beach when suddenly he saw smene waving t him.




      文本分析
      初识文本
      重点词汇
      1.alive adj.活着的
      2.get away frm(得以)离开,脱身
      3.wave n.波浪 v.挥手
      4.be full f...充满……
      5.think f想到;考虑到;关心
      障碍词汇
      1.sail v.(人)乘船航行
      2.net n.网
      3.fin n.(鱼的)鳍
      4.cut n.伤口
      5.life jacket救生衣
      6.hit v.到达(某地);撞击
      故事要素
      深研文本
      预测情节发展
      第一段:那时,Tnya在500米外的海里→Tnya一个人,十分恐惧,拼命求救→Tnya被“Lucky”所在的虎鲸群救了→Tnya被虎鲸群带到近岸处。
      第二段:Jack正沿着海滩走着,这时他突然看到有人向他挥手→Jack发现向他挥手的人是Tnya→Tnya上岸后向Jack说明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感谢→“Lucky”和其他虎鲸游向大海。
      遣词造句
      1.用单词或短语填空
      (1) vt.包围
      (2) adj.害怕的
      (3) 启程;出发
      (4) 踏上
      答案 (1)surrund (2)frightened (3)set ff/ut (4)set ft n
      2.完成句子
      (5)Tnya (被冰冷的海水包围着), and she was s frightened and shuted crazily fr help.
      (6)Tnya (发现自己正在升起) ut f the sea.
      (7) (令人惊讶的是), she was n the back f a big killer whale and (有) sme killer whales arund her.
      (8)Tnya set ft n the beach, and then Jack ran twards her and (紧紧地抱住她).
      (9)Jack walked twards Lucky and strked its fin, (真诚地说), “Thank yu, Lucky!”
      答案
      (5)was surrunded by the cld seawater
      (6)fund herself rising
      (7)Surprisingly;there were
      (8)hugged her tightly
      (9)saying sincerely
      3.句式升级
      (10)用非谓语动词作状语改写句(5)


      (11)用with的复合结构改写句(7)


      (12)用the mment引导的时间状语从句改写句(8)


      答案
      (10)Surrunded by the cld seawater, she was s frightened and shuted crazily fr help.
      (11)Surprisingly, she was n the back f a big killer whale with sme killer whales arund her.
      (12)The mment Tnya set ft n the beach, Jack ran twards her and hugged her tightly.
      连句成篇
      At that time, Tnya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrunded by the cld seawater, she was s frightened and shuted crazily fr help. Suddenly, Tnya fund herself rising ut f the sea. Surprisingly, she was n the back f a big killer whale with sme killer whales arund her. Amng them, Tnya saw a small ne, wh was saved by Jack a few mments ag—Lucky. They set ff t catch up with the bat.
      Jack was walking alng the beach when suddenly he saw smene waving t him. Later, he fund that it was Tnya! The mment Tnya set ft n the beach, Jack ran twards her and hugged her tightly. Tnya smiled, “Dn’t wrry. I’m fine. I think we shuld thank the killer whales wh saved my life. Lk, the small ne is Lucky!” Jack walked twards Lucky and strked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank yu, Lucky!” Lucky shk its fin and then these killer whales swam away int the vast sea.
      写作积累
      心理描写——乐观情绪
      一、词汇
      1.happy/glad/cheerful/delighted/pleased/jyful adj.高兴的,快乐的
      2.psitive adj.积极的
      3.cntent/satisfied adj.满足的,满意的
      4.ptimistic adj.乐观的
      5.excited adj.激动的,兴奋的
      6.thrilled adj.非常兴奋的
      7.pleasure/jy/delight n.愉快,快乐
      8.be in a gd md 心情好
      9.be ver the mn 欣喜若狂
      10.cheer up(使)振作起来,(使)高兴起来
      二、句子
      1.He brightened up and his face brke int a wide smile.
      他高兴起来,脸上绽开灿烂的笑容。
      2.All the peple present were envelped in an atmsphere f jy.
      在场的所有人都沉浸在欢乐的气氛中。
      3.The sight filled her with childlike excitement.
      这种情景令她像孩子般兴奋起来。
      4.He was s excited that he culd hardly cntain himself.
      他十分激动,几乎控制不住自己。
      5.He rushed int the rm, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.
      他冲进房间,狂笑着,高兴地拍着手。
      实战演练2
      (2024湖南长沙第一中学入学考试)
      阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
      In the first and secnd grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but I just culdn’t be very utging, even if I knew smene well. I was even quieter with strangers, s I wasn’t very gd at meeting new peple. I was afraid that I wuld d r say smething wrng.
      S in ur schl’s annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded(僻静的) crner t watch the perfrmance alne. I hped t sit in the backgrund and watch the actrs sweat in frnt f all thse pairs f eyes.
      One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me int her ffice and said, “Oh, Mary, yu’re great at memrizing things, and yu have such a sweet persnality. Perfect fr Jenny!” But I bwed my head and dared nt speak. The teacher saw this and then said, “Of curse, plenty f girls wuld lve the rle, and I culd find smebdy else. But I hpe yu culd try it fr me. I had yu in mind fr Jenny while writing the play! If yu really dn’t want t, I wn’t frce yu. It’s yur chice.”
      My mind was spinning(快速旋转) faster than the windmill(风车) n the schl playgrund. Mrs. Sally, whm I lved and admired, wanted me t play this rle. She believed in me. My eyes mved acrss the rm t a pster I had never nticed befre. It shwed a shting star and read, “If yu reach fr the stars, yu might at least grab a piece f the mn.” I lked int Mrs. Sally’s shining blue eyes and said, “Okay, I’ll try.” I realized it was time t thrw ff my shy mask and shw the wrld wh I really was.
      In the fllwing five mnths, the teacher taught me hw t put n make-up, memrize lines, create cstumes and s n. Gradually, I mastered(掌握) my lines and sngs.
      注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
      The big day came at last.













