河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你校最近发起了针对全球污染问题的宣传活动。请你在校报的英语专栏写一封公开信,给同学们提出建议，内容包括:

1.海洋里的垃圾越来越多；

2.空气污染严重;；

3.解决方法及建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．近期“公筷行动”公益广告每天在央视频道黄金时间播出。为了号召大家用餐使用公筷，请你以学生会名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上。内容要点如下:

1.“公筷行动”简介；2.你的建议或想法。

注意:1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear teachers and students,

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Student Union

3．假定你是李华，你与外教David约定于本周六一起游唐山南湖公园，但因故不能赴约。 请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.解释原因；

3.另约时间。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，请你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括

1．你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；

2．由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；    

3．表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意：1.词数不少手l 00字。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

How is everything going？

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华,是你校英文报Teens’ Life的编辑。近日收到Ralph同学的求助信。 他无法适应学校的网课,注意力不集中,跟不上老师的节奏,视力也受到了影响,因而感到忧虑。请你用英文给他回一封建议信。要点如下:

1.表示理解;

2.提出建议;

3.表达祝愿。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:网课online classes

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6．假定你是李华，你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助，内容包括：

1.介绍活动内容；

2.请他推荐英文书；

3.请教如何写读书笔记。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Alex,

I'm writing to ask for your help.

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是高一学生李华，你的表弟小明也是一名高一学生，但是他觉得不太适应高一的学习生活，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；

2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：

3. 其它方面。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m delighted to hear from you.

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8．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习，他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难．请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：

(1)大胆自信； (2)放慢语速； (3)借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。

注意： (1)字数80左右；  (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours，

Li Hua

9．你班每周三的英语课前有一个三分钟演讲活动，请你为下周的演讲写一篇演讲稿，谈一谈良好生活习惯的养成。内容如下：

1.现状分析；

2.你的建议；

3.表达希望。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom来信说，因为学习忙、锻炼少，他最近经常生病，这影响了他的学习，请你给他写一封信，要点包括：

1. 锻炼的重要性；

2. 锻炼有利于学习；

3. 提出锻炼的建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

1．范文

Dear friends，

As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean. Besides, air pollution is still serious.

In my view, we should take action to reduce pollution. Firstly, laws must be made to forbid people from throwing rub-bish at will, which may help the ocean become clean soon. What's more, we should plant more trees to get more fresh air. Last but not least, we should increase the awareness of protecting the environment. Only by doing so can pollution problems be paid enough attention to.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封公开信，针对全球污染问题给同学们提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

严重的：serious→severe

禁止：forbid→ban

随意地：at will=at liberty

保护：protect→preserve

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean. Besides, air pollution is still serious.

拓展句：As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean, with air pollution still serious.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, laws must be made to forbid people from throwing rubbish at will, which may help the ocean become clean soon. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Only by doing so can pollution problems be paid enough attention to. (运用了部分倒装)

2．Dear teachers and students,

As we see, a public service advertisement is being aired on CCTV every day recently, which is about advocating the use of public chopsticks to avoid using one’s own chopsticks to pick food from the same dishes. It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading.

For the sake of our health and safety, I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when we dine together with others. So let's start taking action right away!

Student Union

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上，简单介绍“公筷行动”，号召大家用餐使用公筷。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

被播出：be broadcast→ be aired on

阻止：stop from→ prevent from

为了：for purpose of→ for the sake of

立刻：immediately→ right away

2.句式拓展

主语从句变强调句

原句： It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading.

拓展句： It is in this way that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As we see, a public service advertisement is being aired on CCTV every day recently, which is about advocating the use of public chopsticks to avoid using one’s own chopsticks to pick food from the same dishes. （运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading.（运用了由that引导的主语从句）

[高分句型3] For the sake of our health and safety, I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when we dine together with others. （运用了省略了引导词that引导的宾语从句作think的宾语，和由it作形式主语，以及由when连接的时间状语从句）

3．Dear David,

I’m sorry I can’t go to Tangshan Nanhu Central Park with you this Saturday. My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning. I have tried to find an alternative person to do it, but no other person is available.

Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning? Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教David写一封邮件，告知他因故不能赴本周六一起游唐山南湖公园的约定。

【详解】1.词汇积累

打电话：phone→call

合适的：suitable→appropriate

建议：suggestion→advice

要求：ask→require

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning.

拓展句：My uncle phoned to ask me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning? (运用了“shall we do”句型表示委婉的建议)

[高分句型2] Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)

4．One possible version:

Dear Chris,

How is everything going？

I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go with you as planned.

This is due to an accident last night. On my way back home, I fell off my bike all of a sudden and one of my feet was badly hurt.According to the doctor’s advice, it will take me around half a month to recover. But ,I sincerely hope to spend the vacation with you. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?

Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hopefully you can understand my situation and accept my appology.

I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply.

Yours,

Lihua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封信，告知旅游计划变更。

【详解】词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

假期：vacation→holiday

严重地：badly→seriously

按计划：as planned = on schedule

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On my way back home, I fell off my bike all of a sudden and one of my feet was badly hurt.

拓展句：On my way back home, I fell off my bike all of a sudden, which made one of my feet was badly hurt.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t go with you as planned.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply. (运用了状语从句)

5．Dear Ralph,

Sorry to learn you are having trouble getting accustomed to online classes. Actually many of your peers have the same problem. Here are my suggestions.

First, keep yourself away from other electronic devices while having online classes, which will stop yourself from being distracted. Besides, previewing the lessons before classes will help you keep up with the teachers’ pace. Healthy eyes are important. So you’d better give your eyes regular breaks.

It does take time to get used to a new way of study. Wish to see your improvement soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为Ralph同学对无法适应学校的网课的求助信回一封建议信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

习惯：be used to→get accustomed to

建议：advice→ suggestions

分心：absent-minded→ distracted

跟上：follow→keep up pace

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Healthy eyes are important.

拓展句：As we know,it is important for us to have healthy eyes .

【点睛】[高分句型1] First, keep yourself away from other electronic devices while having online classes, which will stop yourself from being distracted.. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, previewing the lessons before classes will help you keep up with the teachers’ pace. (运用了非谓语动词)

6．Dear Alex,

I'm writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.

I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some guidance?

I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Alex写封邮件，请他推荐英语阅读书籍并就写读书笔记给出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在进行时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.介绍活动内容；

2.请他推荐英文书；

3.请教如何写读书笔记。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

ask for help，be required to，take notes，recommend，considering，be suitable for，Meanwhile，feel confused，offer sb. some guidance

第三步：连词成句

1. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.

2. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level.

3. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers.

4. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes.

5. I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句

[高分句型2]

I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.使用了if引导的条件状语从句

7．Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m delighted to hear from you. Now，I’d like to share my study tips with you.

First, you’d better communicate with your teachers often. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. Best wishes!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给表弟小明一封电子邮件，给他一些高中学习方面的建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；

2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：

3. 其它方面。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to; share sth. with .sb.; communicate with; In this way; why not; listen to; so that; on time; be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m delighted to hear from you.

2. Now, I’d like to share my study tips with you.

3. First, you’d better communicate with your teachers often.

4. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.

5. Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later?

6. Third, it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

7. I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Third

2.表并列补充关系：both … and… , and

3.表转折对比关系： so…that…

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, why not make yourself active in each class, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later?这句话运用了so that引导的目的状语从句。

[高分句型2] Third, it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind. 这句话运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型3] I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. 这句话运用了宾语从句。

8．Dear Jack,

I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. As for the problem that you mentioned in your letter, I have some tips for you.

