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河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共14页。试卷主要包含了你的祝愿，你校将举办英语演讲比赛等内容，欢迎下载使用。

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试(Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件，内容包括:

1.表达关切;

2.备考建议;

3.你的祝愿

注意:1.词数 80 左右;

2.可适当加细节以使行文连贯。

2．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1．你建议的线路；

2．你的理由；

3．你的祝愿。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：长江：Yangtze River

泰山：Mount Tai

Dear Jim,

I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，你的朋友Henry写信问你是否适应了高中生活，并表示自己对新的学习生活不适应，非常苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语回一封电子邮件，开导他并提出建议。邮件内容应包括以下要点：

1. 校园生活的意义；2. 同学应友好相处。

注意：1. 词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Dear Henry,

Thank you very much for your last letter asking about my study and life.

I'm looking forward to learning about your life and your improvements.

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Nick学习汉语时遇到一些困难并发邮件向你请教学习汉语的方法。请你回复邮件，针对汉语学习提出建议。内容包括：

1.学习汉语的建议；

2.鼓励Nick坚持学习。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

5．假设你是李华，你的英国网友Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。

要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出建议并给出理由。

注意：词数120左右

6．假定你是李华，你非常喜欢去学校图书馆看书。尽管那里的服务和读书氛围不错，你还是想给学校提几点建议。

内容包括：

1.延长夜晚开放时间；2. 丰富书籍的类型；3. 组织书友会。

注意：

1. 写作词数为80字左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：延长prolong 书友会book club

Dear Sir/Madam,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假设你是中学生李华，最近你在英语写作方面遇到一些困难。请你就此写封邮件给你的美国朋友Andy, 向他寻求帮助。要点包括：

① 写信目的；② 描述你遇到的困难；③ 征求他的建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Andy,

How’s everything going?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua.

8．假如你是李华，你的笔友Michael写信告诉你他最近沉迷于踢足球，每天花很多时间练球，结果学习成绩受到影响。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很烦恼。请你就他的问题给他提一些有用的建议，如：

1. 理解父母，和他们真诚沟通；

2. 规划好自己的时间；

3. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Michael,

I'm sorry to know that you are not getting along well with your parents and teachers because

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假如你是新星中学李华，在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。美国中学生John想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了历史文化名城正定。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 自我介绍；

2. 推荐理由（至少两点）；

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当添加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I′m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.

Yours,

Lihua

10．你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“How to express your thanks”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：

1. 分析现状；

2. 建议几种感激方式。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

How to express your thanks

1．Dear Peter,

I'm so delighted to receive your letter, knowing you are nervous about taking the Chinese Proficiency Test soon.

To relieve your pressure, here are my tips about how to prepare for the test more efficiently.

First，you can read loudly even recite the fantastic compositions from home and abroad. What's more, you can find warm-hearted Chinese people to help you practise listening skills. Finally, on the eve of the test, you should have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.

I do expect the above tips are beneficial to your test. Wish you good luck!

Kindest regards，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试(Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子件，内容包括:1.表达关切;2.备考建议;3.你的祝愿

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴地： pleased →delighted

焦虑的：be anxious about→ be nervous about

有益的：helpful→ beneficial

准备：make preparation for→ prepare for

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Finally, on the eve of the test, you should have a good sleep, so that you will have enough energy for the test.

拓展句：Finally, on the eve of the test, you should have a good sleep, which will make you have enough energy for the test.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm so delighted to receive your letter, knowing you are nervous about taking the Chinese Proficiency Test soon.(运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] To relieve your pressure, here are my tips about how to prepare for the test more efficiently.(运用了here引导的倒装句)

2．Dear Jim,

I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Hope that you’ll have a good time in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生英国朋友Jim写信，就旅行路线的选择给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：prefer→be fond of

此外：moreover→ in addition

惊讶的：amazing→astonishing

选择：choice→option

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.

拓展句：There are two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both of which are highly recommended.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.（why引导表语从句）

[高分句型2]

Hope that you’ll have a good time in China.（that引导宾语从句）

3．Dear Henry,

Thank you very much for your last letter asking about my study and life.

I’m quite used to the life here, because it is so colorful. However, I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in. To cheer you up, first of all, I’d like to share with you the meaning of high school life. High school is a place where you can acquire knowledge and get improved both mentally and physically. Moreover, it is also of great importance to make lifelong friends during this time, which means you should work harder to build a friendly relationship with others. Gradually, you will fit in and enjoy high school life.

I'm looking forward to learning about your life and your improvement.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Henry写信开导对方，并给他提出适应高中生活的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：adapt to→be used to

丰富多彩的：rich →colorful

重要的：very important→of great importance

逐渐地：slowly→gradually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Gradually, you will fit in and enjoy high school life.

