模板01+记叙文之写人型-备战2022年中考英语书面表达满分作文万能模板

01 记叙文之写人型
中考书面表达中对“人物介绍类”的话题考查还是不少的，且形式比较统一。这类话题作文，通常会在背景材料中给出所写人物的基本信息、兴趣爱好、性格特点等关键词，以及在学习、工作、能力方面的经历等相关信息。大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。来出在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (兴趣和爱好)等，会涉及到人物描写。学生只需认真审题，发生联想，理清思路，就可以轻松应对。
特别注意：
1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。
3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
4.注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:
1.简单介绍人物的概况。一般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。
2从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。
3.对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。
典例赏析：
（2021·湖南湘潭市·中考真题）
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
What does he/she look like?
What is he/she like?
Why do you admire him/her?
参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求：
1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is_______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己最敬佩的人是谁以及为什么值得你敬佩等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
我们针对此，对写人介绍人物进行以下剖析：



模板①
提出愿望
介绍人物的外形特征
介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一个典型的事例
I have made many good friends. （引出人物）is one of them. She is （总体给人的感觉）. She is tall and （身材）. Her hair is （头发）. She always wears （表情）and gives us the impression that （给人的印象）.
is always willing to （性格）. She is good at （特长）. Whenever I have problems I . Once （引出事例）. To my surprise, .
We will , but I hope （表达愿望）.











模板②
人物介绍
（年龄、外貌、身份、性格等）
...is a nine-year-old boy. He is very... and... He is very naughty. And he...
典型事例
（说明性格、品质等）
人物评价
（喜爱、夸赞等情感）
He often... One day he...
...like him very much. I think he...

【写作注意事项】
a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述；
b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一；
c. 在描写人的外貌时，常用一般现在时，人称常用第一人称或第三人称；
d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。
【写作方法】
第一段：人物介绍：引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如：年龄、外貌、身份、性格等；
第二段： 叙述典型事例：通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等；
第三段：对人物的评价：或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等。

