突破06 得体的表达提升得分率(解析版)-备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破

备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破突破06 得体的表达提升得分率（以邀请信、求助信与建议信为例）【技法演练】【典例分析】(2020·全国卷Ⅲ改编)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】第一步　审五要素，三段谋篇审主题审体裁审语言审格式审内容请老师指导改编的剧本求助信人称： 第一人称求助信可分三段第1段(开门见山)说明写信目的时态：一般现在时和现在完成时第2段(说明求助事项)介绍短剧情节，所求助的问题尾段(巧妙收尾)约定见面地点时间，表达感激之情第二步　雕词酌句，设计亮点【技法强化】1．我写信是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇：_________________________________________. We _________________________ our textbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级)：_________________________________________  2．我们不确定情节是否完整，我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句)：_________________________________________. We are also wondering _________________________________________.②高级句式(利用not only ... but also合并两句)：__________________________________________________________________________________③高级句式(利用倒装句升级)：__________________________________________________________________________________第三步　巧妙过渡，完美成篇    【语篇整合】1．邀请信邀请信之邀请参加活动是高考考查频次最高的类型之一，邀请信的写作对象一般是朋友或其他熟人，内容较为宽松，说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。满分句式记忆开头句(开篇表意说明活动，发出邀请)①I'd like to invite you to attend the Chinese Excellent Calligraphy Show and admire the great works with me.我想邀请你参加中国书法优秀作品展，和我一起欣赏这些伟大的作品。②Knowing you are interested in Chinese history and culture, I'm more than pleased to invite you to visit Suzhou Gardens with me.得知你对中国历史和文化很感兴趣，我很高兴地邀请你和我一起到苏州园林游玩。篇中句(说明活动的具体信息和参加活动的好处)①Here are arrangements for the activity./The following are arrangements for the activity./Arrangements for the activity are as follows.活动安排如下。②There will be various activities, including short drama performances, playing musical instruments, as well as other wonderful shows.将会有各种活动，包括短剧表演，乐器演奏和其他精彩的表演。③This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese culture that it can't be missed.这是体验中国传统文化的绝佳机会，不容错过。结尾句(望应邀，盼回复)①I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.如果你能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。②We'd be delighted if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us.如果你能来和我们共度这个难忘的时刻，我们将十分高兴。③I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.我真心希望你方便的话能接受我的邀请。2．婉拒信婉拒信是在收到对方的邀请信后给予对方的回复，礼貌地拒绝并解释谢绝原因，解释的理由一定要合理，语言一定要诚恳。满分句式记忆开头句(开篇感谢继而婉拒)①Thanks a lot for your invitation. I really want to accept your invitation, but I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it.非常感谢你的邀请。我真的很想接受你的邀请，但是很抱歉我去不了。②I really want to join you in the activity, but it's a great pity that I have to decline/turn down your invitation.我很想和你一起参加活动，但我不得不谢绝你的邀请，真是太遗憾了。篇中句(说明原因，如推荐他人，说明推荐理由)①I will fail to go with you because I will be attending an important class meeting then.我不能和你一起去，因为那时我要参加一个重要的班会。②The reason why I can't accept your invitation is that I am busy preparing for the final exam.因为我正忙于准备期末考试，所以不能接受你的邀请。③I strongly recommend Li Ming, who is the most suitable person to take my place.我强烈推荐李明，他是最适合代替我的人。④I feel terribly sorry to miss the opportunity to meet you and admire the natural scenery with you.我很遗憾错过了和你见面一起欣赏自然风光的机会。结尾句(再次致歉，盼回复)①Though unable to be present, I hope that your activity will go well.虽然不能出席，但我希望你的活动一切顺利。②Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and wish your competition a great success.对于我的缺席给您带来的不便，我再次表示歉意，并祝您的比赛取得圆满成功。3．建议信建议信通常是写给亲朋好友，就对方在生活、学习和工作中遇到的问题或困难提出看法或建议，或就对方不明智的举动给予劝勉、告诫或展开讨论的应用文。满分句式记忆开头句(开篇点题，表明意图)①You have asked me for advice with regard to/regarding how to learn Chinese well, and I'll try to offer some practical suggestions here.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议，我会尽量提出一些实用的建议。②As for how to improve calligraphy, I'd like to offer you some advice.至于如何提高书法，我想给你一些建议。篇中句(给出具体的建议和理由)①Personally/As far as I'm concerned, it would be a wise choice if you stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.在我看来，除非必要，待在家里避免出门是明智的。②There's no need for you to be so worried and nervous, and it's necessary for you to consult some books concerning the traditional Chinese culture. 你没有必要如此担心和紧张。你有必要查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。③Another suggestion is that you should wear protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.另一个建议是，戴上防护口罩，以防外出时被感染。④If I were you/Were I you, I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy. 如果我是你， 我会经常锻炼以保持健康。结尾句(望采纳建议，盼回复)①Hope my suggestions will be of some help/benefit to you.