      At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage fr her final check and nticed my nervusness.












      答案与分层梯度式解析
      Unit 4 Lking gd, feeling gd
      Part 4 Writing
      实战演练1
      One pssible versin:
      Plastic surgery: beauty r beast?
      Nwadays,plastic surgery is becming increasingly ppular amng yung peple,because they believe they can gain self-cnfidence by imprving appearance.
      Hwever,there is n dubt that it has many disadvantages. First f all, plastic surgery is very expensive. In additin,any kind f surgery carries ptential health risk. Plastic surgery is n exceptin. Finally, peple might nt get satisfactry results frm it. After all, n ne can make sure that the results f plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
      In cnclusin,there is n need fr yung peple t have plastic surgery. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than external beauty.
      1.重点词汇
      ①in additin另外 ②satisfactry adj.令人满意的;够好的;可以的 ③after all毕竟,终究 ④make sure确保 ⑤in cnclusin总之
      2.亮点句型
      ①Nwadays, plastic surgery is becming increasingly ppular amng yung peple, because they believe they can gain self-cnfidence by imprving appearance.(because引导原因状语从句;动词believe后是宾语从句)如今,整形手术在年轻人中越来越流行,因为他们相信可以通过改善外貌来增加自信。
      ②After all, n ne can make sure that the results f plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.(that引导宾语从句;what引导表语从句)毕竟,没有人能保证整形手术的结果正是患者期望的样子。
      实战演练2
      One pssible versin:
      The big day came at last. I jgged all the way t the schl hall. The stage was lit by bright sptlights in all directins. Lking back n five mnths f practice, I seemed t have cnfidence in myself. I fund a new persn inside me, a daring and utging persn wh had been hidden all alng. Hwever, when I was abut t g n stage, my heart was punding s hard that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
      At that time,Mrs. Sally came backstage fr her final check and nticed my nervusness. “It desn’t matter hw yu d tnight,” she said. “Yu’ve already shwn hw wnderful yu are.” Her warm wrds were like a ray f sunshine. I calmed dwn and then walked nt the stage. When I finished my perfrmance, the audience burst int applause. The scene made me feel myself flating in an cean f happiness. I knew that all this was due t the encuragement frm my teacher, wh helped me find the cnfidence t succeed.
      写作指导
      情节线
      情感线
      故事要素
      Time
      in the first and secnd grades;ne day in the third grade;in the fllwing five mnths
      害羞
      胆怯
      下定决心
      充满信心/紧张?
      紧张不安
      冷静?
      幸福?
      Place
      in Mrs. Sally’s ffice
      Character
      Mrs. Sally and I
      情节
      Perid 1
      在一年级和二年级时,作者非常害羞,在学校一年一度的盛大演出中,她通常会独自坐在一个僻静的角落里观看演出。
      Perid 2
      三年级的一天,作者喜爱和钦佩的Sally老师认为作者很适合演一部剧中的Jenny这一角色,希望作者参加演出。作者犹豫过后决定甩掉害羞的面具,向全世界展示真正的自己。
      Perid 3
      在接下来的五个月里,老师教作者化妆、记台词、制作戏装等。渐渐地,她掌握了台词和歌曲。
      续写方向
      Para. 1
      The big day came at last.
      ①现场是什么样的?
      ②作者上台之前的心情是如何变化的?
      Para. 2
      At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage fr her final check and nticed my nervusness.
      ①Sally老师注意到了作者的紧张,她是如何鼓励作者的?
      ②作者能否成功地完成演出,感受如何?

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