关于人物描写的英语素材
一、描写人物外形的常用词汇
难看的 ______________ 高的 ______________ 矮的 ______________
挺直的 ______________ 大的 ______________ 小的 ______________
近视眼的______________ 超重的 ______________ 圆的 ______________
瘦的 ______________ 长的 ______________ 卷发的 ______________
乌黑的 ______________ 金黄色______________ 中等身材 ______________
帅 ______________ 美丽的 ______________ 明亮的 ______________
长得好看 ______________ 不但年轻而且漂亮 __________________________
既不高也不矮 __________________________ 大约40岁 __________________________
足够强壮 __________________________ 一张圆脸 __________________________
一双大眼睛 __________________________ 长的直发 __________________________
【答案】
ugly tall short straight big small
near-sighted overweight round thin long curly
black golden medium height handsome beautiful bright
good looking not only young but also beautiful neither tall nor short
about 40 years old strong enough a round face
a pair of big eyes long straight hair
二、描写人物性格的常用词汇
懒的______________ 善良的______________ 严厉的______________
有耐心的______________ 勇敢的______________ 仔细的______________
粗心的 ______________ 聪明的______________ 有信心的______________
不诚实的______________ 容易相处的，随和的______________ 开心的______________
努力的，勤劳的______________ 助人的，有益的______________ 无助的______________
诚实的______________ 幽默的______________ 活泼的______________
外向的______________ 有礼貌的______________ 受欢迎的______________
安静的______________ 羞涩的______________ 可爱的______________
滑稽的______________
【答案】
lazy kind strict patient brave
careful careless clever confident dishonest
easygoing happy hard-working helpful helpless
honest humorous lively outgoing polite
popular quiet shy lovely funny
三、表示人物间关系的词汇
mother ___________________________________________________________________________________
写出表示职业的词汇：
student ___________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
关系：mother，father，parents，grandfather，grandmother、uncle，aunt，schoolmate，cousin，classmate...
职业：teacher，doctor，nurse，policeman，dentist，cook，artist，scientist，soldier，manager，businessman， journalist，official...
四、表达情感兴趣和爱好的常用词汇
非常喜欢游泳_______________________ 喜爱 _______________________
对画画感兴趣_______________________ 不喜欢下棋 _______________________
喜欢，欣赏音乐 _______________________ 擅长滑冰 _______________________
【答案】
like swimming very much love be interested in drawing
dislike playing chess enjoy listening to music be good at skating
五、描述人物心情的常用词汇
难过的 ______________ 高兴的 ______________ 兴奋的 ______________
高兴的 ______________ 满意的 ______________ 生气的 ______________
担心的 ______________ 失望的 ______________ 恐惧的 ______________
有好的 ______________ 焦虑的 ______________ 好奇的 ______________
急切的 ______________
【答案】
sad happy excited pleased satisfied angry
worried disappointed terrified friendly anxious curious
eager
六、表达感恩的常用词汇
在……方面帮助__________________________ 帮助某人做__________________________
在严格要求某人__________________________ 鼓励某人做__________________________
感谢__________________________ 多亏了 __________________________
【答案】
help sb with... help sb do sth be strict with
encourage sb to do thank for… thanks to
七、常用句型
1. 他名字叫杰克。___________________________________________________________
她叫丽丽。___________________________________________________________
2. 他戴眼镜。___________________________________________________________
3. 苹果是我/他/她最喜爱的水果。
______________________________________________________________________
4. 她1986年12月12日出生于北京。
______________________________________________________________________
5. 他20岁。______________________________________________________________________
6. 他来自英国。______________________________________________________________________
7. 我爸是个好医生。______________________________________________________________________
8. 他身高1.72。______________________________________________________________________
他留短发。______________________________________________________________________
9. 他和我们相处得好。______________________________________________________________________
10. 他教我们英语教得好。___________________________________________________________________
11. 他学习努力。______________________________________________________________________
12. 他在二中工作。______________________________________________________________________
13. 她对我们要求很严格。______________________________________________________________________
14. 他在英语方面经常帮我。
______________________________________________________________________
15. 张老师是个22岁、大眼长发的女孩。
______________________________________________________________________
16. 她不但喜欢唱歌而且喜欢跳舞。
______________________________________________________________________
17. 她是那么的友好和乐于助人以至于我们都很喜欢她。
______________________________________________________________________
18. 在他的帮助下，我在英语方面取得很大进步。
______________________________________________________________________
19. 李明擅长滑冰。______________________________________________________________________
20. 他对打篮球感兴趣。
______________________________________________________________________
21. 他喜欢放学后踢球。
______________________________________________________________________
22. 她经常照顾奶奶。
______________________________________________________________________
23. 我感谢张老师帮助我学英语。
______________________________________________________________________
24. 妈妈经常鼓励我学好英语。
______________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1. His name is Jack. Her Name is Lily. 2. He wears glasses.
3. Apples are my/his/her favorite fruit.
4. She was born in Beijing on December 12, 1986. 5. He is 20 years old。
6. He comes from England. 7. My father is a good doctor.
8. He is about 1.72 meters in height. He has short hair.
9. He gets on well with us. 10. He teaches English very well.
11. He works very hard. 12. He works in No. 2 Middle School.
13. She is strict with us. 14. He often helps me with my English.
15. Miss. Zhang is a 22-year-old girl with big eyes and long hair.
16. She likes not only singing but also dancing.
17. She is very friendly and helpful. So we all like her.
18. With his help, I have made great progress in English.
19. Li Ming is good at skating
20. He is interested in playing basketball
21. He loves playing football after school.
22. She often looks after/ takes care of her grandmother.
23. I thank Miss Zhang for helping me learn English.
24. Mother often encourages me to learn English well.

