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06申请信
1. 体裁解读
申请信是在求职或留学时常用的一种信件。申请信应该简洁明了,如实地反映你的才能、成绩、愿望和目标。一封英文申请信必须表明写信的目的,原因以及对自身情况的介绍。申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。
2. 写作攻略
申请信要求一事一议,内容单纯。其内容一般包括:申请的具体内容;自己的情况和条件;提出要求,如请求回信、面试等。申请信的书写可以遵照以下步骤:
第一步:点名写信目的,说明信息来源,并陈述自己能胜任;
第二步:介绍自己,具体说明能胜任的原因;
第三步:表达期望,请求尽快答复并给予机会。
典例赏析:
(2021·青海西宁·中考真题)
假如你是王宁,你想成为2022年北京冬奥会(Winter Olympics)的志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一篇80词左右的自荐信。开头已给出,不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
内容包括:
1.个人信息;
2.自身优势(爱好特长、经历等);
3.你将为此要做的准备;
4. ……
Dear Sir,
I have heard that some volunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Dear Sir,
I have heard that some volunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing. I am writing to apply for a position.
My name is Wang Ning, aged 17, a senior high school student. My favourite sports are skating and swimming. It helps me have a keen mind to report something at a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I’m good at Chinese and English. What’s the most important is that I used to be a volunteer for the University Games, which gives me a lot of experience related to games. If I get the work, I will work hard, make some contribution to 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang Ning
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容,写一封自荐信,申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者,要包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态多采用一般现在时,讲述经历时用一般过去时。要在信件中写清楚自己的个人信息、优势、将会做的准备,并适当补充要点。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Dear __________,
点明写信目的
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of ______________(工作、职位等). / I write to express my interest in ______________ (工作、职位等). / In reply to your advertisement in ______________ (地),I write the letter.
介绍自己,说明能胜任的原因
My name is ______________. One of my reasons for applying is that ______________ (原因一). The other reason is that ______________ (原因二). Besides, ______________(原因三).
表达期望
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
________(落款)
【模板范文】
Dear Chairman,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of joining the Chinese and western cultural exchange club.
My name is Li Hua and I'm 15. One of my reasons for applying is that I like English and I am interested in western culture. The other reason is that I hope to make some friends in the club. Communicating with people is my strength. Besides, I also want to know more about the difference between Chinese and western culture.
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示优点和能力
imagination n. 想象力 creativity 创造力
honest adj. 诚实的 strength n. 长处,优点
interesting adj. 有趣的 be good at 擅长
major in... 主修…… suitable adj. 适合的
hard-working adj. 勤奋的,努力的
have a good command of 掌握,精通
2. 表示期望
answer n. & v. 回应,答复 consider v. 考虑
offer v. 提供 opportunity n. 机会
chance n. 机会 join v. 加入
look forward to期待 application n. 申请
3. 其他
advertisement n. 广告 possibility n. 可能性
especially adv. 尤其 interview n. 面试
reply n. & v. 回复,回应 convenience n. 方便
poster n. 海报 interest n. 兴趣
activity n. 活动 favorite adj. 最喜爱的
post/position n. 职位 volunteer n. 志愿者
in one's spare time 在某人业余时间
经典句子背诵:
开头句
1. I write to express my interest in...
我写信是为了表达我对……的兴趣。
2. In reply to your advertisement in..., I write the letter.
我写这封信是为了回应您在……广告。
3. I am writing to tell you that I am suitable for the job yare advertising.
我写信是告诉您我符合您招聘广告中的要求。
4. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of...
我写这封信是想询问一下能否……
中间句
1. I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary.
我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。
2. I have a good command of... 我……掌握得很好。
3. In my spare time, I read a lot. 我在闲暇时经常读书。
4. Being good at playing with children, I can do my best to help the kids.
我非常擅长和孩子一起玩,我会尽我最大的努力帮助他们。
5. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people.
我认为志愿者的工作很伟大,因为它可以帮助很多人。
6. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society.
我认为这份工作不仅能帮我提高英语水平,而且能帮助我更好地了解社会。
结尾句
1. I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
希望您能考虑我的申请。
2. I shall be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview.
如果您能给我提供一个面试机会,我将不胜感激。
3. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
感谢您考虑我的申请,期待得到您的回复。
4. I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group.
我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。
5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。
(一)(2021·重庆中考真题)
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康,但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿,号召同学们重视运动安全。
要求:
1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.运动安全的现状和重要性;
2.运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则……);
3.…….
