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八年级下册英语Unit8《A green world》必背单元话题满分作文范文1．10月4日是世界动物日，你校举办了“Protecting animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿。内容要点：Hello, everyone．I’m Li Hua．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．动物与人类生活息息相关，然而，随着污染现象日益严峻以及栖息地大幅度地减少，许多动物面临着无家可归和濒临灭绝。为了进一步了解动物的生存状况，上周末你到广州长隆动物园进行实地调研，请以“My opinions on visiting a zoo”写一篇文章。内容包括：（1）你到广州长隆动物园的交通方式和耗时，通过比较，说明你选择这个交通方式的理由。（2）你在动物园的所见以及感受？对于保护野生动物有什么建议（两点）；（3）呼吁人们保护环境、保护野生动物。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My Opinions on Visiting a ZooLast weekend, in order to know more about the endangered animals, I went to Guangzhou Chimelong Zoo with my parents．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。要求：（1）词数：80-100词。（2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。（3）要有复合句的表达。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是雷军，你的美国网友David来信表示他对目前中国雾霾天气很担心，请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：注意：（1）词数100左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，使文章连贯流畅；（3）不可透露个人信息；（4）注意书写工整，卷面整洁。Dear David,I'm glad to receive your letter．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Lei Jun5．随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：（1）节约用水、用电(electricity)；(各举一例)（2）去超市自备购物袋；（3）少买不必要的衣服；（4）不要使用一次性的(one-off)杯子和碗筷(chopsticks)；（5）步行或骑自行车上学；（6）栽更多的树。注意：（1）词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。With the global environment getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!6．书面表达6月5日是世界环境保护日，你校组织以 “Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：要求：（1）要点完整，可适当发挥， 使句子通顺、连贯。（2）正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。 （3）100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Being a volunteer of going greenHello，everyone．I’m Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of going green．I’m glad to make a speech here．___________________________________________________________________________________If I can be a volunteer， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening!7．地球是我们共同的家园，学校微信公众号要推送一篇以"Our earth, our home"为题的文章。假设你是学校"环保小卫士"杜团的成员，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，宣传环保知识。注意：（1）所写内容必须包括图中所有的信息，并当发挥；（2）词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；（3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息Our earth, our homeThe earth is our home．It was clean and beautiful in the past．However __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．本学期8A英语教材给我们提供了大量有关野生动物的阅读素材，让我们感受了希望成长的艰难和鸟类志愿者的艰辛。请从右侧的图片中选择一种野生动物，并根据左侧思维导图的提示，以校学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书，以便号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的队伍。注意事项：（1）倡议书须包括思维导图中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；（2）思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥；（3）词数在80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（4）倡议书内容必须写在答题卷指定的位置上。 Dear friends,Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth．But they are facing many problems．I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I think everybody should act to protect wild animals．Let’s take action now!Students’ Union9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。要求：（1）内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Milk, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities．To be an ecological citizen(生态公民), we did a good job．Last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Now the environment around us becomes better and better．Welcome to my hometown one day．Yours,Li Hua10．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你准备在学校举办的英语节活动中做演讲，请你以Protect the Earth and Love Animals为题写一篇演讲稿。注意：（1）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）包括所有要点，并适当发挥；（3）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone．Today I am very happy to be here and talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all．Thanks for listening． 现状很多动物濒临灭绝原因人们侵占了它们的土地和森林；没有足够多的干净水……意义我们应该保护动物，动物是人类的朋友 打算……1．感谢David的关注。2．① 雾霾（haze）导致疾病增多，如肺癌（lung cancer）， 呼吸道疾病 （throat hurts）等；② 人们不得不减少户外活动；③ 影响交通导致事故频发。3．你对改善空气质量的建议（至少两点建议）。品质助人为乐，善良，有礼貌爱好旅游，阅读，锻炼事迹做过环保志愿者，为WWF筹集过资金 感悟地球是我们唯一的家园不应乱扔垃圾，必须保护环境措施……(至少两点)现状●地球逐步变暖●野生动物骤减●自然灾害频发原因●人口急剧增长●大量砍伐森林●滥捕野生动物建议●人人行动起来●考生自拟（至少一点）愿望●考生自拟Your ideaProtect the Earth and Love AnimalsProblems1．人们捕杀动物；2．渔民过渡捕鱼，鸟类失去足够的食物；3．……Ways1．政府；……2．学生；……Importance如果我们……，……/如果我们不……，……（写一种即可）参考范文1．例文Protecting animalsHello, everyone．I’m Li Hua．Now many animals are on the verge of extinction．Because people have encroached on their land and forests．The water is no longer clean．Many of them don’t have enough clean water to drink．Besides, many people kill some wild animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat．However, we all know that animals are human friends．We must protect animals．