山西高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

应用文

1．你校英文报正在举办主题为“Developing space technology, worthwhile or not?”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿。

写作要点：随着世界太空技术的发展，人类的太空梦不再是梦。但是也有人觉得耗费大量的人力和财力来研究和开发太空资源不切实际，不如将这些人力和财力用来着重解决人类当前面临的重大问题，改善地球的生存环境。对此，你有何看法？

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Developing space technology, worthwhile or not?

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2．假定你是李华，2022北京冬奥会已经圆满结束。其中有部分项目在你的家乡张家口举办，你的笔友Sam发邮件向你询问冬奥会举办情况，请你据此回复邮件，内容包括：

1.前期准备；

2.赛事情况；

3.你的感想。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Sam,

Glad to hear from you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假设你是李华，擅长中国国画，且多次获奖，最近创作了一幅作品，给负责下月举办青少年画展的美国朋友Tom写一封信，请他展览你的作品。

要点包括；

1. 写信的目的；

2. 作品简介；

3. 期待回复。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．高考在即，你校英文广播电台正在征稿，为高考加油。请你写一篇稿件投稿，希望高三学子能够坚持适当的训练并保持良好的心态，同时也为他们送上美好的祝福。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: college entrance examination

205．假设你是晨光中学高二年级学生李华，现场观看了该校于5月6日上午举办的高三年级成人礼活动；你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动，你给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。

内容包括：1. 成人礼活动内容（校长致辞回顾学生成长、班级赠物感恩母校培养）；

2. 我的观看感受。

注意：1. 词数为100左右； 2. 可适当加入细节使行文连贯；

参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony

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6．假定你是某高中学生李华。上周五你们学校举办了“中国传统民间音乐进入校园”的活动。你打算为你市英文网站报道此事，内容包括：

1. 举办意图；

2. 活动时间、地点和内容；

3. 有何评价。

注意：1. 词数100左右，题目已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Traditional Chinese folk music into campus

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7．为响应“五四青年文化月”活动，我校英文报目前向读者征稿。请你以“Outstanding Youth”为题介绍你身边一位优秀青年，内容包括：

1. 人物简介；2. 优秀品质；3. 对你影响。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中优秀青年姓名统一用Li Hua。

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8．假定你是李华，你校乒乓球俱乐部招收新成员，交换生Bob有意参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件告知详情，内容如下：

1．介绍俱乐部活动；

2．参加方式；

3．表达期望。

注意：1．词数应为100词左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bob,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．有困难就有方法，生活中的问题给许多发明家带来了灵感。你在生活中有发现什么问题吗？你想要发明什么来解决这个问题呢？请你写一篇短文，发给《英语角》杂志，说明你的想法。要点包括：

1. 你发现的问题；

2. 介绍你的发明。

注意：

1. 词数 100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Where there is a problem, there is a way.

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10．你校将组织本校生和交换生参加“古建寻根”的活动，请你以Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings为题写一篇发言稿在开幕式上发言，内容包括：

1.活动安排；

2.活动意义。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目和首句已为你写好。

Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings

As we all know, there are a lot of ancient buildings in our hometown.

1．范文：

Developing space technology, worthwhile or not?

With the development of space technology, human beings are exploring further into space.

Space experiments and explorations cost huge sums of money, which, certain people think, should be used to protect our natural environment or to solve the problems we are all facing.

This might be true，but I think in the long run humans will have to turn to space when all the resources are used up. For example, humans can make use of the mines on other planets. Moreover, some of the new technologies employed in space can be used in our daily life and thus create a better life for us.

All in all, space technology development is sure to benefit all human beings.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为“Developing space technology, worthwhile or not?”的短文投稿参加学校英文报的征文活动。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

解决：solve→ settle

确定的：sure→ certain

用光：use up→ run out of

利用： make use of→ take advantage of

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With the development of space technology, human beings are exploring further into space..

拓展句：As space technology develops, human beings are exploring further into space..

【点睛】[高分句型1]  Space experiments and explorations cost huge sums of money, which, certain people think, should be used to protect our natural environment or to solve the problems we are all facing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] This might be true,but I think in the long run humans will have to turn to space when all the resources are used up.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)

2．Dear Sam,

Glad to hear from you. I am writing to tell you something about the grand occasion of our hometown Zhangjiakou to host the Winter Olympics.

   Our country has made serious and positive preparations, which reflects our great faith. In order to make the Zhangjiakou competition better, we will not only do a good job in epidemic prevention and control, ensure everyone’s health and ensure the smooth operation of the competition at the same time. There are 8 competition and non-competition venues in Zhangjiakou competition area, with a total of 2 major events, 6 sub events, and 50 minor events, which are very exciting. Holding the Winter Olympics in Zhangjiakou is conducive to driving the ice and snow sports, ice and snow economy and ice and snow tourism of the whole China. As a Zhangjiakou Chinese, I am very proud!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回复笔友Sam的邮件，介绍自己家乡张家口举办冬奥会部分项目的情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

告诉：inform→tell

反映、显示：reflect→show

激动人心的：breathtaking→exciting

骄傲：proud→full of pride

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As a Zhangjiakou Chinese, I am very proud!

