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【题型分析】
分析全国中考真题可知此类话题通常考查：①个人梦想或职业介绍；2个人实现梦想的途径、职业精神；③自己对未来的畅想等。
【写作要点】
梦想的重要性（why）
1. Different persns have different gals. I als have my wn gal.
2. Life is full f challenges and hpes. That's why everyne lngs fr the future.
3.The life gal is like a light which guides yu in darkness and helps yu vercme difficulties.
》表述梦想(what)
1. Everyne has his r her dream. S d I. My dream is t be a writer.
2.I dream f being a dctr when I grw up.
3. I want t be a scientist like Qian Xuesen in the future.
4.I want t be a writer because I lve writing.
5. The reasn why I dream f being a dctr is that I admire Zhng Nanshan very much.
6.I am gd at cmmunicating and I like wrking with children, s I want t be a teacher.
实现梦想的方法(hw)
1.I plan t study in an art schl and take acting lessns after I finish my high schl.
2.I have t get a gd educatin and learn hw t teach children s that I can be a gd teacher.
3.I will try my best t learn mre dancing skills t give wnderful perfrmances. I hpe dancing will bring happiness t the peple wh watch my perfrmances.
4.I wuld like t study hard and try my best t learn mre dancing skills.
5. Because f my lve fr English, I listen t English sngs, watch English mvies and read English newspapers alud fr an hur every day. Thus, I have the pprtunity t be an excellent English teacher and teach mre students hw t learn English well and hw t get gd grades.
6.T make my dream cme true, I need t gain much knwledge abut teaching. Besides, I am ging t spend my spare time vlunteering in a village schl s that I can get sme experience.
7. T achieve my dream, I need t get much knwledge abut medicine.
8.T achieve my gal, I will try t pass the cllege entrance examinatin and enter a gd university. Besides, I will d a part-time jb during the vacatin t practice myself. These are a part f achieving my gal.
9. In rder t achieve my dream, frm nw n, I have t study hard and be strict with myself. I will try nt t waste time n useless things. I must learn as much as I can t imprve myself. When I meet any difficulty, I wn't give it up, and d my best t get it ver.
10.First, I must have a strng bdy, s I will take exercise every day. Secnd, I will d my best t
study hard at all subjects. Third, I will read mre bks t enrich my knwledge.
11. It's necessary fr us t wrk harder t realize ur dreams.
决心及愿望
1. I believe as lng as I wrk hard, my dream will cme true.
2.I believe if I put my heart int it, I can be a famus musician ne day.
3.I believe that my dream will cme true sme day.
4. I've decided t hld n t my dream until it cmes true.
5. Thugh it is difficult t make my dream cme true, nthing will prevent me frm achieving it.
6. As lng as we wrk hard, we will realize ur dreams.
7.All in all, I believe that trying t achieve my gal will make my life meaningful.
俗语谚语
1.Great dreams are the key t everything.远大的理想是开启万物的钥匙。
2. Where there's a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。
3.Everyne's life is a bat and a dream is the sail f the bat.
每个人的生命都是一只小船，梦想是小船的风帆。
T have a dream is nly an intelligence, and t realize it is an ability.
拥有梦想只是一种智力，实现梦想才是一种能力。
【话题范文】
1．新冠疫情爆发后，无数医务工作者和科学家努力挽救了大量生命，这使人们对职业的理解有了新的认识。假定你是李华，你要参加学校举行的以“My Dream Jb”为题的英文演讲，
请你写一篇演讲稿，包括以下内容：
（1）介绍你的个性和爱好；
（2）分享你的梦想职业及理由；
（3）说明你的目标达成途径与期望。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文：
My dream jb
Gd mrning, everyne,
I feel hnred t deliver a speech here sharing my dream with yu. I hpe t be a dctr in the future.
The main reasn is that I get a lt f psitive energy frm the dctrs, wh have wrked hard t save peple’s lives during the COVID-19 utbreak. Medicine plays an increasing imprtant rle in the develpment f sciety. Therefre, mre qualified dctrs are in great demand. What’s mre, I’m patient and enjy lking after thers, which is definitely helpful in the medical career.
T achieve my dream, I will wrk hard t enter a gd medical university t equip myself with relevant knwledge such as medicine, medical thery and nursing skills. I believe I will make a gd dctr thrugh effrts.
