模板02 记叙文之记事型-备战2022年中考英语书面表达满分作文万能模板

02 记叙文之记事型
记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" W"（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个" H"（ how ）。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
【写作注意事项】
记叙文是以写人、记事为主要内容的一种文体。它包括＂六大要素＂：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果（即when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白，同时还应注意以下三点。
（1）叙述方式：主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。
（2）时态上：记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情，所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。
（3）人称上：常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情。用第三人称是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。
【写作方法】
第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等；
第二段： 详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等；
第三段：评价该事件：表明自己的看法、感受等。
典例赏析：
（2021·湖北中考真题）
没有共产党，就没有新中国。七十多年前，为建立新中国，在党的领导下，中国人民浴血奋战，涌现出许许多多的英雄人物。今天我们来用英语讲述小英雄王二小的故事吧！

要求：
1.故事必须包含图表所提供的四个要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.80词左右。故事开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：儿童团the Children’s League
The Story of Wang Erxiao
A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Story of Wang Erxiao
A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story.（开门见山，引出所讲故事是王二小的）
Wang Erxiao was born in 1929. When he was eleven years old, his parents passed away. Then he became a member of the Children’s League. Wang was clever and brave. On the morning of October 25, 1942, he was killed by enemies for protecting villagers. He was just thirteen years old. （用一般过去时，叙述王二小的事迹）
We live in times of peace and maybe we don’t need to sacrifice ourselves. But we should remember the heroes who once fought for their country. At the same time, we should study hard to build a better society.（介绍自己的感悟）
【详解】
1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据给出信息，介绍英雄王二小的故事。并写出自己的感悟，注意要点齐全，行文流畅。
2.写作指导：本文开头已给出，正文部分可分为两段，一段介绍故事，一段介绍感悟。介绍王二小故事时，使用一般过去时，介绍感悟，用一般现在时。注意多使用从句和短语，为文章增色。


模板①

开门见山引出事件，
点名了基本信息
___（时间） ___

（人物）had a basketball match with .
叙述了整个事件的过程及结果
The match began at ___（比赛开始时间）. At first, ___.Whenever we scored, I ___（我观看比赛时的表现）. In the last quarter, our team ___. In the last minute ___（我们队的表现）. Our class ___ the match（比赛结果）.
对整个事件的评价
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
【模板范文】
Yesterday our class had a basketball match with Class Two. Class Two was the top team of our grade, but we didn’t want to settle for second best.
The match began at 4:30. At first, Class Two played better and was always in the lead. We were standing around the court, cheering loudly for our team. Whenever we scored, I jumped and shouted, forgetting I’m a girl. The unfavorable situation lasted for three quarters. In the last quarter, our team changed the plan and slowly caught up. In the last minute the score became 81 to 80. Our class won the match.
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
典例赏析：
（2021·湖南衡阳·中考真题）
中华文化渊源流长，博大精深，展现出独特的魅力，让世界为之赞叹。假如你是李强,你的外国笔友Steven非常喜欢中国，想对中国文化有更进步的了解。请你从以下几个方面,给他写一封email,向他简单介绍中国的文化特色。

注意:
1.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等个人信息;
2.根据上图，至少要写两个方面的内容(可适当发挥);
3.80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Steven,
How is it going?
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Yours,
Li Qiang
例文：
Dear Steven,
How is it going? I’m glad you like China and are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you something about Chinese culture.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. People eat different foods to celebrate different festivals. During the Spring Festival, we often get together as a family and eat dumplings, because it is a symbol of reunion and good luck. It’s also my favorite food. And in the Mid-Autumn Festival, people often eat moon cakes, because the shape is like the moon. We often eat Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival.
If you want to visit some places of interest, you can go to the great wall and Tiananmen Square. These are places where foreigners must go. If you are interested in clothing, you can try cheongsam or Tang costume, which is a favorite clothing for many people, especially girls. In addition, Beijing Opera is the most famous, but now many people don’t understand it. If you want to travel far away, you can take a high-speed train, which is very fast and will bring you the most comfortable travel.
I’m looking forward to seeing you in China.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据题干中的思维导图，写出中国的文化特色，从不同的方面进行介绍，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要围绕导图内容，用第二人称和第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
模板②
l 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
l 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：
介绍景观
介绍旅行经历
总结旅行感受
… is one of the most beautiful scenery spots.
I volunteered a guide to introduce…
It was a busy and tired day but I was very happy


写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. ＂开门见山＂式开头 
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。 
对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)... 如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂Planting Trees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如＂Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂Catching Thieves (捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.