拓展句：I am very proud that I'm a Zhangjiakou Chinese!

【点睛】【高分句型1】Our country has made serious and positive preparations, which reflects our great faith. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Holding the Winter Olympics in Zhangjiakou is conducive to driving the ice and snow sports, ice and snow economy and ice and snow tourism of the whole China. (运用了动名词作主语)

3．Dear Tom,

How are you? I’m happy to know you are in charge of a teenage art exhibition next month. As you know, I’m good at Chinese painting and have won prizes in China. Recently I have completed a new painting which is about an old man fishing on the river. When you observe the painting, you will be amazed at the beauty of Mother Nature and realize the importance of having a peaceful mind. I wonder if my painting could be displayed along with other works then.

Attached you will find a photo of my painting. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给负责下月举办青少年画展的美国朋友Tom写一封信，请他展览自己最近创作的一幅作品。

【详解】1.词汇积累

负责：be in charge of→be responsible for

擅长：be good at→be adept in/at

对……感到震惊：be amazed at→be astonished at

最近：recently→lately

2.句式拓展

原句：When you observe the painting, you will be amazed at the beauty of Mother Nature and realize the importance of having a peaceful mind.

拓展句：When you observe the painting, not only will you be amazed at the beauty of Mother Nature but also you will realize the importance of having a peaceful mind.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently I have completed a new painting which is about an old man fishing on the river.(使用了which引导的定语从句及现在分词短语作后置定语。)

【高分句型2】I wonder if my painting could be displayed along with other works then.(使用了if引导的宾语从句。)

4．Dear students,

As we know, the college entrance examination is coming. Hearing that our school English radio station is calling for contributions, I am writing this text to express my best wishes for the students. Here are the following words I am eager to share.

First of all, in my point of view all the students should take care of themselves and take regular exercise to keep fit. Having a healthy physical condition means that they are energetic in the examination. In addition, all the students should maintain a good attitude. Last but not least ,I am in possession of the views that all the students should believe in themselves and have strong confidence to confront the challenge.

Sincerely, I expect that all the students who attend the examination will get better and higher scores.

Best wishes!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文广播电视台提供征稿，为即将参加高考的学生们加油，并提出建议准备考试，送上美好的祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincerely→ genuinely

此外：in addition→ what’s more

我认为：in my point of view→ as far as I am concerned

应该：should → ought to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： Hearing that our school English radio station is calling for contributions, I am writing this text to express my best wishes for the students.

拓展句: When I hear that our school English radio station is calling for contributions, I am writing this text to express my best wishes for the students.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are the following words that I am eager to share.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I am in possession of the views that all the students should believe themselves and have strong confidence to confront the challenge.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）

5．Dear Chris,

Having received your letter inquiring about the coming-of-age ceremony in our school, I feel extremely delighted to share with you some details.

The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on the morning of May 6th, when it was cool and windy. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated the Senior 3 students on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that they had experienced. After that, each Senior 3 class gave away a gift to our school to exprss their heartfelt appreciation for her kind dedication.

As I was viewing the activity, it struck me that I would participate in my own ceremony next year. Therefore, I should shoulder my own responsibility from now on, making myself more determined in my studies.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回一封电子邮件给Chris，介绍学校成人礼的活动内容以及观看感受。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

非常：extremely→ exceedingly

礼物：gift→ present

表达：express→ convey

由衷的：heartfelt→ sincere

使突然想起：strike→ occur to/ hit

因此：therefore→ hence

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Having received your letter inquiring about the coming-of-age ceremony in our school, I feel extremely delighted to share with you some details.

拓展句：The moment I received your letter inquiring about the coming-of-age ceremony in our school, I felt extremely delighted to share with you some details.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on the morning of May 6th, when it was cool and windy.（运用了when引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated the Senior 3 students on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that they had experienced.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】As I was viewing the activity, it struck me that I would participate in my own ceremony next year.（运用了it形式主语）

6．Traditional Chinese folk music into campus

The activity of traditional Chinese folk music into campus took place in our campus last Friday, which was intended to give a chance for us students to experience traditional Chinese folk music and folk songs.

A group of local professional artists were invited here. In the school hall, an artist played traditional Chinese music by using erhu—a traditional Chinese musical instrument. Some others played guzheng or dizi. At last, some artists sang some traditional Chinese folk songs.

The activity was a great success. The audience, including students and teachers, showed great interest in it. They thought it was of great significance to enrich our school life and enhance our love for traditional Chinese folk music.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文报道学校举办的“中国传统民间音乐进入校园”的活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：chance→opportunity

提高：enhance → improve

最后：at last→ in the end

有意义的：of significance→significant

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The audience, including students and teachers, showed great interest in it.

拓展句：The audience, which includes students and teachers, showed great interest in it.