参考词汇:热身运动 warming-up exercise
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Today I want to talk about sports safety.
Sports safety is of great importance in our daily life. Nowadays, students pay less attention to sports safety. So there are all kinds of accidents that happen at schools. We do exercise because it can improve our physical fitness and health. To keep safe can ensure that we can better achieve the goals of sports.
When we exercise, we should do enough warming-up activities. We should wear comfortable and suitable clothes. We should adopt the right way of rest, pay attention to the reasonable diet and health care.
We should exercise to keep healthy, and we should also pay attention to sports safety.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍运动安全的相关问题。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍运动安全的现状和重要性;第三段给出运动安全的建议;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(二)(2021·海南·中考真题)
为迎接英国某中学文化交流团到海南博物馆参加即将举办的中国国画展,博物馆在海南某英文报上发布了一则志愿者招聘广告。假定你是红星中学的李华,想成为其中一员,请根据广告内容和要求写一封自荐信。
要求:
1.要点齐全,适当发挥;
2.行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4.80词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. a student from Hong Xing Middle School.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Hong Xing Middle School. I want to be a member of the volunteers. First of all, I’ve been learning English for 8 years. I speak fluent English so I have no difficulty in expressing myself clearly in English. Besides, I started to learn painting at the age of 4, and I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. I will be able to tell students from England about Chinese paintings and culture. Finally, I’m outgoing and good with people. And I’ll be totally free in August. I’m sure I am the right person you are looking for.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为书信作文,要注意书信标准格式。题目已给出要点提示,学生应按照要点进行写作,不要遗漏要点。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第一人称,时态根据所述内容正确使用现在时、过去时或将来时。文章应包含全部要点,并可进行适当发挥,不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。
(三) (2020·江苏南京市·中考真题)
假如你是李华,在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容,用英语给校刊写一封信。
FUNLAND
Hi! This summer holiday we will have different camps for kids. Here are three popular ones. Join us! Make a choice and explain why you choose it.
Reading Camp
●Chinese literature
●Western literature
●…
Culture Camp
●Western music
●Chinese art
●…
Sports Camp
●Ball games
●Water sports
●…
Come and have fun!
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点(理由不得少于两点),可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I like sports very much, especially basketball, so Sports Camp is my first choice. If I’m accepted, I think it’s a good chance to improve my basketball skills. I’ll have plenty of time to practice playing basketball and there must be many excellent coaches and players in this camp. Besides, I believe I’ll make some new friends who have common interests. That really sounds fantastic to me. I just can’t wait.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours
Li Hi
【详解】
1. 题干解读:文章是一篇书信作文。主要是看到校刊上招募夏令营营员的消息进行回信,可以选择其中比较感兴趣的一个夏令营活动进行具体的描述,要写明参加这个夏令营的原因以及自己通过这次活动要取得的成绩,要注意时态的应用。
2. 例文点评:文章分三段描写。第一段感谢提供这么多精彩的夏令营活动;第二段写自己要参加的夏令营以及原因;第三段写期待尽早收到回复。整个文章结构完整,思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点:
短语:plenty of;practice doing sth.;make friends;look forward to。
句型:if引导的条件状语从句;I believe+宾语从句;who引导的定语从句。
(四)(2020·湖南益阳市·中考真题)
益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(national civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者,请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件,谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。
内容包括:打扫城市公园;到老人之家帮忙:分发传单、张贴通知……
要求:
1. 词数60-80,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
参考词汇:volunteer clean up wash hand out put up
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文:
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself.
I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices. I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。文中描述自己想申请成为一名志愿者,并介绍自己能做的事情。
2.例文点评:本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
3.高分亮点:
短语:want to do sth想要做某事;for example例如;clean up打扫;be good at doing sth擅长做某事;hand out分发;put up张贴。
句子:I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good句中because引导原因状语从句;I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。
(五)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求;1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于申请信,给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件,包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school.And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(六)【2019 •宁夏回族自治区】
第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于2020年5月举行。假定你叫李华,你想成为本届马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:擅长英语,性格开朗,做事认真,爱好运动。(至少再补充两点)
2.个人承诺:尽力提供优质服务。
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:volunteer志愿者
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road” International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020. _________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h "Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.
I'm a girl of 15,a middle school student.First of all,I do well in English.【高分句型一】I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.【高分句型二】What's more,I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.(个人优势)I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.(个人承诺)
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
First of all,I do well in English.首先,我的英语很好.