希望我的建议对你有所帮助/有益。②Personally, it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself.我认为，如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话，会有益处的。4．求助信求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请对方给予帮助的信件类型，整篇文章应用一般现在时。满分句式记忆开头句(开篇表意)①I'm writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.我写信请你帮忙，因为我在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。②Faced with/In face with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.面对这个难题，我只得向你求助。篇中句(说明困惑或难题)①What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。②I have much trouble/bother in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.我很难专心上网课，这使我很苦恼。③I'm stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities.我被难住了，知道你组织过类似活动，所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。④I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?我现在压力很大，你能给我一些减压的建议吗？结尾句(表达感谢，期待回复)①I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.如你能费心帮我处理这个问题我将不胜感激。②I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/instructions/help/assistance.如果你能给我一些指导/帮助，我将不胜感激。5．感谢信感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的个人或集体表示感谢的书信。感谢信要行文得体、语气礼貌恭敬、用词规范，感情真挚尤为重要。满分句式记忆开头句(表明写信意图，表示感谢)①I'd like to express/convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support.我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。②With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks for your kindness when I was traveling in London.怀着最深的感激，我写信给你，感谢你在我伦敦旅行时对我的关怀。篇中句(描述事情经过和感受)①Undoubtedly, it was your encouragement and support that lit me up when I was faced with difficulties in English learning.毫无疑问，当我在英语学习中遇到困难时，是您的鼓励和支持点亮了我。②Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。这是我至今收到的最好的礼物之一。③During the week, the comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family members all made me warm, leaving me everlasting memories.在这一周中，舒适的房间，美味的饭菜，你的友好家庭都让我感到温暖，给我留下了永久的回忆。④Had it not been for your assistance and kindness, I couldn't have made such great progress. 如果没有你的帮助和善意，我不可能取得如此大的进步。结尾句(再次致谢表达回报之情)①Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.我无法用言语来表达我对你的谢意。②Thanks again for your help and I'm sincerely looking forward to showing you around in Beijing to repay your kindness.再次感谢你的帮助，我真诚地期待带你参观北京，以报答你的好意。6．慰问信慰问信用于向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到灾难的人表示慰问、关怀和问候。写慰问信时感情要真诚、语气诚挚。祝愿收信人充满信心，早日康复或摆脱烦恼或痛苦。满分句式记忆开头句(得知对方的不幸，表达惋惜和关怀)①I just cannot tell you how shocked I was when I was informed of your sudden illness in your new school.当我得知你在新学校突然生病时，我简直无法形容我有多震惊。②Having known that you are under painful state and great pressure now, I'm writing to express my great comfort to you.得知你现在处境困难，压力很大，我写信安慰你。③My sorrow is beyond words for hearing that your left leg got injured in a car accident. 听说你在车祸中左腿受伤之后，我的悲伤无法言表。篇中句(所能提供的帮助或建议)①It can't be better if you can share your experiences with others, thus helping them become familiar with you in a short period of time.如果你能与他人讲述你的经历，从而帮助他们在短时间内熟悉你，那是再好不过的事情。②It's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. 对我们来说，经历失败是很常见的，这将鼓励我们更进一步。③However, as an old saying goes, misfortune may prove a blessing in disguise.然而，俗话说，塞翁失马焉知非福。结尾句(表达愿望和祝福)①Hope you can recover as soon as possible.希望你早日康复。②Hope you can have your troubles removed soon.希望你早日摆脱烦恼。【技法强化】Writing 1 邀请信假定你是李华，你班同学计划本周六去农场摘葡萄，请你给外籍教师Thomas写一封邮件，主要内容如下：1．提出邀请；2．具体活动安排。注意：写作词数应为80左右。        Writing 2 感谢信假定你是李华，即将结束在新西兰的学习。在这段学习期间，你的老师Mr Smith对你的帮助很大。请用英文给他写封邮件，感谢他对你的帮助，内容包括：1．感谢帮助；2．学习收获；3．期待保持联系。注意：写作词数应为80左右。        参考答案【技法演练】1．我写信是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇：I'm writing to ask you for advice regarding a play. We have adapted it from our textbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级)：I'm writing to ask you for advice regarding a play we have adapted from our textbook.2．我们不确定情节是否完整，我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句)：We are uncertain whether the plot is complete. We are also wondering how to use proper tone to speak the lines perfectly.②高级句式(利用not only ... but also合并两句)：We are not only uncertain whether the plot is complete, but we are also wondering how to use proper tone to speak the lines perfectly.③高级句式(利用倒装句升级)：Not only are we uncertain whether the plot is complete, but we are also wondering how to use proper tone to speak the lines perfectly. 