上海高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

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应用文1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在学校英语报上看到一个主题为“Time Capsule”的征文，你对此很感兴趣。写一篇文章，内容需包括：(1)你计划将什么物品放入“时间胶囊”；(2)你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近你校正在开展主题为“提倡节约，拒绝浪费”的征文活动，要求全校同学就学校里可能存在的浪费现象献策献计。写一篇文章参加这个活动，内容须包括：1)你认为学校里存在哪些浪费现象；2)对这些现象提出解决方案。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.近年来，全球掀起了不浪费食物运动(the No Food Waste campaign)，例如推行打包及食物共享文化，鼓励购买 临期食品，并将厨余分类回收后加以利用。请谈谈你对此现象的看法。(提示词：leftovers剩饭菜nearly expired food临期食品)4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是树德中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在征集全校学生对于“适度的压力有利于进步”的看法，你对此很有兴趣，内容须包括：1.你是否赞成这种说法；2.用你自己的亲身经历来说明你的理由。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，在你校英语报读到如下的征文启事。你一定曾在新年伊始许下“新年计划（New Year’s Resolution）”，其中必定有半途而废，也有坚持到底。请通过邮件（发至nyr@233.com）来和我们聊聊你们的新年计划吧！你对此话题很感兴趣，写一封邮件投稿，内容须包括：1)叙述你曾经半途而废或坚持到底的某个新年计划；2)解释导致你半途而废或促使你坚持到底的原因。156．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近你校英语报正在进行主题为“My Summer Vacation”的征文，你对此很感兴趣，决定写一篇文章投稿，内容须包括：1）详细叙述在今年暑假里对你而言最有意义的一件事情；2）你在这一件事情中的收获。7．Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.高中学习生活快一年了，请你给自己的英语老师写一封电子邮件，谈谈你学习高中英语新教材的体会。你的文章必须包括:●简单介绍新教材中你最喜欢的一篇语篇的主要内容●分享你认为自己学习该语篇时最得意的一点收获（文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设你是明启中学的学生王华。最近，你校试行在午间播放音乐，同学们对此看法不一。大多数同学赞同，但也 有部分同学反对。请你根据表格中提供的信息，给校长写封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。 对午间播放音乐的看法赞成的理由使午间生活丰富多彩，缓解压力，音乐可以带给学生快乐等。反对的理由午间时间短，播放音乐不起作用，安静休息有利于课上集中精力等。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"The electronic device that I must take while travelling"的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是某电视台青少年教育类节目主持人，现在有机会可以采访下列三位名人中的某一人，你会选择采访谁？你会问些什么问题？为什么？中国女排教练：郎平 Jane Lang流行乐歌手：周杰伦 Jay Chou诺贝尔文学奖获得者：莫言 Mo Yan___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________              1．Lately, the concept of “time capsule” has been a hot topic, arousing a heated discussion about what to put in it. Personally, what I most want to put in it is my old photographs.Initially, with the booming modern technology, electronic photos have gradually replaced paper ones and the old photo-taken mode is becoming less and less common. Even so, paper photos surpass electronic ones in quality and value in my heart. When I touch them, it is as if recalling the scenes at those moments, which makes memories clearer and deeper. This is one of the reasons why I want to save the old photos.Moreover, some of my old photos have disappeared, including my kindergarten and primary school graduation photos. Although these precious memories are still in my mind, with the passage of time I will gradually forget the names and appearances of my classmates. It is a shame that these old photos, the only tool I can use to recall memories, have been lost. Therefore I sincerely hope to print the photos I take now and put them in the time capsule so that years later I can still look back and recall my youth.Last but not least, some old photos record people and things that will never come back. I’m always keeping a photo of my grandfather and me. Now grandpa is not alive and the old house was torn down, however, this photo retains my last memory about grandpa and the old house. If I put it in the time capsule, wait until my children grow up, then my children’s children grow up, I can tell them who he was, where it was. It is not only the bond of affection, but a kind of communication across time, which is the meaning of the time capsule.The time capsule can be the memory of the past, the reflection of the present, and the expectation of the future. We can save many memories with the help of modern technology, but what is more important is cherishing the present life and the precious time with the people around.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Time Capsule”为主题写一篇文章。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：first of all→initially想要做某事：would like to do sth→want to do sth回顾：review→look back珍惜，重视：cherish→value2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Now grandpa is not alive and the old house was torn down, however, this photo retains my last memory about grandpa and the old house.拓展句：Since now grandpa is not alive and the old house was torn down, this photo retains my last memory about grandpa and the old house.【点睛】[高分句型1] Personally, what I most want to put in it is my old photographs. (运用了what引导主语从句)[高分句型2] When I touch them, it is as if recalling the scenes at those moments, which makes memories clearer and deeper. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句和when引导时间状语从句)2．I'm a Senior Three student, Li Ming. Recently the essay competition whose theme is "Advocate economy and Eliminate waste" has been a hot topic on campus. I’m writing to put forward my point of view on how to reduce waste and save energy so as to protect the environment of our campus.In the first place, the most common waste on campus must be water waste. Some students lack strong awareness of energy conservation and environmental protection, so we still see some running taps on campus. As a result, it's necessary to put up some posters or make some slogans about "Advocate economy and Eliminate waste" in the hallway. Besides, installing automatic induction water outlet device may be an effective measure to reduce water waste as well.Secondly, I've found that the use of electronic equipment is not reasonable enough, which has caused much electricity waste. To reduce waste and make full use of resources, we’d better turn off the main power when electronic appliances are not in use and replace the lights with energy-saving ones. It's also a good idea to install sound-controlled lights in public places such as corridors so as to reduce electricity waste.Lastly, the phenomenon of paper waste should also arouse our close attention as there are fewer and fewer forests in the world. With network technology booming, paperless teaching and learning would be the mainstream in the future, which can help reduce paper waste to a great extent. If we have to print and copy materials, we should print on both sides.To sum up, everyone should make efforts when we are reducing waste and saving energy. Meanwhile, our school should shoulder its responsibility to lead the way at the macro level. Only under everyone's joint efforts will our campus become greener and more beautiful.