专题07 故事冲突的七大法宝 讲义+练习

这是一份专题07 故事冲突的七大法宝 讲义+练习，共10页。试卷主要包含了 我让我父亲失望了， 他一直走了18英里等内容，欢迎下载使用。
技巧1：面对问题，人物产生的情绪变化
技巧举例
(2021年6月，浙江高考，Para.1)
The pay day arrived at last. I was delighted t finally get the payment after I wrked hard fr tw weeks. On the way hme full f excitement, I thught abut hw t make use f the “huge” sum f mney. “I needed a new ftball in the future.” I whispered t myself. Appraching my huse, I nticed my dad and mm standing beside the ld truck f my family, lking sad. It seemed as if smething wrng had happened...
中文翻译：
终于到了发薪日。经过两周的努力工作，我终于拿到了报酬，感到非常高兴。在回家的路上，我满心欢喜地想着如何使用这笔“巨款”。“我将来需要一个新足球。”我自言自语道。快到家时，我看到爸爸妈妈站在我们家的旧卡车旁，神情忧伤，似乎出了什么事……
分析：
主人公原本心情愉快，但看到父母忧伤的表情后，情绪迅速转变，产生了冲突和疑问。这种情绪的转变自然地衔接了前后情节，增加了故事的张力。
用语储备：
“感到一阵……”：feel a flush f... = feel a wave f... = feel a feeling/sense f...
例如：She felt a wave f panic, but frced herself t leave the rm calmly.
中文翻译：她感到一阵惊慌，但强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。
解释：通过使用“feel a wave f...”这类表达，可以生动地描绘人物的瞬间情绪变化，增强故事的真实感。
技巧2：面对复杂情境，人物产生复杂心理
技巧举例
(2021年1月，浙江高考，Para.2)
The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. I lked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annyed, I fled t my rm, but Mm stpped me. “Yu haven’t read the cmments yet.” I scrlled dwn the screen and marveled at the stries the viewers shared abut Hallween.
中文翻译：
在万圣节前的星期一，这段视频被发布到了网上。视频里我看起来像个南瓜头。我感到尴尬又有点生气，于是跑进了房间，但妈妈拦住了我。“你还没看评论呢。”我滑动屏幕，惊讶地看到观众们分享的关于万圣节的故事。
分析：
主人公原本因视频内容感到尴尬和生气，但在妈妈的提醒下，他开始阅读评论，情绪发生了变化。这种情境的转变加剧了内心的矛盾冲突，使情节更加丰富。
用语储备：
心里想：think/say t neself
害怕；恐慌：with fear/panic/terrr; tremble; shiver; shake; quake
生气；愤怒：with rage; be red-cheeked with rage; tremble/shake with rage
兴奋；激动：with excitement; yell with excitement; jump up and dwn with excitement
悲伤；流泪：Tears blurred ne’s eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。/One’s eyes gt misty.一个人的眼睛都模糊了。/tears rll dwn ne’s eyes/cheeks/face泪水落下。
技巧3：面对他人的行为，人物展开新的动作
技巧举例
(2021年，新高考I卷，Para.2)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. When their mther saw the delicius and perfect breakfast in frnt f her, she was very surprised. It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much. The tw children culd finish cking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said ludly, “Happy Mther’s Day!” Mther hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
中文翻译：
双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了妈妈。当妈妈看到面前美味又完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。这不仅是礼物本身，更是孩子们对她的爱让她深受感动。她没想到两个孩子能完成一顿早餐。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱了他们，亲了又亲。
分析：
母亲看到孩子们的举动后，产生了惊讶和感动的情绪，并通过拥抱和亲吻来回应。这种动作上的互动展现了人物对情境的回应，推动了情节的发展。
用语储备：
常用词语：pen ne’s muth; widen ne’s eyes; rise t ne’s feet; jump t ne’s feet; shut at the tp f ne’s lung; reach ut
常用句式：Having passed the exam, he was s happy that he was at a lss what t d.通过考试后，他非常高兴，不知所措。/She pened the gift with her hands shaking slightly.她用微微颤抖的双手打开了礼物。
技巧4：人物沉浸在某一情境中，出现新问题
技巧举例
(2018年6月，浙江高考, Para.1)
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. My hrse turned t the left t avid the little rabbit as I held n tightly and tried nt t fall. Then my dad turned arund and shuted, “Hld n!” All f a sudden the hrse began t run. My dad tried t keep up behind us. Fr a few minutes my hrse slwed dwn t a trt and then stpped beside a river. I lked arund and realized that we were way ff the track.