Firstly, just like learning any other foreign language, when learning Chinese, you should not be shy. On the contrary, you should be confident and brave, and try to speak Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. After all, the more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. Besides, you’d better speak Chinese slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood by others easily. Thirdly, if others canˈt understand you, or you don’t know how to express yourself, it is also a good idea to use pictures or body language to help you. I really hope you will find my advice useful and helpful.

Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack回信，并给他提几点学习中文的建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.大胆自信；

2.放慢语速；

3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be glad to do；as for；on the contrary；try to do；after all；the more…, the better…；had better do；in this way；express oneself；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.

2.As for the problem that you mentioned in your letter, I have some tips for you.

3.Just like learning any other foreign language, when learning Chinese, you should not be shy.

4.On the contrary, you should be confident and brave, and try to speak Chinese whenever you can. 5.This is very important.

6.After all, the more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it.

7.You’d better speak Chinese slowly and clearly.

8.In this way, you can make yourself understood by others easily.

9.If others canˈt understand you, or you don’t know how to express yourself, it is also a good idea to use pictures or body language to help you.

10.I really hope you will find my advice useful and helpful.

11.Looking forward to seeing you soon!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, thirdly

2.表并列补充关系：Besides

3.表转折对比关系：On the contrary

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. （that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

If others canˈt understand you, or you don’t know how to express yourself, it is also a good idea to use pictures or body language to help you.（if引导条件状语从句，it为形式主语，to use为真正的主语）

9．        Good morning, everyone!

It is known that a good living habit is very important. However, many of us ignore it. They eat too much junk food and often stay up late. Over time, our health will suffer. So I think that we need to sleep early and exercise regularly to stay energized; eat food that is low in fat, salt and sugar to keep our body in good condition; and wash hands often to prevent diseases.

May you all have a good living habit! Thank you for listening!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，谈一谈良好生活习惯的养成。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.现状分析；

2.你的建议；

3.表达希望。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

living habit; many of; ignore; too much; junk food; stay up late; suffer; need to; energized; in good condition; prevent

第三步：连词成句

1. It is known that a good living habit is very important.

2. However, many of us ignore it.

3. They eat too much junk food and often stay up late.

4. Over time, our health will suffer.

5. So I think that we need to sleep early and exercise regularly to stay energized; eat food that is low in fat, salt and sugar to keep our body in good condition; and wash hands often to prevent diseases.

6. May you all have a good living habit!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore（供参考）

3.表转折对比关系：However

4.表因果关系：So

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is known that a good living habit is very important. (运用了主语从句)

[高分句型2] So I think that we need to sleep early and exercise regularly to stay energized; eat food that is low in fat, salt and sugar to keep our body in good condition; and wash hands often to prevent diseases. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

10．Dear Tom,

I feel so sad when hearing you are always sick because you lack exercises. I’d like to tell you that taking a regular exercise really counts.

At first, doing proper exercises can strengthen your body. It is due to the proper exercise that you can be a good body to support your study. Furthermore, a suitable exercise can refresh your mind, which can bring plenty of benefits to your study. Therefore, you should make a fitness plan for yourself. As long as you can insist on doing it, it’s the best plan.

May you have a healthy body. I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文，给你的朋友Tom写一封关于锻炼的信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 锻炼的重要性；

2. 锻炼有利于学习；

3. 提出锻炼的建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

lack; count; proper; support; plenty of; insist on; fitness

第三步：连词成句

1. I feel so sad when hearing you are always sick because you lack exercises.

2. I’d like to tell you that taking a regular exercise really counts.

3. It is due to the proper exercise that you can be a good body to support your study.

4. Furthermore, a suitable exercise can refresh your mind, which can bring plenty of benefits to your study.

5. Therefore, you should make a fitness plan for yourself.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1. 表文章因果关系：Therefore

2. 表并列补充关系：Furthermore

2. 表文章顺序关系：At first

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1] Furthermore, a suitable exercise can refresh your mind, which can bring plenty of benefits to your study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It is due to the proper exercise that you can be a good body to support your study. (运用了强调句)