模板04 说明文-备战2022年中考英语书面表达满分作文万能模板

04 说明文
说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述，考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。
要写出一篇合乎要求的说明文，应注意以下几点：
一审 要想做到文章切题、要点齐全，审题至关重要。下笔之前要将所给的材料看清楚，读懂材料所要表达的内容或情景。
二定 一定要点：根据所给材料要点，定出中心句。注意适当发挥，避免逐字逐句翻译。二定方法：常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。要根据说明的对象、目的来选择最佳的说明方法。
三理 理顺各中心句之间的关系，排列好各中心句的顺序。说明文常用的结构安排顺序有以下三种：时间顺序、空间顾序和逻辑顺序。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚、脉络明晰。
四查 查写作要点，查段落层次，查时态语态，查用词、拼写、标点等。通过检查，可以避免一些不必要的错误，使文章趋于完美。
说明文主要包括：
（一）人物说明文
◆写作要求
人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。
写人物说明文一般包括以下几点：
1. 出生年月；2. 主要经历；3. 事迹成就；4. 影响、评价。
叙述方法：一般按照时间顺序，从外形到性格，从一般经历到创造性的贡献，最后常有结论性的评语。
语言简洁生动：说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等，因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。
时态语态：说明文常用一般现在时。如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况，则要用过去或将来的有关时态。另外，由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上，故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高。
典例赏析一：
（2021·广西中考真题）
2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。
Facts about his life
生平事迹
1930 be born, in Beijing;
1964 start a special study about rice;
1974 develop a new kind of rice;
1980 begin to, help people grow more rice,
not only...but also...,
China, many other areas around the world;
2021 die, in Changsha;
…
Contributions
成就贡献
solve, the problem of food, for millions of people,
call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)
…
One of the best ways to remember him
纪念他最好的方式之一
should, save food, never waste any food
…
（写作要求）1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.
Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.
I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.

【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，根据表格信息来介绍袁隆平院士的生平世界，要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分。可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平，第二段总结袁隆平的贡献，第三段提出为纪念袁隆平，要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主，写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

介绍人物
典型事迹
作出评价
Can you...? Do you know...?
He is called ... We all ...
He often ... One day... Not only... but also...
引出人物
He is ... He was born... He graduated from... He likes...


【常用词汇】
1. 表示外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes, fat, good-looking, handsome, healthy, near-sighted, ordinary-looking, pretty, short, strong, tall, thin, with a big smile, white-haired, curly/ straight hair, medium height…
2. 表示性格特点：absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, bright, confident, friendly, generous, humorous, kind, kind-hearted, lazy, naughty, smart, warm-hearted, wise, outgoing, quiet…
3. 表示兴趣爱好：be good at, be interested in, be fond of, be pleased with, enjoy doing, expect to do, look forward to doing sth, put one’s heart into…
4. 表示经历事迹：become a member of the …, concentrate on doing sth, devote oneself to, encourage sb to do sth, fight for, have a good way of doing sth, make up one’s mind to do sth, try one’s best to do sth…
5. 表示他人评价：a model …, be considered as, be famous / known as, be regarded as, make great contributions to our country, set a good example to all of us…
【常用句型】
1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是……
2. He/ She looks like… 他/她看上去像……
3. He used to be/ have … 他过去常常……
4. Her favourite… is… 她最喜欢的……是……
5. She is good at… 她擅长……
（二）事物说明文
◆写作要求
事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识，使之理解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言，事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表、文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写说事物明文必须注意事实准确，表达清晰，条理清楚，层次分明，语言简练，用词准确。
要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点：
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征
介绍事物，一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征，就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征，才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序
介绍一件事物，目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等，因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物：
（1）时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
（2）空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。
（3）逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。
3. 运用恰当的语言
介绍事物，文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下，我们还可以运用描写的方法，来增添文章的可读性。
◆注意事项
事物说明文的主要特点：一是知识性和科学性，二是应用性和解说性，三是行文的条理性。写这类文章宜少用描写，要用具体翔实的材料说明问题，而不要抽象、空洞的讨论。语言要简洁、准确、条理要清楚。讨论问题是要集中，切忌面面俱到。说明文的时态常用一般现在时，语态常用被动语态，有时用虚拟语气。
典例赏析二：
（2021·辽宁中考真题）
我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1．介绍你最喜欢的礼物；
2．讲述该礼物背后的故事；
3．说明该礼物对你的特殊意义。
写作要求：
1．语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；
2．词数70左右；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
The Story behind My Favorite Gift
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
The Story behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is a book named the Old Man and the Sea.
When I received the book on my birthday, I was a little surprised. I was happy, too. I didn’t pass the exam a few days ago. I felt very upset those days. My mother wanted to encourage me to be strong and not to give up so she bought me that book. I finished reading it the next day. I learned a lot from the book and understood the love my mother gave me.
Since then, I never give up. I think it is my best gift I have ever received.