【语篇整合】Writing 1 邀请信Dear Thomas，To be exposed to nature, we plan to pick grapes on the farm nearby this Saturday morning. I'm sincerely writing to invite you to join us.We will meet at the school gate at 8 am and go there by bus. Various activities will be held, ranging from picking grapes to playing some games. We'll have lunch on the farm, enjoying some tasty local food and return at four in the afternoon.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you. I'm sure we'll have a great time there.Yours，Li Hua Writing 2 感谢信Dear Mr Smith，I'm writing to express my sincere appreciation for everything you did during my study in New Zealand. I appreciate your helping me a lot without hesitation whenever I was in need.Never had you been impatient every time you answered my questions. You taught me to think with a clear mind and write with imagination. Thank you for encouraging me to work hard and dream big. Your new teaching methods fueled my curiosity and made learning much more interesting.Thanks again for your devotion to every student. I will definitely keep in touch with you after I return to China.Yours，Li Hua 【拓展运用】1假定你是李华，你校手工俱乐部（Handicraft Club）将邀请民间艺人（folk artist）来校教大家制作灯笼。请给你班的交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同参加。内容包括：1．邀请原因；2．活动内容；3．活动时间和地点。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Tom,I’m Li Hua and I have a piece of good news to tell you. Next Saturday our school’s Handicraft Club will hold an activity, where we will learn how to make lanterns by hand. I know you are crazy about Chinese traditional handicraft works, so I’m writing to invite you to attend it with me.On that day, a famous folk artist will be invited to teach us skills of making different kinds of lanterns using various materials, including red paper and silk. At the same time, he will tell us the history and origin of lanterns. The activity will be held in Room 405 in the library. Looking forward to your presence.Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua【写作步骤】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；假定你是李华，你校手工俱乐部（Handicraft Club）将邀请民间艺人（folk artist）来校教大家制作灯笼。请给你班的交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同参加。内容包括：1．邀请原因；2．活动内容；3．活动时间和地点。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：have a piece of good news（有一则好消息），Handicraft Club（手工俱乐部），make lanterns（做灯笼），handicraft works（手工艺作品）；folk artist（民间艺人）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Next Saturday our school’s Handicraft Club will hold an activity, where we will learn how to make lanterns by hand. 运用了定语从句；On that day, a famous folk artist will be invited to teach us skills of making different kinds of lanterns using various materials, including red paper and silk.运用了被动语态。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2假设你是李华,你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Mike帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Mike写一封求助信。内容包括:1. 求助事由;2. 求助内容;3. 表达感激。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mike,I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. When it comes to papercutting,there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfactory.As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【写作步骤】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为写一封电子邮件；假设你是李华,你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Mike帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Mike写一封求助信。内容包括:1. 求助事由;2. 求助内容;3. 表达感激。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：in the hope that（希望能……），do me a favor（帮忙），When it comes to（当提到……）；be long to（渴望）；put into practice（付诸实践）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【写作亮点】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfactory.运用了部分倒装；As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot.运用了非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3随着老龄化问题的日趋严重，空巢老人越来越多，很多老人呆在家里无所事事，感到空虚寂寞。请你向“China Daily”报社专栏写一封关于让这些老年人欢度老年时光的建议信。注意： 1、空巢老人的现象；    空巢老人(empty nester)2、提建议及建议的理由；（至少两条建议）3、开头与结束已给出，不计入总词数。词数120左右；4、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear editor,   Sincerely yours,Wan Ming【参考范文】 Dear editor，As the aging population is becoming larger and larger, the problem of the empty nesters is getting more and more serious. Many of them doing nothing at home, feeling lonely and empty.I think they had better join in some outdoor activities，such as climbing mountains，playing Taiji. These activities can not only keep them physically healthy, but also make them happy and active. It is also a good idea for the old people to make some friends with the people of their age. They can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness. Having friends means that they can have someone to talk to so that you won't feel lonely and depressed.In my opinion, these suggestions may be helpful to them. I hope all the empty nesters will have a happy old life in future.Sincerely yours,Wan Ming【写作分析】 考查应用文中的建议信。