1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, ...is the most unforgettable one．
2. On a sunny/rainy morning， while I was...First of all... Then...　After that... In the end...
3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met / experienced, I will remember him/in forever．
加分句子：
1. Sth. impressed me greatly...
2. What impressed me most is that...
经典句型：
1. Last Sunday（Saturday...）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy） 
2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus...   
3. We enjoyed ourselves.
4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock.   
5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.  
6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 
7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.   
8. We visited a lot of places of interest.  
9. We had a good time there. 
10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. 

（一）（2021·湖南岳阳·中考真题）
根据《中国美好生活大调查》结果，我们的家乡岳阳荣获“中国美好生活城市十大心仪之城”的称号，是湖南省唯一入选的地级市。家乡，一个你成长的地方，请你根据下面的图表信息，以“My Hometown—Yueyang”为题，写一篇英语短文向别人介绍你的家乡岳阳。

要求：1.词数80〜100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China.
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例文：
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China. It is located in the northeast of Hunan, covering about 15,019 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5.77 million. Yueyang has a history of over 2,500 years. There are different seasons in Yueyang. Yueyang is a place with fresh air and clean water. There are also many places to visit, such as Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower. Yueyang also has a lot of good things to eat. You can eat fish, rice, crayfish and so on.
Do you like my hometown? Welcome to visit my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图内容介绍自己的家乡——岳阳，要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和一般现在时来介绍岳阳，内容需包含位置、面积大小、人口、历史、天气、环境、名胜和美食等方面，可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）（2021·辽宁丹东·中考真题）
我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1．介绍你最喜欢的礼物；
2．讲述该礼物背后的故事；
3．说明该礼物对你的特殊意义。
写作要求：
1．语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；
2．词数70左右；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
The Story behind My Favorite Gift
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例文：
The Story behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is a book named the Old Man and the Sea.
When I received the book on my birthday, I was a little surprised. I was happy, too. I didn’t pass the exam a few days ago. I felt very upset those days. My mother wanted to encourage me to be strong and not to give up so she bought me that book. I finished reading it the next day. I learned a lot from the book and understood the love my mother gave me.
Since then, I never give up. I think it is my best gift I have ever received.

【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“The Story behind My Favorite Gift”为题介绍自己最喜欢的礼物、讲述礼物背后的故事并说明该礼物对自己的特殊意义。要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，结合一般现在时和一般过去时来行文。可分为三段式：第一段介绍这个礼物；第二段介绍礼物背后的故事；第三段说明这份礼物对自己的意义。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（三）（2021·广西桂林·中考真题）
2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。
Facts about his life
生平事迹
1930 be born, in Beijing;
1964 start a special study about rice;
1974 develop a new kind of rice;
1980 begin to, help people grow more rice,
not only...but also...,
China, many other areas around the world;
2021 die, in Changsha;
…
Contributions
成就贡献
solve, the problem of food, for millions of people,
call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)
…
One of the best ways to remember him
纪念他最好的方式之一
should, save food, never waste any food
…
（写作要求）1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.
Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.
I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.

