云南高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

申请信

1．假定你是李华，看到英国留学生David 在网上发帖，希望有人能一对一帮助他提高汉语普通话水平，请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 希望来应聘这份工作；

2.有关个人信息；

3. 提高普通话的具体建议。

注意：1. 字数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。

一对一：one-on-one

Hi David,

This is Li Hua

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，得知当地的非物质文化遗产旅游景区正在招募双语导游志愿者。请你给负责人Smith先生写一封邮件，申请做志愿者。内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人优势(英语好，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况和中国历史文化)；

3. 期待回复。

注意：1. 词数80左右;      

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

词汇：文化遗产cultural relics     导游志愿者volunteer tour guide

Dear Smith,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，目前正在英国学习，你校《文学评论》杂志现招聘助理编辑。请给负责人Ms Johnson写一封电子邮件应聘，内容包括：

1.写邮件的目的；

2.你的文学功底；

3.希望应聘成功。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Ms Johnson,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你从报纸上得知当地博物馆正在招募英文志愿者，请你根据以下要点提示，写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 自身优势；

3. 希望获准。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节、以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．2022北京张家口冬奥会将如期在北京张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中的一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。主要内容如下：

1. 个人情况；

2. 自身优势。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：2022北京张家口冬奥会 2022 Beijing- Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games

Dear Sir/Madam,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你校英语协会现招聘志愿者，以接待来访的国外中学生，请你用英语写一封信应聘，内容包括：

1. 口语能力；  2. 相关经验；  3. 应聘目的。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a senior 2 student.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假设你是李华，学校英语报正在招聘记者，你很感兴趣，想要成为其中的一员，请写一封自荐信，内容包括以下要点：

1. 简单的自我介绍；

2. 你的优势；

3. 希望被录取。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

8．假定你是高二一班李华，你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用寒假到昆明做COP15大会的志愿者。你希望参加此活动，请根据提示给校评选组写一封申请信，要点包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人优势；

3. 表达期待。

注意：1．词数不少于100；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假如你是李华，想成为英国某培训机构的一名教汉语的志愿者。请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1．成为志愿者能介绍中国的文化；2．自己的优势。

注意：1．词数100词左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,  

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，现得知北京冬奥会需要招募一批志愿者服务外宾。请给组委会写一封信申请参加该活动。内容要点如下：

1. 表达意愿；

2. 个人优势；

3. 其他。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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1．参考范文

Hi David，

This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Putonghua(Mandarin Chinese)one-on-one. If possible, I feel honored to have the chance to help you.

Please allow me to introduce myself. As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency. When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history. Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day. What about half an hour’s online video chat with me every evening? I’m right here and ready to help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生David写一封电子邮件，告知他应聘这份工作的意向，个人信息以及如何提高普通话的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：chance →opportunity

允许：allow →permit

建议：suggest →advise

准备好：ready →well-prepared

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day.

拓展句：Another suggestion is that you should practice listening and speaking every day.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency.（运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history.（运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语和省略that的宾语从句以及过去分词作宾补）

2．Dear Mr Smith,

Interested in your recently advertised position for volunteer tour guides, I’m gladly writing to apply for the job.

Firstly, with a good grasp of oral English and an outgoing personality, I can effectively communicate with tourists from all corners of the world. What’s more, a comprehensive knowledge of Chinese culture and history allows me to introduce the ancient relics better. Most importantly, I have participated in quite a few similar activities, which equips me with relevant experience to settle potential problems.

If I’m given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to do everything I can. Your early reply will be greatly appreciated.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定你是李华，得知当地的非物质文化遗产旅游景区正在招募双语导游志愿者。请你给负责人Smith先生写一封邮件，申请做志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：firstly→first of all

此外：what’s more → besides

参加：participate in→ take part in

解决：settle→ deal with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Interested in your recently advertised position for volunteer tour guides, I’m gladly writing to apply for the job.

拓展句：Because I am interested in your recently advertised position for volunteer tour guides, I’m gladly writing to apply for the job.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Most importantly, I have participated in quite a few similar activities, which equips me with relevant experience to settle potential problems.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Your early reply will be greatly appreciated.（运用了一般将来时的被动语态）

3．Dear Ms Johnson,

    I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from our school. Having read The Literary Review magazine’s advertisement for editor assistant, I can’t wait to submit my application for the post.

