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【题型分析】
分析全国中考真题可知此类话题通常考查:环境保护(含厉行节约)的做法和建议。
【写作要点】
角度①生态
濒危现状
1. Elephants/Pandas/Sharks are in danger nw. =Elephants/Pandas/Sharks are endangered nw.
2.The number f the wild animals has fallen/drpped quickly in the last 30 years.
3. Tday, there are fewer and fewer wild animals living/left.
濒危原因
1. Humans cut dwn s many frests and harm the envirnment.Wild animals can nt find enugh fd t eat and they als lse their hmes.
2. Peple cut dwn many trees s elephants are lsing their hmes.
3. Many wild animals are caught and traded by peple every year.
4. When peple catch sharks, they cut ff their fins and thrw the sharks back int the cean. This is nt nly cruel, but als harmful t the envirnment.
5. Pandas d nt have babies very ften. And what's wrse, the babies ften die frm illnesses and dn't live very lng.
拯救措施
1. We are trying hard t save the endangered wild animals.
2. Scientists are ding research t better understand their habits.
3. We shuld set up envirnmental grups t educate peple n the imprtance f saving endangered wild animals.
4. The gvernment shuld make laws t prtect them.
5. Dn't put ff taking actin! Let's hpe there will be a lt mre pandas/sharks/elephants!
角度②
环保环境问题
1. The envirnmental pllutin is becming mre and mre serius all ver the wrld.
2.The envirnment in sme cuntryside areas is wrth paying attentin t.
3. In recent years, many disasters happened n the earth and unusual weather appeared very ften.
4. Air pllutin is ne f the biggest prblems in the wrld.
5.I als nticed a lt f waste in life, such as fd waste and water waste.
6. The river was dirty. Even the bttm f the river was full f rubbish.
7. Peple ften use things nce and then thrw them away, r leave them n the grund as litter. This creates muntains f rubbish and pllutes ur land and seas.
8. In sme cities, the air is filled with pllutin. This makes peple ill, and mre peple will be hurt in the future if it is nt cleaned up.
9. It is widely knwn that burning gas, il and cal create air pllutin. It can cause sre eyes and breathing prblems.
环保措施
1. I think simple things like bringing a bag t g shpping can help.
2. When yu g shpping, remember t bring yur wn bag. It can reduce plastic pllutin.
3. We can cllect used things, such as paper and bttles.
4. T cut dwn air pllutin, we shuld take the bus r subway instead f driving.
5. We'd better chse public transprtatin when we need t g ut.
6. Als, I never take wden chpsticks r plastic frks when I buy takeaway fd.
7. In rder t becme a “green schl", a schl must include educatin abut the envirnment as part f the timetable.
8. Recycling is als a gd way t help reduce pllutin. We shuld divide waste int different grups s that it can be recycled.
9. We are suppsed t srt the rubbish befre thrwing it away.
10. It's better t put rubbish int rubbish bins s that we can keep ur city clean.
11. We can als plant sme trees because they can make air fresher.
12. We'd better plant as many trees as pssible t make ur city mre beautiful.
13. Secnd, saving electricity, water and fd is necessary.
14.Turn ff the lights when yu leave a rm.
15. We shuldn't keep water running all the time when we are brushing teeth.
保护环境的意义
1. Nature is ur greatest treasure. We depend n its rich resurces t live, s it is imprtant fr us t prtect it wisely.
2. We cannt hpe fr rapid change, but let's take these simple steps tday s that we will save the wrld fr ur grandsns and granddaughters tmrrw.
3.In fact, if each f us makes a small change in ur life, we can make a big difference t ur envirnment. It's nt t hard t prtect the envirnment. We just need t try.
4. I believe as lng as we take ne small step, the earth will take a big step.
5.In a wrd, I hpe everyne can play a part in prtecting the envirnment. Only when we frm the gd habit f prtecting the envirnment can we make the earth mre beautiful tmrrw.
6.It has been a cmmn sense that prtecting the envirnment is prtecting urselves.
号召保护环境
1.Let's act tgether t make the earth a mre beautiful place.
2.We nly have ne earth, s we need t prtect it tgether.
3.Fllw these small steps, and yu will make a big difference t the earth.
4. If we all keep ding these things, I believe the envirnment will be better and better.
5.The gvernment shuld make laws t prevent factries frm puring waste water int the river.