【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“The Story behind My Favorite Gift”为题介绍自己最喜欢的礼物、讲述礼物背后的故事并说明该礼物对自己的特殊意义。要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，结合一般现在时和一般过去时来行文。可分为三段式：第一段介绍这个礼物；第二段介绍礼物背后的故事；第三段说明这份礼物对自己的意义。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

模板①
（事物） is / lies （地理位置） . It has/ is （特征） . There are many places of interest here, for example, （景点介绍） . There are also many （人们的活动、风俗等） .
I hope/ think （看法和感受） .
模板②
The table below shows that （说明问题或现象） .
（数据） percent （现象一） . （数据） percent （现象二） . （数据） percent （现象三） .
In my opinion （自己的观点或感受） .

【常用词汇】
1. 表示形状：round, square, long, tall, short, triangular(三角形的)…
2. 表示材料：wood, wool, cotton, metal, plastic, gold …
3. 表示特点：important, common, sweet, crispy, sour, salty, hard, soft, delicious, nice, fresh, pleasant, popular …
【常用句型】
1. It’s 400 meters long/ wide/ high. 它有400米长/宽/高。
2. The ruler is as long as that one. 这把尺子与那把一样长。
3. It’s made of/ from wood. 它是由木材做成的。
4. All that we can do is to ... 我们所能做的就是……
5. It is quite clear that ... 十分清楚的是……
6. There are some reasons for ... 关于……有以下理由。
（三）方式、方法说明文
◆写作要求
常见的方式、方法说明文有学习方法指导、产品使用说明、操作程序介绍、计划安排等。
写这类说明文应把握的要点有：
首先，要细致、准确地了解被说明对象的发展变化规律，也就是要准确地把握一个步骤或进程，不跳跃，不遗漏。只有这样，才能写出能够指导我们生活、工作、学习的说明文。
其次，要用准确、科学的语言来表达。方式、方法说明文所涉及的多是操作步骤、使用方法之类的内容，所以写作时不要说外行话。
再者，内容要点要有详略安排。关键的要点应详写，其余的可以略写。根据说明对象的不同特点来安排详略，不仅能使读者了解其关键所在，还可以避免文章的呆板乏味。

【常用单词】
1. 表示建议：should, had better do, suggest, advice, …is a good way…
2. 表示步骤：first of all, at last, and then, after that…
3. 表示计划：plan / prepare for/ to do, be going to, will…
【常用句型】
1. With the rapidly growing popularity of… 随着……的快速普及……
2. It is quite clear that… 十分清楚的是……
3. There are some reasons for … 关于……有以下理由。
4. A recent survey suggests that… 最近的一项调查显示……
5. All we can do is to … 我们所能做的就是……

