专题 10 书面表达- 2024年初中英语九年级上册期末题型综合训练

这是一份专题 10 书面表达- 2024年初中英语九年级上册期末题型综合训练，共28页。
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进入初三,面对紧张的学习你一定有过烦躁、焦虑和情绪低落的时候.此时你是用什么方式方法,或者有什么人或事物陪伴你,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文.
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【答案】例文:
Nw I am a Grade Nine student, I have mre hmewrk t d and smetimes I feel wrried r sad. When I feel bad, I usually d smething t cheer me up.
First, I can listen sme beautiful music, which makes me feel peaceful. Secnd, I can ask the teachers r my parents fr help. I share my ideas with them and they can give me sme reasnable suggestins. What’s mre, I d sme sprts. Ding sprts makes me feel relaxed and it is gd fr my health.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目为话题类书面表达,根据题目提示,描述自己应对不良情绪的方法.
2.写作指导:该题目人称主要使用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时;根据题目提示,具体阐述应对不良情绪的方法,同时注意行文连贯,无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误.
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根据表格提供的信息,写一篇介绍Aunt Karen的短文.
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【答案】Aunt Karen is 38 years ld(in her late thirties). She is slim, but nt very tall. She has big, brwn eyes and she wears glasses. Her hair, which she keeps at shulder length, is dark and wavy. She usually dresses in cmfrtable clthes, and jeans is her favrite.
My aunt is a very kind and caring persn. She is always there t listen t my prblems and ffer her advice and supprt. She is als very patient. These qualities make her an excellent scial wrker.
In her free time, Aunt Karen likes reading and painting. She is actually a very gd painter and smetimes sells her paintings. Althugh she is nt very gd at sprts, she enjys hrse-riding.
My aunt is a special persn wh has helped me n many ccasins. She is smene I can trust and depend n.
【详解】试题分析:这是一篇话题作文,结合所给写作信息,以“Aunt Karen”为话题,对人物进行介绍.根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态为主,注意人称和一些常见句式的应用.写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练.文中使用了but, dress in cmfrtable clthes,listen t, in her free time,like ding,and, althugh,smetimes等词或固定搭配,使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然.同时,本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰;还使用了让步状语从句Althugh she is nt very gd at sprts, she enjys hrse-riding,为文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文.
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你校英语社团正在开展主题为 “Enjy Reading”的征文比赛.下表是征文的部分信息,请用英语写一篇短文进行投稿.
注意:(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)短文不能涉及真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)词数:80-100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数.
短文首句:It s necessary and helpful fr everyne t read.
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【答案】例文
It’s necessary and helpful fr everyne t read. Reading can nt nly pen up ur minds but als helps us get mre knwledge.
In my free time, I ften buy bks frm the bkstre and read bks in the library. Befre ging t bed, I always spend sme time reading, which really makes me feel relaxed. Amng all kinds f bks, I enjy reading nvels best. Jurney t the West is my favrite and I want t be a her like Mnkey King. I plan t read mre bks and Alice in Wnderland will be the next ne.
I hpe everyne can read as much as pssible.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是命题作文.在写作时应符合文章主题;第一段总领全文,简写阅读的作用;第二段写自己的阅读习惯,阅读爱好等;第三段进行简单总结.
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主;描述细节时,细节应符合文章要求,不可随意减少,可以有适当的补充;描述时应注意逻辑,保证思路清晰.
(四)
“绿水青山就是金山银山.”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful"为题,写一篇英语短文.
写作要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息.
参考词汇: envirnment ; pllutin; reduce; srt the rubbish(垃圾分类)
The clean water and green muntains are ur treasures.__________________________
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【答案】例文:
Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful
The clean water and green muntains are ur treasures. It’s ur dream t have a hme with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. S it’s very imprtant fr us t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment and dealing with pllutin. But what shuld we d?
We can take actins in ur daily life. We can plant mre trees t keep the sil in place. Resurces are very imprtant, s we need t save resurces t avid plluting the envirnment. Fr example, we can use bth sides f the paper. Plluted water shuld be dealt with in time t keep the river clean because we cannt live withut water. When we g t ther places, we can chse public transprt t reduce air pllutin.
In my pinin, everyne can d smething small t make a difference. When we see rubbish n the rad, we shuld pick it up immediately. We shuld als learn t recycle waste by separating the waste int different grups. If all f us wrk tgether, we will have a mre beautiful hme.
