云南高考英语写作分类训练:推荐信
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1.假定你是李华,你们班下周要举行一场英语歌曲比赛,请你写信给负责人Mr.Green, 向 他推荐王蕾做主持人。内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.推荐的理由;
3. 希望对方给予考虑。 注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green
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Yours
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的朋友Jack想学习中文,你推荐他去孔子学院学习,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐的理由;
(2)相关课程,如中国历史、传统文化等。
注意:词数80左右。
参考词汇: 孔子学院:Confucius Institute
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.假如你是高中生李华,常与美国笔友Peter彼此分享读书心得。请你给他写一封邮件,和他分享你最近所读的一本好书。要点如下:
1. 该书简介;
2. 阅读收获。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom将参加以“我最喜欢的中国体育明星”为主题的英语演讲比赛。他想要你推荐一位中国体育明星。请你给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的人选;
2.推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝福。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.假定你是李华,你校交换生Henry有意加入学校社团,向你咨询相关情况,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.推荐一个社团;
2.推荐理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.不得透露真实的姓名和学校;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Henry,
How is it going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.假定你是李华,在北京读书的英国朋友Tom寒假要来云南旅游,他请你推荐一个景点,请你依据以下要点给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1.欢迎来云南;2. 景点名称及特点; 3.旅游注意事项。
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.不得出现真实姓名或学校名;
3.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
7.假定你是李华,为了培养同学们的爱国情怀,你校英文校刊向学生征集相关的课外活动建议。请你用英文给校刊编辑Miss Yang写封邮件推荐观看爱国影片,内容包括:
1. 观看爱国影片有助于了解中国近代史;
2. 观看爱国影片有助于树立正确的英雄观;
3. 观看爱国影片能激励学生热爱祖国与和平。
注意:
1. 词数100词左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:爱国的patriotic
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8.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom热爱中国传统文化,最近打算来中国生活一段时间,但是不确定应该去往哪个城市,写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 你推荐的城市;
2. 推荐的理由;
3. 美好祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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9.假定你是李华,笔友Bob对云南的旅游景点很感兴趣,请你给他写一封回信,分享一个景点,要点如下:
1.景点名称;2.景点特点;3.其他
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
10.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Henry计划利用暑假到中国旅行,为此发来邮件请你推荐一个旅游目的地。请你写一封邮件回复,内容包括:
1.推荐一个目的地;
2.推荐理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.One possible version:
Dear Mr. Green,
Hearing that our class will hold an English Singing Contest next week, I’m writing to recommend Wang Lei as the host of the contest.
Firstly, he is humorous, outgoing and good at singing. In addition, he can speak English fluently and correctly. Moreover, he had the experience of being the host of the New Year party, which impressed us. He knows exactly what makes a good host.
I sincerely hope that you can take my recommendation into consideration because I do think he is the right person for the task. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你们班下周要举行一场英语歌曲比赛,请你写信给负责人Mr. Green, 向 他推荐王蕾做主持人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
合适的:right→suitable
举行:hold→host
此外:in addition/moreover→besides
考虑:take into consideration→consider
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Firstly, he is humorous, outgoing and good at singing. In addition, he can speak English fluently and correctly.
拓展句:Not only is he humorous, outgoing and good at singing, but also he can speak English fluently and correctly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Moreover, he had the experience of being the host of the New Year party, which impressed us. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I sincerely hope that you can take my recommendation into consideration because I do think he is the right person for the task. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
2.Dear Jack,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.
Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing. Also, you have more chances to talk with classmates in Chinese. Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Day and Mid-Autumn Day. Some relevant activities will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.
I hope you will find my recommendation helpful and attractive.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Jack写邮件推荐他去孔子学院学习中文,写明推荐理由,介绍相关课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choice→option
各种各样的:various→all sorts of
机会:chance→opportunity
举行:hold→launch
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing.
拓展句:Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects, among which you will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Some relevant activities will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear Peter,
I am so glad to receive your letter. I recently read a very good book and I want to share it with you.