6. As middle schl students, it's ur duty t help build a green city.
7. It's imprtant fr envirnment in ur daily life.
俗语谚话
1. The clean water and green muntains are ur treasures. 绿水青山就是金山银山。
2.Under the blue sky, lve a hme.同在蓝天下,共爱一个家。
3.Schl is my hme. The envirnment depends n everyne.学校是我家,环境靠大家。
4. Dn't regret when the green disappears.别在绿色消失的时候,我们才去后悔。
5.Please lve green. Green is the surce f life. 请您爱护绿色。绿是生命之源。
6. Dn't let ur tears becme the last drp f water n the earth.
不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。
7.When the wells dry, we knw the wrth f water.井枯才知水宝贵。
8.Sharing the same sky, a ttal f sil retaining.同顶一片蓝天,共护一方水土。
【话题范文】
1.(2024·山东淄博·三模)最近雾霾天气较多,这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境,保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“The Green Planet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文,分析一下周围存在的环境问题,谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。
注意:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名;
短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文:
The Green Planet
Nw ur envirnment is becming wrse and wrse. Mre and mre peple have realized the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment. It’s ur duty t prtect ur earth.
In my daily life, I always turn ff the lights when I leave a rm. While I am washing my hair, I usually turn ff the shwer. Besides, if I want t g shpping, I always take reusable bags instead f using plastic bags. I have decided t d mre things t prtect ur earth, such as recycling bks and paper. It’s gd fr us t ride bikes r walk t schl. We can als plant mre trees t imprve the air arund us.
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it des make a difference. Let’s take actin nw!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“如何保护地球的环境”并适当补充,使文章内容充实,行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,点明环境越来越糟糕,以及环境的重要性。
第二步,具体阐述内容,介绍自己生活中是如何用具体行动保护环境的。
第三步,书写结语,号召大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②make an effrt做出努力
③decide t d决定做某事
[高分句型]
①I always turn ff the lights when I leave a rm.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it des make a difference.(省略that的宾语从句,n matter what引导的让步状语从句)
2.(2024·陕西渭南·二模)为提高青少年创造能力,号召大家保护环境,学校英语社团打算举行一次将劳动教育与环保教育相结合的活动——“手绘环保袋(A DIY picture n the bag)”活动。请你根据以下具体信息写一则通知,将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
要求:
1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
Ntice
Dear students,
In rder t imprve students’ creativity and prtect the envirnment, ur schl will hld an envirnmental activity—A DIY picture n the bag.
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Thank yu fr yur attentin!
Schl English Club
June 3, 2024
【答案】例文
Ntice
Dear students,
In rder t imprve students’ creativity and prtect the envirnment, ur schl will hld an envirnmental activity—A DIY picture n the bag. Let me tell yu smething abut it.
The activity will be held frm 2:00 t 6:00 p.m. this Saturday afternn at the schl gym. Every student is encuraged t draw beautiful pictures n the envirnment-friendly bags. Yu can draw smething yu like r smething related t the theme. Then we can hand ut these bags with pictures at the schl gate. Finally, we will take a pht tgether. It is bvius that we aim at imprving creativity and awareness f envirnmental prtectin. Yu can als invite yur family and friends t jin in.
Thank yu fr yur attentin!
Schl English Club
June 3, 2024
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一则通知;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍活动的时间、地点和内容;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be encuraged t d sth 被鼓励做某事
②related t 与……有关
③hand ut 分发
④jin in 参加
[高分句型]
①Every student is encuraged t draw beautiful pictures n the envirnment-friendly bags.(被动语态)
②It is bvius that we aim at imprving creativity and awareness f envirnmental prtectin.(It固定句型)
3.(2024·贵州黔东南·一模)绿水青山就是金山银山。作为一名中学生,我们可以从身边的小事做起,节约资源,保护环境。请以“My Green Life”为题,根据以下要点用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文向校广播站投稿,描述你的“绿色生活”计划。
要求如下:1.包含思维导图所有信息;
2.重点谈谈绿色生活的方式;
3.文中不得出现真实的个人信息。
My Green Life
Nwadays, the envirnmental pllutin is
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【答案】例文:
My Green Life
Nwadays, the envirnmental pllutin is becming wrse and wrse. Gvernment has taken actin t prtect ur envirnment. As students, what can we d? Fr me, I will try my best t save energy and reduce pllutin.