【详解】1. 题干解读:文章是一篇话题作文.主要以“Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful”为主题展开描写,主要从保护环境,节约资源,垃圾分类等方面做详细的描述,写作时要注意文章的层次感和语言的逻辑性要合理.
2. 例文点评:文章分三段描写.第一段引出绿水青山很重要,我们应该如何做;第二段给出一些具体的做法,第三段给出自己的一些观点,从生活出发要怎么做.整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达流畅,意思明确,通俗易懂.
3. 高分亮点:
短语:deal with;take actins;avid ding;fr example;in my pinin;pick up.
句型:because引导的原因状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;if引导的条件状语从句.
(五)
习近平总书记曾在《生物多样性公约》第十五次缔约方大会领导人峰会(COP15)上提出“人不负青山,青山定不负人”(If we humanity d nt fail Nature, Nature will nt fail us).人类应秉持生态文明理念,共同建设美好的家园,作为中学生,请你结合以下的提示用英语写一篇关于如何保护环境的文章.
注意:
1. 行文连贯,内容完整;
2. 字数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现任何有关姓名、校名和地名的真实信息.
Hw t Prtect the Envirnment
If we humanity d nt fail Nature, Nature will nt fail us. S it’s ur duty t prtect ur envirnment.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Prtect the Envirnment
If we humanity d nt fail Nature, Nature will nt fail us. S it’s ur duty t prtect ur envirnment.
As a student, we shuld d ur best t prtect the envirnment. What shuld we d t prtect the envirnment? First, we’d better ride bikes instead f driving cars. we shuldn’ t step n the grass and spit everywhere. Secnd, we shuld save the water, electricity and papers and put different rubbish int different dustbins. Third, we shuld be plite t everyne. When thers have truble, we als shuld help them.
I think if yu fllw my suggestins, ur envirnment will becme better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息中“内容提示”的三个方面的阐述,适当发挥.
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图.借用“习近平总书记说的话”来引出重点介绍的内容.
第二步:具体阐述写作内容.依照图表提示的三个方面——守纪文明、环保节能、礼貌待人均要一一阐述.
第三步:书写结语.表达“我们的环境将变得越来越好”的心愿.
[亮点词汇]
①Instead f代替
②prtect the envirnment保护环境
③better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
① When thers have truble, we als shuld help them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Our envirnment will becme better and better.(形容词比较级用法)
(六)
用微笑播撒阳光,用行动践行梦想,用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人,为同学们树立了一个个积极向上的榜样——这就是“阳光少年”.
某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来,我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”,请你以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”(假如这位阳光少年名叫Xia Hui)
要点提示:
1. 诚实善良、团结友爱、乐于助人;
2. 热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上;
3. 热爱劳动、不怕困难、心怀感恩,积极为父母、师长分忧;
4. 勤奋好学,积极参加各种文体活动.
参考词汇:friendly; be ready; warm-hearted; utging; active; husewrk; be afraid; share; take an active part in
要求:1. 词数不少于90(开头已给出,不计入总数)
2. 内容完整,语言流畅,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名.
Hell! My name is Xia Ming. I’m studying in N. 1 Middle Schl. Our schl had an activity “Learn frm Sunshine Teenagers”. Frm then n, there are many sunshine teenagers arund us.
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【答案】例文:
Hell! My name is Xia Ming. I’m studying in N. 1 Middle Schl. Our schl had an activity “Learn frm Sunshine Teenagers”. Frm then n, there are many sunshine teenagers arund us.
Xia Hui is ne f them. He is hnest and kind. He gets n well with thers. He is always ready t nt nly help thers but als g t the ld peple’s hme t d smething fr the lds. He reads newspapers fr them, cleans their rms and washes their clthes. Als he is warm-hearted, active and utging. He always shares all kinds f his parents’ husewrk, like ding the dishes, sweeping the flr and making dinner. He is never afraid f different difficulties. He wrks very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active in all kinds f sprts. After schl, he plays ftball with his teammates. And he jins the schl clubs, like music, art and chess. He learns a lt frm his all activities.
Xia Hui is my gd sunshine teenager. I shuld learn frm him.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题根据提示写短文介绍自己身边的阳光少年.