Born in an educated family, my parents introduced me to literature at a very young age. I read lots of the world famous and the Chinese classics, which help me broaden my horizons as well as develop my knowledge of literature. Besides, as an outgoing and warm-hearted girl, I do quite well in collaborating with others and working in groups. Furthermore, I won a prize for creative writing in a city-level competition last year.

I do hope this wonderful opportunity would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，目前正在英国学习，你校《文学评论》杂志现招聘助理编辑。请给负责人Ms Johnson写一封电子邮件应聘。

【详解】1.词汇积累

职位：post→position

培养：develop→foster

机会：opportunity→chance

此外：Furthermore/Besides→In addition

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：I do hope this wonderful opportunity would be offered to me.

拓展句：I would appreciate it if this wonderful opportunity could be offered to me.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I read lots of the world famous and the Chinese classics, which help me broaden my horizons as well as develop my knowledge of literature. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, as an outgoing and warm-hearted girl, I do quite well in collaborating with others and working in groups. (运用了动名词作宾语)

4．Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, who is a middle school student. Knowing from the newspaper that the city museum is taking in some volunteers, I am writing to apply to be one.

My advantages can be listed as follows. First of all, I have a good command of English so that I have no trouble communicating with others. Additionally, I am friendly and helpful, which allows me to help those in need. Most importantly, I worked as a volunteer last month, which has equipped me with some relevant experience, so I have the confidence that I’ll be a qualified volunteer and live up to your expectations.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“当地博物馆正在招募英文志愿者”一事，写一封求职申请信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

招募：take in→recruit

此外：additionally→what’s more/in addition

充当：work as→serve as

考虑某物：take sth. into consideration→take sth. into account

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My advantages can be listed as follows.

拓展句：My advantages can be listed as follows, which make me suitable for a volunteer.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, who is a middle school student. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】First of all, I have a good command of English so that I have no trouble communicating with others. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)

【高分句型3】Additionally, I am friendly and helpful, which allows me to help those in need. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

5．One possible version

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old student from China. Having read your advertisement on the Internet for a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply for it. I do think I can be equal to this position.

To begin with, I have team spirit and can get along well with others, which is necessary for cooperation. In addition, I have such a good understanding/command of both English and Chinese that I can have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Last but not least, I am strong and have passion for a variety of sports, making it easy for me to serve other athletes.

I would appreciate it if I am offered the chance and I am sure I can be of great help to you. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生用英文给组委会写一封申请信，申请参加2022北京张家口冬奥会志愿者招募活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：to begin with→at first

此外：in addition → what’s more

运动员：athlete→player

与某人相处得好：get along well with→be on good terms with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Having read your advertisement on the Internet for a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply for it.

拓展句：When I learned that you advertised on the Internet for volunteers for the 2022 Beijing Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games, I decided to write a letter to apply for participation.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, I have team spirit and can get along well with others, which is necessary for cooperation. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 In addition, I have such a good understanding/command of both English and Chinese that I can have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. （运用了固定句型such…that…如此……以至于……）

6．One possible version:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a senior 2 student. Hearing that our school English association needs some volunteers to welcome foreign students, I’m writing to apply for the job.

I think I am fit for the voluntary work. First of all, having been exposed to English for nine years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English. What’s more, having three months of experience in accompanying foreign friends, I believe I can swap ideas with native English speakers smoothly, which will broaden my horizons greatly in return. Being considerate to others, I believe I can get along well with foreign students.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and please reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写信应聘英语协会志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适合：be fit for →be qualified for

首先：first of all → to begin with

此外：what’s more →besides

感激：appreciate →be grateful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, having been exposed to English for nine years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English.

拓展句：First of all, since I have been exposed to English for nine years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, having three months of experience in accompanying foreign friends, I believe I can swap ideas with native English speakers smoothly, which will broaden my horizons greatly in return.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and please reply at your earliest convenience.（运用了if 引导的条件状语从句）

7．Dear Sir or Madam,

Knowing that you are in need of an English reporter，I’m very happy to write to you in the hope that I would have the chance to join in you.

