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背诵积累区：背诵迁移 举一反三
一、必背单词
1.愤怒类形容词：
angry, furius ,annyed, mad, annying
2.愤怒类名词：
anger, rage, fury, annyance, irritatin
3. 愤怒类动词：
glare怒目而视；rar/strm怒吼；anger 使发怒，激怒；rage 发怒，怒斥；anny使恼怒；irritate 使发怒
二、高频语块
1. fly int a fury勃然大怒
2. tremble with anger 气得发抖
3. a burst f anger 一股怒火
4. flush with anger 气红了脸
5. get mad/crss at sb. 生某人的气
6. t ne’s annyance 令某人生气的是
7. explde with anger 勃然大怒
8. burst int anger/annyance 勃然大怒
9. cntain ne’s anger 抑制怒火
10. set ff ne’s anger 让某人生气
11. fuel ne’s anger 使某人更加愤怒
12. stamp ne’s feet in anger 生气地跺脚
13. strm ut f/int/ff气冲冲地……
14. shake/bil with anger/ rage怒火中烧
15. lse ne's temper 发脾气
16. be tngue-tied with anger气得说不出话来
17. stamp ne's ft in anger某人气得直跺脚
18. be seized/vercme/swallwed by anger 非常生气
19. be verwhelmed by anger/annyance 非常生气
20. feel a surge f anger (rage/fury)感到―阵愤怒
三、佳句赏析
1. His anger biled ver.他怒火中烧。
2. His face flamed with anger.他气得面红耳赤。
3. His face was cluded with anger.他怒容满面。
4. He went purple with anger.他气得脸色发紫。
5. He sprang up in a fury.他勃然大怒，跳了起来。
6. Her cheeks flamed an angry red.她气得脸涨红了。
7. His teeth lcked tgether in anger.他气得咬牙切齿。
8. Mary's face turned t thunder.玛丽的表情变得愤怒起来。
9. He lked as if he were ging t burst.他看上去快要气炸了。
10. He trembled with anger frm head t ft.他气得浑身发抖。
11. He was breathing fire and fury.他连呼吸都喷着火焰和怒气。
12. Anger engulfed him like a wild beast.怒火如同野兽一般将他吞没。
13. Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. Jim 怒火中烧，朝我挥舞着拳头。
15. The dreadful man leaped ut f his chair with a rar.那可怕的人咆哮着从椅子上跳了起来。
16. Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。
17. A flush f anger spread acrss Mr. Murdstne's cheeks. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。
18. Her clr came up, a heavy rage came ver her like a dark clud.她脸色突变，一股怒火像乌云一样笼罩着她的脸。
19. He grasped the thing in bth hands, a fire f rage burning in his heart.他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。
20. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a vlcan.她的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。
测试巩固区：分级测试 步步为赢
一、高频语块汉译英
1.气得发抖
2.一股怒火
3.气红了脸
4.勃然大怒
5.勃然大怒
6.抑制怒火
7.让某人生气
8.使某人更加愤怒
9.生气地跺脚
10.气冲冲地……
11.发脾气
12.气得说不出话来
13.非常生气
14.非常生气
15.感到―阵愤怒
二、佳句赏析汉译英
1. His anger biled ver.他怒火中烧。
2. His face flamed with anger.他气得面红耳赤。
3. His face was cluded with anger.他怒容满面。
4. He sprang up in a fury.他勃然大怒，跳了起来。
5. Her cheeks flamed an angry red.她气得脸涨红了。
6. His teeth lcked tgether in anger.他气得咬牙切齿。
7. He lked as if he were ging t burst.他看上去快要气炸了。
8. He trembled with anger frm head t ft.他气得浑身发抖。
9. Anger engulfed him like a wild beast.怒火如同野兽一般将他吞没。
10. Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. Jim 怒火中烧，朝我挥舞着拳头。
11. Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。
12. A flush f anger spread acrss Mr. Murdstne's cheeks. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。
13. Her clr came up, a heavy rage came ver her like a dark clud.她脸色突变，一股怒火像乌云一样笼罩着她的脸。
14. He grasped the thing in bth hands, a fire f rage burning in his heart.他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。
15. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a vlcan.她的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。
三、情感表达片段运用
请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。
The dr pened and in came a yung man. Shcked t see us packing things int ur suitcase, the yung man 1 (愤怒地大叫了一声,眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒). 2 （他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去）.He accused us f illegally entering his rm and threatened t call the plice, which scared my children t death. Just at that mment, my husband returned after his grcery shpping. Hearing the man's rude wrds, 3 (一股怒火在心中燃烧). It seemed that n settlement wuld be pssible, and the situatin reached a biling pint.4 (争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了). Eventually, 5 (无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间,狠狠地摔上门).