拓展句：Gradually, you will fit in and enjoy high school life if you take my suggestion into consideration..

【点睛】【高分句型1】However, I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】High school is a place where you can acquire knowledge and get improved both mentally and physically.（运用了where引导的定语从句）

4．Dear Nick,

How is it going? I'm writing to you because you asked me to help you with studying Chinese. I would like to offer some suggestions to you.

Firstly, you should have passion to learn Chinese. Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting. As a famous saying goes, practice makes perfect. You should keep practicing it as much as possible. Why not find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet him/her on a regular basis.

I do hope you will find these proposals practical. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国朋友Nick学习汉语时遇到一些困难并发邮件向你请教学习汉语的方法回复邮件，针对汉语学习提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice →suggestions

此外：Moreove r→Besides

希望：wish →hope

建议：tips = proposals

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.

拓展句：Besides, we can watch Chinese movies and listen to Chinese songs, which can make the learning process more interesting.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm writing to you because you asked me to help you with studying Chinese.这句话运用了because引导的原因状语从句。

[高分句型2] Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.这句话运用了动名词作主语的结构。

5．Dear Linda,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.

Here are some tips for you. First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.

I hope my advice will be useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友Linda写一封回信，关于她在中国学习所遇到的困难给与安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

实际上：in fact→actually

忧虑的：worried→anxious

建议：advice→tip

参加：join in→take part in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some tips for you.

拓展句：Here are some tips for you that I think will be helpful.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)

[高分句型2] Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li hua, a regular visitor to the school library. While the service here is quite satisfying, I’d like to give some suggestions.

To begin with, please prolong the time for reading at night because most of the students are busy with their study in the daytime, making it difficult for us to spare time to enjoy extensive reading in the library. What’s more, we will be more than happy to see an increase in the variety of books in store. Last but not the least, I think it necessary to set up a book club where we can exchange ideas on what we read.

I would really appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校图书馆提几点建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

令人满意：content →satisfying

建议：advice →suggestion

首先：Firstly →To begin with

除此而外：Besides= What’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am Li hua, a regular visitor to the school library.

拓展句：I am Li hua, who is a regular visitor to the school library.

【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, please prolong the time for reading at night because most of the students are busy with their study in the daytime, making it difficult for us to spare time to enjoy extensive reading in the library.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。

[高分句型2] I would really appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的宾语从句。

7．Dear Andy,

How’s everything going? Recently, I have some trouble with English writing. I’m writing to ask you for suggestions about how to improve it.

First, it’s difficult for me to use the right grammar in my composition. Besides, I’m unable to use proper words and phrases to express my views. The problems bother me so much that I can’t wait to take action to make changes. As an American, you must be good at writing in English, so I hope you can give me some advice. I’d appreciate it if you could help me get rid of the problems.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封邮件给你的美国朋友Andy，向他寻求帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：tip→suggestion/ advice

文章：article→composition

观点：idea→view

困扰：disturb→bother

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：As an American, you must be good at writing in English, so I hope you can give me some advice.

拓展句：Since you are an American and must be good at writing in English, I hope you can give me some advice.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to ask you for suggestions about how to improve it. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构)

[高分句型2]The problems bother me so much that I can’t wait to take action to make changes.(运用了结果状语从句)

8．Dear Michael,

I'm sorry to know that you are not getting along well with your parents and teachers because you are obsessed with playing football. I'm writing to give you some suggestions about it.

First, if I were you, I would stand in my parents' shoes and communicate sincerely with my parents about my enthusiasm for football. Besides, making a plan can also be a sensible choice when it comes to improving efficiency.

In addition, it would be beneficial if you could strike a balance between study and play. I hope my advice will be of value to you and you'll get good grades without quitting your hobby.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给沉迷于踢足球并深感困扰的笔友 Michael写封信，劝解并提出自己的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沉迷于：be addicted to→be obsessed with

建议：advice→suggestion

保持平衡：keep a balance→strike a balance

有价值的：valuable= be of value

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I'm writing to give you some suggestions about it.

拓展句：I'm writing to give you some suggestions about it, which I hope will help you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, making a plan can also be a sensible choice when it comes to improving efficiency. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] First, if I were you, I would stand in my parents' shoes and communicate sincerely with my parents about my enthusiasm for football.(运用了虚拟语气)

9．Dear John,

I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I’m Lihua, a student from Xinxing senior high school. I’m good at geography.

When it comes to travelling in China, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Zhengding. First of all, Zhengding is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest. Besides, people in Zhengding are friendly and kind, who are willing to help others. Last but not least, you can have a chance to take delicious snacks here.

In a word, I’d to serve as your guide if you come. Wish you have a pleasant journey. (96词)

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国中学生John写封信，向他推荐了历史文化名城正定。

【详解】1.词汇积累

擅长：be good at→do well in