建议信主要是向对方提出建议，以便对方接受自己的建议，从而解决相关问题。一般分三段：第一段开门见山让收信人明白写信人要提的建议是关于什么，一般用概括性句子说明建议；第二段说明建议的具体内容和理由，注意条理清晰；第三段则希望对方接纳自己的建议或希望自己的建议对对方有帮助。本文主要是就空巢老人提出自己的建议。【亮点说明】文章条理清晰，第一段直指主题；第二段说明建议内容和理由；最后一段希望自己的建议对对方有帮助。文章使用了多种表达方式和短语，如：not only…but also…、of their age、keep each other in company、share their experiences and happiness等等。4读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Want to go to the pool tomorrow?” Rosa asked Stephanie during break time.The pool Rosa mentioned was one of their favorite places.Rosa and Stephanie did everything together. They rode the school bus together. They sat together during lunch. They took dance lessons together and even went to the same summer camp. They were best friends. Most of the time.Sometimes, though, when Stephanie was with other friends, she ignored Rosa or treated her like a little kid, even though they were the same age.Today was one of those times.“Sorry. I’m already going to the pool,” Stephanie said. “Toni and Vanessa and I are going.” She smiled, but it wasn’t her nice smile. She walked away to join Toni and Vanessa, and Rose was left standing alone.After school, at dance class, Stephanie talked and laughed with the other dancers as they stretched in front of the mirror. Rosa wanted to join them, but she still felt too upset.Then she noticed Kiara, the new girl, standing with one leg up on the barre. Rosa joined her and began stretching, too. Kiara smiled, and Rosa smiled back. Rosa tried not to check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed. I hope she feels left out. Rosa thought.The next morning, when Rosa got on the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat. Stephanie quickly moved her schoolbag off the seat to make room for Rosa. But Rosa walked past her and took the empty seat next to Kiara.How does it feel now? Rosa thought.On the bus ride, Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet girl Rosa had thought she was. She talked a lot-about her little brother, about the tree house her uncle had built, and even about swimming.“I love swimming!” Rosa said.“Me too,” Kiara said. “My dad said he’d take my brother and me to swim tonight.”“Great!” Rosa said.“Maybe you can come with us tonight,” Kiara said. “That would be fun,” said Rosa.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Paragraph 1:When they stepped off the bus, Stephanie was waiting on the sidewalk.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Rosa suddenly began to feel unhappy and her face began to burn.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Paragraph 1:When they stepped off the bus, Stephanie was waiting on the sidewalk. “Did you want to go swimming tonight?” Stephanie asked Rosa. Here’s my chance. I hope Stephanie feels left out. I will ignore her just as she ignored me, Rosa thought. “I’m already going,” she said. “Kiara and I are going together.” She smiled. Somehow she knew it wasn’t her nice smile. Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet. She seemed very upset.Paragraph 2:Rosa suddenly began to feel unhappy and her face began to burn. Why didn’t she feel happy? Getting even was what she’d wanted, wasn’t it? I could walk away with my new friend and not look back, Rosa thought. But it was too late. She had seen Stephanie’s face. Getting even didn’t feel the way she’d expected. It didn’t feel good at all. “Um,” she said instead, “maybe we could go to the pool together.” Stephanie brightened. “I’d like that.” Rosa said.【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Stephanie拒绝了和Rosa一起去游泳，结果Kiara邀请了Rosa晚上和她一起去游泳。这时Stephanie却来邀请Rosa，Rosa为了报复Stephanie，说自己要和Kiara一起去。但是Rosa并不为自己的报复感到开心，最后她们决定一起去游泳。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当他们下车时，Stephanie正在人行道上等着。”可知，第一段可描写Stephanie邀请Rosa去游泳，结果被Rosa拒绝的事情。②由第二段首句内容“Rosa突然感到不高兴，她的脸开始发烫。”可知，第二段可描写Rosa对自己拒绝Stephanie行为的感受。2.续写线索：Stephanie邀请游泳——Rosa拒绝——Rosa感到不安——二人一起去游泳3.