山西高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

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应用文1．上周你班召开了以"Opinions about adoring a star"为主题的班会，请你为班级英语角写一篇报道，内容包括: 1.同学们对追星的态度；2.你的看法。注意: 1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校决定成立舞蹈社团，请你用英语给全体在校交换生写一则通知，内容包括：1.社团成立目的；2.跳舞的好处，主要活动及报名要求等；3.报名地点及截止时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.通知标题已为你写好。3．随着网络的发展，越来越多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡。英语课上大家讨论了电子贺卡的优越性。请依据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇100字左右的短文对此加以说明。1. 可播放动画和声音；2. 传递速度快；3. 形式多样；4. 有利于环境保护。注意：文章必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。参考词汇：电子贺卡：electronic card  动画：animations4．请你写一篇英语作文，描述你参加过的一次户外运动，内容包括：1．运动过程；2．你的感受；3．准备长期坚持。注意：1．词数100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．某英语报社现面向中学生征文，主题是“我帮父母做家务”。请你写一篇短文投稿，要点如下: 1.做家务的经历；2.你的感受和收获。注意: 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你围绕学校上周六开展的主题为“Sports Make Us Happy”的活动，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.活动时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.你的感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．你校英文报新推出的“Famous Sports Star”专栏现面向全校学生征文。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍体育明星朱婷，内容主要包括：1. 简况：1994年11月29日出生于河南省一个普通的农民家庭；2. 训练项目：排球；3. 主要经历：2008年朱婷以其身高优势入选河南省体校开始专业排球训练；2013年入选中国国家女子排球队；4. 取得成绩：2016年里约奥运会中国女排获奥运冠军，朱婷本人荣膺MVP称号。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词语：河南省体校 Henan Provincial Sports School   里约 Rio中国国家女子排球队 Chinese National Women’s Volleyball Team_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．你校的英文报刊正在征文，主题是“我最喜爱的一部英文电影”。请你写篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 你的最喜爱的英文电影的简介；2. 你喜爱此部电影的原因。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的标题已给出。My Favorite English Film___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．最近你校英文报进行了一次“你心中最崇拜哪类人”的调查，结果显示，钟南山、袁隆平等科学家成为大多数学生最崇拜的人。请你用英语就此写篇报道，内容包括：1.简述此次调查；2.你对此次结果的看法。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假设你是李华，你的好友Jim想要在学校组织一场音乐会, 为无家可归的孩子筹款。他特意写来邮件向你咨询相关事宜,请你根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。1.确定举办场地；2.确定演出者及赞助商；3……..注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   1．One possible version:Opinions about adoring a starNowadays, adoring a star is popular among us teenagers. Last week, a class meeting titled "Opinions about adoring a star" was held in our class. There is no doubt that there are different voices. For some, paying much attention to a star is a waste of time. What's worse, blind love may cause improper behaviors. For others, the reason why they adore a star is that idols could encourage them to be better. In my view, the real idols are those who make contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become a useful person in the future.【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为班级英语角写一篇报道，内容是关于以"Opinions about adoring a star"为主题的班会。【详解】1.词汇积累注意：have an eye on→pay attention to导致：lead to→cause不合适的：unsuitable→improper鼓励：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last week, a class meeting titled "Opinions about adoring a star" was held in our class. 拓展句：Last week, a class meeting which was titled "Opinions about adoring a star" was held in our class.【点睛】[高分句型1]There is no doubt that there are different voices.（that引导同位语从句）[高分句型2]In my view, the real idols are those who make contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists.（who引导定语从句）[高分句型3]Only in this way can we become a useful person in the future.（only置于句首的部分倒装）2．One possible version:NoticeTo enrich our life, our school will set up a dance club. As we all know, dancing is a good form of exercise. It can build up our body and keep us in good health. In addition. it will develop our confidence and improve our social skills. As a member of the club, besides taking regular training, you may take part in a variety of competitions. As long as you're interested in dance, welcome to join it. If interested, please hand in your application form to the Students' Union office by 5 pm next Friday. The Students' Union【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给全体在校交换生写一则学校决定成立舞蹈社团的通知。【详解】1. 词汇积累建立：set up/put up/establish目的：goal/aim建立自信：improve/develop/promote our confidence好处：advantage/benefit另外：additionally/besides/apart from2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As we all know, dancing is a good form of exercise. It can build up our body and keep us in good health. In addition. it will develop our confidence and improve our social skills. 拓展句：As we all know, dancing is a good form of exercise, which can build up our body, keep us in good health as well as develop our confidence and improve our social skills. 【点睛】[高分句型1]To enrich our life, our school will set up a dance club. （运用了不定式作目的状语）[高分句型2]As long as you're interested in dance, welcome to join it.