中文翻译：
突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。我的马向左转以避开小兔子，我紧紧抓住缰绳，尽量不让自己摔下来。然后爸爸转过身喊道：“抓紧！”突然，马开始奔跑起来。爸爸在后面努力追赶我们。几分钟后，我的马慢了下来，变成小跑，然后停在了一条河边。我环顾四周，意识到我们已经偏离了原来的路线。
分析：
原本的情境是骑马前行，但兔子的出现引发了马的惊吓和奔跑，最终导致主人公迷路，情节由此转向新的冲突。
用语储备：
不幸的是：unfrtunately
But bad luck fr sb, ... 但是某人真不走运。/She tried her best, but in vain.她尽力了，但没有成功。
某人做了某事，不知道下一步该做什么：
Sb did sth, wndering what t d next.
Sb did sth, nt knwing what t d next.
技巧5：情况好转，人物突然有了新想法
技巧举例
(2020年7月，浙江高考，Para.2)
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper spray again t buy us enugh time. But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we threw all the fd we had. He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like a thusand times t shw thankfulness f being safe and sund.
中文翻译：
就在那一刻，直升机到了。我知道我们很可能得救了，心里充满了喜悦。埃利再次使用了胡椒喷雾，为我们争取了足够的时间。但这次，熊变得更加警觉。它以饥饿的无情目光看着我们，于是我们把所有的食物都扔了出去。它转过身，开始大吃起来。当我们爬上绳梯时，埃利像祈祷了一千次一样，感谢我们安然无恙。
分析：
直升机的到来让情况好转，主人公心情大好，但面对熊的威胁，他们又想出了新的应对办法（扔掉食物），最终成功脱险。这种“情况好转—突发新问题—找到解决办法”的模式推动了情节的发展。
用语储备：
“某人突然想到……”：It suddenly ccurred t sb that... = It hit sb that... = It struck sb that... = It dawned n sb that...
技巧6：面对他人的帮助，人物找到解决办法
技巧举例
(2017年6月，浙江高考, Para.2)
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They fund the dangerus situatin, where three men circled the wlf. Mac's friends als jumped ff their bicycles and jined the fight with the wlf. Mre and mre cars stpped. Sme drivers tk ut the sticks frm the cars, and sme tk ut the knives, even the guns twards the wlf. In the meanwhile, the wlf might feel the peple's threats arund, s it began t step back slwly. Sn, it ran away ff the rad and disappeared in the distance.
中文翻译：
几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人到了。他们发现了危险的情况，三个人正围着狼转。麦克的朋友们也从自行车上跳下来，加入了与狼的搏斗。越来越多的车停了下来。一些司机从车里拿出棍子，一些人拿出刀，甚至还有人拿出枪对准狼。与此同时，狼可能感受到了周围人们的威胁，开始慢慢后退。很快，它跑离了道路，消失在远方。
分析：
随着更多人的加入，原本紧张的局势得到了缓解，人物通过集体的力量解决了冲突。这种“他人帮助—找到解决办法”的模式展现了团队合作的力量。
用语储备：
鼓起勇气（做某事）：take/gather/ne’s curage (t d sth)
毫不犹豫/选择：withut a secnd thught/withut delay/withut hesitatin/having n chice
技巧7：获得成长，人物总结并呼应前文
技巧举例
(2022年1月，浙江卷, Para.2)
One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease. I felt s srry t hear that and I thught I shuld visit him in any case. He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits. I ffered t d the rest f the wrk f ur prject and he invited me t share my ideas t perfect it. We began t wrk as a fine team and finally finished ur prject n time. Our hard wrk paid ff and Dr. Hendersn was very satisfied with ur wnderful findings. Frm this prject, we als learned the significance f teammates. Just as the saying ges, ne persn can g far, but a grup f persns can travel farther.
中文翻译：
有一天，我听说他因重病住进了医院。听到这个消息，我感到很难过，我觉得无论如何都应该去看望他。当我带着鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出完成我们项目的剩余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法来完善它。我们开始像一个优秀的团队一样工作，并最终按时完成了项目。我们的努力得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们的成果非常满意。通过这个项目，我们也明白了团队成员的重要性。正如俗话说的，一个人可以走得快，但一群人可以走得远。
分析：
主人公通过与队友的合作完成了项目，从中体会到了团队合作的重要性，这种成长和总结不仅呼应了前文，也深化了主题。
用语储备：
直到……才意识到……
倒装句：Nt until... did sb realize/ntice that...
强调句：It was nly... that sb realized that...
表达经历与教训：
What a valuable lessn I have learned frm...! 我从……中得到了宝贵的教训。
What an unfrgettable experience! 多么难忘的经历啊！
结尾点题：
Gd helps thse wh help themselves. 天助自助者。
Everyne is the architect f his wn fate. 每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。
Life is full f laughter and tears. Only by accepting bth can we enjy life. 生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。
Never underestimate the pwer f yur actin. 永远不要低估你的行为的力量。
综合演练：
Thrugh ur lives, we can gain a lt and lse s much. But being hnest shuld always be with us, as hnesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk abut the tpic, smething crwds in my mind as if it had just happened.
