河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李华，你班将举行主题为“我最喜爱的运动”的演讲。请你根据提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点包括：

1. 形式；

2. 原因；

3. 建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信说他在学习汉语时不敢开口交流。请你写一 封回信，内容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.提出建议；

3.表达希望。

注意：

1,写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假设你是李华，澳大利亚交换生Andy寒假后将要来你班学习半年。他在来信中表达了如下担心：1.不适应新的生活环境；2.语言障碍会影响学习；3.不能融入到新的集体。请你就以上内容写一封回信，并提出一些建议。

注意：词数100左右。可以根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Andy,

I'm very glad that you'll come to spend half a year with us.

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Li Hua

4．假如你叫李华，新学期开学近四个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受，交流内容要求包括以下要点：

1、校园环境和教学设施；

2、师生给你的印象；

3、给学校的两点建议。

注意：1、词数100词左右；

2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入词数；

3、内容可适当发挥, 要注意行文连贯。

Hello, everyone,

I'm honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past three months……

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Thank you!

5．假定你是李华，你的好友Kate上高中以后在高中生活和学习上存在着一些困难，请根据以下提示给她写封建议信。内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.具体建议；3.祝福。

注意：1.次数100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助，请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。

1. 制定复习计划，树立信心；

2. 坚持锻炼身体；

3. 保持良好的睡眠。

注意:1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack

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Yours，

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华,请你给某英文报社编辑就“中学生健康饮食”这一话题写封信。内容包括:

1.自我介绍;

2.健康饮食的重要性;

3.建议中学生远离垃圾食品。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你所在学校刚刚成立美式橄榄球队，请你给你校美国留学生 Ted写信，邀请他参加并就你们球队训练给一些建议，要点如下：

1.球队情况介绍；

2.球队训练时间、地点：

3.希望他参加并给一些建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ted.

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你校外教Colin将于近期返回美国，打算给朋友带一些有中国特色的礼物。他通过电子邮件向你征求意见。请根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件回复，给出建议并说明理由。

要点：

（1）茶文化在中国历史悠久，至今茶仍为最受欢迎的饮品之一；

（2）中国茶有绿茶、红茶等多个品种可供选择；

（3）饮茶有益健康，放松身心；

（4）希望所提建议有所帮助。

参考词汇：红茶black tea

注意：

（1）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，

（2）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Colin,

How is everything going?

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Thank you very much for your teaching and wish you a good trip!

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友Alvin最近因不适应新学校紧张的生活而烦恼。请你就此给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示深有同感

2.表达安慰

3.给出一些建议（好的心态；积极面对；与老师同学多交流……）

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Alvin,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear classmates,

My favorite sports is swimming. When I was a child, I used to swim in the river near my hometown accompanied by my father in hot summer days. Staying in the river could make me feel cool. What’s more, swimming could make me strong and healthy, for I seldom caught a cold. Since I grow up. I of ten swim at the swimming pool. It can also make me relaxed. However, there are still some potential dangers ahead. For example, try not to swim alone, for we might drown. In addition, don’t swim where the water is too deep.

That’s all! Thank you!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于“我最喜爱的运动”的演讲稿。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 形式；

2. 原因；

3. 建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

used to swim; accompanied by; make me strong and healthy; make me relaxed; potential dangers

第三步：连词成句

1.When I was a child, I used to swim in the river near my hometown accompanied by my father in hot summer days.

2. Staying in the river could make me feel cool.

3. What’s more, swimming could make me strong and healthy, for I seldom caught a cold.

4. In addition, don’t swim where the water is too deep.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：What is more, In addition

2.表因果关系：Because, For

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was a child, I used to swim in the river near my hometown accompanied by my father in hot summer days.（when引导时间状语从句）

[高分句型2] What’s more, swimming could make me strong and healthy, for I seldom caught a cold.（动名词作主语）

2．Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear from you. I understand you’re under pressure to communicate in Chinese. I’d like to give you some advice about it.

First, it’s a good choice to make Chinese friends online and talk with them as much as possible on some topics. Besides, you can join a local Chinese club, which will provide you with more face-to-face chances to practise spoken Chinese.

