河北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你校图书馆计划开设英语阅览室，就此向全体学生征求意见，请你给负责英语阅览室的交换生Chris写封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.你的建议（图书种类、借阅时间等）：

2.表达期待和祝愿。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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2．由中央电视台推出的大型文化情感类节目《朗读者》自开播以来，广受好评，为书香中国，全民阅读推开一扇窗，迎来一缕曙光。假如你是某学校学生会主席李华，为配合学校即将开展的读书周 (Reading Week) 活动, 请写一封倡议信，鼓励同学们多读书，读好书。

注意：1)词数100左右；

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3)开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Fellow Students,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华,你的朋友王昆在英语学习方面遇到了困难,写邮件向你寻求帮助.现在,你给他回一封邮件, 给他一些有益的建议。要点如下:

1.抓住机会练习口语.

2. 大量阅读英语文章.

3. 用英语写邮件

Dear Wang Kun,

I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble in learning English.

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Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Alice最近沉迷于抖音（TikTok），你非常担心她。请给她写一封邮件。内容包括：

1.阐述玩抖音的危害；

2.提出建议和解决办法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Alice,

I am worried to know that you should be so addicted to TikTok these days.

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。

1. 制定复习计划，树立信心。

2. 多与老师和同学谈心。

3. 坚持锻炼身体

4. 保持良好睡眠。

注意：写作词数100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，朋友Peter打算外出旅行，不知该做哪些准备，请你写封信给他建议，内容包括：

1. 查找旅游的相关信息；

2. 确定目的地和交通方式；

3. 提前预订房间等。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，目前在英国做交换生。请根据提示给校长Mr. Brown写一封建议信。

1.建议学校成立武术社团（Martial Arts Club）；

2.成立该社团的好处（丰富学校生活，了解中国文化，强身健体……）；

3.希望得到学校支持。

注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的朋友Amy来信说她考试前总会出现各种焦虑症状。请给她写封回信，提供一些建议，如：制定切实可行的学习目标，合理安排时间，睡前听听轻音乐等。

注意： 1. 词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Amy,

I’m glad to hear from you.

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I wish you the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假如你叫李蕾。最近你收到美国笔友Tom发来的邮件。在邮件中，Tom说自己体质较差，经常缺课，因此他非常担心。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建议（重视锻炼，闲暇时间进行慢跑，还要均衡饮食，保持心情愉悦等）；

3.祝他早日康复。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Lei

10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Bob准备组织Cultural China的活动，发邮件询问你活动的主题。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 推荐中国书法；

2. 你的建议。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：书法calligraphy

Dear Bob,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Chris.

I'm delighted to hear our library will set up an English reading room. I can't wait to read original English books and magazines in it. I also have several suggestions.

To begin with，in addition to classics, I suggest displaying some books and magazines in both Chinese and English, which are easy to read. What's more. some regular activities might be helpful in increasing students' interest in English reading. Finally. I hope it opens from 17:00 to 18:40 every day.

I will be grateful if you could consider my suggestions. May the English reading room become more and more popular in our school.

Yours.

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你校图书馆计划开设英语阅览室，就此向全体学生征求意见，请你给负责英语阅览室的交换生Chris写封电子邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→glad→happy

一些：several /a couple of→a few

除……之外(还有)：in addition to→apart from

展览：display→show

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I'm delighted to hear our library will set up an English reading room. I can't wait to read original English books and magazines in it.

拓展句：I'm delighted to hear our library will set up an English reading room, in which I can't wait to read original English books and magazines.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I suggest displaying some books and magazines in both Chinese and English, which are easy to read. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I will be grateful if you could consider my suggestions. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

2．Dear Fellow Students,

I am Li Hua, president of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to appeal to you to do more reading.

Reading Week is launched to encourage us students to read more books. As we all know, reading is beneficial to us in many ways. It is a good way to spend our spare time. And also reading can broaden our horizons and enrich our life. In addition, reading allows us to learn from great people.