The book is My Life Story, which was written by Helen Keller, a blind, deaf and dumb person. In the book, she wrote that she had not been able to see, hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months. When she was seven years old, she knew Miss Sullivan, who helped her learn how to write English words. Helen worked hard to remember words and her efforts paid off.
My Life Story describes her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist across the world. It shows us a universal truth: Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Peter写一封邮件,和他分享你最近所读的一本好书。要点如下:1. 该书简介;2. 阅读收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
最近:recently→lately
优秀的:outstanding→excellent
展示:show→display
2.句式拓展
并列句变主从复合句
原句:I recently read a very good book and I want to share it with you.
拓展句:I recently read a very good book, which I want to share with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The book is My Life Story, which was written by Helen Keller, a blind, deaf and dumb person. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When she was seven years old, she knew Miss Sullivan, who helped her learn how to write English words. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
4.Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you are going to take part in the English speech contest,whose theme is“My Favorite Chinese Sports Star”. Knowing that you want to introduce a famous Chinese sports star,I recommend Deng Yaping to you for the following reasons.
First of all, Deng Yaping created too many miracles, but also won a lot of glory for the Chinese people. Secondly, she trained very hard. There was an indomitable spirit in her,which deeply infected us.Finally, she made us understand the truth that as long as we put in the effort, we will be rewarded
I wish you a good result in the speech contest.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生为即将参加以“我最喜欢的中国体育明星”为主题的英语演讲比赛的英国朋友Tom推荐一名中国体育明星。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
比赛:contest→competition
奇迹:miracles→wonder
训练:train→drill
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Knowing that you want to introduce a famous Chinese sports star, I recommend Deng Yaping to you for the following reasons.
拓展句:Because I know that you want to introduce a famous Chinese sports star, I recommend Deng Yaping to you for the following reasons.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you are going to take part in the English speech contest,whose theme is“My Favorite Chinese Sports Star”. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和whose引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】There was an indomitable spirit in her,which deeply infected us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.Dear Henry,
How is it going? Hearing that you plan to join a club in our school, I’m writing to recommend to you the choral club.
Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you. Students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs in the club. Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.
Wish you a rosy experience in the club you like!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生亨利回信,向他推荐一个学校社团,说明推荐理由并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算:plan→intend
此外:besides→what’s more
掌握:have a command of→master
美好的:rosy→wonderful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs in the club.
拓展句:Students who are enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs in the club.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearing that you plan to join a club in our school, I’m writing to recommend to you the choral club.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.(运用了not only置于句首,句子使用部分倒装结构)
6.Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to learn that you are travelling to Yunnan. I am writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome and recommend you a tourist attraction in Yunnan—Lijiang.
Lijiang is a mystical and beautiful town on the center of Lijiang valley. It is famous for its beautiful natural scenery. Autumn is the most beautiful season in Lijiang where you can enjoy the clear water and the colorful trees and flowers while boating on the water. Except for the natural scenery, Lijiang is also well known for its ethnic minority where you can know the traditional culture. No matter where you go, you will find a harmonious combination of tradition and fashion in Lijiang.
If you come to visit Lijiang, you’d better avoid weekends or holidays when it is too crowded with tourists, so as to enjoy its beauty more peacefully.
Have a great trip in Lijiang!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给在北京读书的英国朋友 Tom推荐一个云南的旅游景点,要点如下:欢迎来云南;景点名称及特点;旅游注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased
旅游景点:tourist attraction→scenic spot
划船:row→boat
有名的:famous→renowned
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Lijiang is a mystical and beautiful town on the center of Lijiang valley. It is famous for its beautiful natural scenery.
拓展句:Lijiang is a mystical and beautiful town on the center of Lijiang valley, which is famous for its beautiful natural scenery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Autumn is the most beautiful season in Lijiang where you can enjoy the clear water and the colorful trees and flowers while boating on the water. (运用了where引导的限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Except for the natural scenery, Lijiang is also well known for its ethnic minority where you can know the traditional culture. (运用了where引导的限定性定语从句)
7.参考范文:
Dear Miss Yang,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student in our school. Knowing that our English journal is collecting beneficial activities from students, I’d like to recommend watching patriotic films to promote national spirit.