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时.可分为三段式写作:第一段引出话题;第二段介绍这个阳光少年;第三段收尾.要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误.
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为了学英语,学生和家长耗费了大量的时间和精力.读完这篇报道之后,作为一名英语学习多年的初三毕业生,你一定有所感悟.请你就此写一篇英语短文.
内容包括:
1. 你支持还是反对取消英语主课地位的提议?为什么?
2. 你曾经在英语学习中遇到过哪些困难,都是怎样解决的?
3. 对于英语学习,你有些什么好的建议?(至少两点)
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【答案】例文
I disagree with this suggestin that English shuld nt be a cre subject(主课) like Chinese and math. English is an internatinal cmmn language, and it is helpful. We can cmmunicate with ther students in the wrld thrugh English. And we can have mre jb pprtunities.
Three years ag, I had difficulties in learning English. It was difficult fr me t memrize s many wrds and understand what peple were saying. Hwever, I am s lucky that my friend Tm helped me. He taught me t listen mre and read mre. And it really helped me a lt. Besides, he suggested that I shuld watch English mvies and sing classic English sngs. As a result, I finally made great prgress.
Hw can we learn English well? I have suggestins. First, we shuld ften listen t English sngs and watch English mvies. Secnd, we shuld speak English in class as much as pssible. Dn’t be afraid f making mistakes. Third, we shuld read mre English newspapers and magazines.
All in all, we shuld learn English well nw.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作.在写作时首先阐述自己对英语的看法和作用;第二段叙述学英语的经历和方法;第三段提出建议.
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述文章内容;时态采用一般过去时为主,用一般现在时阐述理论;描述自己经历时,应描写细致;整篇文章叙述完整,保证条理清晰.确保无单词语法错误.
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如何安排好课外生活?上周班会课上,老师要求大家畅谈“课外生活计划”,下表是班级小组讨论的情况,请根据下表的内容用英语写一篇短文.
注意:
1. 词数:90词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括表格中所有的信息,并作适当的发挥;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息.
The after-schl life plan
Last week, we had a class meeting t talk abut ur after-schl plans.
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【答案】例文:
The after-schl life plan
Last week, we had a class meeting t talk abut ur after-schl plans.
Sme f ur classmates want t wrk as vlunteers. They hand ut leaflets t warn peple nt t have parties r g t crwded places. They make psters t ask peple t srt rubbish s that they knw the imprtant names f rubbish srting.
Others wuld like t develp a green lifestyle. Clean water is getting less and less, and they think we must save water nw. Fr example, dn’t leave the tap running while washing. They als chse public transprt, such as bus, subway and s n. Besides, they want t exercise mre and play fewer games because exercise can make them healthy.
And I want t learn mre abut gd manners by reading bks. I think gd manners nt nly make us mre ppular, but als make ur hmetwn mre and mre beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文.要求根据表格提示内容,介绍班级同学对于课外生活计划的讨论.注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥.
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态综合使用一般过去时和一般现在时.作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍一些学生想要参加志愿者工作的计划;第三段介绍另一些学生想要过绿色生活方式的计划;第四段介绍自己的计划.要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误.
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假如你是李华,你的朋友Susan发来电子邮件,说她寒假要来中国,但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪不了解,于是向你寻求帮助,请你给她回一封电子邮件,告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况.
提示:
1.中国人第一次见面时应该握手;
2.寒假期间有一个中国最重要的节日—春节.春节这一天家人都团聚在一起,吃一顿大餐.饺子是最受欢迎的食物.
3.在中国,吃饭时你不能把筷子插入食物中,用筷子敲碗是不礼貌的,你不能用筷子指着任何人,如果你比餐桌上年龄大的人先吃饭也是不礼貌的.
注意:
1.表达中必须包含所给的要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2.词数100个左右.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
3.作文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名.
4.书写认真,卷面干净.
Dear Susan,
I’m very glad t hear that yu’re cming t China sn._________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Susan,
I’m very glad t hear that yu’re cming t China sn. As we all knw, different cuntries have different custms.
