云南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike在阅读中文时速度慢、理解文章有困难，感到很着急。请根据以下要点给Mike回一封邮件，提出建议，帮助他解决困难。内容包括：

1. 树立信心，不要担忧；

2. 扩大词汇量；

3. 提高阅读速度。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike计划春节到玉溪旅游两天，希望你给他提供游览建议。请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.景点推荐及理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda最近在中国学习。她在邮件中向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，想家，感到焦虑。请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 给予安慰；

2. 提出建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：homesick 想家的

Dear Linda,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，正在参加一个英语夏令营。组织者Mr. Green请营员提一些加强营地宿舍安全的建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.具体建议；

3.你的愿望。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

参考词汇：宿舍dorm/ dormitory    

Dear Mr. Green,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法，内容包括：

1. 好心情的重要性；

2. 不良情绪产生的原因；

3. 如何调整。

注意：1. 词数120；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear classmates,

We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods.

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．2023年6月，高考英语试题增加了读后续写(Continuation Writing)，这让很多高三学生十分焦虑，并在校园网上发帖求助。作为英语老师Mr. Right，请你跟帖发表你的建议和看法，内容包括：

1.深度解读语篇；

2.合理构思情节；

3.表达生动得体。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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7．假定你是李华，在你校学习的英国交换生Frank想参加中国诗词电视大赛（Chinese Poetry TV Competition），但他不知如何为此做准备，特写信向你寻求建议。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：

1. 乐意帮助；

2. 具体建议；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。

提示词：recite v. 背诵    poet n. 诗人

Dear Frank,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jane来邮件提到，她因为自己没有好友优秀而感到嫉妒，但这又让她很内疚。请你用英语给Jane回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示劝慰;

2. 提出建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jane,

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Yours.

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter将到北京学习汉语口语。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 推荐学习方法；

2. 祝愿学习顺利。

注意：1. 写作词数 应为80 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Ella写信给你，询问怎样戒除吃过多不健康零食的不良习惯。请根据以下要点给她回信：

1. 你的看法；

2. 具体建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Ella,

You asked me to give you advice on

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Mike,

I’m very sorry to learn that you are having trouble in Chinese reading. Now I’d like to offer you some advice.

In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself. It’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties. What’s more, I suggest you enlarge your vocabulary. You can grasp the meaning of words in sentences or passages. Last but not least, you’d better improve your reading speed. Slower reading might prevent you from understanding.

I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your earliest reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike在阅读中文时速度慢、理解文章有困难，感到很着急。请根据以下要点给Mike回一封邮件，提出建议，帮助他解决困难。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→tip/suggestion

提高：improve→promote

担心的：be worried→be concerned

对某人有益：be of benefit to sb→be beneficial to sb

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself. It’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties.

拓展句：In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself because it’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very sorry to learn that you are having trouble in Chinese reading. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

2．Dear Mike,

I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you will visit Yuxi for two days. The following are my suggestions for your trip.

On the first day, I highly recommend the Fuxian Lake, which is the most famous attraction in Yuxi. You can finish the day by visiting Yuxi Museum, where you will be impressed by many exhibits. It will be a great delight to climb Ailao Mountain for the second day, where you can get deeper insights into ethnic minorities.

I wish you can have a happy journey.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike回一封电子邮件，给他提供春节到玉溪旅游两天的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted →happy

参观：visit→ pay a visit to

建议：suggestion →advice

愉快：delight→ pleasure/joy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The following are my suggestions for your trip.

拓展句：The following are my suggestions which can be helpful for your trip.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you will visit Yuxi for two days. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】You can finish the day by visiting Yuxi Museum, where you will be impressed by many exhibits.（运用了where引导非限定性定语从句）

3．One possible version:

Dear Linda,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having a hard time living away from home. Here are a few tips I think can improve your condition.

First, try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. You will find Chinese food and traditions wonderful if you give them a try. Second, why not take a step out and make more new friends? What’s more, you can always talk with your family on videophone when you miss them, which will help relieve the homesickness.

I hope you will find these ideas useful and feel better soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就英国朋友Linda在中国学习时遇到的不适应新学习环境、想家、感到焦虑等问题，写一封电子邮件，给予她安慰并对她遇到的问题提出相应的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

提升：improve→ promote

适应：get used to→ adapt to

环境：environment→surrounding

困难的：hard→important

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You will find Chinese food and traditions wonderful if you give them a try.

复合句：What you will find is that Chinese food and traditions are wonderful if you give them a try.

【点睛】【高分句型1】try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. （运用了so that引导的结果状语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, you can always talk with your family on videophone when you miss them, which will help relieve the homesickness.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Mr. Green,

I’m having a wonderful time at the camp. When it comes to safety issues in the camp dorms, I’d like to make some advice.

Above all, the moment campers leave the dorms, they should be reminded to turn off electrical appliances and close the door for the sake of safety. Another concern is the bedroom safety. I think some non-slip bath mats are necessary. Besides, in case of an emergency, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit.  

I do hope my advice might be of some help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在参加一个英语夏令营。组织者Mr. Green请营员提一些加强营地宿舍安全的建议。请你给他写一封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

关闭：turn off→switch off

有帮助的：be of some help→helpful

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, in case of an emergency, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit.