（运用了as long as 引导的条件状语从句）3．With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones.Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations. Besides, it’s faster to send an electronic card. There are many websites on line where different varieties of cards are available.If none of these cards are of any interest to you, you can design cards of unique style using flash or other software. More importantly, with the popularity of electronic cards, less paper is used for making paper cards, which contributes to the environment protection.【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生针对英语课上对于电子贺卡的优越性的讨论，写一篇短文介绍电子贺卡的优越性。【详解】1.词汇积累各种各样：kinds of→varieties of 可用的：usable→available有帮助：help→contribute to有趣的：interesting=of interest2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Besides, it’s faster to send an electronic card. There are many websites on line where different varieties of cards are available.拓展句：Besides, there are many websites on line where different varieties of cards are available, which makes it faster to send an electronic card. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations. (运用过去分词短语compared with作状语；运用了for引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2] More importantly, with the popularity of electronic cards, less paper is used for making paper cards, which contributes to the environment protection. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．One possible versionA Meaningful Bike RideLast weekend, I participated in a bicycle ride organized by our community.As scheduled, 20 participants started from our neighborhood at 8:00. Wearing helmets and gloves, we rode along Binhe bike lane. Halfway, despite my effort to pedal hard, I still fell behind. In order to accompany and comfort me, others slowed down. After an hour, we arrived at Shanxi Stadium. There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.Although we were all exhausted, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful, because it not only helped to build up our body, but strengthened the bond between the neighbors. So we reached an agreement that we would regularly ride together in the future.【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，描述你参加过的一次户外骑行活动。【详解】词汇积累 参加：participate in→ take part in/be involved in按照安排：as scheduled →as planned→/It is scheduled …尽管：despite →in spite of /regardless of为了……：in order to →with the purpose of /for the purpose of陪伴某人：accompany →keep sb. company2.句式拓展 高分句型的同义表达(1)There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.→There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which made everyone present surprised.→There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, surprising everyone present.(2)Although we were all exhausted, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful.→Exhausted as we all were, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful.【点睛】[高分句型1] Wearing helmets and gloves, we rode along Binhe bike lane.  (现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3] Because it not only helped to build up our body, but strengthened the bond between the neighbors.( not only…but also引导的并列句式)5．One Sunday, my parents went out to the supermarket, and it occurred to me that I could give our home a thorough cleanup. Firstly, I collected the clothes hung out, folded them and put them in the wardrobe. Then I dusted the living room and put all things in place. After that, I swept and mopped the floor. When my parents came back, seeing the living room tidy and the floor shining, they looked at me in surprise and then gave me a big hug. Tired as I was, I felt so happy.Through this experience, I gained deeper insight into the glory of labour. I decided to help with the housework whenever I can.【分析】本篇书面表达属于继续记叙文，要求考生给某英语报社写征文，主题是“我帮父母做家务”。【详解】词汇积累突然想到：occur to→strike回来：come back→return整洁的：tidy→neat吃惊地：in surprise→in astonishment2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly, I collected the clothes hung out, folded them and put them in the wardrobe.拓展句：Firstly, I collected the clothes hung out, after which I folded them and put them in the wardrobe.【点睛】[高分句型1] One Sunday, my parents went out to the supermarket, and it occurred to me that I could give our home a thorough cleanup.  (运用了that引导的主语从句)[高分句型2] Tired as I was, I felt so happy. (运用了倒装句)6．One possible version:Last Saturday, our school held an activity themed “Sports Make Us Happy”. That day, all Senior 3 students gathered on the playground at 8:30 am. After an inspirational opening ceremony, all kinds of sports events started one after another. Some played basketball, football, badminton or volleyball; others were running or jumping. The whole playground was alive with excitement. The winners were awarded fruits and vegetables, which added to their delight. As a participant, I think highly of the activity because it not only allows us students to relax in a stressful school life but also prepares us for the future both physically and mentally. I hope such activities can be held regularly.