9续写真题2020年新I卷卖爆米花的小男孩课件PPT

这是一份9续写真题2020年新I卷卖爆米花的小男孩课件PPT，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them. One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by-his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
2020年新I卷真题原文
"I wish yu culd see him," she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. "He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn't see what he can d" After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking culd help him t earn mney." said Clara. "His family is suffering s much.""S d I," said Harry. "We really shuld d smething t assist them."Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing. but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, "I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish（完成）." The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne, "I tell yu what we can d, "said Jhn. "Yu knw that big bx f cm Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn（爆米花）, and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it."
读原文 划要素 填表格
The Meredith family：Mrs. MeredithJhn, Harry, and Clara
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. _______________________________________________________With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. _______________________________________________________
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. 
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
the prcess f making the ppcrn
Mrs. Meredith ; Jhn; Harry and Clara ; Bernard
Mrs. Meredith
Harry and Clara
happysatisfiedsurprised
apprve Jhn and tell Bernard
happymvedgrateful
prepare the ppcrn
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw did Bernard sell the ppcrn?
take it arund t the huses and sell it
passed n the kindness
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.  With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. 
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
passed n the kindness
Mrs. Meredith’s reactin/thers reactin
ppcrn was prepared
Harry and Clara tld Bernard
Bernard’s feelings
They prepared materials
They made ppcrn
earned mney
added cream t the ppcrn
be grateful t the kindness
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）She was s surprised and happy that her children went much farther than herself.1） S surprised and happy was she that her children went much farther than herself.
招式1：“s ... that ...” 因果关系逻辑强，动作情绪全包含， 想更高级也容易，s提前变成倒装
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:2）Meanwhile, Harry and Clara culdn’t wait t share the great idea with Bernard, hping he wuld accept their kindness. 3）Having heard the plan, Bernard’s blue eyes turned watery with happiness and gratitude.
招式2： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
e.g.:4）They checked the crn that Uncle Jhn sent them, prepared the ven and bught sme paper bags.
招式3： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3) 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
e.g.:5）Hardly had they made the ppcrn when they put it int paper bags.5）N sner had they made the ppcrn than they put it int paper bags.
招式4： 倒装句表示时间关系 “一就” 常用句式： ① Hardly ... when... ②N sner ... than ...
e.g.:10）Bernard seized the mney he earned, excited and happy.
招式5： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:11）Nt nly did he sell ppcrn, but he als added cream and salt t the ppcrn t make it taste better, which turned ut t be a success.
招式6： 倒装句表示并列关系 “Nt nly + 半倒装, but als...”招式7： 表示结果用非限制性定语从句 “..., which turned t be ...”
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:12）Bernard wuld never frget, it was the help f Meredith’s family that made him earn mney.
招式8： 结尾升华 强调句 “It was ... that ...”
水到渠成 范文赏析
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea,she thughit was a gd ne, t. S surprised and happy was she that her children went much farther than herself. Meanwhile, Harry and Clara culdn’t wait t share the great idea with Bernard, hping he wuld accept their kindness. Having heard the plan, Bernard’s blue eyes turned watery with happiness and gratitude.S they jumped int actin. They checked the crn that Uncle Jhn sent them, prepared the ven and bught sme paper bags.Hardly had they made the ppcrn when they put it int paper bags.
范文赏析
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. He tk the ppcrn arund t the huses and sld it. T his jy, everything went smthly. After a while, all his ppcrn was sld. Bernard seized the mney he earned, excited and happy. In rder t earn mre mney, nt nly did he sell ppcrn, but he als added cream and salt t the ppcrn t make it taste better, which turned ut t be a success. Bernard wuld never frget, it was the help f Meredith’s family that made him earn mney. He was grateful t the kindness and he als did what he culd t help thse in need, passing n the kindness.
范文赏析