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高考英语二轮复习专题强化练习 读后续写强化练(三十九)(含答案)
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023·南京六校联调)
It was ne f the httest days f the dry seasn.We had nt seen rain in almst a mnth.The crps were dying.Cws had stpped giving milk.The streams were lng gne back int the earth.If we didn’t see any rain sn we wuld lse everything.It was n that day that I learned the true lessn f sharing and witnessed the nly miracle I have seen in my life.
I was in the kitchen making lunch fr my husband and his brthers when I saw my six-year-ld sn, Billy, walking tward the wds.I culd nly see his back.He wasn’t walking in his usual way.He was bviusly walking with a great effrt, trying t be as still as pssible.Minutes after he disappeared int the wds, he came running ut again, tward the huse.I went back t making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been ding was cmpleted.Mments later, hwever, he was nce again walking in that unusual way tward the wds.This activity went n fr ver an hur: walking cautiusly t the wds, then running back t the huse.Finally, my curisity gt the best f me.I crept ut f the huse and fllwed him n his jurney.
He was cupping bth hands in frnt f him as he walked, being very careful nt t spill the water he carried.I fllwed him secretly as he went int the wds.Branches and thrns(刺) slapped his little face but he did nt try t avid them.He might have a much greater purpse, I thught.As I leaned in t spy n him, I saw the mst amazing sight.Several large deer appeared threatening in frnt f him.But Billy walked right up t them, at the sight f which I almst screamed fr him t get away.A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerusly clse.But the buck didn’t threaten him nr even mve as Billy knelt dwn.And then I saw a baby deer lying n the grund, bviusly suffering frm thirst and heat, lift its head with great effrt t lap (舔)up the water cupped in my beautiful by’s hands.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
When the water was gne, Billy jumped up t run back t the huse.
Instead f sclding him like his father, I decided t help him.
【文章大意】 文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了在一个干旱的季节,作者6岁的儿子用双手捧水,多次往森林里走去,作者感到好奇,悄悄跟过去一看,眼前的情景让她为之感动。
【写作指导】
1.续写第一段:由第一段首句内容“当水没了,比利跳起来跑回房子。”可知,第一段可描写父亲回来时以为Billy在玩水而责备他,把他弄哭了。
2.续写第二段:由第二段首句内容“我决定不像他父亲那样责骂他,而是帮助他。”可知,第二段可描写作者安慰儿子并答应帮他一起救小鹿,最后终于下雨了。
【参考范文】
When__the__water__was__gne,__Billy__jumped__up__t__run__back__t__the__huse. I fllwed him back t a tap in ur yard.He knelt there mtinlessly, letting the drip slwly fill up his small “cup”(现在分词短语作状语). Just at that mment, his father returned.Thinking Billy was playing with water, he shuted, “Never waste water! If we ran ut f the limited water, we wuld lse everything, even ur lives.” Befre Billy culd make any explanatin, he walked int the huse angrily, leaving Billy weeping there(现在分词短语作状语).
Instead__f__sclding__him__like__his__father,__I__decided__t__help__him.I went up and held him in my arms.Wiping ff his tears(现在分词短语作状语), I prmised t help him save the baby deer.I fund him a small pt t carry water.Hlding the pt firmly(现在分词短语作状语), Billy walked tward the wds again.As I watched him disappearing int the wds, tears welled up in my eyes (拟人).Then came the miracle(倒装).Suddenly I felt a drp and then mre drps dripping nt my face (现在分词短语作宾补).I lked up in astnishment.Oh, it was rain! It was as if Gd was truly mved by Billy’s sincere sharing and came t save us finally.
Writing 2 紧急救援
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023·黄冈高三阶段抽测)
It was a bright May afternn alng the Maryland cast, and Jnathan Bauer, 51, an expert dctr at a hspital, and his 13-year-ld daughter, Ava, were taking full advantage f his prfessinal knwledge t help thers.They were driving with the windws dwn as they headed hme n the 1.4-mile-lng, tw-lane Rute 90 bridge, which stretches acrss the shallw waters f Assawman Bay.Suddenly, the calm was disturbed by the high sund f tires.