Let me tell yu smething abut custms and manners in China. First, we Chinese are suppsed t shake hands when we meet fr the first time. Secnd, there is the mst imprtant festival in China during ur winter hliday—Spring Festival. On that day, we Chinese peple get tgether and have a big meal. Dumplings is the mst ppular fd. Third, yu can’t stick yur chpsticks int yur fd. It’s nt plite t use yur chpsticks t hit a bwl. Yu shuldn’t pint at anyne with yur chpsticks. It’s implite t start eating first if there are lder peple at the table.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是写一封电子邮件,开头和结尾已给出.要求根据提示,给Susan回一封电子邮件,告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况,可适当发挥.
2.写作指导:本文主要是介绍中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪,当介绍客观情况时,应以第三人称为主,当提醒或者建议时,应以第二人称为主,当描述自己的做法时,应以第一人称为主;时态采用一般现在时为主;介绍礼仪时,应描写细致、合情合理;邮件需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰.
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假如你叫李华,你的美国网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤,请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件.主要内容包括:1. 询问病情;2. 介绍一下你近期学校活动及学习情况;3. 表达祝愿.
注意:
1. 字数控制在80-100词左右;
2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Peter,
Hw’s it ging? I’m srry t hear that.________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
Hw’s it ging? I’m srry t hear that yu gt injured while playing basketball. Yu shuld have a gd rest at hme. And yu’d better take care f yurself when yu d sprts.
Everything ges well here! I enjy great changes in my schl. On the ne hand, the teachers make their teaching styles clrful. In my science class, my teacher always encurages us t think, and cultivates ur ability t study independently. On the ther hand, we have plenty f time t try what we want t d. We had ur Schl Day last week. There are different kinds f activities, such as speech cntest, talent shw, vlunteering and s n. I tk part in the English speech cntest, and I wn the first prize. I will send yu sme phts abut my Schl Day if yu like.
Hpe yu’ll get better , and be back t yur schl as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作.在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求询问病情,讲述自己的学校活动及学习近况,并表达良好的祝愿.
2.写作指导:本文用第一人称来写作;时态采用一般现在时为主,讲述自己的学校活动及学习近况叙述完整,条理清晰.
(十一)
假如你是李嘉,请阅读下面的邮件,然后根据邮件内容回复.可以适当发挥.
要求:1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分.
Dear Cathy,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. I’m glad t hear that yu are cming t China.
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Lking frward t yur cming t China!
Li Jia
【答案】例文
Dear Cathy,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. I’m glad t hear that yu are cming t China.
Let me tell yu sme Chinese custms. Chinese manners are different frm thse f ther cuntries. In China, when yu meet smene fr the first time, yu are suppsed t shake their hands and yu shuld take ff yur hat befre shaking hands.
When yu are at the table, yu need t use chpsticks fr all fds except sup. Smetimes Chinese hsts use chpsticks t put fd in yur bwl r n yur plate. This is a sign f pliteness. The apprpriate thing t d is t eat them and say hw gd it is. Dn’t tap yur fd bwl with chpsticks. Beggars ften tap their rice bwls when begging, s it’s nt plite.
Lking frward t yur cming t China!
Li Jia
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点在邮件中已给出,结合问候与餐桌礼仪,适当添加细节.
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图.引出要重点介绍的中国习俗;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容.从“应该做和不能做”两个方面重点介绍问候与餐桌礼仪的具体内容;
第三步,书写总结.表达对Cathy来到中国的期待.
[亮点词汇]
① be different frm 与……不同
② a sign f ……的标志
③ lk frward t 期待做某事
[高分句型]
① When yu are at the table, yu need t use chpsticks fr all fds except sup.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Dn’t tap yur fd bwl with chpsticks.(Dn’t引导的否定祈使句)
(十二)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统节日很感兴趣.他给你发来邮件,询问中国的传统节日,如春节、端午节、重阳节等.请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你最喜欢的传统节日.
要求:根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
提示词语:activity, celebrate, traditinal fd, bright
提示问题:
• What’s yur favurite festival?
• What d yu knw abut it?
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu re interested in traditinal Chinese festivals.______________
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I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in traditinal Chinese festivals. Amng all the festivals, my favrite ne is Mid-Autumn Festival. Nw, let me tell yu smething abut it.
It’s n the 15th f the eighth mnth in the lunar calendar. On that day, we have a lt f activities. We usually eat a kind f traditinal fd, mncakes, t celebrate the festival. At night, we usually have a big dinner with ur family members and then eat different kinds f fruits t enjy the bright and big mn. Elders tell stries abut Chang’e t children. On that day, all the peple are very happy, because they can get tgether with their family members.