I will be kind to my pet dog and plan to feed the stray cats regularly on weekends．We should plant more trees to build homes for wild animals and prevent them from being killed．Let's protect wild animals together．Thank you!【解析】1．题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Protecting animals”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈动物濒临灭绝的原因和保护动物的意义和打算。2．写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三、第一人称和一般现在时为主，以一般将来时为辅来叙述；写作时承接开头，要写出动物濒临灭绝的原因及保护动物的意义和打算，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。2．例文：My Opinions on Visiting a ZooLast weekend, in order to know more about the endangered animals, I went to Guangzhou Chimelong Zoo with my parents．I took the subway to The Chimelong Zoo in Guangzhou．It took me one hour and a quarter．Although the subway is crowded, it is the greenest way．I think the subway is the most convenient way to get there because the subway has covered all over Guangzhou．At the zoo, I saw many animals．They are all lovely．I think animals are our friends and we should protect them．But how to protect animals? First, we should treat them as our friends．Second, we should give the homeless animals a home．In the end, I hope all of us can play a role in protecting animals and environment．【解析】【详解】1．题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“My Opinions on Visiting a Zoo”为主题展开描写，介绍在动物园的所见所闻以及感受以及给出相应的建议。内容可以围绕着题目中给出的提示要点进行描写，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2．写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍去动物园的方式、所需时间以及在动物园的见闻及感受，最后提出保护动物保护环境的建议。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。3．The environmental problems are very serious these days．In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment．I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room．And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps．Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping．Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference．How important for us to protect the environment!【解析】高分句型：I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room．当我们离开房间时，我们应该关掉灯来省电。这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps．当我们刷牙的时候，我们最好关掉水龙头。这里had better do sth．表示最好做某事。【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求就习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？写一篇英语短文，表达自己的想法。本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词；词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一，这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。4．Dear David,I'm very glad to receive your letter．From your letter I learn that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．Thank you for your concern．I'm also very worried about such terrible weather because it has caused much inconvenience or great harm to people's health, such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and even lung cancers and so on．As everyone knows, a good environment comes from good protection．So we should do what we can to make a difference．Try to drive less and choose environment-friendly products．Only when everyone has the environmental awareness, can we have cleaner air．Looking forward to hearing from you soon and share your good ideas!Yours, Li hua【解析】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给网友David写信，给他介绍中国的雾霾天气，并对改善空气质量提出建议。文章中应包括以下内容：首先对David的关心表示感谢；然后具体介绍雾霾天气的情况及其危害；最后给出自己的建议。题目中用表格的形式列出了主要的写作内容，学生们应以此为提纲，丰富更多的细节，用正确的英语表达出来。写作指导：审题可知，短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时注意按照文章内容划分段落，使文章结构清晰。注意英语句式的结构和表达习惯，使用一些较好的词汇和句型，提升文章档次。同时上下文语句之间应使用合适的衔接成分，使文意连贯。5．As middle school students, we’d better save water and electricity．We should turn off the tap after we wash our hands．It’s important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave a room．We should take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarkets．We can buy few clothes which are unnecessary．We shouldn’t use one-off cups, chopsticks or bowls．It’s good for us to walk or ride bicycles to school instead of taking cars．We can also plant more trees around us．Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!【解析】写作分析：写作的主题是环保，通过提出一些倡议、一些做法来呼吁环保，写作的时候要注意文章的完整性，要有开头，在描述各条建议的时候要注意正确书写短语，注意各条建议之间的连贯性，最后要注意有收尾，总体来说写作难度不大。写作亮点：首先，首句要点明写作目的，用到了had better do最好做…，save water and electricity节水节电这样的短语。接下来就对各条建议进行详细描述，可以用到的句型是We should…我们应该…，It’s important to do…做…是重要的，It’s good for us to…做．．对我们来说是很好的。相关短语使用也很准确，例如turn off the tap关闭水龙头， turn off the lights and computers 关灯关电脑，using plastic bags 使用塑料袋，use one-off cups 使用一次性杯子。文章末尾有倡议，Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!（让我们行动起来，做低碳一族吧！），总体来说写作结构完整，短语句型运用正确，有开头有结尾，完成了题目要求的写作任务。6．Being a volunteer of going greenHello，everyone．I’m Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of going green．I’m glad to make a speech here．I’m kind to others．