云南高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

应用文

1．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想了解你在学校的学习生活情况，请你写信向他做个介绍。主要内容包括：

1．学校的环境；

2．人际交往；

3．学习生活。

注意：

1．词数100词左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括：

1.你的人生规划；

2.解释原因；

3.请他提出建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Fred发来邮件询问你是否会选择去国外留学。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1.你的选择;

2.你的理由;

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假定你是红星中学学生李华，于8月28日在www. amazon. com图书网站购买了Jennifer Jayne写的英文原版悬疑小说Never Smile at Strangers。在阅读过程中，发现小说缺页严重，你想通过网站客服解决该问题，特写了一封邮件。

内容如下：1.购书时间及书名；2.书籍的问题；3.希望有合理的解决方法；4.期待尽快得到回复并表示感谢。

要求：1.包括所有内容；

2.信的开头已写好(不计入总词数)；

3.词数：100左右。

Dear Sir / Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．随着时代的发展，我们的生活将会发生许多变化。请以My life in the future为题目写一篇英语短文，描述一下你未来的生活。

内容包括：

1.你未来的职业以及工作内容；

2.业余生活；

3.家务由谁来承担；

4.你在未来的生活中是否需要使用钱。

参考词汇：robot机器人；扫码支付Scan to Pay；支付宝Alipay

注意：

1.适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2.数：100-120左右。

My life in the future

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6．假如你是李华，你将在学校英语社团做一个演讲，分享自己坚持一项体育锻炼的经历和感受。请用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下:

1.你的锻炼经历；

2.你的心得体会;

3.其他。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已为你写好。

Good morning！My name is Li Hua.

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Thank you!

7．假定你是李华，是校学生会主席。你校10名同学将与加拿大某学校进行线上交流活动。对方学校Eric老师来信询问相关活动事宜，请你给Eric老师回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.表达期待；

2.交流议题；

3.活动意义。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union.

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Zack来邮件告诉你说，他未能通过“朗诵唐诗”选拔赛the tryout for “Tang Poetry Recital Contest”。请你用英文给Zack写一封慰问邮件，主要内容包括：

1、点明得知的情况；

2、表达理解和安慰；

3、鼓励对方。

注意：

1、词数100左右； 2、可以适当增加情节和连贯语。

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9．你校将举行英语作文比赛。请你以“Benefits of Exercising Regularly”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1. 定期运动的好处；

2. 你的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Benefits of Exercising Regularly

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10．假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举行征文活动，主题是“Developing countries need help”。请你写一篇短文参加该活动，内容包括：

1.发达国家的优势；

2.发展中国家的困境；

3.发达国家应该帮助发展中国家。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.标题已为你写好。

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1．Possible version:

Dear Tom, 

How is everything going? It's been almost a term since I entered Senior High School. I've got so much to share with you. Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years. Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern.    

What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources. I've made quite a few friends here. In class, we're encouraged to share our opinions with group members and to solve problems by ourselves. I do enjoy it.   

How about your school life? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Tom介绍你在学校的学习生活情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

美丽的：brilliant/wonderful→beautiful

有机会接近：be accessible to→get access to

独自：on our own→by ourselves

喜欢：be fond of→ enjoy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern.

拓展句：Equipped with all kinds of facilities, not only is our school beautiful but also it is modern.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years. (运用了过去分词短语做状语)

【高分句型2】What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources. (运用了what引导的主语从句，where引导非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear Jackson,

I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. The reasons are as follows.

Firstly, in my view, working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Besides, journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.

What do you think of my life plan? Any suggestions are welcome.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jackson写回信告知未来的人生规划，解释原因并请他提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

在我看来：in my opinion→in my view

此外：in addition→besides

交谈/交流：talk with→communicate with

吸收/掌握：master→absorb

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Besides, journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.

拓展句：Besides, journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people, because of which I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When I grow up, I want to be a journalist.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.（运用了动名词作主语；what引导表语从句）

3．Dear Fred,

I'm writing to tell you whether I will choose to study abroad.

Studying abroad actually benefits students much,but personally speaking,I prefer studying at home.One reason is that studying abroad will bring much financial pressure to my parents and more importantly,there are many great universities in China where I can better further my education with satisfactory studying conditions. As you know, more and more foreign students are studying in Chinese universities and I believe there'll be more in the future.