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,所写的节日必须是中国的传统节日,而且要写出人们如何庆祝这个节日的细节.
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图.直接说出自己最喜欢的传统节日并引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容.从“时间、食物、活动、传说”等几个方面重点介绍中秋节;
第三步,书写结语.欢迎Chris询问更多信息.
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②n that day 在那天
③get tgether with sb. 与某人聚在一起
④ask fr 请求
[高分句型]
①I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in traditinal Chinese festivals.(that引导的宾语从句)
②At night, we usually have a big dinner with ur family members and then eat different kinds f fruits t enjy the bright and big mn. (由并列连词and连接的并列句)
(十三)
假如你是校报“英语之声”栏目编辑李华,请根据下图提示,为该栏目写一篇题为“Save water”的倡议书.
要求:
1. 语言规范,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 字数:100词左右.
参考词汇:水龙头 tap
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【答案】例文
Save water
As we knw, water is very imprtant t peple, we can’t live withut water. Hwever, peple waste a lt f water in their daily lives. I think what we can d is t save every drp f water as much as pssible. Fr example, we must turn ff the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin t wash ur hands and faces. It’s als a gd idea t encurage ur friends and family members t jin us! Only in this way can we live happily.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇倡议书,以“Save water”为题目参照图片中要点进行分析.写作时需包括图片中的主要内容.
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般现在时;写作时注意结合图片进行描述.先描述水的重要性;再指出目前节约用水存在的问题,如图片中画了一个正在滴水的水龙头,在写作时须提到这一点.最后写如何节约用水.全文保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺.
(十四)
假如你是Teenager杂志的主编,你叫Dr. Lee最近你收到你的读者Rick的来信,向你倾诉他的苦恼,他因太过肥胖被同学们嘲笑.请你给他一些合理建议帮助他摆脱烦恼.80词左右.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Rick,
I’ve heard frm yu and I feel srry abut it. I ttally understand hw yu feel when smene laugh at yu. Here is my advice.
Firstly, There is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be yurself. Secndly, try t eat healthily-keep away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables. It can help yu lse weight. Thirdly, I advise yu t play sprts ften. Yu shuld get up early and exercise.
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Dr. Lee
【详解】1、题干解读:题目假设你是Teenager杂志的主编,最近收到读者Rick的来信,他向你倾诉了他的苦恼,他因太胖被同学们嘲笑,请你给他一些合理的建议帮助他摆脱烦恼,可适当发挥.
2、写作指导:本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;介绍建议时,应详细具体,简单明了,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰.
(十五)
假设你是李明,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生负担,来信询问有关情况.请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化.
提示:
1. 短文需包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数).
参考词汇:改革:revlutin;减轻学生负担:reduce the burden f students
Dear Dick,
Hw nice t hear frm yu again. Yu want t knw mre abut ur schl revlutin. Schls in China are reducing the burden f students nw.____________________________
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Best wishes
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Dick,
Hw nice t hear frm yu again. Yu want t knw mre abut ur schl revlutin. Schls in China are reducing the burden f students nw. I dn’t knw abut thers, but I used t have t wrk even at weekends ding endless hmewrk and attending classes as well. And I went t bed at 11:30. Nw I have mre free time. I can fllw my wn interests such as reading bks, visiting museums, and taking cmputer lessns. In the evenings I can watch news n TV r read newspaper. What’s mre, I can g t bed earlier. I g t bed at 10:00. As far as I knw, everyne is happy abut this new arrangement f things.
Best wishes
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文.根据要点提示写一封回信给你的澳大利亚朋友Dick,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化.
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一人称为主.根据表格内容写作时可适当发挥使行文连贯,注意时态的正确使用,不要出现单词语法错误,确保语句通顺.
(十六)
冰雪之约,中国之邀,燃情冬奥,奔向未来.2022年的北京冬奥会,中国向世界展示了一届精彩卓越的奥运盛会,同时也通过我们的奥运口号 “Tgether fr a Shared Future”向世界传达了中国对于未来世界发展的美好愿景.作为2024夏季奥运会的主办方,巴黎在当地友好学校开展了同中国光明中学的”展望奥运”线上交流活动.假设你是光明中学的学生晓华,请你根据以下要点给友好学校的笔友Mark写一封信:
1.要点:1)北京冬奥会让你印象最深刻的一个人或一件事;
2)令你印象深刻的原因是什么;
3)对2024巴黎奥运会的筹备工作表达祝愿.