I’m willing to help others any time．I know the importance of good manners．In my free time，I like traveling， reading and exercising．I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment．I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF．Earth is our only home．We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly．I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment．If we work together， we can make the world a better place．If I can be a volunteer， I can do many things for our environment．I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth．I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled．I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth．Thank you for listening!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，从五个方面分别竭力推荐自己。复合句的使用I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment．If we work together， we can make the world a better place．为文章增色不少，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：提纲类作文。7．One possible version：The earth is our home．It was clean and beautiful in the past．However, it's getting warmer now．The number of wild animals gets much smaller．Natural disasters happen more often than before．Why does this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth．Second, people cut down forests and kill too many wild animals．What can we do? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth．We should stop people killing wild animals．We can also plant more trees and build more reserves．I hope our earth will become a better place for us to live．【解析】1．题干解读：本题要求写一篇号召大家保护环境的短文，根据题干中表格给出的要点提示从现状、原因、建议以及愿望四方面来叙述。注意要点齐全，可自行发挥。2．写作指导：写作中主要用一般现在时，叙述现状、原因以及建议，愿望可以用一般将来时；所有内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。此文章属于常规内容，相对比较简单。学生需要用一些高级的语法来提高文章水平。8．One possible versionDear friends,Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth．But they are facing many problems．I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them．I like tigers best among all the wild animals．They have yellow fur with black strips．Tigers like living in groups．They are very brave．They can run fast, but only for a short while．They can also swim and climb trees．Tigers eat small animals for food, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on．However, these big cats are in great danger now．They don’t have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller．I think everybody should act to protect wild animals．Let’s take action now!Students’ Union【解析】1．题干解读：这篇作文要求考生写一封英文倡议书，根据图片和思维导图的提示，谈一谈自己对野生动物的看法，号召同学们加入保护野生动物的队伍。2．写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以第一人称为辅展开叙述，写作时承接开头，要按图片提示选择一种动物，描述其外貌、习性、能力等内容，写清楚其面临的危险，提出保护野生动物的倡议。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。9．参考范文：Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities．To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job．Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech．It was about how to protect our environment．After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution．To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping．And they also knew to put litter in different bins．Finally, we called on them to make a difference to our environment together．We were tired but happy that day．Now the environment around us becomes better and better．Welcome to my hometown one day．Yours,Li Hua【解析】1．题干解读：题目要求给英国朋友Mike介绍“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，描述自己曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次相关活动。2．写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态主要为一般过去时。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。10．例文Protect the Earth and Love AnimalsGood morning, everyone．Today I am very happy to be here and talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals．I think that we should share the same home with other living things．But in fact, there are many problems in our society．People often cut down trees and forests and hunt animals for money．So they make more space farms and buildings instead of animals．Fishermen overfish and birds lose enough food．As a result, many natural disasters happen every year．So I advise that we should take action to protect our earth and animals．First, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals．And then, we students should call on more people to realize the importance of protecting the earth and loving the animals．If we do this, our earth will become better for us to live on and the animals can live peacefully．That’s all．Thanks for listening．【解析】1．题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。要求以Protect the Earth and Love Animals为题，针对人与动物和谐共享同一家园写一篇演讲稿。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2．写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文开头和结尾已经给出，中间要分别分析目前存在的问题、政府和学生分别可以怎么做以及这样做的好处和重要性。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