Of course you are welcome to China for your further education.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰笔友Fred回邮件，告知对方自己是否会选择去国外留学。

【详解】1.词汇积累

告诉：inform→tell

认为：figure→believe

许多：many→numerous

事实上：in fact →actually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Of course you are welcome to China for your further education.

拓展句：Of course, I sincerely hope you can experience school life in China for your further education.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm writing to tell you whether I will choose to study abroad.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】One reason is that studying abroad will bring much financial pressure to my parents and more importantly,there are many great universities in China where I can better further my education with satisfactory studying conditions.（运用了that引导的表语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. As a faithful supporter of your website, I have enjoyed your convenient and timely service. But this time, I am writing for your help.

On August 28, I received the mystery novel Never Smile at Strangers by Jennifer Jayne, which I had ordered through your website. Unfortunately, quite a few pages were found missing when I read it afterwards, greatly affecting my understanding of the book.

I am wondering whether you can solve this problem as soon as possible, for instance, sending me a new book, for I really love the book.

Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书网站写一封邮件，希望解决所买小说缺页严重的问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：like→enjoy

收到：get→receive

不幸的是：Unluckily→Unfortunately

解决：settle→solve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School.

拓展句：I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School who likes reading very much.

【点睛】【高分句型1】On August 28, I received the mystery novel Never Smile at Strangers by Jennifer Jayne, which I had ordered through your website. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Unfortunately, quite a few pages were found missing when I read it afterwards, greatly affecting my understanding of the book. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)

5                                                                                              My life in the future

With the development of the technology, our lives have changed a lot. But what will the future be like? Now, let us imagine it.

In the future, I will become a good teacher, because I like children very much. At that time, the children will not go to school. They will study at home on the computer. In my spare time, I will participate in a variety of sports, such as playing football, climbing and swimming, which will benefit my health a lot. What's more important is that I will achieve my dream to travel around the world. In my family, I will have a robot. It will help me do much housework, such as washing clothes and cooking dinner. In the future, I will not need money because everything will be free! I like life in the future.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以My life in the future为题目写一篇英语短文，描述一下你未来的生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：take part in/join in→participate in

各种各样的：all kinds of→a variety of

实现：realize→achieve

帮助某人做某事：assist sb. to do sth.→help sb. do sth.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In my family, I will have a robot. It will help me do much housework, such as washing clothes and cooking dinner.

拓展句：In my family, I will have a robot, which will help me do much housework, such as washing clothes and cooking dinner.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In my spare time, I will participate in a variety of sports, such as playing football, climbing and swimming, which will benefit my health a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】What's more important is that I will achieve my dream to travel around the world.  (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导表语从句)

6．       Good morning! My name is Li Hua, from Class 10, Senior Grade 2. I feel honored to be here to share with you my experiences in physical exercising.

Influenced by my parents who exercise regularly, I started playing tennis at the age of eleven.At the beginning, it was hard and tiring. But gradually I fell in love with the sport. Now I play with my partners once or twice every week. My coach says that I have a talent for tennis, which encourages me to train even harder. I plan to join in a tennis tournament next year.

Doing sports is such great fun! Why not join me in working out? Thank you!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享自己坚持一项体育锻炼的经历和感受。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

影响：influence→affect

困难的：hard→difficult

起初：at the beginning→at first

对......有天赋：have a talent for→be gifted with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I feel honored to be here to share with you my experiences in physical exercising.

拓展句：I feel honored to be here to share with you my experiences which I have gained in physical exercising.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Influenced by my parents who exercise regularly, I started playing tennis at the age of eleven.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] My coach says that I have a talent for tennis, which encourages me to train even harder. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．【参考范文】

Dear Eric,

I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. As for the coming exchange between the two schools, I can’t help expressing our humble but heartfelt expectations.

For the exchange topics, why not make school life the top list since what interests us students most is interesting courses, future plans, etc. Also, I heard many Canadian middle school students are keen on traditional Chinese culture. So if necessary, we can prepare some related items. What’s more, hardly could there be a better choice than discussing our life changes after the outbreak of COVID-19.

