专题07+人与动物故事-直击2022高考英语+专项突破“读后续写”

专题07直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”—人与动物故事

动物是人类的朋友……

01

阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.

In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.

One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.

Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.

We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.

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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.

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【答案】Para 1:

I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.

Para 2:

When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month?” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。

②由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。

2.续写线索：作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

跳跃：skip/jump

返回：return/go back

回答：reply/respond

情绪类

焦急地：anxiously/worriedly

快乐的：happy/glad

【点睛】

[高分句型1] The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

02

“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…”

Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song.

Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead!

On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately.

The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!”

On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn't last long. One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian. "Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!" That night, Danny hadn't made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog.

Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do? Call an animal shelter?” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn't watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance.

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 “My hero! Thank you for saving me,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.

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【答案】

Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. In a split second, a splash of brown, out of breath, quickly jumped into the lake. It was One-Eyed! It barked, swimming toward Danny with all its might. On spotting One-Eyed, Danny seemed to see a ray of hope, attempting to move towards it instantly. Instinctively, Danny grabbed the tail of One-Eyed. Ultimately, they managed to climb ashore, exhausted. Gazing at One-Eyed in disbelief, Danny patted it tenderly in return. One-Eyed was no longer troublesome; instead, it became a “hero” in his heart.

“My hero! Thank you for saving me," Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. “You're my brave guardian angel!” Since that night, “One-Eyed” was nonexistent while “Hero”, as the dog was re-named, became a part of Danny's performance. So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners. Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience. Hero also had its own place to lie on-the feet of Danny. While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner. What a perfect match!

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一只叫“独眼”的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Danny，其他人以为他们是主人和宠物的关系，而Danny为此感到很苦恼，不想“独眼”跟着他，Danny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗，却没有注意他的脚步，他掉进了湖里，极度恐慌。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“就在这时，远处传来熟悉的狗叫声。”可知，第一段可描写“独眼”如何救Danny。

②由第二段首句内容““我的英雄！谢谢你救了我，”丹尼含泪感激地说。”可知，第二段可描写Danny被“独眼”救起后他们之间关系的改变。

2.续写线索：跳进水里——Danny被救起——狗改名——成为伙伴

3.词汇激活

行为类

①跳进：jump into/dive into

②爬上岸：climb ashore/climb up the bank

③改名：re-name/rechristen

情绪类

①筋疲力尽的：exhausted/dog-tired

②高兴地：happily/delightedly

【点睛】

[高分句型1]So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的部分倒装句)

[高分句型2]While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner.(由while引导的时间状语从句)

03

It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see any rain soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life.

I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.

He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the water cupped in my beautiful boy’s hands.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。

When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.

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Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him.

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【答案】       When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to a tap in our yard. He knelt there motionlessly, letting the drip slowly fill up his small “cup”. Just at that moment, his father returned. Thinking Billy was playing with water, he shouted, “Never waste water! If we ran out of the limited water, we would lose everything, even our lives.” Before Billy could make any explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.

Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him. I went up and held him in my arms. Wiping off his tears, I promised to help him save the baby deer. I found him a small pot to carry water. Holding the pot firmly, Billy walked toward the woods again. As I watched him disappearing into the woods, tears welled up in my eyes. Then came the miracle. Suddenly I felt a drop and then more drops dripping onto my face. I looked up in astonishment. Oh, it was rain! It was as if God was truly moved by Billy’s sincere sharing and came to save us finally.

【解析】

文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个干旱的季节，作者6岁的儿子用双手捧水，多次往森林里去，作者感到好奇，悄悄跟过去一看，眼前的情景让她为之感动。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“当水没了，比利跳起来跑回房子。”可知，第一段可描写父亲回来时以为Billy在玩水责备他，把他弄哭了。

②由第二段首句内容“我决定不像他父亲那样责骂他，而是帮助他。”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰儿子并答应帮他一起救小鹿，最后终于下雨了。

2.续写线索：儿子让水灌满“小杯子”——父亲生气斥责——Billy哭泣——作者擦去儿子眼泪——答应帮忙救小鹿——看到下雨，感到惊讶——觉得上帝被感动了

3.词汇激活：

行为类

装满：fill up/be filled with

大喊大叫：shout/yell

帮助：help/assist

情绪类

生气地：angrily/furiously

惊讶地：in astonishment/amazingly

感动的：moved/touched

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

Before Billy could make any explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.（before引导时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]

Wiping off his tears, I promised to help him save the baby deer.（wiping off为现在分词短语作状语）

04

Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…

Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.

Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.

They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.

Paragraph1：

“Where’ve you been?” Steve cried.

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Paragraph 2：

Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.

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【答案】Paragraph 1:

“Where’ve you been?” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.

Paragraph 2:

Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it!”

