6续写真题2021年新I卷+新II卷母亲节的惊喜课件PPT

这是一份6续写真题2021年新I卷+新II卷母亲节的惊喜课件PPT，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE    The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther's Day. Hw pleased and prud mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.     The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff
2021年新I卷+新II卷真题原文
started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.    Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff's hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
读原文 划要素 填表格
The twins/pair:Jenna and Jeff
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. _______________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. _______________________________________________________
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The twins; father
②What did the twins say?
①Hw did he feel?
③What did he d?
④The breakfast was ready.
After seeing the surprise, their mther was surprised and mved.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
The twins; mther; father
①What did the twins d?
②Hw did mther feel?
③What did mther d?
④What did father d?
⑤The family were filled with happiness.
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
The family was happy.
Father frwned
The twins yelled”Surprise!”.
The tiwns went upstairs.
The twins explained.
Father understd and ffered help.
The twins were excited.
The breakfast was ready.
Mther saw the breakfast.
Mther was mved.
Mther hugged the twins.
Father jined.
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）Sptting the mess, Dad frwned. 2）Jenna threw herself at him, tears pudding in her eyes.3）All f a sudden, the twins’ faces lit up with their head ndding firmly.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① Ding..., ② 独立主格：逻辑主语+ ding/dne ... ③ with + n + ding / dne
写句式 招招升级
4）Half surprised, half cncerned, a sense f respnsibility fr caring abut the kids drve the father t wipe away her tears.
招式2： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
e.g.:4）Half surprised, half cncerned, a sense f respnsibility fr caring abut the kids drve the father t wipe away her tears.5）The next mment witnessed their effrts t make the breakfast and they eventually made it.
招式3：无灵主语 ① a fld f + （情绪类）n. seized/welled up/came ver sb.② 无灵主语（表示时间、地点的名词）+有灵动词（see/witness）
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:6）The mment Mm pened her eyes, the twins yelled, “Happy Mther’s Day!”
招式4：高级的时间状语从句：名词短语作连词 ① The mment/minute/secnd/instant+从句，主句。 ② The first time/Every time +从句，主句。
水到渠成 范文赏析
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. Sptting the mess, Dad frwned. Befre he culd questin the kids, Jenna threw herself at him, tears pudding in her eyes, “Dad, we failed t prepare the gift fr Mm!” Half surprised, half cncerned, a sense f respnsibility fr caring abut the kids drve the father t wipe away her tears, “Let’s d it tgether.” All f a sudden, the twins’ faces lit up with their head ndding firmly. The next mment witnessed their effrts t make the breakfast and they eventually made it. “Take these t Mm’s rm.” Dad directed. Expectantly, the pair stepped ut f the kitchen.
范文赏析
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. The mment Mm pened her eyes, the twins yelled, “Happy Mther’s Day!” In the meanwhile, a plate f French tast placed n the table beside the bed caught Mm’s attentin. “Mm, have a try.” Jeff suggested. Mm tried t cnceal her emtin, but the glittering tears failed her. Gathering them int her arms, she chked, “Thank yu, my darling!” Just at that mment, the father came in with tw bwls f prridge, “Nw we can share the breakfast tgether!” The twins were verjyed, delight spreading thrugh the huse.
范文赏析