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇文章参加主题为“提倡节约，拒绝浪费”的征文活动。【详解】1.词汇积累提出：come up with→put forward观点：opinion→point of view因此：therefore→as a result替代：take place of→replace2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Some students lack strong awareness of energy conservation and environmental protection, so we still see some running taps on campus.拓展句：Since some students lack strong awareness of energy conservation and environmental protection, we still see some running taps on campus.【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently the essay competition whose theme is "Advocate economy and Eliminate waste" has been a hot topic on campus. (运用了whose引导定语从句)[高分句型2] Only under everyone's joint efforts will our campus become greener and more beautiful. (运用了部分倒装)3．In recent years, the No Food Waste Campaign has appeared in many countries around the world.The Campaign appeals to people to pack cup the leftovers and learn to share more food with otherswhile eating out  . It encourages people to buy nearly expired food and sort out the foods in the kitchen in order to make full use of them.As far as I am concerned, it's of great benefit for people to save food because food shortage is still a big problem in the world. Also，people will form a good habit of eating and develop a healthy diet ,which will have a deep influence on the young generation. From now on, I will call on more people around me to take part in the Campaign and make a contribution to the world.【分析】本篇书面是提纲式作文，要求考生就近年来，全球掀起了不浪费食物运动(the No Food Waste campaign)，例如推行打包及食物共享文化，鼓励购买 临期食品，并将厨余分类回收后加以利用，谈谈自己对此现象的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累呼吁：ask→ appeal to鼓励某人某事：inspire sb. to do sth. →encourage people to do sth利用: use→ make full use of有好处: be useful→ be of great benefit 2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：The Campaign appeals to people to pack cup the leftovers and learn to share more food with otherswhile eating out  . It encourages people to buy nearly expired food and sort out the foods in the kitchen in order to make full use of them.拓展句：The Campaign appeals to people to pack cup the leftovers and learn to share more food with otherswhile eating out , which encourages people to buy nearly expired food and sort out the foods in the kitchen in order to make full use of them.【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I am concerned, it's of great benefit for people to save food because food shortage is still a big problem in the world. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2] Also，people will form a good habit of eating and develop a healthy diet ,which will have a deep influence on the young generation. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．Dear Editor,I am Li Ming, our school senior three student. I hear that our school English paper is collecting students’ views on the statements “moderate stress improves performance”, and I am greatly keen on sharing mine with others. My view is: Moderate stress definitely improves performance.I was a top student in junior school and when I was in senior one, my academic performance was far from satisfactory. At that time, I felt stressful. However, the stress, which came from the gap of learning results between junior and senior school, pushed me to think about what happened and how to solve the problem. What I found was that a majority of students made full preparation before new lessons, in other words, encouraged me to talk with my classmate, to learn to preview or the progress. I think this is the results of moderate stress. Stress inspires me to think what I can do to be better, and it also pushed me to overcome difficulties in daily life.Of course, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Moderate stress will inspire or motivate us but too much stress and pressure will bring about opposite results.Li Ming【分析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生结合自己的经历对“适度的压力有利于进步”发表自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累喜爱：like to do sth.→be keen on改善：promote→improve有压力的：be stressed out→stressful激励某人做某事：motivate sb. to do sth.= encourage/inspire sb. to do sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Moderate stress will inspire or motivate us but too much stress and pressure will bring about opposite results.拓展句：Although moderate stress will inspire or motivate us, too much stress and pressure will bring about opposite results.【点睛】[高分句型1] I hear that our school English paper is collecting students’ views on the statements “moderate stress improves performance”, and I am greatly keen on sharing mine with others. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] However, the stress, which came from the gap of learning results between junior and senior school, pushed me to think about what happened and how to solve the problem. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)5．