词汇激活行为类下车：step off/ get off忽略：ignore/feel left out/ neglect离开：walk away / go away情绪类沮丧：unhappy / upset /discouraged高兴：brighten/ cheer【写作亮点】[高分句型1] I hope Stephanie feels left out. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Getting even was what she’d wanted, wasn’t it? (运用了动名词作主语以及what引导表语从句)5阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Picture this: After saving up your money, you finally have enough to buy that toy, game, or piece of clothing you've been dreaming of. You go to the store and find the item. But at the counter, you see a sign: "Hello! We've gone cashless(不用现金)."Situations like this may become common if more stores and restaurants stop accepting cash as a payment. Instead, customers must pay with a credit card, or by smartphone app. Many business owners believe that getting rid of cash has benefited the way their business run. Staff members don't have to worry about having enough money to make change or about delivering bills and coins to the bank.But a growing number of people think that cashless stores are unfair. According to the Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation, more than 8 million households in the US don't have bank accounts. Also, many people, including kids, don't meet the requirements for a credit card. "A cashless economy(经济)is not an inclusive(包容广阔的)economy," Tazra Mitchell told National Public Radio. She's a policy director at the DC Fiscal Policy Institute. In her opinion, cashless stores are "essentially discriminating (歧视)against people". Plus, people who do have credit cards might prefer paying with cash. "Cash is still very popular with consumers," Nick Bourke said. He's a director at the Pew Charitable Trusts' consumer finance project. "It's used by almost eight in ten adults in the US every month. That's more than any other payment type."Lawmakers in several places have taken steps to ban cashless stores. A handful of major cities including New York City and Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, have already passed laws to solve the issue. In San Francisco, California, a law banning cashless stores was passed in May. It says most stores in the city must allow customers to pay with cash. Cerek REmski helped write the San Francisco law. He works for the city. "It's really about equity(公平)," Remski said. "It's about understanding that not everyone has equal access to things."______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Cashless economy has been born / been with us / become a reality / found its way into our life and tends to become increasingly common if more businesses, considering its benefits, join in. But more and more people think the type of payment is unfair for those who have no bank accounts, no credit cards or have a preference for cash payment. Therefore in some American cities, laws have been passed to forbid cashless businesses for the sake of customers' equity.【文章大意】这是一篇议论文。主要论述了，随着时代发展科技进步，无现金现象越来越普遍，以及由此带来的不同观点。【写作步骤】1. 要点摘录①We've gone cashless.②Situations like this may become common if more stores and restaurants stop accepting cash as a payment. ③But a growing number of people think that cashless stores are unfair. ④According to the Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation, more than 8 million households in the US don't have bank accounts. ⑤Plus, people who do have credit cards might prefer paying with cash. ⑥Lawmakers in several places have taken steps to ban cashless stores.A handful of major cities including New York City and Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, have already passed laws to solve the issue. In San Francisco, California, a law banning cashless stores was passed in May. 2.缜密构思将第1、2以及3、4、5五个要点进行重组，将第6要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Cashless economy is becoming more common if more stores stop accepting cash as as a payment.A growing number of people think that cashless stores are unfair and cash is still very popular with consumers.Laws have already been passed to solve the issue in some major cities.【写作亮点】[高分句型1] Cashless economy has found its way into our life and tends to become increasingly common if more businesses, considering its benefits, join in. 运用if引导的条件状语从句将一二段的内容进行总结，表达高级。[高分句型2] But more and more people think the type of payment is unfair for those who have no bank accounts, no credit cards or have a preference for cash payment.用who 引导的限制性定语从句将第三段的部分内容进行总结，表达高级。