【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，根据表格信息来介绍袁隆平院士的生平世界，要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分。可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平，第二段总结袁隆平的贡献，第三段提出为纪念袁隆平，要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主，写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（四）（2021·广西百色·中考真题）
做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生，请以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题写一篇英语小短文，介绍你平时做的家务及其感受。
内容要点：1.你做家务的原因；2.你平时做的家务（至少举一个例子）；3.你对做家务的感受。
写作要求：1.包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右。
My Experience of Doing Housework
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例文
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.
Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕做家务的经历写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段说明自己做家务的原因；第二段介绍自己曾经做家务的经历以及自己常做哪些家务；最后一段发表自己对做家务的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（五）（2021·山东临沂·中考真题）
在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分；
2. 不少于60词。
提示：
1. What is the thing you’re proud of?
2. Why are you proud of it?
One Thing I’m Proud of
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例文：
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became good at English.
Every English class used to be like a bad dream for me. I didn’t understand my teacher most of the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review new words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I got an “A” in the final exam.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于提纲作文写作。在写作时应根据题目和提示内容以及相关经历讲述一件令自己感到自豪的事情，并介绍原因。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称进行写作，时态以一般过去时为主；讲述自己英语学习的转变过程，具体细致；结尾介绍原因简洁有力，全文结构清晰明了。
（六）（2021·湖北襄阳·中考真题）
“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”有数据显示，中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐93克，浪费率为11.7%。减少餐饮浪费，是践行绿色发展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风，需要我们共同努力。请你依据下列三个要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点提示：
（1）你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约；
（2）叙述一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程；
（3）简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。
2. 注意事项：
（1）用词在90个左右：
（2）行文应连贯流畅；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
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例文：
Food waste is a big problem. There are still a lot of people who are hungry. It is also harmful to the environment. My family don’t like to waste food. When we go out for dinner, we always order no more food than we need, and we will take the left food home.
One day, my friend Lucy and I went out for lunch. She ordered a lot of food to celebrate passing the exam. In the end, much food was left. I told her that we should take it home, because wasting food is not right. She felt ashamed and promised not to waste food next time.
I think when you throw away food, you are not just wasting the food itself. Resources are also wanted while growing, transporting and cooking the food. These things all take energy, time and water. So let’s avoid wasting food from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“食物浪费”这一现象写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述曾经历过的与浪费有关的就餐过程；第三段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（七）（2021·山东济南·中考真题）
在每个人的成长过程中，都难免经历失败（failure）。只有在失败中不断反思和成长，才能取得成功。某英语报社正在举办以 “Learn from Failure” 为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的一次失败经历;
2.从中得到的收获与感悟。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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One possible version:
Learn from Failure
Nobody likes failure, but we can always learn something valuable from it.
Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who had practiced after school every day.
“Practice makes perfect”, as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned from my failure. If there’s another chance, I’ll take it seriously and do my best.
【详解】
1.题干解读：阅读题干，可知要求以“Learn from Failure” 为题的征文稿。写作前，可以提前列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：这是一篇话题类作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题（没人喜欢失败，但我们可以从失败中学到有价值的东西东西）；第二段介绍过去的经历来证明此观点；第三段总结说明，从失败中得到的收获与感悟。
（八）（2021·辽宁盘锦·中考真题）
在初中三年的时光里, 你不仅学到了知识，也具备了一定的能力。当你克服困难第一次成功地完成某件事情时，这份与众不同的经历一定在你的脑海里留下了深刻的印象。请你以“ My first time to ________”为题，写一篇英语作文，分享你的经历并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求：
（1）补全标题，词数80-100；
（2）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My first time to ________
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例文：
My first time to swim
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I learned to swim.
Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.
What an unforgettable experience it was!
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目是半命题作文，要求以“My first time to …”写一篇作文，分享自己第一次做某事的经历并谈谈自己的感受。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，记叙过去的经历用一般过去时。文章可采用三段式，第一段引出这次经历，第二段详细叙述经历，最后一段讲感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（九）（2021·湖北天门·中考真题）
有时候，简简单单的一句话、能产生巨大的能量，让人刻骨铭心，助人勇敢前行。仔细想一想，生活中对你触动最深、影响最大的一句话是什么呢？请根据所给提示和要求，以“A Simple Word”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述这一句话及其背后的故事。以下提示仅供参考。
提示：
1. You can do it.
2. Believe in yourself.
3. Keep trying and you’ll succeed.
要求：
1. 说出这句话的来历及对你的影响；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
A Simple Word
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One possible version:
A Simple Word
Sometimes, a simple word can change a person. Until today, I still remember what my mother once told me, “Keep trying, and you will succeed.” The word helped me a lot.
I was learning how to ride a bicycle when I was 6 years old. I tried many times, but I still fell down. I felt upset and didn’t want to ride any more. Knowing what happened, my mother said to me. “Keep trying, and you will succeed.” My mother’s word made me calm down. I tried to ride my bicycle again and again. Finally, I succeeded.
Whenever I meet difficulties, my mother’s word appears in my mind. I’ll keep trying and never give up.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给提示，以“A Simple Word”为题，讲述这句话及其背后的故事。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍这句话背后的故事；第三段介绍这句话对自己的影响。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（十）（2021·福建·中考真题）
假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。
Number of Participants (参加者)

