河北省高考英语作文分类训练:建议信
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这是一份河北省高考英语作文分类训练:建议信,共18页。试卷主要包含了你校将举办英语演讲比赛等内容,欢迎下载使用。
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2.赞赏该报的优点;
3.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editr-in-Chief,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
2.假定你是某国际学校校广播合Teen Time英语节目的主持人李华,学生Laura写信给你,抱怨父母管理太严格,从不同意她在空闲时间里与朋友们出门,这让她感到十分苦闷。请你给她回信,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.你的建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Laura,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华, 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者, 写信向你询问相关情况, 请你用英语给他写一封回信, 内容包括:
1. 个人感悟;
2. 如何准备;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.假设你叫李华,你的朋友Jhn沉迷于抖音不能自拔,写信向你寻求帮助,请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1. 表示理解和关心;2. 沉迷抖音的影响;3. 提出具体建议。
要求:1. 词数100字左右;2. 可以适当增加细节;3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jhn,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
5.假定你是李华,北京冬奥会即将来临,你的外国朋友Clark想到北京观看奥运,邮件里向你询问北京的旅游攻略,你回邮件给他,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提出建议;
3.美好祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Clark,
Hw are yu?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
6.假定你是李华,当今网络已经把世界变成了真正的“全球村”,请你给某报社写一封信,就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1.网络对教育的影响(利与弊);
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
7.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友 Peter 来信说,他即将参加汉语水平考试(Chinese Prficiency Test),对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件,内容包括:
1.表达关切;
2.备考建议;
3.你的祝愿
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可适当加细节以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.假定你是李华,你非常喜欢去学校图书馆看书。尽管那里的服务和读书氛围不错,你还是想给学校提几点建议。
内容包括:
1.延长夜晚开放时间;2. 丰富书籍的类型;3. 组织书友会。
注意:
1. 写作词数为80字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:延长prlng 书友会bk club
Dear Sir/Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
9.你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Hw t express yur thanks”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 分析现状;
2. 建议几种感激方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hw t express yur thanks
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
1.参加中文学习班;
2.看中文书刊、电视;
3.学唱中文歌曲;
4.交中国朋友。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.Dear Editr-in-Chief,
Cngratulatins n the 10th anniversary f Yuth! Tm a regular reader f yur newspaper. I like it s much that I hardly miss any cpy.
There are many advantages f Yuth. Firstly, Yuth cvers bth natinal and internatinal news. By simply turning the pages, I can knw all imprtant things that have happened bth hme and abrad. Besides, the success stries f wrld-famus peple are als attractive t me, helping me learn a lt frm them. In a wrd, thanks t Yuth, we are well-infrmed and keep up with the changing wrld.
As a yung student, I always be a master f English language. Therefre, I suggest Yuth prvide articles abut English learning fr us t be a master f English.
Finally, I hpe that Yuth will becme mre and mre ppular. Thank yu fr yur time!
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所喜爱的校报Yuth创刊10周年之际征集读者意见。请考生给主编写封信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
喜欢:like→be fnd f
此外:besides → what’s mre
总之:in a wrd→ in shrt
重要的:imprtant→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, the success stries f wrld-famus peple are als attractive t me, helping me learn a lt frm them.
拓展句:Besides, the success stries f wrld-famus peple are als attractive t me, which help me learn a lt frm them.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]By simply turning the pages, I can knw all imprtant things that have happened bth hme and abrad.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Finally, I hpe that Yuth will becme mre and mre ppular.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.Dear Laura,
It’s sad t hear that yur parents are s strict with yu. But it’s a very cmmn phenmenn s yu shuldn’t wrry t much abut it. My advice is as fllws.
First, try t put yurself in their shes. What they ask abut is reasnable because they wrry abut yu. S dn’t get angry with them. Then, why nt sit dwn and have a talk with them peacefully s that yu are able t cmmunicate with each ther? Last but nt least, find sme cnvincing reasns, which may help yu persuade them t give yu sme privacy. I’m sure they will agree with yu if yu can ensure yur security.
Hpe my advice is wrth taking and yu can reach a pleasant agreement.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Laura写一封回信,就父母对她管理太严格表示安慰,提出自己的建议并表达祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestin
因为:because→in that
令人信服的:cnvincing→cmpelling
确保:ensure→guarantee
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s sad t hear that yur parents are s strict with yu. But it’s a very cmmn phenmenn s yu shuldn’t wrry t much abut it.