Nt far ahead f them, a black pickup was sliding frm ne lane t the ther.T the Bauers’ hrrr, it ran int a cncrete barrier, turned ver the SUV directly ahead f them, and came t rest hanging ver the railing (栏杆) f the bridge.Bauer hit the brakes in time t avid the vehicles in his path.
Bauer stpped the car.“Ava, are yu OK?”he asked.She was shaken, but therwise unhurt.
And then a scream came frm the pickup.The driver’s dr was thrwn pen and a man climbed ut.He drpped t the grund and then ran t the railing.Bauer ran up beside him.The man pinted dwn, saying smething in Spanish.In the water was a car seat.Fastened t it, a girl abut tw years ld, lked terrified, flating n her back, kicking, splashing and streaming.
Matters quickly went frm bad t frightening when the girl rlled ver nt her stmach.Bauer waited fr the pickup driver t d smething, but he didn’t mve.Maybe he was in shck.
“Ava!”Bauer shuted, bending t remve his shes.“Stay by the car!”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
He climbed nt the railing and jumped int the water withut hesitatin.
A mment later the pickup driver pulled Bauer and the little girl ashre and the ambulance arrived.
【原文大意】 Jnathan Bauer父女二人在开车回家的路上看到前面不远处一辆黑色的小货车正从一条车道滑到另一条车道并最终挂在了公路大桥的栏杆上。多亏Bauer及时踩下刹车,他们躲开了路上的车辆且父女二人均没有受伤。然而,小货车司机受伤了并向Bauer示意说有个绑在儿童安全座椅上面的小女孩掉在水里了。
【写作指导】
1.续写第一段:由第一段首句内容“他爬上了栏杆,毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。”和第二段首句内容可知,续写第一段应讲Bauer的施救过程和在成功施救后Ava联系了救护车等。
2.续写第二段:由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,小货车司机把Bauer和小女孩拉上岸,救护车也到了。”可知,续写第二段应讲去医院后小女孩并无大碍,这使Bauer深感欣慰,还可以描写Bauer的言行对女儿的影响。
【参考范文】
He__climbed__nt__the__railing__and__jumped__int__the__water__withut__hesitatin.Seeing the little girl flating n her chest ten feet away (现在分词短语作状语), Bauer swam t her with all his strength and lifted her ut f the water swiftly.Hwever, the tddler’s critical cnditin had Bauer’s heart in his muth, heartbeat racing wildly (独立主格结构).In n time he cllected himself as a prfessinal t ffer timely assistance—standing straight, laying her against his shulder and hitting hard at her back with the flat f his hand (现在分词短语作状语).With anther hit n the back which was fllwed by a breath, Bauer sensed the beautiful feeling f little fingers hlding him arund the neck (现在分词短语作定语).Her eyes were pened nw,fcused n him.A mixture f relief and cncern flded ver him (拟人) as Bauer pulled her clse as if t shelter her frm any dangers.In the meantime,Ava, stunned by what she witnessed (宾语从句),called an ambulance.
A__mment__later__the__pickup__driver__pulled__Bauer__and__the__little__girl__ashre__and__the__ambulance__arrived.Minutes later,much t everyne’s relief, the girl was rushed t hspital in a helicpter, and Bauer breathed a sigh f relaxatin ultimately and hugged his wn daughter n the bridge, with his eyes glittering in the sun (with复合结构).Sn they were infrmed gratefully the tddler suffered a brken shulder but was therwise uninjured.Hearing the inspiring news (现在分词短语作状语), Ava was very thrilled and felt prud f her father, withut whse immediate leap that little girl wuld nt have lived a whle life.Inspired by her father’s actins (过去分词短语作状语), she made up her mind t save lives when she grew up.
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