（一）（2021·四川乐山市·中考真题）
研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动, 深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文, 介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习采茶、手工制作, 休验生活；
2.观察动、植物, 亲近自然；
3. 参观名胜古迹、博物馆, 了解历史文化；
4. 观看有意义的影视, 感受国家变化。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇: meaningful adj. 有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and I learnt more knowledge by watching many plants and animals. Then, after we visited museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己学校的游学经历，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）（2021·甘肃天水市·中考真题）
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情，不过万事都有规律可循。请根据思维导图提示的语言学习经历和经验，以 “How can we become good language learners?”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：
1. 应包含思维导图提示中所有要点，可适当进行拓展；
2. 词数：80词左右；
3. 书写工整规范；
4. 标题、首末段已给出，不计入总词数，无需抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域；
5. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How can we become good language learners?
What makes a good language learner? There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don’t do._________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don’t forget that it’s never too late to become a good language learner.
【答案】
How can we become good language learners?
What makes a good language learner? There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don’t do.
First, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. People often get things wrong. Good language learners notice their mistakes and learn from them. Then, do group activities. People use language to communicate with other people. Also, be sure to use a dictionary. Good language learners often use dictionaries to check the meaning of words they don’t know. What’s more, good language learners have fun with the language. Watch a film, listen to songs, play video games or read a book. At last, think in the language you’re learning outside the classroom.
Don’t forget that it’s never too late to become a good language learner.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图的提示，写一篇题目为“How can we become good language learners?”的短文。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第三人称。根据思维导图所给的要点提示进行写作，可适当发挥，注意表达清楚自己的观点，并给出合理的理由和建议来支撑观点，写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰。
（三）（2021·河北中考真题）
初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
Names
Items(条目)
Purple School
Orange School
Schools
public, a long history
private, well-known
Teachers
hard-working
young and active
Students
less homework
colorful activities
提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to?
(2) Why do you choose it?
注意：1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
I would like to go to_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city. There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（四）（2021·湖南岳阳市·中考真题）
根据《中国美好生活大调查》结果，我们的家乡岳阳荣获“中国美好生活城市十大心仪之城”的称号，是湖南省唯一入选的地级市。家乡，一个你成长的地方，请你根据下面的图表信息，以“My Hometown—Yueyang”为题，写一篇英语短文向别人介绍你的家乡岳阳。

要求：
1.词数80〜100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China._____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China. It is located in the northeast of Hunan, covering about 15,019 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5.77 million. Yueyang has a history of over 2,500 years. There are different seasons in Yueyang. Yueyang is a place with fresh air and clean water. There are also many places to visit, such as Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower. Yueyang also has a lot of good things to eat. You can eat fish, rice, crayfish and so on.
Do you like my hometown? Welcome to visit my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图内容介绍自己的家乡——岳阳，要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和一般现在时来介绍岳阳，内容需包含位置、面积大小、人口、历史、天气、环境、名胜和美食等方面，可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（五）（2021·陕西中考真题）
人们常说：“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文， 介绍你的计划。
Places
Activities
Community center
help the old, sing songs, tell stories, …
Community hospital( s)
handout the leaflets（宣传册）on COVID-19, …
Community park(s)
pick up rubbish, water flowers, …
…
…
要求：
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming, I’ll ________________
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I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【答案】
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming. I’ll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I’m going to hand out the leaflets on COVID-19 at our community hospital or other places. Next, I’m also planning to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park. What’s more, I’ll help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well.
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时。根据所给的提示要点，介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（六）（2021·湖北武汉市·中考真题）
孔子学院(Confucius Institute)夏令营在汉招募志者。假如你是李华请用英文写自荐信。
内容要点如下：
1.性格外向，喜欢交朋友
2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通；
3.了解中国历史和文化，会唱楚剧；
4.爱好广泛，擅长乒乓球；
5.补充两点有关信息或想法。
注意：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.词数：60-80；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： Chu opera楚剧 culture文化 ping-pong乒乓球
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute?____________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute? I’m good at Chinese and English. Chinese history and culture are my favorites. It’s easy for me to communicate and tell Chinese stories in both languages. I’ve got many hobbies, such as playing ping-pong and singing Chu opera. I’m healthy, hard-working and like to try new things. I’m outgoing. I love to meet different people and make friends with them. In my eyes, volunteer work is a good opportunity to learn something new.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，写一封自荐信。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要介绍自己的性格、语言能力、兴趣爱好以及想做志愿者的目的。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（七）（2021·江苏扬州市·中考真题）
某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：
(1) What is spring like in your hometown?
(2) What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? (three points)
(3) How do you like your hometown in spring? (two points)
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100 词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hometown
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【答案】
Spring in my hometown
When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become more and more green. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains, have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Famers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，介绍家乡的春天，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的；第二段介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么；第三段介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（八）（2021·四川自贡市·中考真题）
假定你是李华，你校将为在自贡的英国交换生举办一次中国文化体验活动。请根据以下提示写封邮件给交换生负责人Peter，告知体验活动当天的相关安排，内容包括：
1. 统一集合，乘车前往；
2. 活动内容：参观恐龙博物馆；观看彩灯制作；欣赏二胡演奏等；
3. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：恐龙：dinosaur 化石：fossil 彩灯：colorful lantern
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students_____________________________________________________
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Hope you enjoy your trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students.
We are going to meet at the school gate. Then we’ll go to visit Museum of Dinosaur by coach. There you’ll see many different kinds of dinosaur fossil. After visiting the museum, we’re going to watch the colorful lantern production. You will learn how to make the colourful lanterns. If you want to have a try, you can make them by yourselves. In the afternoon, we will go to enjoy erhu playing. It’s very interesting. At five o’clock, we will come back to our school.
Hope you enjoy your trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍中国文化体验活动，包括活动安排和注意事项。注意要点齐全，层次清晰。
2.写作指导：文章开头结尾已给出，介绍活动用一段，第一人称和第二人称交替使用，时态是一般将来时。使用恰当的连词连接上下文。
（九）（2021·山东菏泽市·中考真题）
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Lisa发来邮件, 询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示, 用英语给她写封回信。