To begin with, it is a good idea to watch patriotic films, which helps us have a better understanding of the history of our country. Besides, watching patriotic films can make us students admire our national heroes instead of some pop stars. Finally, it inspires us to love our country and cherish peace because our present happy life is gained through the sacrifice of national heroes.
I’d appreciate it if you take my opinions into careful consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给校刊编辑Miss Yang写封邮件推荐观看爱国影片,并讲述推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有帮助的/有用的:helpful→beneficial
推荐/建议:suggest→recommend
提高:improve→promote
鼓励:encourage→inspire
考虑:take sth. into account→take sth. into consideration
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Besides, watching patriotic films can make us students admire our national heroes instead of some pop stars.
拓展句:Besides, national heroes in patriotic movies will be worshipped by our students instead of some pop stars.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that our English journal is collecting beneficial activities from students, I’d like to recommend watching patriotic films to promote national spirit. (运用了现在分词作状语,且该结构中that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, it is a good idea to watch patriotic films, which helps us have a better understanding of the history of our country. (运用了it作形式主语,to do不定式为真正主语;which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Finally, it inspires us to love our country and cherish peace because our present happy life is gained through the sacrifice of national heroes. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
8.Dear Tom,
I am pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China.
I recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China. The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. And there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore. Besides, the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you can’t miss.
I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Tom写回信,说明你推荐的城市、给出推荐的理由最后送上 美好祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggest→recommend
宝贵的:valuable→precious
高兴的:glad→pleased
此外:in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China.
拓展句:I recommend you stay in Beijing, which is the capital and cultural center of China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
9.Dear Bob,
Knowing that you are interested in tourist attractions in Yunnan, I am delighted to share with you some details of one scenic spot.
As is known to all, Yunnan has a good reputation for her beautiful scenery and minority culture. I'd like to recommend a special place to you. Have you ever heard the Stone Forest? Not only does it have unique natural scenery, but also you can taste delicious rice noodles and experience Yi culture there. I am convinced that you will love the local legendary story of Ashima and Ahei.
By the way, the weather there changes quite often, so if you have a chance to pay a visit one day, please pack up your clothes in various styles. Hopefully, I can be your guide. If you want to know more details, be free to ask.
Best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给笔友Bob写封信,介绍云南的旅游景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
风景:scenery→sight/view
推荐:recommend→introduce
独特的:unique→distinct
乐意做某事:be delighted to →be glad to do→be happy to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:By the way, the weather there changes quite often, so if you have a chance to pay a visit one day, please pack up your clothes in various styles.
拓展句:By the way, because the weather there changes quite often, if you have a chance to pay a visit one day, please pack up your clothes in various styles.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it have unique natural scenery, but also you can taste delicious rice noodles and experience Yi culture there. (运用了not only...but also的倒装)
[高分句型2] I am convinced that you will love the local legendary story of Ashima and Ahei. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10.Dear Henry,
How is it going with you? Knowing that you are going to visit China during the summer vacation, I am more than glad to recommend a destination for you.
Beijing will be your best choice. Firstly, it is the cultural center of our country, where you can visit many places of interest and have a glimpse of splendid ancient Chinese culture. Besides, with the development of economy, Beijing has become a modern capital. So I believe your visit here will leave you a deep impression and give you a fascinating insight into a real China.
I am convinced that my recommendation will not let you down. I sincerely hope you will have a good time in China and wish you a happy journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Henry写封信,推荐一个旅游目的地。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐:recommend→suggest
选择:choice→ alternative
而且:besides→ moreover
迷人:fascinating→ charming
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, with the development of economy, Beijing has become a modern capital.
拓展句:Besides, as the economy develops, Beijing has become a modern capital.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are going to visit China during the summer vacation, I am more than glad to recommend a destination for you. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Firstly, it is the cultural center of our country, where you can visit many places of interest and have a glimpse of splendid ancient Chinese culture. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
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