四、情感表达语篇运用
1.（2023上·重庆渝北·高三重庆市渝北中学校校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our church cngregatin (集会) in Trnt has a way f assisting thse wh have financial difficulties withut making the receiver feel shame r guilt. Mney is drpped int an ffering bx with nly the name f the receiver n the envelpe. The envelpes are then distributed t thse members withut them knwing the name f the giver.
There came a time when my husband and I were amng thse in need. Bth f us lst jbs at that time and there was little hpe that we culd be emplyed within a shrt time. Of curse, ut f self-esteem (自尊), we did nt talk abut ur financial difficulty with anyne else. The nly reasn ur children knew was that we had t cut back n many things. Still, we hped they were nt aware f the extent f ur need, nr f hw much their father and I were suffering because f it. We did nt want t burden them with a prblem they culd d nthing t slve.
With time ging by, ur situatin wasn’t imprving, and my husband and I knew that we wuld have t lk fr utside help. In that cld winter, just as we reached the pint f despair, ur church gave us a gift envelpe that had been left in the ffering bx. Yu culdn’t imagine hw verjyed we were n receiving such a very substantial amunt f mney, which was enugh t bring us thrugh that desperate time. We culdn’t help but wnder wh had given such a generus gift. We were extremely relieved and enrmusly grateful. In this way, we culd survive this tugh perid with the mney. Besides, we needn’t wrry abut ur sn’s university tuitin, that is, he needn’t apply fr any lan because he had taken a part-time jb and wrked hard t earn sme mney since he was nine years ld. He had been a paper carrier fr The Trnt Star, a car washer, a dishwasher and s n. He had been careful fr his small earnings s we had trusted him t leave all his wages with him instead f putting it int the bank twards his educatin.
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One year later, ur sn was applying fr a student lan.
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Finally, in tears, and with great unwillingness, my sn tld us the truth.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫因为失业有了经济困难，幸亏得到了教会的帮助。他们可以用这笔钱度过这段艰难的时期，并且不需要担心儿子的大学学费。结果一年后发现儿子正在申请学生贷款，追问才得知儿子把自己的积蓄当作礼物送给了急需用钱的父母。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一年后，我们的儿子正在申请学生贷款”可知，第一段可描写作者发现儿子的财务状况有异样以后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，我儿子带着极大的不甘，流着泪告诉了我们真相。”可知，第二段可描写儿子坦白积蓄放在了捐款箱里，以及作者和丈夫感动。
2.续写线索：发现储蓄账户是空的——担心钱被滥用——追问儿子——得知真相——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发现：discver/find
②要求：require/request/ask
③大喊：yell/shut
情绪类
①激发我的怒火：fuel my anger/aruse my annyance
②喉咙哽咽：with a lump in my thrat/with my thrat tightening
【点睛】【高分句型1】What disturbed us was that he might abuse the mney. （由what引导d 主语从句，that引导d 表语从句）
【高分句型2】Never in my life had I been aware f my sn’s lve, silent but pure and deep, which had carried ur family thrugh the tugh time and nw warmed my life like sunshine.（由which引导d 非限定性定语从句）
2. （2023上·湖北·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Precius Dress
I was raised in a family where my parents were united in their way f bringing up children, but it mstly fell t my mther t actually carry it ut, and she managed the family budget effrtlessly. Lking back, I hnestly think I wuld be a different persn if my mum hadn’t turned a dress int a life lessn I carry with me tday.
If we cmplained abut nt having what anther kid did, we’d hear smething like I dn’t care what s-and-s gt fr his birthday, yu are nt getting a car fr yur birthday r a lavish sweet-16 party. We had t earn ur allwance (零用钱) by ding chres arund the huse. My brthers can n dubt remember hurs spent cleaning the huse. I can still remember hw lng it tk t plish the legs f ur dining table. Smetimes, I culdn’t even cntain my envy f Chle, a neighburhd girl, always beautifully dressed, whse parents satisfied her with almst every need.