要求：
1. 语言规范, 语句通顺；
2. 应包括图片所有要点, 可适当发挥；
3. 字数：100词左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：the 1st National Congress of the CPC 中共一大；publicize 宣传；garbage classification 垃圾分类
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize in my community how to do garbage classification. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai. And I will also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Last but not least, I will improve my spoken English by joining English clubs. What about your plan?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：题干要求根据图示提示向对方介绍自己的暑假安排。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时。根据图片的提示要点，进行一一介绍。从做家务，做志愿工作，旅行和学习英语等四个方面来介绍自己的计划。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（十）（2021·四川眉山市·中考真题）
假定你是李华，请用英语给你的朋友 John 写一封邮件，分享你的兴趣爱好，内容包括：
1.介绍爱好（打篮球）；
2.喜欢的原因（增强体质，结交朋友）；
3.打篮球经历（从小训练，加入校队）；
4.个人的感受（学会合作，……）。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
I like sports, especially basketball. Here are some reasons. On one hand, playing basketball is a good way to make me stronger. On the other hand, I can make friends with people who share the same interest. I have been a fan of basketball since I was five years old. I almost practice playing basketball every day and I’m a member of our school team. By playing basketball, I learn how to work with others and try my best to realize my goals.
So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容提示，写一封邮件，分享自己的兴趣，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称和一般现在时为主，介绍自己的兴趣时要包含所有提示要点，并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（十一）（2021·山东潍坊市·中考真题）
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站，近日有人发帖，讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”。假设你是李华，请结合自己的生活体会，用英语跟帖。
注意：
1. 不要出现考生本人信息；
2. 80词左右。
Teens Around the World
Subject: Discover the little happiness in daily life
Hey, guys! These days many teenagers say they nearly forget how to smile. In fact, little happiness is everywhere in our daily life. Try to think about one thing that makes you feel happy. What happened and what did you do at that moment? Please share your story with us.
Emily, England
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Li Hua, China
【答案】
Dear Emily,
I think you’re right. I have volunteered in Old People’s Home, and this experience made me happy.
Last term, our school held an activity to volunteer in Old People’s Home. I joined it. I helped old people there to clean their rooms, made their beds, told stories, sang and danced with them. We all enjoyed ourselves on that day. I got a lot of fun helping others. So I decide to take part in more volunteer activities.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。分享曾经让自己开心的生活点滴。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，描述过去的经历要用一般过去时。先引出主题；再分享自己的经历和感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（十二）（2021·浙江台州市·中考真题）
假如你是李华，请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节（food festival）的相关内容及举办目的, 并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括：
Time
2: 00 p.m. Friday, June 25th
Place
the school playground
Activities
cook, have something delicious ...
Aims
experience Chinese food culture, raise money for charity.
注意：
（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From Li Hua
Hi, Andrew
How is it going?___________________________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua

【答案】
Hi Andrew,
How is it going? Knowing that you are fond of food. I’m writing to invite you to attend our school food festival.
The festival will begin at 2:00 on Friday afternoon, June 25th on the school playground. We are glad to have something delicious like dumplings and zongzi. We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. The festival will surely offer us a good chance to show and experience Chinese traditional food culture. Besides, it is a good time for us to share happiness, love and team spirit. It’s a great pleasure to have you here with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，写作时应注意电子邮件标准格式。根据题目所给提示，学生要在电子邮件中介绍学校美食节、其举办目的以及邀请Andrew参加该活动。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一、三人称，时态应用现在时或将来时。表格所给要点要写全，切勿遗漏，还可适当进行拓展。拓展的内容应与全文内容紧密衔接，并能很好地串联起来。此外还应注意英语的表达问题，语句表达要符合英语表达习惯和语法，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。
（十三）（2021·浙江金华市·中考真题）
假如你叫Daming，本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动（study tour）。请根据下列表格中的内容，给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件，告知你们的计划，并邀请他一同前往。
注意：
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80～100；
4. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点：
内容要点
参考词汇
When and where to go
Zhejiang University, this Saturday
How to go
by train
What to do
visit …, talk with …, learn about ..., …
What to take
passport, …
Others
meet at the school gate, 7: 30 a.m., …
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Daming
【答案】
Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are going to Zhejiang University for a study tour this Saturday. It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. When we are there, we’ll go around the campus, visit the labs and libraries, and learn about its history. We will also talk with the teachers and students there.
Would you like to join us? If yes, please remember to take your passport because we’ll take the train. And we will meet at the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，要注意标准的电子邮件格式，要求根据题目要点提示写出关于浙江大学研学活动的计划，所给要点必须全部包括，并可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态应用现在时或将来时。写作时要点要齐全，不要遗漏，思路最好按照所给的要点顺序进行叙述，注意邮件的开头结束标准用语。
（十四）（2021·浙江温州市·中考真题）
在中国传统文化中， “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，温暖而有力量。请你结合下图，以 “Home”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。

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Home
Home means a lot to every Chinese.
When our family members come back home for reunion, we sit around the table, sharing our achievements and happiness. Home becomes the warmest place.
It’s a place full of love. Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families.
It’s also a place full of strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return home. Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and confidence to keep moving forward.
So how long have you been away from home? Come back. Home is always waiting for you.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“家”为题来介绍中国文化中的“家”。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段到第四段介绍了家究竟是一个什么样的地方；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

Writing 1（2021·山东安丘·三模）
第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会，将在2022年2月4日至2月20日在北京市和张家口市联合举行。假如你叫王萍，你们学校为配合北京冬奥会顺利举办，倡导人人争做文明中学生。
请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。
写作要求：1. 文中不能出现学校和个人真实姓名。2. 字数不少于80词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy

Dear Peter,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Ping
例文：
Dear Peter,
How is it going? At my school we are talking about what we should do to be a good student.
To be a polite middle school student, I think we have to do a lot of things. First, it’s important for us to speak politely. We must respect the others, be warm-hearted to everyone, and be generous to our friends. Second, we can’t throw rubbish everywhere. We must throw them in the rubbish bins. Littering is not a good habit. Every time I go to the park, I always pick up the litter and put it into the bin. I think if we all do so, the world will be cleaner. Another important thing is that we must follow the rules. There is no doubt that waiting in line is the important rule. I never rush into the bus. Waiting may be a happy thing. I often feel happy when I do something that is better for us. I think being a polite middle school student is proud.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件类书面表达，在写作时应承接短文开头，第二段主要说明保护环境的举措，并且提出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来说明具体的举措；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅；说明具体举措时，不仅要有层次，而且也应该有具体的事例。整篇文章应该保证条理清晰，结构完整。
Writing 2（2021·河北路南·二模）
假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者的广告。请根据该广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目选择其中一个，结合自己的实际情况，给项目负责人写一封电子邮件，表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望并阐述理由（至少两条）。
Project 1
Place: A small village in the west of China
Activities: ● set up a small library
●teach children English
●teach children music and art
Project 2
Place: A primary school in the north of Thailand
Activities: ●give Chinese lessons
●introduce Chinese culture in English
●play games with children
注意：（1）邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名。
（3）词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：be good at, tradition, get on well with
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. I want to help the children in the small village in the west of China.
I’m good with people and often take part in some volunteer activities. For example, I am a volunteer of my school library and have a lot of experience in organizing books and helping students in the library. So I think I will be helpful to set up a small library. Besides, I am good at English and have many ways to learn English well. I think I can teach children English. Furthermore, I am not only good at drawing but also love music. Once I won the first prize in a drawing competition. So I can teach children music and art.
I really hope to be a member of the project, because helping others is meaningful to me.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于电子邮件写作。要求以李华的身份给招募志愿者的负责人写一封电子邮件，写作者要选择其中一个项目，结合自己的实际情况，表达想参加这个项目的愿望并阐述理由（至少两条）。表达文章的开头和结尾已经给出。文章内容要包含表格中所选择的项目的信息，学生们在此基础上可以联系实际并阐述理由，把文章写得更具体、更充实。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时主要应用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述，描写过去的经历可以应用一般过去时；注意格式规范，符合电子邮件语境表达。第二点：内容要包含所选择的项目的信息，并在此基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展，如be good with；take part in；besides；furthermore等。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
Writing 3（2021·福建省惠安荷山中学模拟预测）
6月20日，你班组织了一场美化家园的义务劳动，主题为“To Be a Greener Person”。请结合分组情况用英语写一篇日记，并发表你的看法。词数80左右。
To Be a Greener Person
Group One
collect rubbish
Group Two
tell the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees
Group Three
spread the importance on protecting the environment
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. The students were divided into three groups: Group One collected rubbish, Group Two told the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees, and Group Three spread the importance on protecting the environment.
Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving our own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recycle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on. Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try our best and we will make a difference.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇日记写作，要求按照所给信息描述义务劳动的分工，并阐述自己的观点。写作时要按照题干中所给内容进行描写，紧扣题目，并适当发挥。写作时要先理顺内容，可以分为两层，第一层先描述每个组的工作内容，第二层阐述自己的观点。力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。
2. 写作指导：动笔前要先构思写作要点，第一段主要采用第三人称，时态使用一般过去时来描述劳动的主要内容；第二段主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时来发表自己的看法。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
Writing 4（2021·宁夏大武口·二模）
习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。2020年11月21日在央视-14播出了《2020年度全国“新时代好少年”先进事迹》，同学们观看完节目后，感触颇深。请你谈谈自己观看后的感受，从而认识自我并且立志做一名新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示：
1. 观看后的感受和对入选好少年们的印象和评价：
如：爱国爱家、善良感恩、品学兼优、自立自强……
2. 自我认识：（优点）爱读书、助人为乐……
（缺点）不爱运动、长时间玩手机……
3. 今后的努力方向：至少谈两点
提示词语：“新时代好少年”“Good Teenagers of New Age”
写作要求：
1. 80词左右。
2. 根据要点提示，可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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例文：