English Day
Time: 2:00 p. m. - 4:30 p. m.
June 18th
Place: In the school hall
Learning by Doing
* Singing Competition
* Cooking Show
* Storytelling, Join us!
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2: 00 p. m. to 4: 30 p. m. on June 18th.
Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling.
We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（十一）（2021·江苏南京·中考真题）
某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。


This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire（鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?
Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful.
Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she passed it. I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（十二）（2021·江苏盐城·中考真题）
初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unforgettable Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What was the experience?
2. What have you learned from it?
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences.
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例文
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the Asian Games held in our city.
Being one of the three volunteers selected from our school, I felt excited and proud. To make sure that I could provide the best service, I practiced in my spare time, especially my spoken English. When the day finally came, I felt a little bit nervous because I was afraid of making any mistakes. Fortunately, I performed well and was spoken highly of by the volunteer organization.
I learned that we should be confident and hard-working. It was the first time that I had been a volunteer for such an important event, which made me proud ever since.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，根据提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍令自己难忘的经历；第三段介绍自己的感受和学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。



Writing 1（2021·辽宁连山·二模）
根据要求完成大作文，词数：80—100词。
你将告别熟悉的校园，三年的初中生活会成为你一生中的难忘回忆。请根据图表提示，以“My School Life”为题写一篇短文，定格你的初中校园生活。

要求：
1.语言连贯，语法准确， 层次清晰。
2.文章必须包括所给提示内容，并可适度发挥。
3.短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My School Life
I am a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior high school next month after I finish the exam.
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例文：
My School Life
I am a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior high school next month after I finish the exam. I’m feeling a bit nervous and excited
I get on well with my classmates. We always help each other. We all like our teachers because they are really friendly and helpful. We can ask them for help at any time. There are many subjects in our school. I like English and music best. It takes us much time to study well. We all work so hard. Also there are many school activities in our school, such as school trip, soccer game, art festival and so on. The school trip is my favorite because it’s so relaxing.
There are so many happy memories about my school life that I’ll never forget them. I will miss my junior high school life very much.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文。这是一篇材料作文，所给表格里面的内容是写作要点。写作时要承接短文开头；第二段详写材料要点，并适当发挥；第三段概括总结。
2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来叙述，要认真读材料，不要遗漏，根据要点，适当发挥。同时保证条理清晰，准确运用时态。写完后仔细检查，看看是否有拼写、语法错误。
Writing 2（2021·河北路北·二模）
假设你是李华，上周六, 你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。
Activities
Feelings
make zongzi
……
visit a tea museum
learn Chinese characters
要求∶
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受；
2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
3. 卷面整洁，书写工整，词数 80 个左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:
Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese culture. Everything he experienced that day was a great attraction to him. In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum. There he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it. Peter kept saying amazing. It makes me really proud of our rich culture.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格所给信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍上周六你和Peter参加的活动内容并分享感受。要选用恰当地词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：分析题干可知，文章主要采用第一人称和第三人称相结合来行文，时态用一般过去时；写作时注意保持主谓一致，同时语言的表达也要符合语法结构，注意思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，通俗易懂。
Writing 3（2021·广东高要·二模）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Alice对中国传统节日很感兴趣。请你给她写一封信，介绍端午节，再简单介绍一个你最喜欢的传统节日，以及你对中国传统节日的看法。
内容要点:
端午节
时间
农历五月初五
来源
纪念古代诗人屈原，有两千多年历史
活动
赛龙舟，吃粽子
你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日(给出两点理由)
你对中国传统节日的看法(至少一点)
参考词汇：农历的 lunar
写作要求：
1. 必须包括表格所有内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数：80左右，短文首句不计入总词数；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Alice,
I am glad that you are interested in learning more about Chinese traditional festivals. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will have a chance to visit China and experience Chinese traditional festivals.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible vision:
Dear Alice,
I am glad that you are interested in learning more about Chinese traditional festivals.
Now let me tell you something about Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals. It is on May fifth in Chinese lunar calender. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honour of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. People celebrate the day by holding dragon boat race and eating zongzi.
There are many other traditional festivals in China. Among these festivals, I like the Spring Festival best because the whole family can get together and have a big dinner. And the children can also get lucky money from their elders.
In my opinion, Chinese traditional festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect and value the traditions.
I hope you will have a chance to visit China and experience Chinese traditional festivals.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以李华的身份向英国朋友Alice介绍端午节，以及另外一个自己最喜欢的传统节日，并表达出对中国传统节日的看法。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。
写作指导：时态用一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
Writing 4（2021·湖南·长沙市北雅中学二模）
英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们说了自己的想法。请结合提示内容，再增加一条你自己的看法，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。
要点提示：
(1) 多和家人在一起；
(2) 分享快乐和忧愁；
(3) 记得家庭成员的生日；
(4) ……
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名等信息。
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