Firstly, I will take public transprtatin as much as pssible when I g ut. Fr example, I ride a bike r take a bus t schl. I think it can reduce the air pllutin. Secndly, I always turn ff the lights, fans and ther electrnic prducts when they are nt in use. Thirdly, I plan t recycle and make full use f ld things in my life. When I g shpping, I use paper r clth bags instead f plastic bags.
I als hpe mre and mre students can jin me in prtecting the envirnment t live a green life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍当前的环境问题。
第二步,介绍绿色生活的方式。
第三步,表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①taken actin采取行动
②try ne’s best t d尽某人最大努力做某事
③ride a bike骑车
[高分句型]
①I think it can reduce the air pllutin. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I always turn ff the lights, fans and ther electrnic prducts when they are nt in use. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4.(2024·江苏扬州·二模)世界环境保护日就要到了,学校组织以“Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以林涛的名义,根据以下内容写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
注意:
1. 必须包括所有要点,并适当拓展;表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 词数:100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green
Hell, everyne. I’m Lin Ta. I want t be a vlunteer f ging green. I’m glad t make a speech here.
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Thanks fr listening!
【答案】例文
Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green
Hell, everyne. I’m Lin Ta. I want t be a vlunteer f ging green. I’m glad t make a speech here.
I have many strng qualities. I’m s cnfident that I’m nt afraid f making a speech in public. I’m creative, s I ften cme up with new ideas. I’m als rganized. I always keep all my things in gd rder.
My favurite clur is green, because it’s the clur f nature and represents new life. I have wrked as a vlunteer fr prtecting the envirnment. I have als helped my classmates deal with their prblems. Fr example, sme f them felt sleepy in class. I advised them t manage the time better and g t bed earlier.
If I can be a vlunteer, I can d many things fr ur envirnment. I can thrw the rubbish int the rubbish bin. It’s necessary fr me t save water by turning ff the tap when I brush my teeth. I shuldn’t use plastic bags. Instead, I shuld take my wn bags when shpping. I must try my best t make a big difference t the envirnment.
Thanks fr listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的品质,最爱的颜色和原因,志愿事迹和环保措施;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid f 害怕
②cme up with 想出
③deal with 处理
④make a big difference t the envirnment 对环境产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①I’m s cnfident that I’m nt afraid f making a speech in public.(结果状语从句)
②My favurite clur is green, because it’s the clur f nature and represents new life.(原因状语从句)
③If I can be a vlunteer, I can d many things fr ur envirnment.(条件状语从句)
5.(2024·湖南永州·一模)日本政府不顾国际社会的坚决反对,于2023年8月24日启动福岛核污染水排海,据统计,福岛核污水排海至少要持续30年,这将对全世界的海洋造成极大的污染。国际海洋日即将来临,假如你是李华,请根据以下表格和提示,以“Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin”为题,写一篇英语短文,呼吁大家保护我们的海洋环境。
要求:
1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名,学校名等信息;
3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:release排放 nuclear wastewater核污水 chemicals化学品
Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin
Our cean is a vast and beautiful place, full f mysterius creatures and clrful cral reefs (珊瑚礁).
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【答案】例文
Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin
Our cean is a vast and beautiful place, full f mysterius creatures and clrful cral reefs (珊瑚礁). But nw the cean is plluted. Mre and mre marine life is dying frm pllutin. Plastic waste, ship waste il, factry chemicals, nuclear wastewater have led t increasingly severe marine pllutin.
It’s ur duty t prtect the cean. First f all, we shuld nt pur the rubbish int the sea. Next, ur gvernment shuld take actin t stp factries frm puring chemical waste water.
Frm my pint f view, we shuld stp plluting the cean frm nw n. We all need t raise awareness f these prblems. It nw becmes necessary fr us t take actin nw.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“海洋是个美丽的地方”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述内容。介绍海洋环境被污染的原因及应采取哪些应对措施;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家保护海洋环境。
[亮点词汇]
①stp ding sth.停止做某事
②把……倒入
③take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①It’s ur duty t prtect the cean.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
②But nw the cean is plluted.(一般现在时的被动语态)
6.(2024·江苏宿迁·二模)世界环境保护日就要到了,你校组织以“Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以林涛的名义,根据以下内容写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
注意:
1.必须包括所有要点,并适当拓展;表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2.词数:100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green
Hell, everyne. I’m Lin Ta. I want t be a vlunteer f ging green. I’m glad t make a speech here.