One day, my mther drve me dwntwn t buy sme husehld necessities-and there it was in the shpping windw. Pink, lvely, delicately trimmed (镶嵌着) with lace, the dress winked (眨眼) at me and I knew I had t have it. “It’s beautiful, ” my mther said when I pinted it ut t her. “What a beautiful dress! ”
I tried t hide my desire at first. But then I guess I culdn’t stand it any lnger. “Mum, please get it? I’ll d anything, but I need that dress. I lve it. Please?”
I was desperate.
“Yu knw,” she said, gently rubbing my back, “if yu save up, yu culd buy this yurself.”
“By the time I make enugh, it’ll be sld!”
“There might be a way,” she said.
And s ur paying plan unflded. Mum bught the dress and put it safely in sme hiding place where I culdn’t find. Each week I eagerly cunted my grwing savings increased by extra wrk. Weeks later, I cunted and jumped fr jy. Oh, I made it! I finally had the exact amunt we’d agreed n Having put n my dress, I flew t schl like a bird. Hwever, the unthinkable happened.
The mment I arrived at the schl gate, Chle appeared in exactly the same dress.
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Hearing me crying ludly, Mum gently pushed pen the dr.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者的母亲从小就培养他们的独立意识，要求孩子们必须通过做家务来挣钱去买自己想要的东西。作者看中一件漂亮的裙子，等攒够了足够的钱时，却发现同班女孩非常轻易地就拥有同样的裙子，作者感到非常不公平，最终在母亲的开导下，意识到通过自己的努力获得的东西才是最有价值的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我一到学校门口，克洛伊就穿着同样的衣服出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到同学穿着同样的裙子的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“听到我的哭声，妈妈轻轻地推开门。”可知，第二段可描写母亲对作者的开导和教育。
2.续写线索：做家务挣零花钱——相中裙子——努力攒钱——感到不公——母亲开导——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲进家：dash hme/rush hme
②大叫：exclaim/shut
③走近：walk up t/apprach t
情绪类
①温柔地：tenderly/fndly
②开心的：cheerful/jyful/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]“It’s unfair!” I exclaimed with fury, strming int my rm and slamming the dr befre she culd respnd.（运用了现在分词作状语及befre引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]On hearing what she said, I felt much relieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
原卷版
背诵积累区：背诵迁移 举一反三
一、必背单词
1.愤怒类形容词：
angry, furius ,annyed, mad, annying
2.愤怒类名词：
anger, rage, fury, annyance, irritatin
3. 愤怒类动词：
glare怒目而视；rar/strm怒吼；anger 使发怒，激怒；rage 发怒，怒斥；anny使恼怒；irritate 使发怒
二、高频语块
1. fly int a fury勃然大怒
2. tremble with anger 气得发抖
3. a burst f anger 一股怒火
4. flush with anger 气红了脸
5. get mad/crss at sb. 生某人的气
6. t ne’s annyance 令某人生气的是
7. explde with anger 勃然大怒
8. burst int anger/annyance 勃然大怒
9. cntain ne’s anger 抑制怒火
10. set ff ne’s anger 让某人生气
11. fuel ne’s anger 使某人更加愤怒
12. stamp ne’s feet in anger 生气地跺脚
13. strm ut f/int/ff气冲冲地……
14. shake/bil with anger/ rage怒火中烧
15. lse ne's temper 发脾气
16. be tngue-tied with anger气得说不出话来
17. stamp ne's ft in anger某人气得直跺脚
18. be seized/vercme/swallwed by anger 非常生气
19. be verwhelmed by anger/annyance 非常生气
20. feel a surge f anger (rage/fury)感到―阵愤怒
三、佳句赏析
1. His anger biled ver.他怒火中烧。
2. His face flamed with anger.他气得面红耳赤。
3. His face was cluded with anger.他怒容满面。
4. He went purple with anger.他气得脸色发紫。
5. He sprang up in a fury.他勃然大怒，跳了起来。
6. Her cheeks flamed an angry red.她气得脸涨红了。
7. His teeth lcked tgether in anger.他气得咬牙切齿。
8. Mary's face turned t thunder.玛丽的表情变得愤怒起来。
9. He lked as if he were ging t burst.他看上去快要气炸了。
10. He trembled with anger frm head t ft.他气得浑身发抖。
11. He was breathing fire and fury.他连呼吸都喷着火焰和怒气。
12. Anger engulfed him like a wild beast.怒火如同野兽一般将他吞没。
13. Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. Jim 怒火中烧，朝我挥舞着拳头。
15. The dreadful man leaped ut f his chair with a rar.那可怕的人咆哮着从椅子上跳了起来。
16. Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。
17. A flush f anger spread acrss Mr. Murdstne's cheeks. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。
18. Her clr came up, a heavy rage came ver her like a dark clud.她脸色突变，一股怒火像乌云一样笼罩着她的脸。
19. He grasped the thing in bth hands, a fire f rage burning in his heart.他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。
20. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a vlcan.她的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。
测试巩固区：分级测试 步步为赢
一、高频语块汉译英
1.气得发抖
2.一股怒火
3.气红了脸
4.勃然大怒
5.勃然大怒
6.抑制怒火
7.让某人生气
8.使某人更加愤怒
9.生气地跺脚
10.气冲冲地……
11.发脾气
12.气得说不出话来
13.非常生气
14.非常生气
15.感到―阵愤怒
二、佳句赏析汉译英
1. His anger biled ver.他怒火中烧。
2. His face flamed with anger.他气得面红耳赤。
3. His face was cluded with anger.他怒容满面。
4. He sprang up in a fury.他勃然大怒，跳了起来。
5. Her cheeks flamed an angry red.她气得脸涨红了。
6. His teeth lcked tgether in anger.他气得咬牙切齿。
7. He lked as if he were ging t burst.他看上去快要气炸了。
8. He trembled with anger frm head t ft.他气得浑身发抖。
9. Anger engulfed him like a wild beast.怒火如同野兽一般将他吞没。
10. Biling with rage, Jim shk his fist at me. Jim 怒火中烧，朝我挥舞着拳头。
11. Filled with fury, Jim was unable t utter a single wrd. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。
12. A flush f anger spread acrss Mr. Murdstne's cheeks. 一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。
13. Her clr came up, a heavy rage came ver her like a dark clud.她脸色突变，一股怒火像乌云一样笼罩着她的脸。
14. He grasped the thing in bth hands, a fire f rage burning in his heart.他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。
15. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a vlcan.她的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。
三、情感表达片段运用
请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。
The dr pened and in came a yung man. Shcked t see us packing things int ur suitcase, the yung man 1 (愤怒地大叫了一声,眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒). 2 （他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去）.He accused us f illegally entering his rm and threatened t call the plice, which scared my children t death. Just at that mment, my husband returned after his grcery shpping. Hearing the man's rude wrds, 3 (一股怒火在心中燃烧). It seemed that n settlement wuld be pssible, and the situatin reached a biling pint.4 (争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了). Eventually, 5 (无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间,狠狠地摔上门).
四、情感表达语篇运用
1.（2023上·重庆渝北·高三重庆市渝北中学校校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our church cngregatin (集会) in Trnt has a way f assisting thse wh have financial difficulties withut making the receiver feel shame r guilt. Mney is drpped int an ffering bx with nly the name f the receiver n the envelpe. The envelpes are then distributed t thse members withut them knwing the name f the giver.
There came a time when my husband and I were amng thse in need. Bth f us lst jbs at that time and there was little hpe that we culd be emplyed within a shrt time. Of curse, ut f self-esteem (自尊), we did nt talk abut ur financial difficulty with anyne else. The nly reasn ur children knew was that we had t cut back n many things. Still, we hped they were nt aware f the extent f ur need, nr f hw much their father and I were suffering because f it. We did nt want t burden them with a prblem they culd d nthing t slve.
With time ging by, ur situatin wasn’t imprving, and my husband and I knew that we wuld have t lk fr utside help. In that cld winter, just as we reached the pint f despair, ur church gave us a gift envelpe that had been left in the ffering bx. Yu culdn’t imagine hw verjyed we were n receiving such a very substantial amunt f mney, which was enugh t bring us thrugh that desperate time. We culdn’t help but wnder wh had given such a generus gift. We were extremely relieved and enrmusly grateful. In this way, we culd survive this tugh perid with the mney. Besides, we needn’t wrry abut ur sn’s university tuitin, that is, he needn’t apply fr any lan because he had taken a part-time jb and wrked hard t earn sme mney since he was nine years ld. He had been a paper carrier fr The Trnt Star, a car washer, a dishwasher and s n. He had been careful fr his small earnings s we had trusted him t leave all his wages with him instead f putting it int the bank twards his educatin.
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One year later, ur sn was applying fr a student lan.