We really look forward to the coming exchange. Not only will it practise our language and open our eyes, but also it will promote friendship and mutual understanding.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大某学校Eric老师回复一封电子邮件，介绍即将举行的线上交流活动的相关活动事宜。

【详解】1.词汇积累

真诚的，衷心的：heartfelt→sincere

为什么不……呢？why not…?→why don’t you…?

喜爱：be keen on→be fond of

开阔某人的眼界：open one’s eyes→broaden one’s horizons

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：We really look forward to the coming exchange.

拓展句：We really look forward to the coming exchange, from which we can benefit a lot.

【点睛】【高分句型1】For the exchange topics, why not make school life the top list since what interests us students most is interesting courses, future plans, etc.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句和what引导的主语从句）

【高分句型2】Also, I heard many Canadian middle school students are keen on traditional Chinese culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that）

8．Dear Zack,

I’m sorry to hear that you failed the tryout for “Tang Poetry Recital Contest”, which means that you have to wait for another year to attend the next one. I quite understand how you feel now, but you still have many chances. You have devoted yourself to learning Chinese, especially Chinese poetry. But as we all know, it is extremely difficult for Chinese themselves to learn Chinese poetry well, much less a foreigner. To prepare the contest, you have made every effort. It’s not your fault. So I sincerely hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try again. You are certain to make it next time.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Zack写封邮件，针对他未能通过“朗诵唐诗”选拔赛的事情表达理解和安慰，并鼓励对方。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：chance→opportunity

尤其，特备：especially→particularly

众所周知：as we all know→as everyone knows

肯定：certain→sure

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To prepare the contest, you have made every effort.

拓展句：I know that you have made every effort to prepare the contest.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you failed the tryout for “Tang Poetry Recital Contest”, which means that you have to wait for another year to attend the next one. （运用了that引导的宾语从句和 which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】So I sincerely hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try again.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

9．One possible version:

Benefits of Exercising Regularly

Doing exercise on a regular basis is necessary in our daily life. Everyone benefits from exercising regularly, regardless of age, sex or physical ability. For one thing, not only can regular exercise help us keep a healthy body weight, sleep better and reduce our health risks, but it can strengthen our bones and muscles as well, thus enabling us to build a strong body. For another, exercising regularly helps keep our thinking and judgment sharp as we age. It can also reduce our risk of depression and anxiety.

As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise. Only in this way can we stay healthy both physically and mentally.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写的是一篇主题为“Benefits of Exercising Regularly”的英语作文比赛参赛短文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

必要的：necessary→essential

保持：keep →stay

也：as well →too

腾出时间：spare time →make time

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句：

原句：Doing exercise on a regular basis is necessary in our daily life. Everyone benefits from exercising regularly, regardless of age, sex or physical ability.

拓展句：Doing exercise on a regular basis is necessary in our daily life, which everyone benefits from, regardless of age, sex or physical ability.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Only in this way can we stay healthy both physically and mentally.(运用了部分倒装结构)

【高分句型2】As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise.(运用的however引导的让步状语从句)

10．Developing Countries Need Help!

Compared with developing countries, developed countries have many advantages, such as more wealth, better living conditions, higher education, better housing and so on. They are using most of the world resources, leading a comfortable and good life.

On the contrary, many people in developing countries live a hard life. They don't have enough food, and some even go hungry. They have difficulty in getting clean water. When they get ill, they don't receive proper treatment. Many many people die young.

Therefore, developed countries have a responsibility to offer more help to the poor. They should provide more money and technology to the developing countries to help them break away from poverty.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于征文稿。要求考生写一篇短文参加校英文报以“Developing countries need help”为主题的征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发达国家：developed countries → advanced countries

过着舒适美好的生活：lead a comfortable and good life → live a comfortable and good life

足够的：enough → sufficient

提供：offer → provide/supply

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Compared with developing countries, developed countries have many advantages, such as more wealth, better living conditions, higher education, better housing and so on.

拓展句：When they are compared with developing countries, developed countries have many advantages, such as more wealth , better living conditions, higher education, better housing and so on.

【点睛】[高分句型1] They are using most of the world resources, leading a comfortable and good life.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)

[高分句型2] When they get ill, they don't receive proper treatment. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)