拓展句：Besides, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit in case there is an emergency.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Above all, the moment campers leave the dorms, they should be reminded to turn off electrical appliances and close the door for the sake of safety. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] I think some non-slip bath mats are necessary. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

5．Dear classmates,

We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.

So, what causes a bad mood? There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy.

However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：important→significant

各种各样的：a variety of→various

摆脱：get rid of→cast off

就个人而言：As far as I’m concerned=Personally speaking

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam.

拓展句：For example, we may get into a bad mood, because we fail an exam.

【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.(运用了the next time引导的时间状语从句)

6．参考范文

Dear Students,

I understand quite well that you are restless with the Continuation Writing in our coming CEE. Below are several pieces of advice that may be of help to you.

First, it is strongly recommended that you should have a thorough understanding of the story, including the five “W”s, the plot and the conflict. On top of that, it would be better if you could design your following plot on the basis of the two given sentences and previous part. Only in this will your designed plot be logical and coherent. Following this, you should go to the great length to express yourselves in appropriate and vivid words, which is to impress teachers.

Hopefully, all suggestions above will lift all of you out of anxiety.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。2023年6月，高考英语试题增加了读后续写(Continuation Writing)，这让很多高三学生十分焦虑，并在校园网上发帖求助。作为英语老师Mr. Right，请你跟帖发表你的建议和看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice/suggestion→tip

不安：restless→uneasy

有帮助的：be of help→helpful

表达：express→convey

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Below are several pieces of advice that may be of help to you.

拓展句：There are several pieces of advice that can be helpful to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I understand quite well that you are restless with the Continuation Writing in our coming CEE. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Only in this will your designed plot be logical and coherent. (运用了部分倒装)

7．范文：

Dear Frank,

It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part in it. I’m more than delighted to offer you some tips.

First of all, you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it. The resources are available on many relevant websites. Additionally, you had better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers, which will enable you to enlarge your knowledge about Chinese poetry. More importantly, watching previous events will make you get familiar and well prepared so that you will not feel stressed or anxious during the fiercely-competitive process.

Hope these suggestions will help you get started. Good luck in the competition.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Frank写封信，给他提一些参加中国诗词电视大赛的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→happy

提供：offer→provide

另外：additionally→moreover

参加：take part in→participate in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.

拓展句：First of all, you should surf the Internet, the purpose of which is to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.

【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part in it. (运用了that引导的主语从句)

[高分句型2] Additionally, you had better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers, which will enable you to enlarge your knowledge about Chinese poetry. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

8．Dear Jane,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re in a dilemma. The truth is that you will often meet people who may be better, faster, or smarter than you. So instead of feeling sad, why not face it positively?

The next time you’re feeling jealous of your good friend, try to feel proud of her and learn from her. You can also make a list of your greatest qualities and remind yourself that you’re also a wonderful and unique person.

Hope my advice will be of some use.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就笔友“因为自己没有好友优秀而感到嫉妒，但这又让她很内疚”这一问题，写一封建议信，给与安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

真相：truth→reality

难过的：sad→grieved

独特的：unique→special

建议：advice→suggestion

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Hope my advice will be of some use.

拓展句：I’d be more than delighted if you find my advice useful.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth is that you will often meet people who may be better, faster, or smarter than you.（运用了that引导的表语从句和who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】The next time you’re feeling jealous of your good friend, try to feel proud of her and learn from her. （运用了The next time引导的时间状语从句）

9．Dear Peter,

Hearing that you are learning oral Chinese, I want to share with you some effective strategies.

Firstly, create a specific learning plan, which is very important. For example, practice speaking every Tuesday and Thursday with a Chinese friend for 20 minutes. Besides, listening to Chinese radio programs, where you can learn a lot, is also beneficial. Lastly, watch some interesting Chinese movies in your spare time.

It’s impossible to master a language in a short period, but it’s definitely possible to make a visible improvement in three months. Wish you good luck!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国朋友Peter将到北京学习汉语口语。要求考生给他写一封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

学习：learn→study

想要做某事：want to do sth.→feel like doing sth.

例如：for example→for instance

此外：besides→what’s more

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Hearing that you are learning oral Chinese, I want to share with you some effective strategies.

拓展句：After I hear that you are learning oral Chinese, I want to share with you some effective strategies.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Create a specific learning plan, which is very important. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Listening to Chinese radio programs, where you can learn a lot, is also beneficial. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)

10．Dear Ella,

You asked me to give you advice on how to get rid of the bad habit of eating too many unhealthy snacks, I am writing to tell you some of my opinions.

Eating snacks is a waste of money. It’s also a bad habit that we should get rid of. Besides, most snacks have too much fat and sugar, which is harmful to health. As young students, we should develop healthy eating habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruits instead of unhealthy snacks. In addition, it’s advised to quit consuming fast food frequently. Finally, drink water instead of sugary drinks.

I hope my advice can help you.

                                                                                                                                      Sincerely yours,

                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Ella写封回信，针对怎样戒除吃过多不健康零食给出你的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

意见：opinion→idea/view

此外：besides→what’s more

对……有害：be harmful to…→be bad for…

建议……：it’s advised to do→it’s suggested to do

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In addition, it’s advised to quit consuming fast food frequently.

拓展句：In addition, it’s advised that you should quit consuming fast food frequently.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s also a bad habit that we should get rid of.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, most snacks have too much fat and sugar, which is harmful to health.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）