突破03 复杂句式增添表达内涵(解析版)-备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破

备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破
突破03 复杂句式增添表达内涵
【技法演练】
1. 句子形式多样化: 根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形式单一
【经典示例】
①They were so heavy that we couldn’t lift them at first. (so. . . that. . . 句型)
②There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. (同位语从句)
【技法强化】
① In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful.
→ , our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with复合结构) 
→In recent years, who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式) 
②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
→ (并列句) 
2. 使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端
【经典示例】
①After learning it, I’m sure I’ll have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture and Western culture.
②On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.
【技法强化】
①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)
→She walked out of the lab, .  
②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)
→They went back to school, .  
3. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容
【经典示例】
①Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.
②I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with more friends with the same interest.
【技法强化】
①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, (使你容易通过这门课).  
②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,
(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  
③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, (其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.  
4. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力
【经典示例】
①Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.
②Not only did you help improve my English, but you also gave me more confidence in learning.
③Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.
【技法强化】
①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)
→ , I’ll make the effort.  
②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)
→ than he was sent abroad.  
5. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力
【经典示例】
①It is you who taught me how to learn English well.
② It was on Friday that our activity began.
【技法强化】
①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)
→ he had read the news in the newspaper he knew what had happened.  
② working in teams instead of on my own has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. (强调句) 
6. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈
【经典示例】
①If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.
②That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
【技法强化】
①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)
→ is that the little girl knows so many things.  
②I have just found (我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).  
7. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言
【经典示例】
①Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.
②Without any hesitation, we began to work.
【技法强化】
①As an old saying goes, living (没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.  
②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, (没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).  
8. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意
【经典示例】
①I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.
②I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.
【技法强化】
①She (耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
②We were (完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.
9. 变主动为被动, 凸显英语思维
【经典示例】
①My father gave me a new book on my birthday.
→I was given a new book (by my father) on my birthday. (间接宾语作主语)
→A new book was given to me (by my father) on my birthday. (直接宾语作主语)
②And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons.
【技法强化】
①At most five books (可以被借用) at a time and they (可以保存) for ten days.  
②You (被允许)about ten minutes to prepare for the work.  
10. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受
【经典示例】
①If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
②I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
【技法强化】
①I wonder (你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.  
②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, (请尽快告诉我).  
【语篇整合】
　　根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级句式的应用。
假定你是李华, 你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣, 本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”, 请你写一封电子邮件, 邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。
Dear Tom,
(来好消息了). The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us.  
The activity is scheduled to last about two hours, from 3: 30 pm to 5: 30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content.
(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also we’ll watch the documentary (有关的) the history of the weaving art.  
In addition, (一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver lectures about (如何促进编织艺术的发展), (在这期间你一定会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three outside the school gate.  
　　 (我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)! I’m expecting your reply.  
Yours,
Li Hua

参考范文
【技法演练】
1. ① In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful.
→In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with复合结构) 
→In recent years, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式) 
②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.
→Study hard and you will make rapid progress. (并列句) 
2. ①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)
→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.  
②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)
→They went back to school, singing and laughing.  
3. ①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).  
②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  
③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.  
4. ①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)
→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.  
②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)
→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.  
5. ①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.  
②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. (强调句) 
6. ①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)
→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.  
②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).  
7. ①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.  
②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).  
8. ①She patiently(耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
②We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.
9. ①At most five books can be borrowed(可以被借用) at a time and they can be kept(可以保存) for ten days.  
②You are allowed (被允许)about ten minutes to prepare for the work.  
10. ①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.  
②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉我).  
【语篇整合】
Dear Tom,
Here comes a piece of good news(来好消息了). The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us.  
The activity is scheduled to last about two hours, from 3: 30 pm to 5: 30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content. Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also we’ll watch the documentary concerning(有关的) the history of the weaving art.  
In addition, some distinguished professors(一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver lectures about how to promote the development of the weaving art(如何促进编织艺术的发展), during which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it(在这期间你一定会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three outside the school gate.  
　　How I hope you can take my invitation into consideration(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)! I’m expecting your reply.  
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展运用】
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假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡西安/咸阳的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括：
1. 自然情况
2. 历史
3. 现状
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Xian Yang.
Now I will give a brief introduction to my hometown Xian Yang. It is a beautiful city located on the bank of Weihe River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. With a long history, it can date back to Pre-Qin Period.
The city covers an area of over 15,800 square kilometers. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. And now it is one of the excellent tourism cities in our country. Here are many fascinating sights, such as Evergreen Lake, Guishan Mountains and so on, which attracts many visitors at home and abroad every year.
I hope you will enjoy yourselves here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】
1. 词汇积累
友好的：nice/friendly → kind
岸：side/shore → bank
美丽的：beautiful →wonderful
吸引人的：attractive/amazing → fascinating
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Now I will give a brief introduction to my hometown Xian Yang. It is a beautiful city located on the bank of Weihe River.
拓展句：Now I will give a brief introduction to my hometown Xian Yang, which is a beautiful city located on the bank of Weihe River.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] It is a beautiful city located on the bank of Weihe River. (过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Here are many fascinating sights, such as Evergreen Lake, Guishan Mountains and so on, which attracts many visitors at home and abroad every year. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的e-mail了解到他最近因为一次考试不及格而烦恼，请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信，要点如下：
1.宽慰；
2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因，向老师求助）；
3.邀请周末去打篮球。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.
To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.
How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun. Hoping everything will be fine with you.

Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】
词汇量积累
保证：promise→guarantee
同时：at the same time→meanwhile
足够的：enough→adequate
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun
句式拓展
原句：But nobody can win all the time. I have to remind you it.
拓展句：But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. （运用了不定式做目的状语，且运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，且运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构）
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假设你是李华，你校的外教Susan邀请你下周日参加在她的公寓举办的中国名著阅读分享会，你因故无法参加，请根据下面的写作提示，用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.解释原因；
3.表达歉意。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；参考词汇：the Sharing Session on Chinese Classics中国名著阅读分享会
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Susan,
Thanks a lot for inviting me to attend the Sharing Session on Chinese Classics to be held next Sunday at your apartment. I’m terribly sorry for not being able to attend it. I’m writing to express my sincere apologies to you.
Actually, I have been expecting to have an opportunity to communicate with you and other friends about my experience in reading Chinese classics. However, yesterday my former teacher invited me to give a talk to his students on how to learn English well, which is scheduled for next Sunday. If it’s convenient for you, shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday before the Sharing Session in order to share my ideas with you in advance? If not, please keep me informed of what time suits you best.
Sorry again for the inconvenience caused. I do hope you will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】
1.词汇积累
非常：extremely→terribly
参加：join in→attend
机会：chance→opportunity
玩得高兴：enjoy oneself = have a great time
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m terribly sorry for not being able to attend it. I’m writing to express my sincere apologies to you.
拓展句：Since I’m unable to attend it, I’m writing to express my sincere apologies to you.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] I’m terribly sorry for not being able to attend it. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] However, yesterday my former teacher invited me to give a talk to his students on how to learn English well, which is scheduled for next Sunday. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road, hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausages, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch pocket knife given to him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28, was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers, Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his path with blue ribbons. When he was doing it, he noticed something unusual in a short distance.
注意：1. 续写词数为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A bear stood up in a threatening way.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself, surrounded by the logging workers.
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【参考范文】
Paragraph 1:
A bear stood up in a threatening way. In a panic, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.
Paragraph 2:
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself, surrounded by logging workers. It was Vito who saved Colin. When Vito drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have happened to Colin. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are so lucky, Colin. Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who help themselves.” said Vito. What a memorable birthday Colin celebrated!
【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Colin Dowler为了庆祝他的45岁生日，计划自己花两天时间，找到一条最终可以用来爬道勒山的路线，结果在森林里遇到了熊的攻击，幸好被伐木工人及时发现，Colin度过了一个难忘的生日。
【写作分析】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一只熊以一种威胁的方式站了起来。”可知，第一段可描写熊攻击Colin的经过的。
②由第二段首句内容“似乎过了几个小时，Colin醒了过来，周围都是伐木工人。”可知，第二段可描写Colin被伐木工人救了。
2.续写线索：熊攻击Colin——Colin用刀刺向熊——Colin失血过多失去知觉——Colin被伐木工人救了——Colin度过难忘的生日
3.词汇激活
行为类
吸引：attract / appeal
发现：notice/ discover
逃跑：run away /escape away
情绪类
难以忍受：unbearable / insufferable
难忘：unforgettable/ memorable
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] In a panic, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] It was Vito who saved Colin. (运用了强调句)

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阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Hobbies can help a teen do physical exercise, develop social skills, reduce stress, and learn some valuable lessons, and of course they can be a source（来源）of fun! However, many teens are unwilling to start a hobby. We may ignore some great hobbies for teens already. If you are a parent, you just need to recognize and provide that interest for your teen. You can guide your teen to explore their interests and take up their perfect hobbies.
One way to help a teenager take up a hobby is to ask them what makes them feel good. Many teens may only focus on their weaknesses or things they have failed in. Instead, they should devote themselves to anything that they enjoy doing or that makes them happy. For example, a teen may be interested in music, sports, computers, crafting, role playing games, or science. As long as he feels good while doing it, it can turn into a hobby.
Maybe a teen has been wanting to try something for a long time. Don't ask "What do you want to do?" because it is a too broad question. You should ask "What would you like to do today?” or "What do you want to do this weekend?" You might also try saying, "Let's do something you are interested in today. What would you like to do?" If your teen wants to cook or likes to be outside, you may be close to figuring out a good hobby for them.
Teenagers spend much of their life away from the eyes of parents and don't always offer information about it. As a result, sometimes adults are not totally aware that adolescents（青少年）are developing hobbies. A child may be developing his own hobbies away from home, so you may not have to encourage them to adopt new ones. Instead, you can support their current hobbies.
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【参考范文】
Having a hobby is helpful for teenagers, so parents should help them take up a suitable one. Firstly, parents should help teenagers fix their attention on their favorite things. Secondly, parents should avoid asking teenagers broad questions and instead specific ones. Lastly, parents should support the hobbies teenagers have already had.
【文章大意】本文是一篇说明文。文章给父母提供了几种培养孩子爱好的方法。
【写作分析】
1 要点摘录
①Hobbies can help a teen do physical exercise, develop social skills, reduce stress, and learn some valuable lessons, and of course they can be a source（来源）of fun!
②One way to help a teenager take up a hobby is to ask them what makes them feel good.
③Don't ask "What do you want to do?" because it is a too broad question.
④you can support their current hobbies.
2.缜密构思
将第1要点作为话题作为总说。将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Having a hobby is helpful for teenagers, so parents should help them take up a suitable one.
Firstly, parents should help teenagers fix their attention on their favorite things.
Secondly, parents should avoid asking teenagers broad questions and instead specific ones.
Lastly, parents should support the hobbies teenagers have already had.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] Having a hobby is helpful for teenagers, so parents should help them take up a suitable one.用so连接两个并列句。
[高分句型2]：Lastly, parents should support the hobbies teenagers have already had. 运用了定语从句。