I hope through your efforts you’ll make much progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就英国朋友Peter来信说他在学习汉语时不敢开口交流这件事给他回信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表示理解；

2.提出建议；

3.表达希望。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

hear from; under pressure; communicate in Chinese; give some advice about; a good choice to; make Chinese friends online; join a local Chinese club; provide with; practise spoken Chinese; make much progress

第三步：连词成句

1. I understand you’re under pressure to communicate in Chinese.

2. First, it’s a good choice to make Chinese friends online and talk with them as much as possible on some topics.

3. Besides, you can join a local Chinese club, which will provide you with more face-to-face chances to practise spoken Chinese.

4. I hope through your efforts you’ll make much progress.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First

2.表并列补充关系：Besides, and

3.表转折对比关系：However, but（供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus（供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] I understand you’re under pressure to communicate in Chinese.（省略that的宾语从句，做understand的宾语）

[高分句型2] First, it’s a good choice to make Chinese friends online and talk with them as much as possible on some topics.（it做形式主语的句型，真正的主语为动词不定式）

[高分句型3] Besides, you can join a local Chinese club, which will provide you with more face-to-face chances to practise spoken Chinese.（which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词club）

3．Dear Andy，

     I'm very glad that you'll come to spend half a year with us.

     Our school has arranged accommodation for all the exchange students．You'll live in an apartment on the campus and western food is provided in one of the school cafeterias．Most previous exchange students can adapt to life here pretty soon．

     Chinese classes have been planned twice a week for students like you．Besides，some students  in the class speak good English．Language will not be a barrier but a good opportunity for you to improve your learning as well as make new friends．

     All the students and teachers here are very friendly．Take an active part in classroom discussions，sports and after-class activities，and you are sure to fit in soon．

     Looking forward to your coming．

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给寒假后将要来你班学习半年澳大利亚交换生Andy写一封回信，解决她对学习生活的担忧。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

对于下列几点的担忧1.不适应新的生活环境；2.语言障碍会影响学习；3.不能融入到新的集体提一些建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

spend time with sb；arrange sth for sb；adapt to；take an active part in；fit in; as well as; make new friends

第三步：连词成句

1..Our school has arranged accommodation for all the exchange students．

2.You'll live in an apartment on the campus and western food is provided in one of the school cafeterias．

3.Most previous exchange students can adapt to life here pretty soon．

4.Take an active part in classroom discussions，sports and after-class activities，and you are sure to fit in soon．

5.     Looking forward to your coming．

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：Besides,as well as

2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]：Language will not be a barrier but a good opportunity for you to improve your learning as well as make new friends．（这句话运用了not……but句型和不定式作后置定语）

[高分句型2]：Take an active part in classroom discussions，sports and after-class activities，and you are sure to fit in soon．（这句话运用了祈使句）

4．Hello, everyone,

I'm honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past three months.

Our school is very beautiful. There's advanced equipment in the classroom and it helps our teachers make their classes lively and interesting. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them. Fortunately, my teachers and classmates are all friendly and enthusiastic. I have already made several new friends here.

However, the food in the cafeteria is very poor and I hope it can get improved. Besides, we have much homework every day. How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise!

Thank you!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写篇短文，交流到新学校后的感受。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1、校园环境和教学设施；

2、师生给你的印象；

3、给学校的两点建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

beautiful; advanced equipment; lively and interesting; excellent and diligent; keep up with; friendly and enthusiastic; make new friends; cafeteria; get improved; physical exercise!

第三步：连词成句

1. Our school is very beautiful.

2. There's advanced equipment in the classroom and it helps our teachers make their classes lively and interesting.

3. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them.

4. Fortunately, my teachers and classmates are all friendly and enthusiastic.

5. I have already made several new friends here.

6. However, the food in the cafeteria is very poor and I hope it can get improved.

7. Besides, we have much homework every day.

8. How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：Besides

2.表转折对比关系：However, so…that…

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them. (运用了结果状语从句)

[高分句型2] How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise! (运用了虚拟语气)

5．Dear Kate,

I am glad to hear from you, but sorry to know that you have trouble in adapting to your senior school life. I’m writing to give you some tips according to my experience.