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Thanks fr listening!
【答案】例文
Being a Vlunteer f Ging Green
Hell, everyne. I’m Lin Ta. I want t be a vlunteer f ging green. I’m glad t make a speech here.
I have many strng qualities. I’m s cnfident that I’m nt afraid f making a speech in public. I’m creative, s I ften cme up with new ideas. I’m als rganized. I always keep all my things in gd rder.
My favurite clur is green, because it’s the clur f nature and represents new life. I have wrked as a vlunteer fr prtecting the envirnment. I have als helped my classmates deal with their prblems. Fr example, sme f them felt sleepy in class. I advised them t manage the time better and g t bed earlier.
If I can be a vlunteer, I can d many things fr ur envirnment. I can thrw the rubbish int the rubbish bin. It’s necessary fr me t save water by turning ff the tap when I brush my teeth. I shuldn’t use plastic bags. Instead, I shuld take my wn bags when shpping. I must try my best t make a big difference t the envirnment.
Thanks fr listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的品质,最爱的颜色和原因,志愿事迹和环保措施;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid f 害怕
②cme up with 想出
③deal with 处理
④make a big difference t the envirnment 对环境产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①I’m s cnfident that I’m nt afraid f making a speech in public.(结果状语从句)
②My favurite clur is green, because it’s the clur f nature and represents new life.(原因状语从句)
③If I can be a vlunteer, I can d many things fr ur envirnment.(条件状语从句)
7.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk fr Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下:
注意:
1.短文必须包含表中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:80—100;短文首句仅供参考选择使用,不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk fr Trees.
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【答案】例文
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk fr Trees. During this event, we will walk fr 10 kilmeters and raise mney t plant mre trees arund ur city. As we all knw, walking is nt nly beneficial fr ur health because it helps enhance ur endurance, but als raises envirnmental prtectin awareness amng students. In rder t ensure a pleasant experience, participants are advised t wear cmfrtable shes. What’s mre, it is recmmended t bring enugh water. One last thing, avid vereating befre the walk.
Jin us and make a difference fr ur planet!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我们将举办‘为树而行’活动”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“活动、好处、建议等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①raise mney筹钱
②In rder t为了
[高分句型]
Jin us and make a difference fr ur planet!(祈使句)
8.(2024·云南昆明·一模)Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests
提示:热带雨林在调节全球气候,防止水土流失,净化空气,保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而,由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒,有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests”为题,写一篇短文,谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文书写在答题卡上,写在试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests
Trpical rain frest plays an imprtant rle in regulating glbal climate, preventing sil ersin, purifying air and ensuring the rderly prgress f glbal eclgical cycle. S, it is necessary fr us t prtect them. Here are sme suggestins t prtect the rainfrests.
Firstly, we shuld shw and tell peple abut the imprtance f prtecting the rainfrests by sme channels, such as advertisement, bradcast and schl educatin etc. Secndly, we shuld d anything we can. When we eat, we can’t use dispsable chpsticks r paper cups. We shuld use less paper and make sure nt t waste paper. Thirdly, the gvernment shuld als publish sme regulatins t prtect the rainfrests.
In a wrd, it is ur duty t prtect the rainfrests. Let us try ur best t leave a green hme tgether.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述热带雨林的重要作用,开门见山,引出话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“人人们了解保护热带雨林的重要性”、“做我们力所能及的的事情”以及“政府应该发布相关法律法规”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,倡导大家一起保护热带雨林。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an imprtant rle in在……中发挥重要作用
②glbal climate全球气候
③sil ersin水土流失
④dispsable一次性的
⑤make sure确保
⑥indiscriminately任意地
⑦In a wrd换言之
[高分句型]
①Here are sme suggestins t prtect the rainfrests. (倒装句)
②When we eat, we can’t use dispsable chpsticks r paper cups. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let us try ur best t leave a green hme tgether. (祈使句)
9.(2024·贵州黔南·模拟预测)安全无小事,为了增强青少年的安全意识,你校广播站英文栏目“Fun Learning”将进行每周校园安全提醒。假设你是校广播站的英语播音员,请你根据以下的本周安全提示,以“Hw t Stay Safe”为题写一篇不少于80词的英语播音稿,提醒同学们注意安全。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含以上提示的全部内容;
2. 结合图文信息,简述你认为需要重点提醒的内容;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇:fllw 遵守 high-quality高质量的 drwning 溺水 mask 口罩
Hw t Stay Safe
Bys and girls,
Gd afternn! Welcme t ur Fun Learning.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Stay Safe
Bys and girls,
Gd afternn! Welcme t ur Fun Learning. This week’s tpic is hw t stay safe. Danger is never as far away as we think. Hw can we stay safe and prtect urselves better? Here is sme advice.