2.要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右.
Dear Mark
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Yurs,
Xia Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mark,
I’m pleased t share sme f my thughts abut the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics with yu. What impressed me mst is the Freestyle skier Gu Ailing. She is nt nly an athlete, but als a fashin mdel, and what’s mre, she has utstanding marks in her study. She has her wn aims and spares n effrt t pursue them. I’d like t call her the best self-desciplined “time management master” I have ever seen. And I remember she nce said in an interview, “I’ve learned t win fr myself, nt ther peple.” I think she sets a great example fr me. I shuld d everything beneficial fr myself, nt because smene else asks me t d s, but because I need t be respnsible fr my wn life.
In the end, I’d like t present my best wishes fr the preparatins fr the 2024 Paris Olympics. Wish the 2024 Paris Olympics all success.
Yurs,
Xia Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是书信作文.要求以晓华的名义,根据提示要点给友好学校的笔友Mark写一封信,信中要写北京冬奥会让自己印象最深刻的一个人或一件事,印象深刻的原因,对巴黎奥运会的筹备工作表达祝愿.
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时.分为两段式:第一段写北京冬奥会让自己印象最深刻的一个人并说明原因;第二段对巴黎奥运会的筹备工作表达祝愿.写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误.
(十七)
假如你是张鹏,今天是 4 月 23 日世界读书日(the Wrld Bk Day),也是周末.请根据以下信息,写一篇日记,并说说自己的看法.
1. 上午阳光明媚,能透过窗户看到孩子们在操场上玩游戏,下午大约 2 点乌云密布,风猛烈的刮,暴风雨来临.
2. 当暴风雨来临时,家人和你正在做的事:
1)妈妈:正在做家务,姐姐正在帮忙.
2)爸爸:正在电视上看篮球比赛.
3)你:正在看一本你喜欢的书.
3. 说说作为中学生多读书的好处(benefits).
April 23rd
Tday is the Wrld Bk Day.
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【答案】例文
April 23rd
Tday is the Wrld Bk Day.
It was sunny in the mrning, and I culd see lts f kids playing n the playgrund thrugh the windw. At abut tw ’clck in the afternn, dark cluds frmed in the sky, and a strm was ging t cme. While the strm hit at abut three ’clck, my mther was ding the husewrk, my sister was helping her, my father was watching a basketball match n the televisin, and I was reading a bk n my bed.
I like reading best. As a middle schl student, I think reading is very beneficial t us, since reading can help us gain knwledge abut many things and it can als make us smarter. I hpe that we can read mre bks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一篇日记;
②时态:时态过去发生的事情用“一般过去时”,习惯和个人看法用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“今天是读书日,家人们在暴风雨来到时正在做的事情,中学生多读书的好处”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点.
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图.借用“今天是世界读书日.”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容.从“今天的天气,暴风雨来临时家人们正在做的事情和多读书的好处”重点介绍今天的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语.表达“我希望我们都能读更多的书.”的强烈愿望.
[亮点词汇]
①lts f许多
②thrugh the windw透过窗户
[高分句型]
①While the strm hit at abut three ’clck, my mther was ding the husewrk,(while引导的时间状语从句)
②As a middle schl student, I think reading is very beneficial t us, since reading can help us gain knwledge abut many things and it can als make us smarter.(since引导的原因状语从句)
(十八)
请仔细观察下列图片,展开合理想象,以图中小女孩的身份写一篇日记.
要求:
1.词数:80-100词;
2.字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥.
Saturday, June 3rd
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【答案】Saturday, June 3rd
I had a wnderful schl trip tday. I went t a farm which was very big. I did many interesting things there. First, I rde a hrse. It was the first time I rde a hrse. What an exciting experience! Next, I learned t milk a cw and feed chickens. When I was walking thrugh the field, I saw all kinds f flwers. They were s clrful that I culdn’t help taking phts f them. In the field I saw many farmers wrking. Hw hard-wrking they were! I talked with ne f them and learnt a lt frm him abut farming.
I had a great time n the farm. I’m lking frward t ging there again.