I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good teenagers of new age after watching the show called “Good Teenagers of New Age”.
First of all, I must love our country and home. And I should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us. Secondly, I should work hard and learn to be independent. Next, I love reading and helping others who are in need because these things can make me happy. However, I don’t like doing exercise and I always play games for a long time.
In my free time, I plan to take part in different activities like planting trees to relax myself. At the same time, I will do exercise every day to keep healthy. I hope to be a good teenager of new age.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求谈谈自己观看完《2020年度全国“新时代好少年”先进事迹》节目后的感受，根据要点提示，谈一谈观看后的感受和对入选好少年们的印象和评价；自我认识以及今后的努力方向。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主展开陈述，写作时按照提示的要点按一定顺序写出主要内容，最后不要忘记谈一下今后的努力方向，至少两点。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。层次要分明，条理要清晰。
Writing 5（2021·四川五通桥·二模）
假设你的好友李华上周给你写了一封信，信中分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能（AI）的一些观点，并表达了他对人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请根据以下提示写一封回信，并谈谈自己的看法。
1、不必过分担忧。
2、AI会按照人的指令进行工作。
3、AI帮助我们从事危险的工作。
4、AI可以为我们节省时间和劳动力。
注意：
1.词数：80词左右
2.应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：劳动力：labour
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
One Possible Version:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages.
First of all, AI can work by following orders of human beings. If people don’t want to do some dangerous jobs, they can use AI to keep workers safe. It will save us much time and labour to work with AI. As a result, people can free themselves form work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，亮出你的观点（你现在是Mike），告诉李华不必过分担忧，人工智能永远不会完全取代人类，它利大于弊；第二段叙述人工智能的优点；第三段概括，告诉李华人工智能是一把双刃剑。与其担心它的负面影响，不如多了解如何正确使用它，并结尾。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一、三人称为主来叙述，注意人称的转换，主谓一致；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主，注意表达的顺序，适当使用连词、介词和从句，内容包括所有提示要点，适当增加细节。需要叙述完整、连贯，语言通顺，保证条理清晰。写完以后，注意检查，确保语法、单词拼写、标点符号使用正确。
Writing 6（2021·陕西陇县·二模）
假如你是李华,最近你们学校提供了课后延时服务。根据以下提示，请你用英文写一封信，告诉你的朋友Amy课后延时服务的好处及你的感受。
参考词汇：课后延时服务after-school service
延时服务前
放学后家长忙于工作，学生在家既不做作业也不读书，他们或者看电视，或者玩游戏，直到家长回来。
延时服务后
学生在学校能够及时完成作业，有问题时可以问老师；学生有更多时间从事自己的爱好和锻炼身体；学生有更充足的时间和家长交流。延时服务受到家长和学生的欢迎。
要求:1.参考提示表格，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。）
Dear Amy,
Our school has offered after-school service recently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例文：
Dear Amy,
Recently, our school has offered after-school service. Before the service, parents were busy with their work while the students were alone at home. They neither did their homework nor read books. They either watched TV or played computer games until their parents came back.
Now students can finish their homework in time at school. They can ask the teacher questions when they need. Students have more time to work on their hobbies or sports. They have more time to communicate with their parents. The service is welcomed by both parents and students.
In my opinion, after-school services can be beneficial for our study as well as our school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于信件写作。要求以李华的身份给朋友Amy写一封信，内容是告诉她一些关于课后延时服务带来的变化和好处，文章要按照所给提示中的内容，对比延时服务开展前后的情况变化，从而说明课后延时服务给学生和家长带来的好处，最后表达自己对课后延时服务的感受。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：描述延时服务前的情况时，应用一般过去时，描述延时服务后的情况时，应用一般现在时；描写学生和家长时需用到第三人称，表达自己感受时需用到第一人称。注意格式规范，符合书信语境表达。第二点：内容要包含所有提示，并在这是此基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展，如be busy with…；while；neither…nor…；either…or…等。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
Writing 7（2021·福建海沧·二模）
每个时代都有英雄，他们无私无畏，扛起了国家的重任；每个人身边也有英雄，他们默默无闻，为身边的人带来爱与守护。请以“The hero in my heart”为题，介绍你心目中的英雄。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你心目中的英雄；
2. 你为什么崇拜他（她）？
3. 你能从他（她）身上学到什么？
注意事项：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
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例文：
The hero in my heart
There are lots of famous people in the world and they are like stars in the sky. But the best one in my heart is Liu Xiang. I think he is a real hero.
On a cold morning, while Liu Xiang and I were eating breakfast in a fast food restaurant, an old man went by. He was in rags. He seemed cold and hungry. But he didn’t have money to buy anything to eat. When the old man was leaving, Liu Xiang went to him and gave him a hamburger and some milk. The old man thanked Liu Xiang and Liu Xiang left with a smile. What Liu Xiang did touched me a lot.
Maybe we don’t have much money, but we can still do something to help those in need. If we do so, the world will become more beautiful.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。主要介绍三方面内容：你心目中的英雄是谁；你崇拜他（她）的原因是什么；最后介绍你从他（她）身上学到了什么。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，一般过去时态叙述心目中英雄做过的事情；用一般现在时介绍心目中的英雄及从他身上学到的内容。重点叙述心目中英雄所做事情及从中学到的内容。用词要准确，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。