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Finally, in tears, and with great unwillingness, my sn tld us the truth.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫因为失业有了经济困难，幸亏得到了教会的帮助。他们可以用这笔钱度过这段艰难的时期，并且不需要担心儿子的大学学费。结果一年后发现儿子正在申请学生贷款，追问才得知儿子把自己的积蓄当作礼物送给了急需用钱的父母。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一年后，我们的儿子正在申请学生贷款”可知，第一段可描写作者发现儿子的财务状况有异样以后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，我儿子带着极大的不甘，流着泪告诉了我们真相。”可知，第二段可描写儿子坦白积蓄放在了捐款箱里，以及作者和丈夫感动。
2.续写线索：发现储蓄账户是空的——担心钱被滥用——追问儿子——得知真相——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发现：discver/find
②要求：require/request/ask
③大喊：yell/shut
情绪类
①激发我的怒火：fuel my anger/aruse my annyance
②喉咙哽咽：with a lump in my thrat/with my thrat tightening
【点睛】【高分句型1】What disturbed us was that he might abuse the mney. （由what引导d 主语从句，that引导d 表语从句）
【高分句型2】Never in my life had I been aware f my sn’s lve, silent but pure and deep, which had carried ur family thrugh the tugh time and nw warmed my life like sunshine.（由which引导d 非限定性定语从句）
2. （2023上·湖北·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Precius Dress
I was raised in a family where my parents were united in their way f bringing up children, but it mstly fell t my mther t actually carry it ut, and she managed the family budget effrtlessly. Lking back, I hnestly think I wuld be a different persn if my mum hadn’t turned a dress int a life lessn I carry with me tday.
If we cmplained abut nt having what anther kid did, we’d hear smething like I dn’t care what s-and-s gt fr his birthday, yu are nt getting a car fr yur birthday r a lavish sweet-16 party. We had t earn ur allwance (零用钱) by ding chres arund the huse. My brthers can n dubt remember hurs spent cleaning the huse. I can still remember hw lng it tk t plish the legs f ur dining table. Smetimes, I culdn’t even cntain my envy f Chle, a neighburhd girl, always beautifully dressed, whse parents satisfied her with almst every need.
One day, my mther drve me dwntwn t buy sme husehld necessities-and there it was in the shpping windw. Pink, lvely, delicately trimmed (镶嵌着) with lace, the dress winked (眨眼) at me and I knew I had t have it. “It’s beautiful, ” my mther said when I pinted it ut t her. “What a beautiful dress! ”
I tried t hide my desire at first. But then I guess I culdn’t stand it any lnger. “Mum, please get it? I’ll d anything, but I need that dress. I lve it. Please?”
I was desperate.
“Yu knw,” she said, gently rubbing my back, “if yu save up, yu culd buy this yurself.”
“By the time I make enugh, it’ll be sld!”
“There might be a way,” she said.
And s ur paying plan unflded. Mum bught the dress and put it safely in sme hiding place where I culdn’t find. Each week I eagerly cunted my grwing savings increased by extra wrk. Weeks later, I cunted and jumped fr jy. Oh, I made it! I finally had the exact amunt we’d agreed n Having put n my dress, I flew t schl like a bird. Hwever, the unthinkable happened.
The mment I arrived at the schl gate, Chle appeared in exactly the same dress.
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Hearing me crying ludly, Mum gently pushed pen the dr.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者的母亲从小就培养他们的独立意识，要求孩子们必须通过做家务来挣钱去买自己想要的东西。作者看中一件漂亮的裙子，等攒够了足够的钱时，却发现同班女孩非常轻易地就拥有同样的裙子，作者感到非常不公平，最终在母亲的开导下，意识到通过自己的努力获得的东西才是最有价值的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我一到学校门口，克洛伊就穿着同样的衣服出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到同学穿着同样的裙子的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“听到我的哭声，妈妈轻轻地推开门。”可知，第二段可描写母亲对作者的开导和教育。
2.续写线索：做家务挣零花钱——相中裙子——努力攒钱——感到不公——母亲开导——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲进家：dash hme/rush hme
②大叫：exclaim/shut
③走近：walk up t/apprach t
情绪类
①温柔地：tenderly/fndly
②开心的：cheerful/jyful/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]“It’s unfair!” I exclaimed with fury, strming int my rm and slamming the dr befre she culd respnd.（运用了现在分词作状语及befre引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]On hearing what she said, I felt much relieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
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