【详解】1. 题干解读:文章属于一篇日记,主要是描述自己的学校旅行中的一些活动,写作的内容要根据图片内容来描述,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语.
2. 写作指导:文章主要用一般过去时,人称用第一人称展开详细介绍.描述学校旅行中自己参与的一些有趣的活动以及自己的收获等.写作时语言要简单易懂,文章结构要完整,多使用简单词语,意思要通俗易懂.
(十九)
本周一是端午节,你校外教Tny对中国文化很感兴趣,你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛.请根据以下提示写一篇日记.
写作要点:
1.现场情况.人多拥挤,16支龙舟队竞争激烈,人们欢呼,队员们团队合作,最终“勇气队”获胜.
2.赛后活动:我给Tny介绍端午节,下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动,如……
3.感想:Tny……,我……
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可);
3.100词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数.
June 18th
Tday is the Dragn Bat Festival.___________________________________________
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【答案】Tday is the Dragn Bat Festival Fr the reasn that Tny has a strng interest in Chinese traditinal culture. I invited him t cme t watch the dragn bat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this mrning When we arrived, it was crwded. There were 16 clrful dragn bats flating in the river. During the race, the dragn bat teams cmpeted with each ther, while peple n each bank cheered up. Bth Tny and I felt the exciting atmsphere. At last, the Curage Team wn.
After the cmpetitin, I intrduced the Dragn Bat Festival t Tny and welcmed him t many ther activities abut the festival. We went t learn hw t make zngzi and admire a picture exhibitin.
At the end f the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tny thugh ur traditinal Chinese culture was s amazing and I am prud f my great mtherland.
【详解】试题分析:本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记.根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态,用第一人称来表达.注意一些常见句式的应用.写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法.
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练、要点齐全.文中invite sb.t d, during the race, cmpete with, cheere up, at last, bth…and…; at the end f the day, be prud f等词汇的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如:运用了there be句型;定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文.
(二十)
请根据下列汉语提示写一篇日记,记录5月1日,周五,你和父母去参观科学博物馆.天气:晴朗;距离:5000米,乘公交车去;早晨8:00出发.10:30离开博物馆,看到很多照片实物、模型等.
要求:运用日记格式,词数80词以上.
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【答案】例文
May 1st Friday Sunny
Tday my parents didn’t g t wrk and I didn’t g t schl, s we went t visit Science Museum in ur city. It’s abut five kilmeters away frm my hme. We decided t g there by bus. We set ff at eight ’clck in the mrning. At the museum, we saw many phts, mdels and ther ld but interesting things. We learned a lt and knew mre abut Chinese science histry. I saw a lt f children with their parents, students with their teachers and sme freigners. At ten thirty we left the museum fr hme. We had a wnderful day and I made up my mind t study hard. I want t be scientist in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容.
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍今天去的目的地;
第二步,讲述今天和父母的所见所闻.
[亮点词汇]
①decide t d sth决定做某事
②set ff出发
③make up ne’s mind t d sth下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①We decided t g there by bus.(动词不定式作宾语)
②I want t be scientist in the future.(动词不定式作宾语)The imprtance f reading
pen up ne’s mind
…
Reading habit
hw t read
what t read
Favrite bk(s)
…
Reading plan
…
保护环境
从我做起
守纪文明:低碳出行;不踩草坪;不乱吐痰……
环保节能:节约水电;节约用纸;不乱丢垃圾……
礼貌待人;助人为乐……
一些学生
参加志愿者工作
在社区中心帮忙:
1. 发传单,告诫人们不要聚会,不去人多的地方;
2. 做海报,要求人们垃圾分类(srt garbage carefully)
另一些学生
过绿色生活方式
1. 节约用水;
2. 选择公共交通出行;
3. ……(自拟至少一点)
我
看书
学习礼仪,因为……(自拟至少一点)
Dear Li Jia,
Hw’s it ging? I have gd news fr yu. I will cme t China n a student exchange prgram next mnth. I really want t learn abut sme Chinese custms. Culd yu please tell me hw I can behave prperly in China? Such as hw t greet each ther fr the first time in China, hw t behave plitely n the table while eating and s n.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Cathy
周末活动(减负前)
周末活动(减负后)
白天:上课、做作业
白天:参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等
晚上:做作业
晚上:看新闻、读书、看报
就寝时间:11:30
就寝时间:10:00