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生围绕学校上周六开展的主题为“Sports Make Us Happy”的活动，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】1.    词汇积累激动人心的：exciting → inspirational高度评价：highly praised=think highly of接踵而至：follow one by one →one after another充满：be filled with=alive with2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：As a participant, I think highly of the activity because it not only allows us students to relax in a stressful school life but also prepares us for the future both physically and mentally.拓展句：I who am a participant think highly of the activity because it not only allows us students to relax in a stressful school life but also prepares us for the future both physically and mentally.【点睛】[高分句型1]：Last Saturday, our school held an activity themed “Sports Make Us Happy”.这句话运用了过去分词作定语的结构。[高分句型2]：The winners were awarded fruits and vegetables, which added to their delight.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。7．Zhu Ting, my favourite player, is an excellent volleyball player from China and she performed wonderfully at the Rio 2016 Olympics.She was born on Nov. 29, 1994 into a common farmer family of Henan Province. Because she was very tall for her age, she was selected to attend Henan Provincial Sports School to learn volleyball in 2008, where she showed great talent in volleyball and was selected to play for the Chinese National Women’s Volleyball Team in 2013. Her team won gold at the Rio 2016 Olympics and she was named MVP. From then on, her great times started.Zhu Ting is considered one of the most promising volleyball players in the world. I like her not only because of her great skills but also her attitude towards the game. I’m proud of Zhu Ting.【分析】本篇书面表达属于征文稿，要求为校英文报写一篇短文介绍体育明星朱婷的征文。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时态和少量一般现在时态。结构：总分总结构。要求：1. 简况：1994年11月29日出生于河南省一个普通的农民家庭；2. 训练项目：排球；3. 主要经历：2008年朱婷以其身高优势入选河南省体校开始专业排球训练；2013年入选中国国家女子排球队；4. 取得成绩：2016年里约奥运会中国女排获奥运冠军，朱婷本人荣膺MVP称号。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）my favourite player; performed wonderfully; was selected to; showed great talent in; From then on; is considered one of the most promising; not only…but also…第三步：连词成句1. Zhu Ting, my favourite player, is an excellent volleyball player from China and she performed wonderfully at the Rio 2016 Olympics.2. Because she was very tall for her age, she was selected to attend Henan Provincial Sports School to learn volleyball in 2008, where she showed great talent in volleyball and was selected to play for the Chinese National Women’s Volleyball Team in 2013.3. I like her not only because of her great skills but also her attitude towards the game.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：not only…but also,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because. 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] Zhu Ting, my favourite player, is an excellent volleyball player from China and she performed wonderfully at the Rio 2016 Olympics.(名词性词组作同位语)[高分句型2]Because she was very tall for her age, she was selected to attend Henan Provincial Sports School to learn volleyball in 2008, where she showed great talent in volleyball and was selected to play for the Chinese National Women’s Volleyball Team in 2013.( Because引导原因状语从句& where引导定语从句)[高分句型3]I like her not only because of her great skills but also her attitude towards the game.（not only…but also…结构连接两个分句）8．One possible version:My Favorite English FilmMy favorite English film is Titanic, in which a young man and a young woman fell in love with each other on a ferry journey and the man gave up his own life to allow the woman to survive during a ship wreckage.The reasons why I love this film so much are as follows. First, the scenes of the film are extraordinarily beautiful and appealing. Second, the story is simple but touching because the love between the young man and the young woman is so pure and heroic. More importantly, I'm impressed by many dialogues in this film, which inspire me a lot in my life. I love this film so much that I see it every year to explore it more.【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生写篇短文投稿，主题是“我最喜爱的一部英文电影”。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 你的最喜爱的英文电影的简介；2. 你喜爱此部电影的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）fell in love with；give up；allow sb. to do sth.；be impressed by第三步：连词成句1.My favorite English film is Titanic, in which a young man and a young woman fell in love with each other on a ferry journey and the man gave up his own life to allow the woman to survive during a ship wreckage.2.The reasons why I love this film so much are as follows. 