First of all, be independent. After being admitted to high school, your life and study have changed a lot. When meeting difficulties, you had better solve them on your own. Next, get along well with new friends. My secret is to treat them sincerely and help them when they are in need. In this way, you will soon make true friends. Lastly, seek help if necessary. To deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style, in my view, it is helpful to turn to teachers for help.

Follow my suggestions above and I’m sure your situation will improve soon.

                       Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Kate写信，对他上高中以后在高中生活和学习上存在着的一些困难提些建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表示慰问；

2.具体建议；

3.祝福。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

have trouble in; adapt to; according to; be independent; be admitted to; on one’s own; get along well with; in this way; seek help; deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style; in my view; turn to sb. for help; follow my suggestions

第三步：连词成句

1.I am glad to hear from you, but sorry to know that you have trouble in adapting to your senior school life.

2.I'm writing to give you some tips according to my experience.

3.After being admitted to high school, your life and study have changed a lot.

4.When meeting difficulties, you had better solve them on your own.

5.Next, get along well with new friends.

6.In this way, you will soon make true friends.

7.Lastly, seek help if necessary.

8.To deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style, in my view, it is helpful to turn to teachers for help.

9.Follow my suggestions above and I’m sure your situation will improve soon.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Next, Lastly

2.表并列补充关系（供参考）：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including

3.表转折对比关系（供参考）：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系（供参考）：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]After being admitted to high school, your life and study have changed a lot.(after引导的时间状语从句省略句)

[高分句型2]When meeting difficulties, you had better solve them on your own.(when引导的时间状语从句省略，had better作为情态动词，短语on your own)

[高分句型3]To deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style, in my view, it is helpful to turn to teachers for help.(to引导的目的状语，it作形式主语)

6．Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I’d like you to give you some advice.

First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second, take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not the least, don’t stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Jack写封信，他正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此向他提出一些建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 制定复习计划，树立信心；

2. 坚持锻炼身体；

3. 保持良好的睡眠。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

nervous; advice; make careful plans; master; build up; confidence; take proper exercise regularly; keep healthy and energetic; stay up late; have a good sleep; suggestion

第三步：连词成句

1. I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam.

2. I’d like you to give you some advice.

3. First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely.

4. It will help you build up your confidence.

5.Second, take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic.

6. Last but not the least, don’t stay up late studying.

7. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

8. I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表文章结构顺序： First, Second, Last but not the least

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Second, take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student.As we all know, healthy eating habits are very important for our health.We should eat fresh vegetables and fruit every day.They supply rich and necessary vitamins to us.We also should eat a little bit meat every day.Only in this way can we assure us of getting the necessary nutrition and a balanced diet. Besides, we are in the period of growing, so we need more healthy diets. As for junk food, personally, I love it, but because junk food is a health killer, we should have it as little as possible.

Finally, I sincerely wish everyone good health.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某英文报社编辑就“中学生健康饮食”这一话题写封信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 自我介绍；

2. 健康饮食的重要性;

3. 建议中学生远离垃圾食品。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be very important for; supply sth to sb; fresh vegetables and fruit ; assure sb of doing sth; a little bit meat ; have a balanced diet; in the period of; healthy diets; junk food; a health killer

第三步：连词成句

1. As we all know, healthy eating habits are very important for our health.

2. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruit every day.

3. They supply rich and necessary vitamins to us.

4. We also should eat a little bit meat every day.

5. Only in this way can we assure us of getting the necessary nutrition and a balanced diet.

6. We are in the period of growing, so we need more healthy diets.

7. As for junk food, personally, I love it, but because junk food is a health killer, we should have it as little as possible.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系： Besides, also, and

2.表因果关系：Because, As, So

3.表转折对比关系：but

4. 表文章结构顺序：Finally

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, healthy eating habits are very important for our health.（as引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] Only in this way can we assure us of getting the necessary nutrition and a balanced diet.（由only引导的部分倒装）

8．One possible version:

Dear Ted,

I am Li Hua, a student from the school youare studying in. Ourschool has just organized ourown soccer team. As it is the first time that we have tried it, we are lacking in experience. I learned that you come from America and you are good at it. I am writing to ask if you could joinand give ussome advice. We practice every Saturday afternoon from two to six on the school playground.

