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山西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份山西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。

建议信

1．假定你是李华，最近你发现自己视力下降严重，无法看清楚周边的事物。因此，你感到十分的焦虑。请你写封信向你的美国网友Lucy咨询她保护视力的相关事宜。

要点：1.视力下降；2.视力下降的原因；3.询问保护视力的建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy,

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的好友Kate上高中以后在高中生活和学习上存在着一些困难，请根据以下提示给她写封建议信。

内容包括：

1. 表示慰问；

2. 具体建议；

3. 祝福。

注意：

1. 字数100词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Kate,

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假如你是靖安中学高一学生李华，你的同桌李明向你请教如何学好英语。请你给他写一封信，谈谈英语学习的重要性并就如何学好英语给他提出几条建议（至少两条）。

注意：1.内容应包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使文章连贯；

2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；

3．词数：100左右。

Dear Li Ming，

I'm sorry to hear that you have some difficulty in learning English. I've got some advice on how to make it. As we all know, English is very important.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike一周前给你发电子邮件说他自进入高三以来一直觉得压力很大，请你根据以下要点给他回封邮件，帮助他振作起来：

1．安慰并分析他不开心的原因；

2．给他一些建议；

3．送上祝福。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词： pressure 压力 relieve stress 缓解压力

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Eric在学习汉语过程中对自己的英语式汉语（Englinese）深感困惑，给你写信请教如何学习地道的汉语，请给他写一封回信。

内容包括：

1. 感谢信任。

2. 分析英语式汉语产生的原因并提出具体建议。

3. 乐于提供帮助，表达祝愿。

注意：1. 字数100字左右。

2. 书信开头结尾已给出。

Dear Eric,

I'm so sorry to hear about your puzzle about Englinese in your Chinese learning.

Yours,

Li Hua

6．为了呼吁高三学生养成健康的生活方式，你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Health Matters Most”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：

1.问题：因学业紧张，养成了不健康的生活方式；

2.建议：养成健康的生活方式的具体做法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

7．某英语刊物正在进行有关旅游的征文活动。请根据以下要点提示，以“About Travelling”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向该刊投稿。要点：

（1）旅游的益处（欣赏自然、呼吸新鲜空气及广交朋友）；

（2）关于行前准备的建议（出行前确认好天气、做好准备工作等）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

About Travelling

8．假定你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。

注意：

1. 词数100左右（开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school.

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom打算在暑假期间前来品尝中国特色美食。他写信向你征询建议。请给他回信，内容包括：

1.推荐一到两种美食；

2.说明理由；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是李华，是某国际学校青少年健康网站 (TeenHealth Web) 的编辑，请你在主页上写篇短文介绍你们的网站。内容包括：

1. 建网站的目的；

2. 网站的内容；

3. 使用的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文题目已为你写好。

Our TeenHealth Web

1．Dear Lucy,

I am sorry to trouble you, for I want to get some helpful suggestions from you.

Recently, I have felt I can not see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses, which worries me a lot. I guess there are two causes making this happen. On the one hand, I am addicted to my mobile phone these days. Sometimes I even play games on the phone for a long time. On the other hand, I lack enough exercise. It is said that being exposed to sunshine is beneficial. But I am not sure about it. I know you have excellent eyesight and that you also love playing computer games. So could you be kind to tell me how you protect your eyes?

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Lucy写信咨询她保护视力的相关事宜。

【详解】1.词汇积累

打扰：bother/interrupt→trouble

得到：gain/obtain→get

有益的：helpful→beneficial

善良的：kind-hearted=kind

2.句式拓展

合并并列句

原句： I know you have excellent eyesight and that you also love playing computer games.

拓展句： Not only do you have excellent eyesight but you also love playing computer games.

原句：Today I go to a conference. In the conference, two students have a debate about the strengths and weaknesses of the Internet.

拓展句：Today I go to a conference，where two students have a debate about the strengths and weaknesses of the Internet.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have felt I can not see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses, which worries me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It is said that being exposed to sunshine is beneficial.(运用了名词性从句)

2．Dear Kate,

I am glad to hear from you, but sorry to know that you have trouble in adapting to your senior school life. I’m writing to give you some tips according to my experience.