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Brady是一只最近退休的搜救犬，这天它主人的侄子Steve 带着Brady和他的朋友Zach去远足过夜。结果闪电把树林点着了，森林起了大火，最后多亏了Brady的帮助，他们才找到了河流并且获救。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“‘你哪儿去了？’Steve哭喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Brady找到Steve他们后的行为，Brady开始示意Steve和自己走。

②由第二段首句内容“Brady领着他们下了坡，进入树林。”可知，第二段可描写Brady带领Steve他们找到了河流并且得救的经过。

2.续写线索：

Brady回来——Brady拉扯男孩的牛仔裤——男孩跟着Brady走——找到河流——跳进河里得救

3.词汇激活

行为类

明白：get it/understand

想起：remember/ recall

抓住：hold onto/ grabbed/ grasp

情绪类

美妙：wonderful /amazing

急切：urgently / eagerly

【点睛】

[高分句型1]. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2]. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. (运用了what引导宾语从句)

05

In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway — two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.

Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.

We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping (唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.

A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a public toilet. My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.

Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph 1：

Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.

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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.

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【答案】参考答案

Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings. One day, when Dad threw Peeper into the air, he just flew away and didn’t come back. With night falling, all of us became increasingly worried. We looked for him, called his name, and even peeped like him, anxiously expecting his return. But the special buddy never appeared again. Suddenly losing the special companion, everyone was very, very sad. It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. Meanwhile, we could only pray he found his parents and went off on his natural way. Twenty years passed, and Peeper became a fond memory for my family.

It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home. He did all of the same things Peeper used to do in Peeper’s old ways, and much to my surprise, he even responded to the name Peeper. It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later. This experience has been as meaningful to me as anything in my life. Looking beyond our reach high in the sky, birds have feelings like human beings, so do many other living things. We human beings should learn to get along well with them. We need each other’s care and protection.

【解析】

本文以动物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家在结束周末活动回家途中，看到了两只成年大雁和一只小雁，成年雁由于受到惊吓飞走了，留下不能飞的小雁。作者一家把小雁带回了家，小雁就在作者家生活了下来。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“在我们意识到之前，这个小东西已经长成了一只拥有一双有力翅膀的大鸟。”可知，第一段可描写小雁飞走了，以及它飞走后作者全家的反应和感受。

②由第二段首句内容“2019年，一只成年大雁回到了我的家，这让我非常惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写那只雁飞回来后所做的事情和作者的感受。

2.续写线索：飞走——不再出现——回来——感想

3.词汇激活

行为类

①飞走：fly away/fly off

②回来：come back/return/go back

③和睦相处：get along well with/live in harmony with

情绪类

①担心：worried/anxious

②惊讶：surprise/astonishment

【点睛】

[高分句型1]It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. (由连接词that引导的同位语从句)

[高分句型2]It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later. (由连接词that引导的主语从句)

06

A Midnight Rescue

It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.

The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot of scarlet（猩红的）blood on the fallen leaves.

David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly?" Harry answered, "If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.

It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into the heart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood splashes（血迹）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by. "We must hurry up", said Harry.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

However, it was really not easy for them to find it.

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Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.

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【答案】

However, it was really not easy for them to find it. That’s because thick fog came, covering almost everything. They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual. Suddenly, painful roars came to the rescuers and in front of them lay the young elephant. “Look! Unicorn!” Harry rushed forward, crying excitedly. It looked exhausted because a wound on its left front leg was bleeding badly.

Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight. Fortunately, everything needed was available in the first aid kit. Calmly and skillfully, Harry conducted an operation on Unicorn immediately, and it seemed more obedient than before. Therefore, it didn’t take much time for Harry to stop the bleeding as an experienced rescuer. And after a while, Unicorn was able to stand up and walked away. It was rescued! Waving goodbye to it, Harry and David felt relieved. At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.

【解析】

本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了两个生物多样性救援人员哈利和大卫在半夜接到任务前去搜寻并营救森林里唯一的一头野生象的故事。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“然而，对他们来找到它真的并不容易”可知，第一段可描写搜寻大象的困难和看到大象受伤时的难过。

②由第二段首句内容“哈利毫不迟疑地跪下来对它的伤口进行急救，大卫拿着手电筒。”可知，第二段可描写对受伤的大象进行治疗和大象感谢人类。

2.续写线索：起雾——艰难寻找——受伤——痛苦——急救——感谢

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.覆盖：cover/blanket/envelope

②.线索：clue/sign/hint

③.冲：rush/dash

情绪类

①.哭：cry/weep

②.宽慰的：relieved/comforted

【点睛】

【高分句型1】They had to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or footprints, which made them walk more slowly, ears sharper than usual.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】At this moment, the whole forest woke up, the moonlight fading while winds singing welcome to the dawn.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句）