Thank yu fr listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按着演讲稿的格式写。在写作时开头应介绍我梦想的职业；第二段叙述选择这个职业的理由；第三段说明我的目标如何达成以及我的期望；最后结尾表示感谢。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般将来时介绍我的目标达成途径与期望；介绍我的职业梦想时，原因应介绍细致；并且我的个性、爱好、目标达成途径等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
2．“少年强则国强，少年智则国智。”青少年是祖国的未来，家庭的期待。近几年，中学生职业生涯规划正悄然兴起。假如你是张磊，你校英语社团近期在开展有关职业规划的讨论。下表是你的职业规划，请根据表格要点写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1. 词数80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 请根据自己的职业规划把题目补充完整，文中须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
I want t be a/an ________ in the future
We never knw what will happen in the future. But knwing urselves well and making plans are meaningful fr ur future.
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【答案】例文
I want t be a designer in the future
We never knw what will happen in the future. But knwing urselves well and making plans are meaningful fr ur future. Nw let me tell yu abut myself.
I’m an utging and patient by. I lve reading and cmmunicate with thers. I als lve drawing and slving puzzles. I dream f becming a designer. T achieve my dream, I plan t make study plans, imprve my study methds and ask teachers fr help. I’m ging t d mre exercise t keep healthy. What’s mre, I will fcus n art and math in schl. I’ll als jin art clubs t imprve my skills.
I believe learning and practicing will help me grw int a successful designer!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自我介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从自我评价、梦想职业以及如何实现梦想三个方面重点介绍自己；
第三步，书写结语，表达实现梦想的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①cmmunicate with 和……交流
②dream f 梦想……
③ask sb. fr help 向某人寻求帮助
④fcus n专注于
[高分句型]
①T achieve my dream, I plan t make study plans, imprve my study methds and ask teachers fr help.（不定式作状语；and连接三个并列动词短语）
②I believe learning and practicing will help me grw int a successful designer!（省略that的宾语从句）
3．假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的“梦想职业体验”为主题的2024年寒假冬令营 (winter camp) 活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith 写一封介绍个人情况的自荐信。
内容包括：
1.个人信息与兴趣爱好；
2.梦想职业与个人计划；
写作要求：不少于65词，邮件的开头、结尾和格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It’s my pleasure t intrduce myself t yu.
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I d hpe t jin in the activity and lk frward t yur reply.
Best wishes!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
It’s my pleasure t intrduce myself t yu. My name is Li Hua. I’m 13 years ld. I lve reading and writing. I want t be a writer when I grw up. After schl, I ften spend lts f time reading in the library with my classmates. I keep a diary every day. S after knwing yur winter camp, I feel very excited. And I will write abut ut experiences at the camp. After wrk, I will spend mre time making a summary.
I d hpe t jin in the activity and lk frward t yur reply.
Best wishes!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己个人信息与兴趣爱好；
第二步，具体阐述梦想职业与个人计划。
[亮点词汇]
①lve ding sth喜欢做某事
②want t be想成为
③grw up长大
[高分句型]
I want t be a writer when I grw up（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．人生需精心规划，方可铸就美好未来。参考导图信息写一篇英语短文，预想十年后的自己，再讲讲追梦打算，踏实奔赴梦想。
要求：
1. 必须包含所有导图信息，可适当发挥，词数不少于70词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My future
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【答案】例文：
My future
Only by making a gd plan fr life can we reach a wnderful future. I dream t be a ftball player. In ten years, I will live in Beijing and I will play fr a ftball club. As a ftball player, I will practice hard fr the games. I will have a gd relatinship with my partners and make friends with them. I will live in a small apartment by myself. On weekends, I will g t the places f interest t learn mre abut the histry f China. In rder t achieve my dream, I am ging t spend mre time playing ftball. I am ging t a ftball schl t learn hw t play ftball well. In a wrd, I will try my best t make my dream cme true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据导图信息，介绍十年后的自己，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己十年后的生活，包括工作、居住地、空闲时间的活动等；
第二步，介绍自己将会如何实现自己的梦想；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己实现梦想的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gd relatinship 保持良好的关系
②by neself 独自
③the places f interest 名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Only by making a gd plan fr life can we reach a wnderful future.（倒装句）
②In a wrd, I will try my best t make my dream cme true.（动词不定式表目的）
5．梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1. What are yu ging t be in the future?
2. What makes yu have the dream? (Give sme reasns)
3. What are yu ging t d t realize yur dream? (Mre than tw plans)
注意：1. 根据以上提示，适当发挥；
2. 要求结构清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
Dreams are different frm persn t persn. Sme peple want t be writers, while thers want t be dctrs. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Pssible versin:
My Dream
Dreams are different frm persn t persn. Sme peple want t be writers, while thers want t be dctrs. As fr me, I have a dream that ne day I will be a scientist. Here are sme reasns.