First of all, be independent. After being admitted to high school, your life and study have changed a lot. When meeting difficulties, you had better solve them on your own. Next, get along well with new friends. My secret is to treat them sincerely and help them when they are in need. In this way, you will soon make true friends. Lastly, seek help if necessary. To deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style, in my view, it is helpful to turn to teachers for help.

Follow my suggestions above and I’m sure your situation will improve soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向朋友Kate写一封建议信，对高中生活和学习上的困难给与建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴地做某事：be pleased to do→be glad to do

独自：by oneself→on one's own

在我看来：from my point of view→in my view

向某人求助：ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： I’m writing to give you some tips according to my experience.

拓展句： I’m writing to give you some tips according to my experience, which I think will be beneficial to you a lot.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I am glad to hear from you, but sorry to know that you have trouble in adapting to your senior school life.（运用了宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

To deal with heavy schoolwork burden and different learning style, in my view, it is helpful to turn to teachers for help.（运用了不定式作目的状语和it用作形式主语的句式。）

3．Dear Li Ming，

I'm sorry to hear that you have some difficulty in learning English. I've got some advice on how to make it. As we all know, English is very important. It is one of the most widely used languages in our daily life. Having a good command of it, we can communicate with people from all over the world.

To learn English well, first of all, I suggest you (should) read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning. Meanwhile, you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well. Moreover, it is suggested that you (should) read a great variety of books after school. Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” If you stick to your dream and study hard, I'm sure you will be successful in your English study.

All the best!

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给同桌李明回一封信，谈谈英语学习的重要性并就如何学好英语给他提出几条建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

精通：be good at→have a good command of

交流：talk→communicate

记住：remember→memorize

坚持：insist→stick to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

拓展句：Last but not least, only when a certain amount of time is spent on listening exercises can you make progress.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Moreover, it is suggested that you (should) read a great variety of books after school.(主语从句)

[高分句型2]As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)

4．作文范文

Dear Mike，

Pressure is a serious topic in today’s world．After stepping into Senior Three，you have to be faced with the coming College Entrance Examinations．You fix all your attention on studies，thus making you feel stressed and find it difficult to get on well with your classmates．Besides，your parents hope that you can go to a key university，which also adds your stress．

I have some suggestions for you to relieve stress．First of all，try to build up your confidence，and never give up or lose heart no matter what happens．Secondly，you should find out your own learning methods and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress．I think a conversation with your parents is also necessary．Finally，I think you should do more physical exercise so as to keep fit．

Less pressure，better life！Best wishes to you!

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华，考生的朋友Mike一周前给考生发电子邮件说他自进入高三以来一直觉得压力很大，请考生根据以下要点给他回封邮件，帮助他振作起来。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

建议：advice→ suggestions

困难的：hard→difficult

希望： wish→ hope

认为：figure→ think

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I have some suggestions for you to relieve stress.

拓展句：I have some suggestions for you to relieve stress，which are of help to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides，your parents hope that you can go to a key university，which also adds your stress．（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Finally，I think you should do more physical exercise so as to keep fit．（动词不定式作状语）

5．Dear Eric,

I’m so sorry to hear about your puzzle about Englinese in your Chinese learning. Thank you for your trust. It’s never easy to master Chinese. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset.

You often speak Englinese, because you don’t pay attention to the history, culture and customs of Chinese and English. So you should make full use of your spare time to practise more. It’s widely believed that practice makes perfect. I would like to help you when you have problems.

I am sure that you will make progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Eric写封信，就如何学习地道的汉语给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困惑：puzzle →confuse

不容易：never easy → hard/difficult

充分利用：make full use of →make the best of

空闲时间：spare time = free time

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：You often speak Englinese, because you don’t pay attention to the history, culture and customs of Chinese and English.

拓展句：The reason why you often speak Englinese is that you don’t pay attention to the history, culture and customs of Chinese and English.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. (运用了it作形式宾语，真正宾语为不定式结构)

[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that practice makes perfect. (运用了that引导的主语从句)

6．Health Matters Most

With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle—studying deep into night, rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health.

To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we took action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle. Not only are we supposed to go to bed early and get up early, but also take meals regularly and slowly enough. Furthermore, it is advised that we spare as much time as possible to work out. If we are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Health Matters Most”为题写一篇演讲稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

到来：come→approach

压力：stress→pressure

非常：very→extremely

此外：besides→furthermore

2.句式拓展

陈述句变倒装句

原句：If we are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.

拓展句：Only if we are able to make exercising our life habit will we surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.