八年级下册英语Unit8《A green world》必背单元话题满分作文范文1．10月4日是世界动物日，你校举办了“Protecting animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿。内容要点：Hello, everyone．I’m Li Hua．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．动物与人类生活息息相关，然而，随着污染现象日益严峻以及栖息地大幅度地减少，许多动物面临着无家可归和濒临灭绝。为了进一步了解动物的生存状况，上周末你到广州长隆动物园进行实地调研，请以“My opinions on visiting a zoo”写一篇文章。内容包括：（1）你到广州长隆动物园的交通方式和耗时，通过比较，说明你选择这个交通方式的理由。（2）你在动物园的所见以及感受？对于保护野生动物有什么建议（两点）；（3）呼吁人们保护环境、保护野生动物。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My Opinions on Visiting a ZooLast weekend, in order to know more about the endangered animals, I went to Guangzhou Chimelong Zoo with my parents．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。要求：（1）词数：80-100词。（2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。（3）要有复合句的表达。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是雷军，你的美国网友David来信表示他对目前中国雾霾天气很担心，请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：注意：（1）词数100左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，使文章连贯流畅；（3）不可透露个人信息；（4）注意书写工整，卷面整洁。Dear David,I'm glad to receive your letter．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Lei Jun5．随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：（1）节约用水、用电(electricity)；(各举一例)（2）去超市自备购物袋；（3）少买不必要的衣服；（4）不要使用一次性的(one-off)杯子和碗筷(chopsticks)；（5）步行或骑自行车上学；（6）栽更多的树。注意：（1）词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。With the global environment getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!6．书面表达6月5日是世界环境保护日，你校组织以 “Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：要求：（1）要点完整，可适当发挥， 使句子通顺、连贯。（2）正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。 （3）100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Being a volunteer of going greenHello，everyone．I’m Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of going green．I’m glad to make a speech here．___________________________________________________________________________________If I can be a volunteer， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening!7．地球是我们共同的家园，学校微信公众号要推送一篇以"Our earth, our home"为题的文章。假设你是学校"环保小卫士"杜团的成员，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，宣传环保知识。注意：（1）所写内容必须包括图中所有的信息，并当发挥；（2）词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；（3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息Our earth, our homeThe earth is our home．It was clean and beautiful in the past．However __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．本学期8A英语教材给我们提供了大量有关野生动物的阅读素材，让我们感受了希望成长的艰难和鸟类志愿者的艰辛。请从右侧的图片中选择一种野生动物，并根据左侧思维导图的提示，以校学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书，以便号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的队伍。注意事项：（1）倡议书须包括思维导图中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；（2）思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥；（3）词数在80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（4）倡议书内容必须写在答题卷指定的位置上。 Dear friends,Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth．But they are facing many problems．I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I think everybody should act to protect wild animals．Let’s take action now!Students’ Union9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。要求：（1）内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Milk, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities．To be an ecological citizen(生态公民), we did a good job．Last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Now the environment around us becomes better and better．Welcome to my hometown one day．Yours,Li Hua10．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你准备在学校举办的英语节活动中做演讲，请你以Protect the Earth and Love Animals为题写一篇演讲稿。注意：（1）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）包括所有要点，并适当发挥；（3）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone．Today I am very happy to be here and talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all．Thanks for listening． 现状很多动物濒临灭绝原因人们侵占了它们的土地和森林；没有足够多的干净水……意义我们应该保护动物，动物是人类的朋友 打算……1．感谢David的关注。2．① 雾霾（haze）导致疾病增多，如肺癌（lung cancer）， 呼吸道疾病 （throat hurts）等；② 人们不得不减少户外活动；③ 影响交通导致事故频发。3．你对改善空气质量的建议（至少两点建议）。品质助人为乐，善良，有礼貌爱好旅游，阅读，锻炼事迹做过环保志愿者，为WWF筹集过资金 感悟地球是我们唯一的家园不应乱扔垃圾，必须保护环境措施……(至少两点)现状●地球逐步变暖●野生动物骤减●自然灾害频发原因●人口急剧增长●大量砍伐森林●滥捕野生动物建议●人人行动起来●考生自拟（至少一点）愿望●考生自拟Your ideaProtect the Earth and Love AnimalsProblems1．人们捕杀动物；2．渔民过渡捕鱼，鸟类失去足够的食物；3．……Ways1．政府；……2．学生；……Importance如果我们……，……/如果我们不……，……（写一种即可）参考范文1．例文Protecting animalsHello, everyone．I’m Li Hua．Now many animals are on the verge of extinction．Because people have encroached on their land and forests．The water is no longer clean．Many of them don’t have enough clean water to drink．Besides, many people kill some wild animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat．However, we all know that animals are human friends．We must protect animals．I will be kind to my pet dog and plan to feed the stray cats regularly on weekends．