Here are some tips on how to do more reading. First, we should form the habit of reading. Second, we can exchange books with our friends. Besides, we’d better take a book with us wherever we go. Making reading part of our life, we will benefit from reading. Love books and live a better life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为配合学校即将开展的读书周 (Reading Week) 活动, 要求考生写一封倡议信，鼓励同学们多读书，读好书。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对......有益：be beneficial to→be good for

此外：in addition → what’s more

建议： tip→suggestion

鼓励：motivate→encourage

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Making reading part of our life, we will benefit from reading.

拓展句：If we make reading part of our life, we will benefit from reading.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, reading is beneficial to us in many ways.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, we’d better take a book with us wherever we go.  （运用了wherever引导的让步性状语从句）

3．Dear Wang Kun,

I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble in learning English. Here, I’d like to give you some advice.

First, take every opportunity to practice your spoken English. You can join an English club in your school and communicate with other members in English when possible. If you keep on, I’m sure your oral English will become more fluent.

Secondly, read in English as much as you can. In this way, you can build up your vocabulary and understand the English culture better.

Finally, write to your friends or pen-pals in English through e-mail. When writing, try to make use of what you have learnt to make the sentences correct. It won’t be long before you can use the language freely to express yourself.

Hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.

Yours

Li Hua．

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华,你的朋友王昆在英语学习方面遇到了困难,写邮件向你寻求帮助.现在,你给他回一封邮件, 给他一些有益的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

建议：suggestion→ advice

机会：chance→ opportunity

利用：take advantage of→ make use of

有帮助的：useful→ helpful

2. 句式拓展

变成倒装句

原句：In this way, you can build up your vocabulary and understand the English culture better.

拓展句：Only in this way can you build up your vocabulary and understand the English culture better.

【点睛】[高分句型1] If you keep on, I’m sure your oral English will become more fluent.（if引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2] When writing, try to make use of what you have learnt to make the sentences correct.（what引导的宾语从句）

4．Dear Alice,

I am worried to know that you should be so addicted to TikTok these days. Playing with TikTok too much is bad for your health. Besides, if you spend so much time on it, I’m afraid you will fall behind your classmates sooner or later.

In my opinion, you should find something interesting to do if you want to relax. For example, take a walk on the playground with your friends. Alternatively, you can chat with your classmates, which will cheer you up. It doesn’t mean that TikTok should be completely refused in our life, but playing too much will surely affect our study.

I know you have a strong will and you are clever. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit quite soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生好友Alice写封信，向她阐述玩抖音的危害，提出建议和解决办法。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

有害：be bad for→do harm to

当然：surely→certainly

落后：fall behind→lag behind

摆脱，去除：get rid of→rid oneself of

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Playing with TikTok too much is bad for your health.

拓展句：It is bad for your health if you play with TikTok too much.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, if you spend so much time on it, I’m afraid you will fall behind your classmates sooner or later. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that）

[高分句型2]Alternatively, you can chat with your classmates, which will cheer you up.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

5．Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I’d like to give you some advice.

Firstly, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Secondly, take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic.What’s more, you can talk with your teachers or classmates after class. Last but not least, don’t stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Jack回一封信，就他考试焦虑问题的求助给出合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestions/tips

适当的：proper→appropriate

此外：What’s more → Besides/In addition

重要的：important→ essential

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’d like to give you some advice.

拓展句：I’d like to give you some advice that helped me a lot when I faced exams.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely.  (运用了what引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day. (运用了if引导的状语从句及It作形式主语)

6．Dear Peter,

I am very glad to receive your letter, and hope you have a good time travelling. In order to have a great holiday, you are expected to make a schedule for your trip.

Firstly, you can surf the Internet to get some information. You can also read some travel guides, which will help you decide where you’d like to go and how to go. In addition, it is wise to book a room in advance before you start your trip so that you will have a place to stay the moment you get to your destination.

If you follow these steps, I am sure you will enjoy yourself wholeheartedly.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Peter写封信，给他外出旅行做准备提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy→glad

玩得愉快：have fun→have a good time

计划：plan→schedule

此外：furthermore→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In order to have a great holiday, you are expected to make a schedule for your trip.

拓展句：In order that you will have a great holiday, you are expected to make a schedule for your trip.