To begin with, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, an senior 1 student with good grades in all subjects. The most important is that I am friendly and I am good at communicating with others, which will help me to be a good reporter. Besides, I have a good command of English both in writing and speaking. If I’m lucky enough to be accepted, I’ll try my best to prove I’m the very person you are looking for.

Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封自荐信给学校英语报应聘记者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy→delighted

简要地：briefly→in a few words

而且：besides→moreover

幸运地：lucky→fortunate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, I have a good command of English both in writing and speaking.

拓展句：Besides, I have such a good command of English that I can write in and speak English well.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The most important is that I am friendly and I am good at communicating with others, which will help me to be a good reporter.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Knowing that you are in need of an English reporter，I’m very happy to write to you in the hope that I would have the chance to join in you.（运用了现在分词作原因状语及that引导的同位语从句）

8．Dear Sir/Madam,

COP15, aimed at promoting the biodiversity of nature, is to be held in Kunming this winter vacation. I feel excited to apply for the position as a volunteer for COP15.

I’m Li Hua, a senior 2 student from class one. There are several advantages I possess. To start with, being a biography enthusiast and a top student in class, I have a rich knowledge of biodiversity, which enables me to voice for our nature. Besides, the former volunteer experiences guarantee that I’m skilled at communicating and cooperating with others. Given all the above, I hold the firm belief that I am well-equipped for the job.

It would be much appreciated if I could be given the golden opportunity. Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，最近，你得知COP15大会招聘志愿者，要给校评选组写封信，介绍你的自身优势，表达自己申请志愿者职业的愿望。

【详解】1.词汇积累

为了：in order to→aimed at

有；具备：have→possess

首先：first of all=to start with

准备好的：well-prepared→well-equipped

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I feel excited to apply for the position as a volunteer for COP15.

拓展句：I feel excited to apply for the position as a volunteer for COP15, for I have geared myself up to the cause of environmental protection.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I have a rich knowledge of biodiversity, which enables me to voice for our nature. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Given all the above, I hold the firm belief that I am well-equipped for the job. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)

9．Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learnt that you want to help people know more about China. As a Chinese student, I sincerely wish that I would have an opportunity to be a volunteer to introduce the excellent and traditional culture of China to British people. I have a good knowledge of Chinese culture and have a gift for communicating with others. Apart from that, I am expert at oral English so that I can share my ideas with British people fluently. Finally, I’m always ready to help others in need.

In a word, I wish to make lots of contributions to Chinese teaching in Britain. And I’ll be grateful if you could give me the chance.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】1.词汇积累

真诚地：sincerely → faithfully

擅长：am expert at → am good at→ do well in → be skillful at

有…天赋：have a gift for → have a talent for

交流想法：share my ideas →exchange my ideas

此外：Apart from that → Besides → Also → Moreover → Furthermore → What’s more

最后：Finally → Last but not least → Lastly

总而言之：In a word →To sum up→ In short

感激：be grateful →appreciate → be thankful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Finally, I’m always ready to help others in need.

拓展句：Finally, I’m always ready to help others who are in need.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am expert at oral English so that I can share my ideas with British people fluently.（运用了结果状语从句。）

【高分句型2】And I’ll be grateful if you could give me the chance.（运用了条件状语从句。）

10．Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student who is good at oral English. Learning that you’re recruiting volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympics, I’m writing to apply for the position.

I think I’m a suitable alternative and the reasons are as follows. To begin with, I’m healthy and hard-working, which means I can bear hardships and stand hard work. What’s more, I’m outgoing and optimistic, thus making it easy for me to get along well with others. More importantly, I have such a good command of English and Chinese culture that I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. I feel it the very thing I like to do during the winter vacation.

I’d appreciate it if you could offer me the chance, and I will definitely devote myself totally to it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于用英文，要求考生给北京冬奥会组委会写一封自荐信，申请成为志愿者服务外宾。

【详解】1.词汇积累

口头的：oral → spoken

首先：to begin with → to start with

假期：vacation → holiday

机会：chance → opportunity

2.句式拓展

原句：What’s more, I’m outgoing and optimistic, thus making it easy for me to get along well with others.

拓展句：What’s more, I’m outgoing and optimistic, which makes it easy for me to get along well with others.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student who is good at oral English.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] More importantly, I have such a good command of English and Chinese culture that I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. (运用了that引导的结果状语从句)