We should plant more trees to build homes for wild animals and prevent them from being killed．Let's protect wild animals together．Thank you!【解析】1．题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Protecting animals”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈动物濒临灭绝的原因和保护动物的意义和打算。2．写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三、第一人称和一般现在时为主，以一般将来时为辅来叙述；写作时承接开头，要写出动物濒临灭绝的原因及保护动物的意义和打算，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。2．例文：My Opinions on Visiting a ZooLast weekend, in order to know more about the endangered animals, I went to Guangzhou Chimelong Zoo with my parents．I took the subway to The Chimelong Zoo in Guangzhou．It took me one hour and a quarter．Although the subway is crowded, it is the greenest way．I think the subway is the most convenient way to get there because the subway has covered all over Guangzhou．At the zoo, I saw many animals．They are all lovely．I think animals are our friends and we should protect them．But how to protect animals? First, we should treat them as our friends．Second, we should give the homeless animals a home．In the end, I hope all of us can play a role in protecting animals and environment．【解析】【详解】1．题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“My Opinions on Visiting a Zoo”为主题展开描写，介绍在动物园的所见所闻以及感受以及给出相应的建议。内容可以围绕着题目中给出的提示要点进行描写，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2．写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍去动物园的方式、所需时间以及在动物园的见闻及感受，最后提出保护动物保护环境的建议。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。3．The environmental problems are very serious these days．In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment．I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room．And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps．Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping．Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference．How important for us to protect the environment!【解析】高分句型：I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room．当我们离开房间时，我们应该关掉灯来省电。这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps．当我们刷牙的时候，我们最好关掉水龙头。这里had better do sth．表示最好做某事。【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求就习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？写一篇英语短文，表达自己的想法。本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词；词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一，这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。4．Dear David,I'm very glad to receive your letter．From your letter I learn that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．Thank you for your concern．I'm also very worried about such terrible weather because it has caused much inconvenience or great harm to people's health, such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and even lung cancers and so on．As everyone knows, a good environment comes from good protection．So we should do what we can to make a difference．Try to drive less and choose environment-friendly products．Only when everyone has the environmental awareness, can we have cleaner air．Looking forward to hearing from you soon and share your good ideas!Yours, Li hua【解析】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给网友David写信，给他介绍中国的雾霾天气，并对改善空气质量提出建议。文章中应包括以下内容：首先对David的关心表示感谢；然后具体介绍雾霾天气的情况及其危害；最后给出自己的建议。题目中用表格的形式列出了主要的写作内容，学生们应以此为提纲，丰富更多的细节，用正确的英语表达出来。写作指导：审题可知，短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时注意按照文章内容划分段落，使文章结构清晰。注意英语句式的结构和表达习惯，使用一些较好的词汇和句型，提升文章档次。同时上下文语句之间应使用合适的衔接成分，使文意连贯。5．As middle school students, we’d better save water and electricity．We should turn off the tap after we wash our hands．It’s important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave a room．We should take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarkets．We can buy few clothes which are unnecessary．We shouldn’t use one-off cups, chopsticks or bowls．It’s good for us to walk or ride bicycles to school instead of taking cars．We can also plant more trees around us．Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!【解析】写作分析：写作的主题是环保，通过提出一些倡议、一些做法来呼吁环保，写作的时候要注意文章的完整性，要有开头，在描述各条建议的时候要注意正确书写短语，注意各条建议之间的连贯性，最后要注意有收尾，总体来说写作难度不大。写作亮点：首先，首句要点明写作目的，用到了had better do最好做…，save water and electricity节水节电这样的短语。接下来就对各条建议进行详细描述，可以用到的句型是We should…我们应该…，It’s important to do…做…是重要的，It’s good for us to…做．．对我们来说是很好的。相关短语使用也很准确，例如turn off the tap关闭水龙头， turn off the lights and computers 关灯关电脑，using plastic bags 使用塑料袋，use one-off cups 使用一次性杯子。文章末尾有倡议，Let’s take action and be low-carbon people!（让我们行动起来，做低碳一族吧！），总体来说写作结构完整，短语句型运用正确，有开头有结尾，完成了题目要求的写作任务。6．Being a volunteer of going greenHello，everyone．I’m Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of going green．I’m glad to make a speech here．I’m kind to others．I’m willing to help others any time．I know the importance of good manners．