First of all首先
do well in在……某方面干得好
【高分句型二】
Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.此外,我对体育感兴趣,我曾经是一名志愿者.
be interested in 对…有兴趣
Writing 1(2021·重庆·四川外国语大学附属外国语学校三模)
国内某著名网站正在征集爱心读书员,希望通过此活动弘扬中国传统文化,让更多的孩子听到精彩的中国故事。假如你是王林,请你根据以下所给提示,给活动负责人Miss Chen写一份英语申请书。
要求:1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:1.说明自己想成为爱心读书员的理由;
2.介绍自己打算阅读的故事并阐述原因;
3.……
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Dear Miss Chen,
I’m Wang Lin, a junior school student. I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer to read books.
Books can provide us with many amazing things. I really hope everyone can enjoy the fun of reading. My voice is beautiful and clear, and I’m patient with everything I’m interested in. As for me, I’d like to read picture books because they are always very funny. They can make listeners relaxed and happy. As long as I can read them out in a special way, I believe listeners will feel like they are reading the stories in person. I think I’m suitable for the job. I believe I can keep on doing the voluntary job.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作。在写作时根据写作要点提示的内容,说明自己想成为爱心读书员的理由;介绍自己打算阅读的故事并阐述原因,并毛遂自荐成为一名爱心读书员等。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容,时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时。在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,语法正确。保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
Writing 2(2021·山东历城·二模)
假设你是李华, 你所喜爱的English Corner周报创刊十周年之际征集读者意见。请你根据以下内容给主编写封信。
内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2.赞赏该报优点:1)内容丰富有趣2)介绍名人成功故事;
3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。
注意:
1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of English Corner!
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of English Corner! I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.
There are many advantages of English Corner. Firstly, it covers with national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to English Corner, we all well-informed and keep up with the changing world.
As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that English Corner can provide articles about English learning for us.
Finally, I hope that English Corner will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容给English Corner的主编回复一封信。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。分为四段式:第一段表达自己是English Corner的忠实粉丝;第二段表达English Corner的优点;第三段提出建议;最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing 3(2021·安徽淮南·二模)
在中国人的心目中,家风是一个非常重要的传承,最近学校英语社团正在进行“模范家庭”评选活动,假如你叫Zhang Peng,请根据下列提示写一封推荐信,推荐你的家庭参评。要点如下:
提示:1、家庭成员之间相互尊重,相互关爱;
2、与邻里和睦相处,互相帮助;
3、积极参与公益事业;
4、……
注意:(1)词数80—100左右,短文首尾句已给出,不计入总词数
(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名
Dear editor,
I’d like to recommend my family for “Model Family” this year. There are four people in my happy family, including my parents, my eld sister and me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope that we can get the award. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Zhang Peng
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’d like to recommend my family for “Model Family” this year. There are four people in my happy family, including my parents, my eld sister and me. All my family members respect each other and care for each other. All of us work hard and always take on new challenges. As a result. Each of us has made great progress.
What’s more, we get on well with all our neighbors. Whenever people meet problems, we try our best to help them. And we are happy to share our skills with our neighbors.
Last but not least, in our free time, we take an active part in public service activities and do a lot of voluntary work.
I hope that we can get the award. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Zhang Peng
【详解】
题干解读:题目要求写一封推荐信,推荐你的家庭参加“模范家庭”评选活动;要求包含所有提示内容,不出现真实信息。
写作指导:此作文时态宜用一般现在时,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用4段落格式,第一段:描述家庭成员之间相互尊重,相互关爱;第二段:描述与邻里和睦相处,互相帮助;第三段:描述积极参与公益事业;第四段:表达自己希望能获奖的心愿。
Writing 4(2021·浙江温州·二模)
假如你是李华,听说交换生Tony很喜欢中国传统文化。请你结合下图几个社团,任选两个社团,向他写封信推荐你们学校的特色社团,并说明推荐理由。
egg painting sachets with patterns paper cutting
要求:1. 文中不可出现真实的个人身份信息。
2. 词数约110词,开头己经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear you would like to join our special school club.
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例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear you would like to join our special school club. Thanks for trusting me and I’ll try to make some suggestions.
I feel that it would be wise if you could join the paper cutting club since you love it so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions.