【点睛】[高分句型1]The activity of traditional Chinese folk music into campus took place in our campus last Friday, which was intended to give a chance for us students to experience traditional Chinese folk music and folk songs（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]In the school hall, an artist played traditional Chinese music by using erhu—a traditional Chinese musical instrument.(运用了同位语简单解释二胡的属性)

7．One possible version:

My friend Li Hua was born into an ordinary family. He is a great youth in my eyes, for he is equipped with a number of brilliant qualities.

He is a boy who is always ready to offer help. During the recent combat against Covid-19, he became a volunteer, passing on disease prevention knowledge to the community and helping them deliver food. I am also amazed at his skills in communication and organization. Mainly for this reason, he is in charge of the Students’ Union of our school. While the job is demanding, he is capable of tackling the tasks with great ease. The list goes on about him.

I am so happy to have such an outstanding friend who inspires me to be a better self.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Outstanding Youth”为题介绍你身边一位优秀青年，给校英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

优秀的：brilliant → excellent

提供：offer → provide

掌控：in charge of→in control of

处理：tackle→deal with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：During the recent combat against Covid-19, he became a volunteer, passing on disease prevention knowledge to the community and helping them deliver food.

拓展句：During the recent combat against Covid-19, he became a volunteer, who passed on disease prevention knowledge to the community and helped them deliver food.

【点睛】【高分句型1】While the job is demanding, he is capable of tackling the tasks with great ease.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）

【高分句型2】I am so happy to have such an outstanding friend who inspires me to be a better self.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

8．Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear that you want to be a member of our ping- pong club. I’m writing to share some details about it with you.

Regular training sessions are held on Wednesday and Saturday afternoons, so you have to have enough time. Besides, there will be an admission charge of 50 yuan for each person. There will be ping-pong games among classes at the end of the term. Once you have decided to take part, please fill in the attached application form and send it to me.

Looking forward to your participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校乒乓球俱乐部招收新成员，交换生Bob有意参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件告知详情。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举行：hold→host

参加：take part→participate in

高兴的：glad→happy

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

同义句转化

原句：Regular training sessions are held on Wednesday and Saturday afternoons, so you have to have enough time.

拓展句：You have to have enough time because regular training sessions are held on Wednesday and Saturday afternoons.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear that you want to be a member of our ping- pong club. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Once you have decided to take part, please fill in the attached application form and send it to me. (运用了条件状语从句)

9．Where there is a problem, there is a way. The problems in life give plenty of inspiration to many great inventors.

Last month, I had online classes at home because of the pandemic. Long exposure to the screen made my eyes uncomfortable and I’m afraid that my eyesight must have worsened. I am eager to invent a kind of glasses which can not only enlarge the words on the screen when necessary but also automatically adjust the brightness of what we’re looking at. In addition, a soft massage will be provided regularly to relax the muscles around the eyes.

In this way, the health of people’s eyes can be guaranteed. I hope one day my invention can become a reality.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。有困难就有方法，生活中的问题给许多发明家带来了灵感。你在生活中有发现什么问题吗？你想要发明什么来解决这个问题呢？请你写一篇短文，发给《英语角》杂志，说明你的想法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

许多：plenty of→a lot of

因为：because of→due to

提供：provide→offer

此外：in addition→besides

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Long exposure to the screen made my eyes uncomfortable and I’m afraid that my eyesight must have worsened.

拓展句：Long exposure to the screen made my eyes so uncomfortable that I’m afraid that my eyesight must have worsened.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Long exposure to the screen made my eyes uncomfortable and I’m afraid that my eyesight must have worsened. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I am eager to invent a kind of glasses which can not only enlarge the words on the screen when necessary but also automatically adjust the brightness of what we’re looking at. (运用了which引导定语从句)

10．One possible version:

Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings

As tee all know, there are a lot of ancient buildings in our hometown. Not only are they splendid buildings of great beauty but also a very important part of the local history. That’s why our school is organizing this activity themed Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings. It’s scheduled to begin next Monday and last a whole month. We’ll make use of our weekends to organize trips to historical sites and invite historians and architecture experts to guide us on site.

Over a hundred students, including some of the exchange students, have signed up for this activity, which I believe will inspire greater love for our hometown and give us a sense of pride in our ancient culture. Enjoy your trips!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将组织本校生和交换生参加“古建寻根”活动，要求考生以Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings写一篇发言稿，在开幕式上发言。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：important→significant

计划：schedule→plan/arrange

利用：make use of→take advantage of/make the most of

包括某人：including sb.→sb. included

2.句型拓展

合并句子

原句：That’s why our school is organizing this activity themed Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings. It’s scheduled to begin next Monday and last a whole month.

拓展句：That’s why our school is organizing this activity themed Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings, which is scheduled to begin next Monday and last a whole month.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only are they splendid buildings of great beauty but also a very important part of the local history.（运用了部分倒装）

[高分句型2]That’s why our school is organizing this activity themed Seeking Roots in Ancient Buildings. （运用了why引导表语从句）