First f all, fllw the traffic rules. Never crss the street when the traffic light is red. If yu see any teenagers crssing the street by bike at that time, tell them that it’s nt allwed, it is very dangerus. Secnd, chse high-quality fd that is clean and fresh. Pay attentin t strage and cking methds t make sure yur diet is healthy and safe. Third, never swim in rivers. A life jacket makes a difference when drwning happens. Last but nt least, fr yur safety, washing hands ften helps t prevent mst diseases and wear masks if necessary.
Hpe the advice abve will be helpful fr yu t stay safe and healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,考生结合自身经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的意图;
第二步,根据题干思维导图中的要点,详细介绍在交通、食物、预防溺水和疾病四方面注意的事项;
第三步,最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure确保
②first f all首先
③pay attentin t注意
[高分句型]
①Last but nt least, fr yur safety, washing hands ften helps t prevent mst diseases and wear masks if necessary. (动名词作主语)
②A life jacket makes a difference when drwning happens. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10.(2024·贵州毕节·模拟预测)学校环境是教育环境之一,良好的校园环境对学生的健康成长有着巨大的影响。根据思维导图的提示并结合自己的生活实际,以“Hw t make ur schl a better place?”为题,根据写作要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。
写作要求:
1.短文须包含上图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
2.文章不能出现真实的人名和校名。
Hw t make ur schl a better place?
As we all knw, schl is nt nly a place t study, but als a place t live.
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【答案】例文:
Hw t make ur schl a better place?
As we all knw, schl is nt nly a place t study, but als a place t live. Mst f ur time is spent in schl. S it is imprtant t make ur schl better. But hw t d it? Here are sme suggestins.
First f all, we shuld prtect the flwers and trees in ur schl frm being damaged. Besides, we shuld keep ur schl clean and tidy s that we can fcus n ur study. What’s mre, fllwing the schl rules can keep ur schl in gd rder. Last but nt least, we shuld get alng well with ur classmates because gd relatinships can help us make mre friends and reduce the pressure f ur study.
All in all, I believe ur schl will becme a better place if we all d things mentined abve. Let’s play an active part in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章标题以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,根据要点讲述如何使学校变成更好的地方,注意要有逻辑性;
第三步,表达看法,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②what’s mre还有
③get alng well with与……相处友好
[高分句型]
①Mst f ur time is spent in schl.(被动语态)
②we shuld keep ur schl clean and tidy s that we can fcus n ur study.(s that引导的目的状语从句)
③I believe ur schl will becme a better place if we all d things mentined abve.(if引导的条件状语从句)
11.(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)为倡导绿色环保新时尚,学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“G green at schl”为题,根据以下通知,号召全体同学行动起来,共建美好校园。
要求:
1. 表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括通知中提到的所有要点内容, 并适当发挥;
3. 词数:不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数) ;
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
G green at schl
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant t study in an envirnmentally friendly schl? Tday it’s my great hnr t give a speech abut hw t build a clean and beautiful campus.
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Thank yu fr yur listening!
【答案】
G green at schl
Dear students,
Isn’t it pleasant t study in an envirnmentally friendly schl? Tday it’s my great hnr t give a speech abut hw t build a clean and beautiful campus.
There are many prblems in ur schl nw. Smetimes the faucet is nt turned ff. Smene did nt turn ff the lights after leaving the classrm. We still have peple wh dn’t save fd. I think a clean and tidy schl shuld be filled with birds chirping and flwers blming everywhere. Everyne saves energy and cares fr the envirnment. S we all need t take care f the envirnment.
On ne hand, we shuld save resurces. Firstly , we shuld save paper. We can reuse the textbks and use bth sides f the paper. Secndly, we shuld save water. We can take shrt shwers and reuse water. Thirdly, we are suppsed t save electricity. When we leave frm the classrm, we can turn ff the light . Als, we needn’t turn n all the lights if enugh. On the ther hand, we shuld reduce pllutin. We can plant mre trees and flwers, chse the public transprt and use the clth bags instead f plastic bags. If we take gd care f ur earth tday, it will be mre beautiful tmrrw.