In my free time，I like traveling， reading and exercising．I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment．I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF．Earth is our only home．We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly．I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment．If we work together， we can make the world a better place．If I can be a volunteer， I can do many things for our environment．I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth．I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled．I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth．Thank you for listening!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，从五个方面分别竭力推荐自己。复合句的使用I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment．If we work together， we can make the world a better place．为文章增色不少，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：提纲类作文。7．One possible version：The earth is our home．It was clean and beautiful in the past．However, it's getting warmer now．The number of wild animals gets much smaller．Natural disasters happen more often than before．Why does this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth．Second, people cut down forests and kill too many wild animals．What can we do? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth．We should stop people killing wild animals．We can also plant more trees and build more reserves．I hope our earth will become a better place for us to live．【解析】1．题干解读：本题要求写一篇号召大家保护环境的短文，根据题干中表格给出的要点提示从现状、原因、建议以及愿望四方面来叙述。注意要点齐全，可自行发挥。2．写作指导：写作中主要用一般现在时，叙述现状、原因以及建议，愿望可以用一般将来时；所有内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。此文章属于常规内容，相对比较简单。学生需要用一些高级的语法来提高文章水平。8．One possible versionDear friends,Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth．But they are facing many problems．I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them．I like tigers best among all the wild animals．They have yellow fur with black strips．Tigers like living in groups．They are very brave．They can run fast, but only for a short while．They can also swim and climb trees．Tigers eat small animals for food, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on．However, these big cats are in great danger now．They don’t have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller．I think everybody should act to protect wild animals．Let’s take action now!Students’ Union【解析】1．题干解读：这篇作文要求考生写一封英文倡议书，根据图片和思维导图的提示，谈一谈自己对野生动物的看法，号召同学们加入保护野生动物的队伍。2．写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以第一人称为辅展开叙述，写作时承接开头，要按图片提示选择一种动物，描述其外貌、习性、能力等内容，写清楚其面临的危险，提出保护野生动物的倡议。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。9．参考范文：Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities．To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job．Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech．It was about how to protect our environment．After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution．To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping．And they also knew to put litter in different bins．Finally, we called on them to make a difference to our environment together．We were tired but happy that day．Now the environment around us becomes better and better．Welcome to my hometown one day．Yours,Li Hua【解析】1．题干解读：题目要求给英国朋友Mike介绍“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，描述自己曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次相关活动。2．写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态主要为一般过去时。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。10．例文Protect the Earth and Love AnimalsGood morning, everyone．Today I am very happy to be here and talk about protecting the Earth and loving animals．I think that we should share the same home with other living things．But in fact, there are many problems in our society．People often cut down trees and forests and hunt animals for money．So they make more space farms and buildings instead of animals．Fishermen overfish and birds lose enough food．As a result, many natural disasters happen every year．So I advise that we should take action to protect our earth and animals．First, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals．And then, we students should call on more people to realize the importance of protecting the earth and loving the animals．If we do this, our earth will become better for us to live on and the animals can live peacefully．That’s all．Thanks for listening．【解析】1．题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。要求以Protect the Earth and Love Animals为题，针对人与动物和谐共享同一家园写一篇演讲稿。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2．写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文开头和结尾已经给出，中间要分别分析目前存在的问题、政府和学生分别可以怎么做以及这样做的好处和重要性。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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