拓展句:It’s a very cmmn phenmenn that parents are strict with their children, s yu shuldn’t wrry t much abut it.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What they ask abut is reasnable because they wrry abut yu. (运用了what引导的主语从句和because引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but nt least, find sme cnvincing reasns, which may help yu persuade them t give yu sme privacy. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear David,
I am delighted t learn that yu wuld like t be a vlunteer in the next Winter Olympics. And I’d like t share with yu my experience as a vlunteer fr the Beijing Winter Olympics and ffer yu sme practical advice.
Firstly, I have t say that it is the mst exciting and meaningful experience fr me t be a vlunteer fr the Beijing Winter Olympics. And it has a prfund and significant influence n my life. Hnestly, I nce made full preparatins fr it. I had t learn all the jb duties, mastered at least ne freign language, and mst imprtantly, be willing t devte all my time t serving athletes with great patience and kindness.
I think that if yu culd d these, yu will certainly becme a qualified vlunteer.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华, 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者, 写信向你询问相关情况, 请你用英语给他写一封回信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
开心的:delighted → pleased
提供:ffer → prvide
重大的:significant → remarkable
影响:influence → effect
掌握:master → pssess
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:And I’d like t share with yu my experience as a vlunteer fr the Beijing Winter Olympics and ffer yu sme practical advice.
拓展句:And I’d like t share with yu my experience in the Beijing Winter Olympics when I wrked as a vlunteer and ffer yu sme practical advice.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am delighted t learn that yu wuld like t be a vlunteer in the next Winter Olympics.(that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I think that if yu culd d these, yu will certainly becme a qualified vlunteer.(that引起宾语从句;if引起条件状语从句)
4.Dear Jhn,
Glad t receive yur letter. I hear that yu have been bsessed with TikTk recently, and I am srry fr that.
First f all, I can understand yur md. TikTk is the httest shrt vide platfrm at the mment. There are many interesting vide recrds n it, and many peple are using it. But n the ther hand, the dangers f indulging in TikTk fr a lng time are bvius. If yu dn’t cntain yurself and plan yur time unreasnably, yu will inevitably waste a lt f yur time and make it difficult t cncentrate and yur learning will als be greatly affected.
I suggest yu balance yur study and entertainment, and plan yur time in a reasnable and balanced manner. Only in this way can we enjy the fun f shrt vides withut affecting ur study and life.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷抖音不能自拔的好友Jhn写信提供帮助。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
沉迷于:be bsessed with→be addicted t
明显的:bvius→evident
不可避免地:inevitably→undeniably
影响:affect→influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First f all, I can understand yur md. TikTk is the httest shrt vide platfrm at the mment.
拓展句:First f all, I can understand yur md, because TikTk is the httest shrt vide platfrm at the mment.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]If yu dn’t cntain yurself and plan yur time unreasnably, yu will inevitably waste a lt f yur time and make it difficult t cncentrate and yur learn will als be greatly affected.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]Only in this way can we enjy the fun f shrt vides withut affecting ur study and life.(运用了倒装结构)
5.Dear Clark,
Hw are yu? I’m happy that yu are cming t Beijing fr the 2022 Winter Olympics. Here are sme tips.
First f all, bk yur air tickets and yur accmmdatin in advance. The Olympics is a big event, s many peple will fld in Beijing. As fr yur travel plan, the Palace Museum and the Frbidden City surely can’t be missed, fr yu are int histry. Besides, yu can g t the Li Yuan Theater t enjy the Beijing Opera. And yu will be able t taste Beijing Rast Duck and ther delicius fd.
Wish yu a happy jurney in China.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,北京冬奥会即将来临,你的外国朋友Clark想到北京观看奥运,邮件里向你询问北京的旅游攻略,你回邮件给他。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→glad
建议:tip→advice
美味的:delicius→tasty
此外:besides→in additin
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:The Olympics is a big event, s many peple will fld in Beijing.
拓展句:Many peple will fld in Beijing because the Olympics is a big event.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m happy that yu are cming t Beijing fr the 2022 Winter Olympics. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As fr yur travel plan, the Palace Museum and the Frbidden City surely can’t be missed, fr yu are int histry. (运用了并列连词fr连接两个分句)
6.Dear Sir/ Madam,
The Internet has transfrmed the wrld int a glbal village, altering all aspects f ur life, especially educatin. Here, I am writing t share my thughts n its psitive effect as well as negative ne.
The mst bvius advantage lies in the wide chice f curses. Learners can have access t the curses tailred fr persnal needs regardless f time and space. As a result, learning ccurs in such an efficient way that gaining knwledge is easier than ever. The dwnside is just as nticeable. Alng with individualized curses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the yung minds where self-cntrl and judging pwer are still frming.