Looking forward to your early reply. (83)

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校美国留学生 Ted写信，邀请他参加学校刚刚成立的美式橄榄球队并就你们球队的训练给一些建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。

结构：总-分-总法

要点：

1.球队情况介绍；

2.球队训练时间、地点：

3.希望他参加并给一些建议。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

soccer team；the first time that；lack in；come from；be good at；school playground；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am Li Hua, a student from the school you are studying in.

2. Our school has just organized our own soccer team.

3. As it is the first time that we have tried it, we are lacking in experience.

4. I learned that you come from America and you are good at it.

5. I am writing to ask if you could join and give us some advice.

6. We practice every Saturday afternoon from two to six on the school playground.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：and；What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore，In addition（供参考）

2.表转折对比关系：However，but（供参考）

3.表因果关系：As；

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am Li Hua, a student from the school you are studying in.（使用了同位语和省略了that的定语从句）

[高分句型2] As it is the first time that we have tried it, we are lacking in experience.（使用了由as引导的状语从句）

[高分句型3] I learned that you come from America and you are good at it.（使用了由that引导的宾语从句和and连接的并列句）

9．Dear Colin,

How is everything going? In your e-mail, you said you want to take some Chinese presents back to America,and I’d like to give you some advice. I think tea would be your best choice.

As you know, the Chinese tea culture has a long history. Until today, tea still enjoys great popularity in China. There are varieties of tea you can choose from, such as green tea and black tea. They are believed to be healthy and a cup of tea will make you refreshed. I hope my suggestion can be of some help.

Thank you very much for your teaching and wish you a good trip!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求你向外教Colin建议可以带给朋友的有中国特色的礼物。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1．介绍茶文化在中国历史悠久，和可供选择的品种；2.饮茶有益健康，放松身心；3.希望所提建议有所帮助。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

give you some advice;As you know;enjoys great popularity;varieties of ;such as;make you refreshed;be of some help.

第三步：连词成句

1.As you know, the Chinese tea culture has a long history.

2.Until today, tea still enjoys great popularity in China.

3.There are varieties of tea you can choose from, such as green tea and black tea.

4.They are believed to be healthy and a cup of tea will make you refreshed.

5.I hope my suggestion can be of some help.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, secondly, thirdly;

2.表并列补充关系：Besides, And, Moreover;

3.表转折对比关系：However, though, although, yet;

4.表因果关系：So.

【点睛】[高分句型1]As you know, the Chinese tea culture has a long history. 你知道，中国茶文化有着悠久的历史。（定语从句的运用）

[高分句型2]I hope my suggestion can be of some help. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。（宾语从句的运用）

10．Dear Alvin,

I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been upset recently. Actually, I have the same feeling. I think it’s normal for every teenager to feel worried when facing the stressful life in a new school.

I hope the following tips will be helpful to you. First of all, as we know, a good attitude determines a good life. So keep calm, actively solve each problem and greet each day with joy. Secondly, if the problem is unsolvable, you can turn to your classmates or consult your teachers. Finally, I believe you’ll adapt yourself to the new school life soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国留学生朋友Alvin写封邮件，他最近因不适应新学校紧张的生活而烦恼，在信中就此给他提一些建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时, 少量现在完成时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表示深有同感

2.表达安慰

3.给出一些建议（好的心态；积极面对；与老师同学多交流……）

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be upset; normal; feel worried; stressful; helpful; a good attitude; keep calm; turn to; adapt oneself to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been upset recently.

2.I think it’s normal for every teenager to feel worried when facing the stressful life in a new school.

3.I hope the following tips will be helpful to you.

4. A good attitude determines a good life.

5.So keep calm, actively solve each problem and greet each day with joy.

6.If the problem is unsolvable, you can turn to your classmates or consult your teachers.

7.I believe you’ll adapt yourself to the new school life soon.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Finally

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I think it’s normal for every teenager to feel worried when facing the stressful life in a new school.( think后跟宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；it作形式主语)

[高分句型2]

Secondly, if the problem is unsolvable, you can turn to your classmates or consult your teachers. (if 引导的条件状语从句)