【点睛】[高分句型1] To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we took action to say no to the un-healthy lifestyle.(It is high time虚拟语气句型)

[高分句型2] Not only are we supposed to go to bed early and get up early, but also take meals regularly and slowly enough.(Not only置于句首的倒装句)

7． About Travelling

Travelling is a very good outdoors activity. When you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them.

However, travelling is not always pleasant. The weather can be changeable. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling. Besides, you may have your money stolen.

Therefore, before going on a trip, you should have clear information about the weather and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents.

If you prepare yourself carefully, you will surely enjoy yourself.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“About Travelling”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

极好的：wonderful→good

欣赏：appreciate→enjoy

有趣的：amusing→pleasant

此外：in addition→besides

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：However, travelling is not always pleasant. The weather can be changeable.

拓展句：However, travelling is not always pleasant because the weather can be changeable.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] If you prepare yourself carefully, you will surely enjoy yourself. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)

8．One Possible Version:

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school because you find it quite hard to make friends owing to your shyness. Therefore/Hence, I write this letter, hoping to offer you some advice to adapt to the new environment.

Frankly speaking, it is quite normal for you to feel lonely because you are living in a new environment now. First of all, in order to make friends soon, you should show your friendliness to others. Besides, it will be a good idea to greet teachers and classmates whenever you meet them on campus. From my perspective, it will be wise of you to actively express your ideas in class and participate in class activities. In conclusion, I hope that my suggestions are of great help to you.

I have the confidence that you can deal with these problems soon and everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，给英国笔友杰克提出一些适应新环境的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供：give→offer

坦白地：truly→frankly

观点：opinion→perspective

参加：take part in→participate in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, in order to make friends soon, you should show your friendliness to others.

拓展句：First of all, you should show your friendliness to others, which can help you make friends soon.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I am sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school because you find it quite hard to make friends owing to your shyness.(it作形式宾语)

[高分句型2]In conclusion, I hope that my suggestions are of great help to you.(be of+ 名词)

9．Dear Tom,

Hearing that you're coming to China to experience Chinese food, I can't wait to meet you in person.

Regarding typical Chinese food, I'd recommend Peking Duck. Peking Duck is a symbol of Beijing. Traditionally available only to the very rich and powerful, it is now a must for every visitor who wishes to have a personal taste of the Beijing food. And if you want to have a genuine taste of this delicious treat, you are supposed to go to the Quanjude restaurant, where each duck is carefully chosen and roasted before it is served fresh from the stove. While you're in Beijing, I'd be more than delighted to accompany you.

Hope we'll meet soon and you'll have a pleasant time enjoying Chinese food.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚笔友Tom写封回信，推荐中国美食并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

亲自：in person→in the flesh

富有的：rich→wealthy

挑选：choose→select

高兴的：delighted→happy

2.句式拓展：

简单句变复合句

原句：Peking Duck is a symbol of Beijing.

拓展句：Peking duck is a symbol of Beijing, which has a very long history

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Hearing that you're coming to China to experience Chinese food, I can't wait to meet you in person.（that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Traditionally available only to the very rich and powerful, it is now a must for every visitor who wishes to have a personal taste of the Beijing food.（who引导定语从句）

10．Our TeenHealth Web

We know that being a teenager is sometimes difficult. We have designed TeenHealth Web to help you along the journey to adulthood. Our website has many articles about teenagers’ physical and mental health. You can look through these articles to find advice on your problem. Users are encouraged to post their problems, and they will get advice from our health experts and other forum users. Before you write your post, however, take a look at other users’ posts first. It is likely that the matter has already been discussed on our forum. If your problem is a new one, write a post about it. Our health experts will be glad to help you improve your situation. There is a lot to see, so take some time to look around our website.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写篇短文，就网站目的、内容和使用建议介绍你们的青少年健康网站。

【详解】1.词汇积累

文章：article→writing/essay

建议：advice→suggestion

看一看：take a look at = have a look at

帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth. = assist sb. to do sth.

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Our website has many articles about teenagers’ physical and mental health. You can look through these articles to find advice on your problem.

拓展句：There are many articles about teenagers’ physical and mental health in our website, where you can look through these articles to find advice on your problem.

【点睛】[高分句型1] We know that being a teenager is sometimes difficult. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is likely that the matter has already been discussed on our forum. (运用了that引导的主语从句)