3.First, the scenes of the film are extraordinarily beautiful and appealing. 4.Second, the story is simple but touching because the love between the young man and the young woman is so pure and heroic. 5.More importantly, I'm impressed by many dialogues in this film, which inspire me a lot in my life. 6.I love this film so much that I see it every year to explore it more.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表文章结构顺序：First, Second连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】[高分句型1]My favorite English film is Titanic, in which a young man and a young woman fell in love with each other on a ferry journey and the man gave up his own life to allow the woman to survive during a ship wreckage.（in which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I love this film so much that I see it every year to explore it more.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）9．Recently a survey on what kind of people you admire most has been conducted by our school English newspaper. As the result shows, scientists like Zhong Nanshan and Yuan Longping are most popular with the students. To be honest, I am very pleased with the result, which shows students are gradually forming proper ideas of value. Instead of blindly admiring pop stars, they admire those scientists who play great roles in developing our society and improving our life. Besides, the great spirit of selfless contributions and the huge efforts they show in their career also deserve our respect. In short, if most students admire scientists, our country will certainly become better and better.【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分总法总分法指先总说，再分说，最后总说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 简述此次调查；2. 你对此次结果的看法;第二步：列提纲（重点词组）a survey on; kind of; are popular with; To be honest; am pleased with; Instead of; In short第三步：连词成句1. Recently a survey on what kind of people you admire most has been conducted by our school English newspaper.2. scientists like Zhong Nanshan and Yuan Longping are most popular with the students.3. To be honest, I am very pleased with the result, which shows students are gradually forming proper ideas of value.4. Instead of blindly admiring pop stars, they admire those scientists who play great roles in developing our society and improving our life.5. In short, if most students admire scientists- our country will certainly become better and better.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：In short2.表并列补充关系：Besides, also3.表转折对比关系：Instead of 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] To be honest, I am very pleased with the result, which shows students are gradually forming proper ideas of value.（which引导的定语从句，先行词是the result）[高分句型2] Instead of blindly admiring pop stars, they admire those scientists who play great roles in developing our society and improving our life.（who引导的定语从句，先行词为those scientists）[高分句型3] In short, if most students admire scientists, our country will certainly become better and better.（if引导的条件状语从句，主将从现）10．Dear Jim,I'm honored to be asked to give you some advice. As you know, our class organized a show last month, from which I learned a lot.First, you need to find an ideal place to hold the concert. The school hall is a good choice. Second, you'd better find some performers and sponsors. You can select some of your classmates who are good at singing and dancing. As for sponsors, you can invite parents to join you. I believe that they are willing to help those homeless children. At last, I wish you good luck and every success for the concert.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Jim回封邮件，告诉他学校为无家可归的孩子筹款组织的音乐会的相关情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.确定举办场地；2.确定演出者及赞助商；3.表达希望第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be honored to do sth.；need to do sth.；be good at ；be willing to第三步：连词成句1.I'm honored to be asked to give you some advice. 2.As you know, our class organized a show last month, from which I learned a lot.3.First, you need to find an ideal place to hold the concert. 4.The school hall is a good choice. 5.Second, you'd better find some performers and sponsors. 6.You can select some of your classmates who are good at singing and dancing.7. As for sponsors, you can invite parents to join you. 8.I believe that they are willing to help those homeless children. 9. At last, I wish you good luck and every success for the concert.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序： First, Second, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, our class organized a show last month, from which I learned a lot.(from which引导定语从句)[高分句型2] You can select some of your classmates who are good at singing and dancing. (who引导定语从句)[高分句型3] I believe that they are willing to help those homeless children. (that引导宾语从句)