Thank yu fr yur listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生写作时应注意要按演讲稿要求写,不要遗漏表格通知中的校园环保问题,干净整洁的学校应有的样子,以及如何创建一个干净的学习环境等要点,根据实际情况可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,应承接短文开头,在第二段具体说明校园现在存在的环保问题,以及干净整洁的学校应有的样子;
第二步,具体阐述如何创建一个干净的学习环境的方法和建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达对听众的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① turn ff 关闭
② be filled with (被)充满,装满
③ take care f 照顾,照料
④ On ne hand, … On the ther hand, … 一方面……,另一方面……
⑤ turn n 打开
[高分句型]
① We still have peple wh dn’t save fd. (含有定语从句的复合句)
② When we leave frm the classrm, we can turn ff the light . (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ If we take gd care f ur earth tday, it will be mre beautiful tmrrw. (含有条件状语从句的复合句)
12.(2024·安徽合肥·三模)假设你是李辉。你校英文报近期正在开展“保护环境,从我做起”的主题活动,号召全体师生从小事做起,践行环保理念。请你根据下面的图示信息,写一份英文倡议书。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My fellw students,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech.
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Thanks fr yur time!
【答案】例文
My fellw students,
I’m glad t be here t give a speech.
Prtecting the envirnment is crucial fr ur survival and the well-being f future generatins. It helps t maintain the balance f nature and ensures that we have clean air, water, and sil.
There are many ways we can prtect the envirnment. We can start by reducing waste, recycling, and reusing items. Cnserving water and energy, planting trees, and using ec-friendly prducts are als effective methds.
I hpe that each f us can take these small steps t make a big difference. Let’s wrk tgether t create a greener and healthier wrld.
Thanks fr yur time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一和第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先强调了保护环境的重要性;
第二步,接着列举了几种保护环境的方法;
第三步,最后表达了希望大家认真采取这些措施,共同创造绿色未来的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial fr对……至关重要
②effective有效的
③make a big difference意义重大
[高分句型]
①There are many ways we can prtect the envirnment.(定语从句)
②I hpe that each f us can take these small steps t make a big difference.(宾语从句)
13.(2024·湖南长沙·三模)假设你是李华,为提升学生的环保意识和动手能力,你校将于下周举办“旧物可循环,环境需守护”为主题的环保作品展(Ec-friendly Wrks Exhibitin)。请根据以下图示,用英文给你的交换生好友Jhn写一封电子邮件,介绍这项活动并邀请他参加。
要求:(1)短文必须思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Dear Jhn,
I am pleased t tell yu that ur schl is ging t hld the “Envirnmental Prtectin Exhibitin”. The exhibitin will be held in the schl hall n June 23rd. At the exhibitin, we will listen t a speech. In additin, we will als enjy the beautiful wrks made f waste. The activity aims t help develp students’ life skills and raise everyne’s awareness f envirnmental prtectin. I believe it will be a great pprtunity fr learning and cmmunicatin. I really hpe yu can jin us. Remember t bring yur wn wrks if yu cme.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时及一般将来时;
③提示:写作要求已给出,考生注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题告诉对方学校将举办环保作品展;
第二步,介绍作品展的时间、活动、意义等具体信息;
第三步,邀请对方参加。
[亮点词汇]
①be pleased t d很高兴做某事
②in additin此外
③aim t旨在
①I believe it will be a great pprtunity fr learning and cmmunicatin.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Remember t bring yur wn wrks if yu cme.(if引导的条件状语从句)
14.(2024·陕西西安·模拟预测)习主席提出“绿水青山”就是金山银山,这是中国生态文明建设的理念。保护环境,人人有责。假设你们学校的英语社团要开展一次以“爱祖国爱家乡,从保护环境做起”为主题的宣讲活动,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
1. Hw are yu ging t prtect the envirnment?
2. What are yu ging t d t prtect the envirnment?
3. Why are yu ging t d that?
参考词汇:plastic bags, cars, recycle
要求:
1. 选取至少两个方面;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
3. 不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总数)。
Build a ________ China
Ladies and gentlemen,
Nwadays, ur envirnment is getting wrse and wrse.
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【答案】例文
Build a Beautiful ChinaLadies and gentlemen,
Nwadays, ur envirnment is getting wrse and wrse. T build a beautiful China, we must prtect ur envirnment.