例文：
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas.
Some say it’s better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when they have problems, we should try to cheer them up. Others believe it’s important to give small presents to our family members on their birthdays.
I think, showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer. Sometimes, even the smallest thing, like walking with family, makes them happier.
So, though we’re young, we can do much to make a happier home.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为题写一篇作文，发表自己的看法。题目中给了三个要点提示：多和家人在一起；分享快乐和忧愁；记得家庭成员的生日，学生们应以此为中心，进行适当的拓展，充实内容，再结合自己的实际补充更多的内容。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应用一般现在时，第一人称为主叙述。写作时应注意将题目中给出的要点都写出来，并适当发挥，充实文章内容；句式结构应符合英语的表达习惯，使用恰当的短语、句型，穿插并列句、各种从句等高级句式。最后应注意行文连贯，使用恰当的衔接词。
Writing 5（2021·江苏·苏州高新区第二中学二模）
为了彻底地战胜新型冠状病毒(COVID-19)，我们学校开展了“为抗疫而战”(Fight Against COVID-19)的征文活动，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。请你写一篇文章参赛。

疫情的概述
1. 疫情的蔓延阻碍了社会的发展；影响了我们的生活和学习；
2. 很多的医务工作者们奋力工作，努力帮助病人康复。
我们的行动
1. 遵守公共场所规则，如，不聚集，主动出示健康码；
2. 养成良好的卫生习惯，如，勤洗手，戴口罩；
3. ……
参加的意义
1. 尊重生命，善待自然，健康生活；
2. 提升自我，乐于助人，……
要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头己给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
词汇：健康码 green health codes
At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely.
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例文
At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely.
The spread of the epidemic has hindered the development of society. It affects our life and study. Many medical workers are working hard to help the patients recover. In order to fight against it, we need to observe rules in public places, such as showing green health codes and not gathering. We should develop good hygiene habits, such as washing hands frequently and wearing masks. We have online classes at home in order not to gather.
To respect life, to treat nature well and to live a healthy life are what I have learned in this fight. We should improve ourselves and be willing to help others.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段概述疫情、介绍自己的行动；第三段描述参加的意义。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
Writing 6（2021·江苏·扬州市广陵区教师发展中心二模）
难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面表格内容，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
In the past
1.learn a lot of knowledge
2.be grateful to the teachers
3. …
1. be late for school
2. …
In the future
1.try my best to do better
2. …
要求: 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）须包含表格中所有内容并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
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Version:
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to be late and that made my teacher angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder as well. I will not only organize my life but also manage time better.
I hope one day, my school and my teachers will be proud of me!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般过去时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍过去的经历和将来的打算；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
Writing 7（2021·河北·武安市教师发展中心一模）
我们的生命中每时每刻都充满了感动，可能是失落时亲人一句暖心的话语，可能是沮丧时朋友一个无声的举动，可能是压力大时老师鼓励的眼神……请以“A Touching Moment in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，描述生活中让你感动的瞬间。
提示：（1）What happened to you?
（2）Why did it make you moved?
（3）…
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Touching Moment in My Life
Here is a touching moment in my life that I will never forget. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
A Touching Moment in My Life
Here is a touching moment in my life that I will never forget. I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed in an exam, and I felt very upset. What’s worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. A lot of raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand for everything. I believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，文体是记叙文，要求描述生活中让你感动的瞬间。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述；时态采用一般过去时。在写作时应承接开头；描述事件时，场景应描写细致，详细描述事件发生的背景、起因、过程和结果；文中正确使用直接引语表达，使文章通顺，并保证条理清晰。