Fr ne reasn, I prefer science t ther subjects. It is my favrite subject at schl. Fr anther, I am curius and I lve explring the unknwn. I am excited abut the things that will be discvered in the future.
T realize my dream, I am ging t study harder t enter a university t learn mre abut science. What’s mre, I’ll make full use f my spare time t read different kinds f bks and btain mre knwledge. As the saying ges, “Rman was nt built in a day.” I will stick t my dream n matter hw difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will cme true ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍梦想是什么；
第二步，阐述原因；
第三步，介绍为了实现梦想，自己打算如何做；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use f充分利用
②different kinds f不同种类的
③stick t坚持
④cme true实现
[高分句型]
①I am excited abut the things that will be discvered in the future.（定语从句）
②I will stick t my dream n matter hw difficult it is.（n matter hw引导的让步状语从句）
③I am sure that my dream will cme true ne day. （宾语从句）
6．每个人都有自己的梦想，我们都是在努力奔跑的追梦人。梦想是清晰的目标(What)，是价值的追问(Why)，更是持续的力行(Hw)，相信你也为了自己的梦想一直在努力。请以“My dream”为题，参照下图所示的三个关键问题，用英文讲述你的梦想故事。
注意：
1. 短文须包括图中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现具体姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右。
My dream
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My dream
Men r wmen, yung r ld, we all have dreams.
As fr me, my dream is t becme a teacher. I want t be a great teacher because I lve sharing knwledge and helping students grw. I will study hard t imprve myself and learn teaching methds. I will als cmmunicate mre with students t understand their needs. I believe I can make my dream cme true with my lng-time effrts.
I will be my students’ great teacher and their helpful friend as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍你有这个梦想的原因；
第三步，最后描述你将如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
① as fr至于
② want t be想要成为
③ as well也
[高分句型]
①I want t be a great teacher because I lve sharing knwledge and helping students grw.（原因状语从句）
②I believe I can make my dream cme true with my lng-time effrts. （宾语从句）
7．一个国家有梦想，一个民族有梦想，作为时代未来主人的我们，也应该有梦想！请以“My Dream”为题，介绍你自己的梦想和实现梦想的计划并向你校英语校报投稿，内容包括：
1. 我理想的工作；
2. 为什么 (至少3条理由)；
3. 怎样做准备 (至少2种方式)。
要求：
1. 短文内容应包括所有要点；
2. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3. 词数80左右。
My dream jb
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【答案】例文：
My dream jb
Everybdy has his dream jb. I als have my dream jb.
I want t be a dentist. First, I think teeth are very imprtant. If we have strng and healthy teeth, we can eat and drink well. Secnd, t be a dentist, I can help peple keep their teeth healthy. Third, I want t make a lt f mney fr my family. This is really a jb with a gd pay. T make my dream cme true, I’m ging t study hard. I’m ging t learn a lt abut medicine at a university. I’m sure I can be an excellent dentist.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”穿插。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“每个人都有一个梦想，我也有一个梦想”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述关于我理想的工作是什么，为什么，以及怎样做准备。
第三步，书写结语。表达我美好的祈愿，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①imprtant重要的
②make a lt f mney挣很多钱
③excellent优秀的
[高分句型]
T make my dream cme true, I’m ging t study hard. (不定式作目的状语)
8．假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“英语特色活动周”，英语社团组织开展以“说梦想，话未来”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括以下要点：
1. 你梦想的职业是什么；
2. 你选择这一职业的原因；
3. 你打算如何去实现它。
提示词语：dream, help, cme true, study, finish, cllege, meaningful (有意义的)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 词数约60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyne has his wn dream.
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【答案】例文
Everyne has his wn dream. As fr me, I dream f becming a dctr. I chse t be a dctr because I want t help peple wh suffer frm disease. Dctrs are knwledgeable and skillful t make peple healthier. I want t be ne f them.
T achieve this dream, I plan t fcus n my study nw. After finishing high schl, I’ll attend a medical schl. It’s a lng jurney, but I’m ready t wrk hard. I believe that with determinatin and effrt, I can reach my gal and becme a dctr and make a difference smeday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己梦想的职业是什么以及选择这一职业的原因；
第二步、介绍自己打算如何去实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①as fr至于
②chse t d选择做
③suffer frm遭受
④plan t d计划做
⑤fcus n专注于
⑥make a difference起作用；有影响
[高分句型]
①I chse t be a dctr because I want t help peple wh suffer frm disease.(because引导原因状语从句；wh引导定语从句)
9．规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等真实信息。
2.词数80-100词，标题和短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.字迹工整，语言准确，逻辑清晰。
My Dream
Everyne has his dream. My dream is t be
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【答案】例文：
My Dream
Everyne has his dream. My dream is t be a dctr in the future. I think a dctr is a very nble prfessin. They can save peple’s lives and help them get rid f pain and illness. I want t be a dctr wh can make a difference in peple’s lives and bring hpe t thse in need.