I was 16 when ne mrning, Dad tld me I culd drive him t Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage t get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance t use the car, s I said yes withut hesitatin.
I drve my father t Mijas, prmising t pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went t a nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hurs t spare, I decided t g t a mvie theater near the garage t see the mvie. Hwever, I was s absrbed in the plt f the mvie that I frgt the time. When the last mvie finished, I lked at my watch： 6 pm. I was tw hurs late!
I thught my father wuld be very angry if he knew what I was ding. And he wuld never let me drive again. S I decided t make up an excuse. Then, I drve t the appinted place, my father was sitting in a crner, waiting patiently. I first aplgized fr being late, then tld him that I wanted t get there as sn as pssible, but that smething was wrng with sme f the main parts f the car. I wuld never frget the way he lked at me. “I'm very disappinted that yu thught yu had t lie t me, Jasn.” My father lked at me again and said, “When yu didn't shw up n time, I called the gas statin and asked if there was anything wrng.
They tld me yu never picked up the car. S, yu see, I knw there's nthing wrng with the car at all."
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A wave f guilt swept ver me and I had t admit the fact that I had gne t the mvies and that was the real reasn why I was late.
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But father, it's exactly eighteen miles hme frm here, and it's dark. Yu can't walk back. "I begged.
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翻译小练习：
1. 爸爸仔细地听着，一种悲伤掠过他的心头：“我生气了，不是对你，而是对我自己。
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2. 你看。我意识到作为一个父亲我已经失败了，如果这么多年后你觉得你必须对我撒谎。
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3. 我之所以失败，是因为我养育了一个连自己的父亲都不会说实话的儿子。
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4. 我现在要走回家，想想这些年来我哪里做错了”。
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5. 我的抗议，我的道歉和其他的话都没有用。
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6. 我让我父亲失望了。我正准备吸取我生命中最痛苦的教训之一。
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7. 爸爸开始沿着尘土飞扬的道路走去。我迅速跳上车，跟在后面。
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8. 我一路道歉，告诉他我有多抱歉，但他根本不理我。
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9. 他一直走了18英里。
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10. 看到父亲如此痛苦是我所经历过的最可怕的经历。
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11. 不过，这也是最成功的一课。
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参考答案：
1. 爸爸仔细地听着，一种悲伤掠过他的心头：“我生气了，不是对你，而是对我自己。
Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed thrugh him，“I'm angry, nt with yu but with myself.
2. 你看。我意识到作为一个父亲我已经失败了，如果这么多年后你觉得你必须对我撒谎。
Yu see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years yu feel that yu have t lie t me.
3. 我之所以失败，是因为我养育了一个连自己的父亲都不会说实话的儿子。
I have failed because I have brught up a sn wh cannt even tell the truth t his wn father.
4. 我现在要走回家，想想这些年来我哪里做错了”。
I'm ging t walk hme nw and think where I have gne wrng all these years”.
5. 我的抗议，我的道歉和其他的话都没有用。
My prtests, my aplgies and the rest f my wrds were useless.
6. 我让我父亲失望了。我正准备吸取我生命中最痛苦的教训之一。
I had let my father dwn. And I was abut t learn ne f the mst painful lessns f my life.
7. 爸爸开始沿着尘土飞扬的道路走去。我迅速跳上车，跟在后面。
Dad began walking alng the dusty rads. I quickly jumped in the car and fllwed behind.
8. 我一路道歉，告诉他我有多抱歉，但他根本不理我。
I aplgized all the way, telling him hw srry I was, but he simply ignred me.
9. 他一直走了18英里。
Fr 18 miles he kept walking.
10. 看到父亲如此痛苦是我所经历过的最可怕的经历。
Seeing my father in s much pain was the mst awful experience that I have ever faced.
11. 不过，这也是最成功的一课。
Hwever it was als the mst successful lessn.
参考范文：
A wave f guilt swept ver me and I had t admit the fact that I had gne t the mvies and that was the real reasn why I was late .Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed thrugh him，“I'm angry, nt with yu but with myself. Yu see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years yu feel that yu have t lie t me. I have failed because I have brught up a sn wh cannt even tell the truth t his wn father. I'm ging t walk hme nw and think where I have gne wrng all these years”.
But father, it's exactly eighteen miles hme frm here, and it's dark. Yu can't walk back. "I begged .My prtests, my aplgies and the rest f my wrds were useless. I had let my father dwn. And I was abut t learn ne f the mst painful lessns f my life. Dad began walking alng the dusty rads. I quickly jumped in the car and fllwed behind. I aplgized all the way, telling him hw srry I was, but he simply ignred me. Fr 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in s much pain was the mst awful experience that I have ever faced. Hwever it was als the mst successful lessn.