Therefre, I strngly suggest that the use f the Internet shuld be under supervisin f adults. And parents and teachers shuld prvide guidance t ensure it best serves the mental and physical grwth f the teens.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某报社写一封信,就“网络对教育的影响”谈谈考生的看法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
转换:transfrm → turn
积极的:psitive→ active
困惑:puzzle→ cnfuse
建议:suggest→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Internet has transfrmed the wrld int a glbal village, altering all aspects f ur life, especially educatin.
拓展句:The Internet has transfrmed the wrld int a glbal village, which is altering all aspects f ur life, especially educatin.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Alng with individualized curses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the yung minds where self-cntrl and judging pwer are still frming.(运用了关系代词that、关系副词where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefre, I strngly suggest that the use f the Internet shuld be under supervisin f adults.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
7.Dear Peter,
I'm s delighted t receive yur letter, knwing yu are nervus abut taking the Chinese Prficiency Test sn.
T relieve yur pressure, here are my tips abut hw t prepare fr the test mre efficiently.
First,yu can read ludly even recite the fantastic cmpsitins frm hme and abrad. What's mre, yu can find warm-hearted Chinese peple t help yu practise listening skills. Finally, n the eve f the test, yu shuld have a gd sleep, s that yu will have enugh energy fr the test.
I d expect the abve tips are beneficial t yur test. Wish yu gd luck!
Kindest regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,你的美国笔友 Peter 来信说,他即将参加汉语水平考试(Chinese Prficiency Test),对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件,内容包括:1.表达关切;2.备考建议;3.你的祝愿
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴地: pleased →delighted
焦虑的:be anxius abut→ be nervus abut
有益的:helpful→ beneficial
准备:make preparatin fr→ prepare fr
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Finally, n the eve f the test, yu shuld have a gd sleep, s that yu will have enugh energy fr the test.
拓展句:Finally, n the eve f the test, yu shuld have a gd sleep, which will make yu have enugh energy fr the test.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm s delighted t receive yur letter, knwing yu are nervus abut taking the Chinese Prficiency Test sn.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] T relieve yur pressure, here are my tips abut hw t prepare fr the test mre efficiently.(运用了here引导的倒装句)
8.Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li hua, a regular visitr t the schl library. While the service here is quite satisfying, I’d like t give sme suggestins.
T begin with, please prlng the time fr reading at night because mst f the students are busy with their study in the daytime, making it difficult fr us t spare time t enjy extensive reading in the library. What’s mre, we will be mre than happy t see an increase in the variety f bks in stre. Last but nt the least, I think it necessary t set up a bk club where we can exchange ideas n what we read.
I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd take my advice int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校图书馆提几点建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
令人满意:cntent →satisfying
建议:advice →suggestin
首先:Firstly →T begin with
除此而外:Besides= What’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Li hua, a regular visitr t the schl library.
拓展句:I am Li hua, wh is a regular visitr t the schl library.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] T begin with, please prlng the time fr reading at night because mst f the students are busy with their study in the daytime, making it difficult fr us t spare time t enjy extensive reading in the library.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
[高分句型2] I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd take my advice int cnsideratin.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的宾语从句。
9.Hw t express yur thanks
Yu may feel grateful t peple wh have helped yu selflessly. Hwever, it may nt always be easy t ex press that. Here are tw simple ways.
First, fr yur lved nes, give them meaningful gifts. Fr example, if yur friend has her favrite writer invite her t a reading club t see the authr r get her the signed editin. Then, fr strangers, yu can smile at a persn wh is walking dwn the street because just a simple smile can make a persn feel appreciated Expressing appreciatin will make us lead a happy and fulfill life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“Hw t express yur thanks”为题写一篇演讲稿参加英语演讲比赛。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
感激的:grateful→thankful
有意义的:meaningful→significant
例如:fr example→fr instance
过的生活:lead →live
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, fr yur lved nes, give them meaningful gifts.
拓展句:First, give thse wh yu lve meaningful gifts.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Yu may feel grateful t peple wh have helped yu selflessly.(运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then, fr strangers, yu can smile at a persn wh is walking dwn the street because just a simple smile can make a persn feel appreciated (运用了wh引导的定语从句)
10.One pssible versin:
Dear Peter.
I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestins.
First, it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse, as yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students. Then, it als helps t watch Chinese TV prgrams and read bks, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.
Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs, because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily. Yu can als make mre Chinese friends. They will help yu learn Chinese
Try and write t me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信,就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad →happy
建议:advice →suggestin
学习:learn → study
此外:Besides =Mrever
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse, as yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students.
拓展句:First, the reasn why it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse is that yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then, it als helps t watch Chinese TV prgrams and read bks, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible. (运用了不定式作主语)
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