【篇首句】
1. Once there was a... 从前，有一个……
2. ...was/were born in/into a poor/rich family.
……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. As a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held by...in.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. In the past... years... has impressed me deeply.
在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father.
在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
【篇中句】
1. ...gives us the impression that... ……给我们……印象。
2. ...spend his childhood in...……在……度过了他的童年。
3. I was about to... when... 我正要……，突然，……
4. Hardly had I done... when... /No sooner had I done... than...
我刚……，就……/我一……，就……
5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.
他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt.
他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive.
她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. One day, I ... 有一天，我……
【篇尾句】
1. It turns out to be... 结果是……
2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.
我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
模拟题型链接
1．（2021·山西榆次·一模）
习总书记在2021年新年贺词中提到：“每个人都了不起！”是的，在这个伟大的时代，每个人都应该是了不起的！回顾我们的日常学习和生活，你会发现每个人都有自己的闪光点，从平凡的一件事或一次经历中见证着伟大。这个了不起的人也许是老师、父母、邻居或同学等，也许就是你自己。
请针对以上的叙述，结合生活中的发现，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
●the remarkable (了不起) person in your mind
●an experience you had/ heard/saw
●what you have learned from it
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【范文】
Everyone is great and has his own strengths. In my mind, the most remarkable person is my mother because she has a strong will and never gives up.
Once she had a difficult exam. In order to pass it, she must read four books. But she didn't have much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up at midnight, I found her staying up late to read her books. At that moment, I was moved by her strong will.
My mother always keeps moving forward no matter how difficult it is. I should also be tough and never give up what I want to do.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是材料作文，介绍自己心中了不起的人，接着描述自己的亲身经历，所见或所闻的事情，最后谈谈自己从中学习到的东西。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；段落安排可以按照要点提示给出的顺序；第一段可结合材料引出主题，写出自己心中了不起的人，第二段描写跟他/她相关的事件，第三段描写自己从中学习到的东西。
2．（2021·山西晋中·一模）
今年春节上映了一部贺岁片——《你好，李焕英》，讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。片中妈妈和女儿的故事令观众感动不已，将母爱诠释得恰当好处。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了，但妈妈远比你想象地还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生了很多令你难以忘记的美好的记忆，请结合自己的亲身经历，用英语介绍你的妈妈，并说说你用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
内容包括：
• something about your mother (appearance, personalities, hobbies...)
• an experience you had with your mother
• what you will do to thank her
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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例文
My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. She always has a smile on her face. I love my mother very much.
Maternal love is a kind of selfless power, which is like the spring rain, scattering in our hearts. I still remember it was a summer vacation in Grade 8 when I felt painful in my feet and found that there was a large black area on the surface of my feet. It was bitten by a bug. Without saying anything, my mother sucked out the poison with her mouth. At that moment, I felt a strong feeling of happiness rising from the bottom of my heart. Thanks to my mother, and it took a few days for my foot to fully recover. What a great mother she is!
To thank my mother, I will always listen to my mother and don’t do anything that makes her angry. And I will make every effort to do some housework to help my mother reduce the burden.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你写一篇介绍妈妈的文章，要结合自己的亲身经历详细介绍妈妈的一些信息、和妈妈经历的事情以及你将用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
2. 写作指导：文章应该主要以第三人称展开客观描写，介绍妈妈外貌、性格、爱好等信息时以一般现在时为主，描述一起的经历时以一般过去时为主，表示将用什么实际行动来报答妈妈时以一般将来时为主。整体做到表述到位、条理清晰。
3．（2021·江苏·淮阴中学新城校区一模）
生活中, 我们不能没有朋友。朋友与你一起飞翔，去接受风雨的洗礼，去迎接困难的挑战，去播种美好的希望，去寻觅人生的真谛。请以“My true friend”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的一位朋友。内容要点如下：
1. 他/她的个人信息：姓名，年龄，爱好，外貌，性格等；
2. 列举一个你们共同经历的事例（时间，地点，经过）；
3. 你对他/她的评价和你的愿望。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80词左右，文章的开头给出，不计入总词数。
My true friend
Everyone needs friends.
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例文：
My true friend
Everyone needs friends. Everyone has many friends. But some of them are not true friends. Now I want to introduce a true friend of mine.
Her name is Lucy. She is sixteen years old. She is the same age as me. She has big eyes and long hair. She is outgoing but I am quiet. We both like reading. Because we think reading is a good way to improve our writing level.
I remembered the final exam last term. I failed the English exam because I was too careless. I was so sad that I even lost confidence in learning English. Lucy came to my house every day to help me learn English and told me some jokes to make me happy. With her help, I cheered up slowly.
This is my true friend — Lucy. She is always helpful. She always thinks about others. I hope our friendship will last forever.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己的朋友的情况，包括他/她的个人信息，自己与朋友的共同经历以及对他/她的评价，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4．（2021·江苏·苏州市平江中学校二模）
英雄源于平凡，在新冠病毒(Novel Corona-virus)疫情发生期间涌现出了很多平凡而伟大的英雄，张敏的姑姑就是其中之一。她是一位支持武汉医疗队的护士。假如你是张敏，请根据以下信息及提示，以“My aunt is my hero”为题完成一篇学校“战疫情”主题征文。
基本情况
1.医生，40 多岁，工作 15 年。
2.善良，热心……
具体行动
1.面对危险，主动请战，救治病人。
2.每天工作超过 12 小时，奋战了一个月。
对我的影响
1.姑姑微信(WeChat)告诉我……(自拟1-2 点)
2.我为姑姑感到骄傲，因为……(自拟1-2 点)
要求：
1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3)词数：100 词左右(征文的开头己给出，不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My aunt is my hero
After the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart they are all heroes and my aunt is one of them.
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例文：
After the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart, they are all heroes and my aunt is one of them.
My aunt is a nurse. She is in her forties and has worked in People’s Hospital for fifteen years. My aunt is kind and warm-hearted and she often helps the sick in our community.
After hearing of the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, my aunt offered to join the medical team for Wuhan. She worked hard and carefully. She worked for over twelve hours a day and did whatever she could to help the sick. All her patients believed in her because she not only saved their lives but also gave them hope.
During the stay in Wuhan, my aunt sometimes chatted with me on WeChat. She told me not to worry about her and it was her duty to save lives. She is my hero and I hope to be a great person like her when I grow up.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目是材料类书面表达，根据表格内容提示完成，短文开头已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
2.写作指导：该题目主要使用第三人称，时态主要使用一般过去时；内容包括作者姑姑的基本信息、在武汉的具体工作内容以及对作者的影响，同时保证结构清晰，叙述有条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
5．（2021·广东·广州白云广雅实验学校二模）
三年的初中生活即将结束，我们的点滴成长和进步都离不开家长的悉心照质和支持，老师的辛勤教诲和鼓励，以及其他人对我们的帮助。学校针对毕业班开展了“People I Want to Thank”的英语征文活动。请按照以下表格提示，写一篇英语征文投稿。
感谢谁
父母