In my imaginatin, I will wear a white cat and wrk diligently t diagnse and treat patients. I will listen t their cncerns and try my best t prvide the best medical care.
T achieve my dream, I knw I need t study hard and acquire a lt f knwledge. I will fcus n my studies in science and medicine. I believe that with perseverance and hard wrk, I can realize my dream. In additin, I hpe t create a warm and friendly wrking envirnment. I will treat my patients with kindness and respect.
I am lking frward t the day when I becme a dctr and fulfill my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想；
第二步，介绍自己理想的工作地方及如何实现梦想；
第三步，总结全文，尽全力实现自己的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①get rid f摆脱
②make a difference有影响
③try ne’s best t d sth尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①T achieve my dream, I knw I need t study hard and acquire a lt f knwledge. (t d 表目的)
②I believe that with perseverance and hard wrk, I can realize my dream. (宾语从句)
10．请根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Tm。
1. 他小时候是一个安静的男孩，但现在比我还外向。
2. 在学校里，他学习最努力；周末在家，他喜欢看卡通片。
3. 他喜欢锻炼，每周与朋友踢三到四次足球。
4. 他的梦想：①将来想要当一名医生；②打算学医药学；③打算去上海工作； ④打算先读完高中和大学。
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Gd friends are like sunshine. They brighten ur life. I have a gd friend called Tm.
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【答案】例文：
Gd friends are like sunshine. They brighten ur life. I have a gd friend called Tm.
He was quiet when he was yung. But nw he is mre utging than me. He wrks the hardest in schl and he is gd at all the subjects. On weekends, he likes watching cartns at hme. He is interested in sprts and he plays sccer with his friends three r fur times a week.
He plans t study medicine in cllege after finishing high schl. His dream is t becme a dctr in the future, and he hpes t wrk in Shanghai.
This is my friend. I hpe he can make his dream cme true ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容需完整表达，以第三人称叙述为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明文章主旨；
第二步，介绍Tm的性格、学习情况、爱好等；
第三步，介绍Tm的梦想；
第四步，表达祝愿，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd at擅长
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③cme true实现；成真
[高分句型]
①He was quiet when he was yung.（时间状语从句）
②I hpe he can make his dream cme true ne day.（宾语从句）
11．假如你叫Jack，你有一个梦想：你家在2025年会有一个叫Superman的机器人，他可以帮你做很多事情，还可以和你一起玩。请根据下面的图片提示，也可发挥自己的想象，描绘一下你的这个梦想。词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
I’m Jack. I have a dream. There will be a rbt called Superman in my family in 2025. The rbt lks like a strng man. He can help me d many things. He can repair cars and help me carry heavy bxes. He can als play ftball well. He can nt nly play cmputer games with me but als clean my huse and d sme shpping. With his help, I think my life will be very happy and cmfrtable in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据图片提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍在2025年家里会有一个叫Superman的机器人。
第二步，根据图片提示，详细介绍机器人可以做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①lk like看起来像
②help sb. d sth.帮助某人做某事
③d sme shpping购物
④in the future将来
[高分句型]
①There will be a rbt called Superman in my family in 2025. (There be句型)
②With his help, I think my life will be very happy and cmfrtable in the future. (省略that的宾语从句)
12．因为害怕未知的风险，人们有时会选择裹足不前，但是未来是可以创造的，我们可以选择自己的生活，全力以赴实现自己的梦想。那么10 年后，你的生活会变成什么样呢？请以“My future life”为题，根据以下写作要求，写一篇英语作文。
内容要点：
1）10年后你的生活是什么样子的？
2）想象一下周围的世界是什么样子的？
3）为了让你的想象变成现实，你会怎么做？
写作要求：
1）文中须包含以上提示的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数90左右。
My future life
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【答案】例文：
My Future Life
In ten years, I imagine my life will be quite different. I might be living in a big city, having a jb that I lve, perhaps as a sftware engineer. I will have a cmfrtable apartment and a car.
The wrld arund me may have changed a lt t. There culd be mre advanced technlgy everywhere. Maybe peple will be using flying cars and there will be mre intelligent rbts t help with daily tasks.