【点睛】[高分句型1] You can also read some travel guides, which will help you decide where you’d like to go and how to go. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] If you follow these steps, I am sure you will enjoy yourself wholeheartedly. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

7．Dear Mr. Brown,

I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I would like to make a suggestion in my letter. Since many people are interested in Chinese culture, especially martial arts, I suggest that the school should set up a Martial Arts Club. The reasons are as follows.

First of all, the establishment of a Martial Arts Club is one of the ways to enrich school life, which makes students have more choices in clubs. Secondly, wushu is one of the traditional cultures of China. Setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial for students to understand Chinese culture. Finally, learning martial arts can help us keep fit.

Please take my suggestion into consideration. Looking forward to getting permission from the school.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长Mr. Brown写一封建议信，建议学校成立武术社团，讲述成立该社团的好处并表达希望得到学校的支持。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

因为：because→since

有好处的：good/useful/helpful→beneficial

考虑：consider→take sth into consideration

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Secondly, wushu is one of the traditional cultures of China. Setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial for students to understand Chinese culture.

拓展句：Secondly, wushu is one of the traditional cultures of China, so setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial for students to understand Chinese culture.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Since many people are interested in Chinese culture, especially martial arts, I suggest that the school should set up a Martial Arts Club.（运用了since引导原因状语从句；suggest表“建议”，其后“that”引导的宾语从句为虚拟语气句式）

【高分句型2】First of all, the establishment of a Martial Arts Club is one of the ways to enrich school life, which makes students have more choices in clubs.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

8．Dear Amy,

I’m glad to hear from you. I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms. In fact, most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam.

First of all, I think it’s important for us to have a positive attitude towards exams. We needn’t worry too much about them. Secondly, we should study hard every day, make practical study goals and arrange your time reasonably. Besides, enough sleep can make us perform well in exams. Therefore, during the examination period, we should not stay up too late. We can also listen to light music before going to bed, which may help us have a good sleep.

I wish you the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Amy写封回信，为解决她考试前的焦虑症状提供一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

看法：idea→view

紧张的：tense →nervous

此外：in addition→besides

帮助：assist→help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms.

拓展句：I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms, which I hope will help you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In fact, most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam. (在when引导的时间状语中运用了省略)

【高分句型2】We can also listen to light music before going to bed, which may help us have a good sleep. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re in poor health, missing lots of classes. I am writing to tell you some advice on how to keep healthy.

First of all, you’d better do some jogging in your spare time. Try to spend more time in the stadium or the gym until you are sweating all over. In addition, keeping a balanced diet and cut out the foods with lots of fat. What’s more, it’s important to put yourself in a positive mood. Lastly, enough sleep can help you reduce stress.

I really hope that my advice will be helpful.

Yours,

LiLei

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封邮件，对他的身体状况示安慰并提出建议及祝他早日康复。

【详解】1.词汇积累

保持健康：keep fit→ keep healthy

许多：many→ lots of

慢跑：go jogging→ do jogging

此外：besides→ in addition

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I am writing to tell you some advice on how to keep healthy.

拓展句：I am writing to tell you some advice which can help you keep healthy.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’re in poor health, missing lots of classes.（运用了that引导的宾语从句及现在分词作结果状语）

【高分句型2】Try to spend more time in the stadium or the gym until you are sweating all over.（运用了祈使句及until引导的时间状语从句）

10．Dear Bob,

Hearing that you’re planning to hold an activity called Cultural China, I’m writing to recommend Chinese calligraphy and offer some suggestions.

Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various types over the centuries. Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, reflecting Chinese people’s wisdom. To hold the activity, it is advisable to display some real works so that students can have a wonderful appreciation. Besides, preparations like buying writing brushes, ink and paper can be made to let students have a try.

I do hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Bob回复邮件，推荐Culture China的主题，给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

形成：develop→form

此外：besides→what’s more

有益的：helpful→be of help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, reflecting Chinese people’s wisdom.

拓展句：Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, which reflects Chinese people’s wisdom.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Hearing that you’re planning to hold an activity called Cultural China, I’m writing to recommend Chinese calligraphy and offer some suggestions.（运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句，过去分词作定语）

【高分句型2】

Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various types over the centuries.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）