Besides, the egg painting club is also a wonderful choice. Their activities are helpful in many aspects. For instance, your painting skills will turn out to be better than before. By the way, maybe it is a good chance to make friends with others.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. If you have any more problems, please contact me at any time. I’m willing to discuss with you whenever you need.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据提示的几个社团,写一封信给交换生Tony,介绍自己学校的两个特色社团,属于书信作文。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主,以第二人称为辅进行叙述。写作中承接开头,选择两个社团进行推荐,一定写清楚为什么推荐这两个社团,最后表达希望。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡,符合逻辑关系,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
Writing 5(2021·江苏·无锡市江南中学二模)
假设你是李华,你所在的阳光校区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动,请根据所给图表的内容,给社区中心写一封英文推荐信,向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项:
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并做适当发挥。
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family...
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例文
Dear Sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress. In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful. Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours Faithfully
Jack
【详解】
1. 题干解读:本文属于书信作文,根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信,推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选,要适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时,用第一人称进行写作。第一段紧接开头,从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和慈善活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由;第二段表达殷切的希望。检查时注意是否遗漏要点,语言表达是否符英文习惯。
Writing 6(2021·天津河东·模拟预测)
假设你叫李林,你们班级要选拔新班长,你想向班主任胡老师推荐张平。请根据表格内容,写一封100词左右的推荐信给胡老师。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
姓名
张平
个性
1.自信,不害怕在许多人面前演讲;
2.勤奋,从不介意为班级做额外的工作;
3.有条理,从不忘记需要做的事。
喜好
1.最喜欢蓝色,因为……;
2.爱好音乐,因为……;
3……。
愿望
希望世界上没有战争,所有人过幸福生活。
提示词:额外的extra 有条理的organized 战争war
Dear Mr Hu,
I’m writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.
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I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin
范文:
Dear Mr Hu,
I’m writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.
Zhang Ping is confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. He is hard-working. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He is organized and never forgets the things he needs to do.
His favourite color is blue because blue represents calm. He likes music because music can make people feel relaxed. He also likes running because it’s good for his health.
He loves peace and he hopes there is no war in the world and everyone can enjoy a happy life.
I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,在写作时按信的格式来写,并且要承接短文开头,根据汉语提示的内容,介绍被推荐人的个性、喜好和愿望。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,内容完整,保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
Writing 7(2021·湖南攸县·一模)
假如你是李华, 是大唐学校国际部的学生,你们学校正在招收体育俱乐部人员。请你给俱乐部美方负责人Mr. Cave写个申请书,申请加入俱乐部,内容包括:
1. 你想加入什么俱乐部;
2. 说说你喜欢的运动故事和你喜欢的运动带给了你什么;
3. 简要说明你加入俱乐部后的打算。
注意:
1. 90词左右
2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息
Dear Mr. Cave,
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Yours,
Lihua
参考例文:
Dear Mr. Cave,
I am a seventh grade student. My name is Li Hua. I’m 13 years old. I want to join the basketball club. I like basketball very much. I often play basketball with my classmates after school. On the weekend, I also go to the basketball club to practice, in order to improve my basketball level. Yao Ming is my idol. I want to win glory for my country like Yao Ming. Through playing basketball, I understand the importance of teamwork. If I can join the basketball team, I will train actively and prove myself.
I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所提示的内容,从三方面写一封申请书申请加入俱乐部,注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:文章应采取第一人称,一般现在时和一般将来时来行文,写作前,可根据所给要点罗列出需要用到的词汇和句型,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡,注意上下文语句通顺、衔接自然,保证无单词和语法上的错误。
Writing 8(2021·江苏新吴·二模)
假定你是李华,学校“英语之声”社团招募暑期志愿者去贫困地区,帮助那里的儿童学习英语。请你写一封应聘信,你草拟了提纲,请根据下图写一篇英文自荐信。
注意事项:
1.自荐信须根据提纲自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数在90个左右,自荐信的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3.自荐信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
4.自荐信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that the Voice of English Association needs some volunteers to help children in poor areas in the coming summer vacation. I am writing to recommend myself as one of them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that the Voice of English Association needs some volunteers to help children in poor areas in the coming summer vacation. I am writing to recommend myself as one of them.
I’m a sweet and helpful girl. I’m willing to help others. What’s more, I’m good at English. This activity is a good chance to do something for the children in poor areas. It is not only a way for them to learn more but a chance for me to improve myself. I think it is really meaningful to take part in activities like this. If accepted, I’ll teach them some English songs and skills in reading and writing. I hope you will kindly consider me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,写作时要按自荐信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;第二段根据提纲叙述推荐自己的理由以及好处。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来写;时态采用一般现在时为主;在陈述推荐自己的理由时,要运用连词,使叙述的内容有理有据,条理清晰,具有说服性,语气要委婉;适当运用从句使叙述的内容更加饱满,情感更真挚。
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