老师

(请选择其中一项进行补充)
祖父母，同学，朋友……

为什么
给予我照顾与爱，
直支持我……
耐心教导和鼓励我……
（请你补充）
怎么做
表达你的爱，如
做饭，做家务；
会继续努力学习，
尽力取得更大进步
（请你补充）
参考词汇：取得更大进步：make greater progress
注意：
1、文章必须包含家长、老师以及自选的一位人物的感谢。
2、字数100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3、不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

People I Want to Thank
How time flies! The three year school life is going to end. Here I want to say thank you to those who have helped me.
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【范文】
例文：
People I Want to Thank
How time flies! The three year school life is going to end. Here I want to say thank you to those who have helped me.
First of all, I want to thank my parents who have been supporting me and giving me love and care all the time. I want to show my love to them by cooking meals when I am free or helping them with some housework.
Secondly, I want to say “thank you ”to my English teacher. He teaches us so well. He is humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He always encourages me to speak English as often as I can. My English has greatly improved with his help. I will study hard and try my best to get a good grade.
Last but not least, I want to thank my classmate, John, who has stayed with me all the time and often helped me with my homework. I will write a thank-you card to him and remember him forever.
So many people have helped me whenever I am in need. I will try my best to help those who are in trouble as much as I can.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题要求以“我想要感谢的人们”为标题写一篇英文征文投稿，内容则是要向初中三年里帮助过我们的家长、老师以及一位自选人物表达谢意以及写下愿意为这些人而做的事情。
2. 写作指导：本文应用第一人称来进行写作。写作时应把表格中的内容要点都涉及到，此外还需围绕最后一位自选人物进行自我发挥。为了使文章层次清晰、行文流畅，写作时可将对三位人物的感谢分成三段，最后再用一段总结性段落结束文章，还可以使用连接词，比如First of all，Secondly等。最后在检查时应注意文章是否有遗漏要点，语言是否符合英文表达习惯。