First, t save water and electricity, I will turn ff shwer, taps and lights in time when I dn’t use them. Secnd, I’m ging t walk r ride a bike when I g ut. If mst peple d s, the air will be fresher and fresher. Third, I will use bth sides f paper and stp using thrwaway chpsticks r cups. And I will advise the peple arund me t d these things. Therefre, fewer trees will be cut dwn. Furth, I will use clth bags instead f plastic bags t reduce pllutin.
Let’s try ur best t prtect ur envirnment. As lng as we wrk tgether, we will build a beautiful China and the Chinese Dream will cme true.
Thank yu fr yur listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要是“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意选取至少两个方面进行阐述并且不要忘记补全标题,适当增加细节,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全标题;
第二步,具体阐述你打算如何保护环境以及这么做的原因;
第三步,呼吁大家共同保护环境,建设美丽中国。
[亮点词汇]
①turn ff 关闭
②thrwaway chpsticks 一次性筷子
③instead f 代替
④as lng as 只要
[高分句型]
①First, t save water and electricity, I will turn ff shwer, taps and lights in time when I dn’t use them. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If mst peple d s, the air will be fresher and fresher. (if引导条件状语从句)
③As lng as we wrk tgether, we will build a beautiful China and the Chinese Dream will cme true. (as lng as引导条件状语从句)
15.(2024·辽宁朝阳·一模)假定你是李辉,你的美国朋友Nathan来信询问2023 年中国热门话题“预制菜”的相关信息,请你给他写一封回信。
(1) 引入话题;
(2) 你的观点;
(3) 期待回信。
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等;
(4) 参考词汇:prepared fd 预制菜。
Dear Nathan,
I am s happy t receive yur letter.
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Best wishes t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Nathan,
I am s happy t receive yur letter.
With the develpment f science and technlgy, prepared fd has gradually entered my life. Sme peple like it and believe it brings cnvenience t peple. Sme peple als ppse it due t health issues. I think prepared fd shuld be widely prmted. Firstly, it des bring cnvenience t thse wh d nt have time t ck. Secndly, it can bring cnvenience t thse wh cannt ck. Thirdly, it is cst-effective. S I think it’s beneficial fr us. What is yur pinin? I hpe t receive yur reply.
Best wishes t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“预制菜”的话题;
第二步,表述你自己的观点;
第三步,期待回信,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①due t由于
②be beneficial fr对……有益
③cnvenience方便
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it des bring cnvenience t thse wh d nt have time t ck. (wh引导的定语从句)
②S I think it’s beneficial fr us. (it作形式宾语)
Time
2:00 p.m.—6:00 p.m., this Saturday afternn
Place
at the schl gym
Members
all the students f the club
Activities
1. draw beautiful pictures n the envirnment-friendly bags (环保袋);
2. hand ut the bags at the schl gate;
3. take a pht tgether;
…
Qualities
rganized, creative…
Favurite clur
green, because…
Experiences
1. vlunteer…
2. help the classmates with prblems…
Steps t prtect the envirnment
1. …
2. …
What were the prblems?
The cean was plluted. Mre and mre marine life (海洋生物) is dying frm pllutin.
What caused the prblems?
Plastic waste, ships’ waste il spills (泼洒) , chemicals frm factries, nuclear wastewater. . .
What shuld we d?
Dn’t thrw rubbish int the sea.
Stp factries frm puring chemical waste water.
. . . . . .
品质
有条理,有创意(各举一例)
最爱的颜色
绿色,因为……
事迹
做过环保志愿者, 帮助同学们解决烦恼(举一例)
环保措施
……(至少两点)
WALK FOR TREES
Activities
Benefits (益处)
Suggestins
●walk fr 10 kilmeters
●raise mney t plant mre trees
● …
●be gd fr health
●…
●wear cmfrtable shes
●…
NticeDear students,
Our schl is nt just a place where we cme t study. It’s als ur secnd hme. A clean and cmfrtable campus (校园) makes it pssible fr us t enjy learning. Fr this reasn, ur schl will hld an English speech cmpetitin named G green at schl. Thse wh want t take part in it are required t finish the speech within three minutes accrding t the fllwing infrmatin:
◆What prblems are there in yur schl?
◆What is a clean and tidy schl like?
◆What can yu d t create a clean learning envirnment?
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