T make this visin a reality, I will study hard and fcus n learning knwledge and skills. I will als try t gain practical experience thrugh internships and prjects. I believe with determinatin and hard wrk, I can achieve my dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己未来的生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍10年后你的生活是什么样子的；
第二步，介绍周围的世界是什么样子的；
第三步，介绍为了让你的想象变成现实，你会怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②fcus n集中注意力
[高分句型]
T make this visin a reality, I will study hard and fcus n learning knwledge and skills. (动词不定式作目的状语)
13．中国梦是一个伟大的梦想。在这个属于奋斗者的新时代，人人都有追梦的权利，人人都是梦 想的筑造者。你的中国梦是什么呢？请以“My dream”为题目，写一篇英语短文分享你的梦想吧！
内容要点：
1.你的梦想是什么？
2.你为什么会有这个梦想？
3.你如何实现这个梦想？
注意：
1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得透露个人信息；
3.词数80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： scientist 科学家， engineer 工 程 师 ，astrnaut 宇航员， realize 实现
My dream
Chinese dream is a great dream and everyne has his wn Chinese dream.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
My dream
Chinese dream is a great dream and everyne has his wn Chinese dream. I have a dream that ne day I will becme a teacher.
I am utging and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knwledge and skills, and grw up t be useful t the sciety. Children are the future f the natin. Educatin is a basic human right and it’s imprtant in the develpment f children, cmmunities, and cuntries.
T achieve my dream, first I am ging t study hard t enter a university t learn abut educatin and ther subjects. I will als learn t cmmunicate with thers, fr cmmunicating skill is very imprtant fr a teacher.
As lng as I try my best, I am sure my dream will cme true ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，写作时可直接描写自己的梦想。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“为什么会有这个梦想”和“如何实现这个梦想”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. d sth.帮助某人做某事
②grw up t成长为
③cmmunicate with sb.和某人交流
④as lng as只要
[高分句型]
①If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knwledge and skills, and grw up t be useful t the sciety. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②As lng as I try my best, I am sure my dream will cme true ne day. (As lng as引导的条件状语从句和宾语从句)
14．梦想，是夜空中最亮的那颗星，指引着我们前行的方向。某英文报正在举行题为“My dream”的征文活动，请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文向该报投稿。
提示：
1. What is yur dream?
2. Why d yu have the dream?
3. Hw will yu realize yur dream? (schlwrk, after-schl activities, …)
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得透漏学校、姓名等相关个人信息；
3. 信息完整，适当发挥，结构连贯，书写工整。
My dream
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【答案】例文
My dream
I want t be an astrnaut. I lve lking at the stars and space. I think it’s where we can learn a lt abut life.
I have tw reasns fr this dream. First, I like hearing abut astrnauts and their exciting trips in space. They make me want t learn mre. Secnd, I want t help find new things that can help everyne.
T make my dream cme true, I will study hard in science and math. These subjects are imprtant fr explring space. I will als jin a club abut stars and take part in science events. I will read bks abut space and keep up with the latest news abut space travel.
Dreams are like the brightest stars. They shw us the way t ur gals. I will wrk hard t tuch the stars and make my dream happen.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍自己会如何实现自己的梦想；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cme true实现
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Secnd, I want t help find new things that can help everyne. (that引导的定语从句)
②T make my dream cme true, I will study hard in science and math. (动词不定式作目的状语)
15．2022年10月16日，党的二十大在北京胜利召开，今年是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年，“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。
请以My dream jb为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你对梦想的所知所感。
要点：
1.你梦想的工作是什么？
2.为什么有这样的梦想？
3.为了实现梦想如何努力？
要求：
1.词数100左右；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文：
My dream jb
I have dreamed f being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred prfessin. As we all knw, China has respected teachers and valued educatin since ancient times. Besides, I want t be a teacher because f the pwer f an example. Miss Li, the head teacher f my junir high schl, is a kind and patient persn wh is very ppular with us students. I have always fllwed her as an example and made up my mind t be a gd teacher like her when I grw up. Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中关于梦想工作的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。介绍我的理想工作具体是什么；
第二步，具体阐述理由。从“历史渊源以及榜样影响”等几个方面介绍选择这份梦想工作的理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达为梦想工作而加倍努力的期许。
【亮点词汇】①dream f ding sth.梦想做某事
②because f因为
③make up ne’s mind t d sth.下定决心做某事
【高分句型】①As we all knw, China has respected teachers and valued educatin since ancient times.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
②Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.（althugh引导让步状语从句）
自我评价
职业规划
梦想职业
如何实现
性格外向，有耐心，擅长与他人交流，喜欢阅读，……（补充两条）
教师/医生/工程师/飞行员/……
制定学习规划；改进学习方法；多向老师请教；注意锻炼身体；……（补充两条）