（一）（2021·甘肃兰州·中考真题）
假如你是李华，通过你校外籍教师，你认识了一位英国的新笔友Richard，他很想了解你的一些情况。请你根据下面表格中的信息，给他写一封邮件，向他介绍情况。
Personal information（个人信息）
Personality
outgoing, friendly
Hobby
play basketball, listen to music…
Family
happy, warm…
Dream（梦想）
want to be, be going to…
Friendship （友谊） between you and Richard
learn from each other, visit…
要求：1. 邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数不少于 80，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置。
Dear Richard,
I’m glad to know you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Richard,
I’m glad to know you. I heard that you wanted to know me. Now let me introduce myself to you.
I am outgoing and friendly. I am nice to everyone and always ready to help others. I like playing basketball and listening to music. Basketball helps me strong and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a happy and warm family and we love each other. I want to be a teacher in the future. I am going to study hard and prepare to be a good teacher.
I am glad to be your pen pal and I am sure we can learn a lot from each other. I hope you will visit me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据提示信息，写一封邮件给Richard，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的个人信息和梦想等内容；第三段展望二人的友谊并期待Richard未来可以来参观。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（二）（2021·四川眉山·中考真题）
假定你是李华，请用英语给你的朋友 John 写一封邮件，分享你的兴趣爱好，内容包括：
1.介绍爱好（打篮球）；
2.喜欢的原因（增强体质，结交朋友）；
3.打篮球经历（从小训练，加入校队）；
4.个人的感受（学会合作，……）。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例文：
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
I like sports, especially basketball. Here are some reasons. On one hand, playing basketball is a good way to make me stronger. On the other hand, I can make friends with people who share the same interest. I have been a fan of basketball since I was five years old. I almost practice playing basketball every day and I’m a member of our school team. By playing basketball, I learn how to work with others and try my best to realize my goals.
So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容提示，写一封邮件，分享自己的兴趣，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称和一般现在时为主，介绍自己的兴趣时要包含所有提示要点，并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（三）（2021·内蒙古兴安盟·中考真题）
正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。近期，你们学校的英语报刊以“My guiding star”为题正在征稿，请你积极投稿。
要点：1. Who is your guiding star?
2. What did he/she do?
3. What have you learned from him/her?
4. What are you going to do in the future?
要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯；
3. 词数 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息；
2. 不许抄袭、套改。
My guiding star
The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
My guiding star
The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is Doctor Zhong Nanshan. He is one of the greatest doctors that I respect.
He devoted all of his energy and time to the medical research. For example, during the COVID-19 outbreak, he was so brave that he rushed to the front line and came up with valuable advice of fighting against the virus.
I have learned his spirit, his bravery and his patience. Besides, I have learned that I should value my time and read more books to get more knowledge. From now on, I’m going to study harder and go to my dream university to make my dream come true. Only in this way can I make contributions to our great country.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍相关事迹；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么，以及打算将来如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。
（四）（2021·江苏无锡·中考真题）
今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens英文报特辟了主题为“Who You Admire Most”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。
Actors/Singers/…
Scietists/Doctors/…
●Jackie Chan (Chinese kung fu superstar)
●Date of birth: Apr.7,1954(Hong Kong)
●Achievements: act in mearly 100 films; many awards; many years of charity work; help people in over 30 countries
●Yuan Longping (Father of Hybrid Rice)
●Date of firth: Sept.7, 1930 (Beijing)
●Achievements: develop a new type of hybrid rice (1970s; 20% more per unit); the World Food Prize(2004); save millions of lives
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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例文：
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among whom, Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is the person I admire most. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar. He was born in Hong Kong on Apr. 7th, 1954. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully. So l admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself. He does many years of charity work. He helps people in over 30 countries.
I should learn strong spirits from him.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（五）（2021·湖南怀化·中考真题）
假定你是李华，2022年亚运会将在杭州举行，你想成为一名志愿者，请用英语给组委会写一封信，内容包括：
1. 擅长英语，口语很棒；
2. 性格外向，乐于助人；
3. 爱好运动，了解亚运会等。
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.
Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Secondly, I am an outgoing girl and I’m ready to help others. So I can cooperate with others well. Last but not the least, I like sports. I want to know more about the Asian Games. I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份写一篇申请信，申请成为杭州亚运会的志愿者。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，文中应包括：介绍自己想成为亚运会志愿者的三个理由，应添加一个适当的结尾，如表达自己的期盼以及如果获得这个机会会非常感激等等。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应用一般现在时叙述，人称为第一人称。写作时应根据题目中给出的要点进行适当的拓展，使文章内容更丰富、具体。应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯。
（六）（2021·江苏连云港·中考真题）
我市第八届 “最美港城人”系列评选活动正在进行，你班决定推荐李华参加其类别之一“最美志愿者”的评选。请你以 “The Most Beautiful Volunteer为题，给校英文报写一篇短文介绍李华，内容包括：
（1）品质： 礼貌、善良、有耐心；
（2）事迹：乐于帮助老师和同学；周末参加各类活动，如去街道打扫卫生；另举两例；
（3）你的评价：至少两条。
注意：
（1）词数 90 左右；
（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
The Most Beautiful Volunteer
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参考范文：
The Most Beautiful Volunteer
Li Hua is a polite boy. He is both kind and patient.
He is a helpful volunteer. At school, he is ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, he takes part in lots of activities. He often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, he goes to the library to help carry books. Also, he looks after old people in the nursing home.
We all think Li Hua is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him. We’d like to recommend him for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“最美丽的志愿者”为题，介绍李华的相关事迹。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍他的具体事迹；第三段表达推荐李华参加这个评选的意愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

（七）（2020·广西贵港市·中考真题）
最近我国涌现出了许许多多的英雄人物，社会上掀起一股向英雄学习的热潮。请你根据下面表格提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你心中的英雄。
姓名
李兰娟
出生年月
1947年9月
职业
医生
崇拜她的原因
很勇敢，不害怕病毒；
不担心自己的安全；
她的建议拯救了数以千计的人。
谈谈你的理想
……(不少于2点)

写作要求：
1. 短文必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：virus 病毒
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. Li Lanjuan is a hero in my heart. She is one of the most famous doctors in China. She was born in September,1947. She is very brave and she's not afraid of viruses. Besides, she doesn't worry about her own safety. After the outbreak of the epidemic in 2019, Li Lanjuan and medical staff made great efforts to treat patients. With her knowledge, she gave lots of useful advice on what to do to avoid the virus. Her advice saved thousands of people. She is a good doctor in the eyes of Chinese people respected by the whole country.
I want to be a doctor like Li Lanjuan when I grow up. Li's attitude has had a big influence on me. From her, I have learned that I should study harder and stay confident.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，介绍自己心目中的英雄李兰娟，文中要从她的简介，崇拜的原因以及谈论自己的理想三个方面来写，主要采用第三人称，然后根据写作的内容选用恰当的时态。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语： one of the most famous doctors； be born in；be afraid of；worry about；make great efforts to do；with her knowledge；grow up。
句型：①疑问词+不定式作定语 With her knowledge, she gave lots of useful advice on what to do to avoid the virus.
②过去分词作定语 She is a good doctor in the eyes of Chinese people respected by the whole country.
③时间状语从句 I want to be a doctor like Li Lanjuan when I grow up.
（八）（2020·四川广元市·中考真题）
新冠肺炎疫情使得2020年似乎变得漫长而沉重。但正是在这样一个特殊时期，各行各业涌现出了许多英雄，诸如钟南山(呼吸科专家respiratory expert)，刘仙(志愿者)，吴辉(外卖骑手delivery man)等。他们不畏疫情、不辞辛劳，用自己的默默奉献与坚持温暖了整个社会。在这次疫情中，谁是你心中的英雄呢？请以Hero in My Heart为题，描述你心目中的英雄。
要点：
1、介绍你心目中的英雄。
2、你为什么崇拜他(她)？
3、你能从他(她)身上学到什么？
注意：
1、包含以上要点，文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。
2、词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入词数。
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against the novel coronavirus, we have been moved by so many people ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against the novel coronavirus, we have been moved by so many people, such as the respiratory experts, volunteers, the delivery men and so on. Among them, the security guard in my community is the hero in my heart.
He kept working on his post without complaining anything. When we were stuck at home, he stayed at the gate of the community day and night. He not only took our temperature, but also recorded the information of each visitor. He risked his own life for our safety and made contributions to keeping the virus from spreading.
His spirit of dedication has influenced me a lot. It is his strong sense of responsibility that moved me. His efforts always remind me to treasure the peaceful life that we are living now. When I grow up, I will spare no effort to help people around me.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述你心目中的英雄、自己崇拜他的原因以及从他身上学到的东西。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态和一般现在时态来写作。介绍自己崇拜那位英雄的原因叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：such as；kept working；were stuck at home；day and night；took our temperature；risked his own life；made contributions to；keeping the virus from spreading；remind me to；grow up；spare no effort to。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；it is…that…表示强调的句型；and表示并列的句子；that引导的定语从句。