New Year’s ResolutionPeople always make New Year’s resolutions as if they would accomplish them. But in most cases, most plans are forgotten after three days of effort.However, I made a plan last year to lose 20 pounds, which turned out to be a success. I’d like to share with you my experience. First, a plan should have realistic possibilities, such as losing 20 pounds instead of 40. Second, ever-lasting action is the key to successful planning. A plan without action mean nothing. Stick to it for 21 days and make it a habit. Finally, give your resolution a strong sense of purpose. Because it’s hard to do things you don’t like. For example, the desire of looking better in a skirt or being healthier, will motivate you to lose weight actively.A New Year’s resolution is only the first step to success, and it takes persistence and love to make your dreams come true.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英语报投稿，介绍自己新年计划的成败经验。【详解】1.词汇积累完成：complete→accomplish现实的：practical→realistic持续的：continous→ever-lasting坚持：persist→ stick to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’d like to share with you my experience.拓展句：I’d like to share with you my experience, hoping that it will enlighten you.【点睛】[高分句型1] People always make New Year’s resolutions as if they would accomplish them.  (运用了as if引导的与将来事实相反的虚拟语气)[高分句型2] However, I made a plan last year to lose 20 pounds, which turned out to be a success. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)6．One possible versionThe summer vacation was over. I spent a meaningful summer vacation. Especially I took part in a Chinese Summer Camp, which was intended for local students.Scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28, the Camp covered a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. Additionally, it provided a chance for us to visit some famous museums. By admiring the historical relics, I definitely gained a better understanding of the country.I was very glad that I had the chance to join in all these activities.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇文章投稿，参加学校英语报主题为“My Summer Vacation”的征文活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：join in→ take part in多种多样的：various→ a wide variety of参观visit→ pay a visit to更好了解：know well→ gain a better understanding of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28, the Camp covered a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. 拓展句：Scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28, the Camp covered a wide variety of cultural activities, which ranged from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture.【点睛】[高分句型1] Especially I took part in a Chinese Summer Camp, which was intended for local students.（运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2] I was very glad that I had the chance to join in all these activities.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句）7．Dear Miss Li,How time flies! It has been nearly a year since I came to study in high school. I would like to share with you my experience in learning the new English textbooks for high school.  The text content of the new textbook is novel, and close to the lives of young people. One of my favorite texts is“why do we celebrate festivals”, in which the author mainly introduces different origins of festivals and some festival customs have changed with the passage of time. I gained a lot while studying this article. I not only learned a lot about festivals that I didn't know before, but also learned a new kind of grammar- the usage of participles. Thank you for your care and help in the past year. I wish you a happy life and smooth work.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Sincerely yours,Lihua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文， 高中学习生活快一年了，请你给自己的英语老师写一封电子邮件，谈谈你学习高中英语新教材的体会。【详解】词汇积累课文：text→passage新颖的：novel→fresh最喜欢的：favorite→best-loved收获： gain→harvest2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The text content of the new textbook is novel, and close to the lives of young people.拓展句：The text content of the new textbook which is novel is close to the lives of young people.【点睛】[高分句型1] It has been nearly a year since I came to study in high school.  (运用了since引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] One of my favorite texts is “why do we celebrate festivals” ,  in which the author mainly introduces different origins of festivals and some festival customs have changed with the passage of time. (运用了in which引导的非限制性定语从句)8．Dear Mr. Smith,As a monitor, I think I should say something about the practice of playing music during the class break in our school. Some of us agree with the idea that music or songs should be played during the break, because they think music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere and bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness of study. Besides, listening to music makes us happy and is a great enjoyment. However, some others hold a different opinion that music during the break will have a bad effect on their rest as it is too noisy. What’s worse, some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the short break, which does harm to their studies.Yours sincerely,LI Hua【分析】本文是一篇应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生王华。最近，你校试行在午间播放音乐，同学们对此看法不一。大多数同学赞同，但也有部分同学反对。请你根据表格中提供的信息，给校长写封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累减少：reduce→go down→bring down更糟糕：what’s worse→worse still真诚地：sincerely→truly沉迷于，专心于：be lost in→be absorbed in2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：What’s worse, some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the short break, which does harm to their studies.拓展句：What’s worse, some students are still absorbed in the music they have heard during the short break, which is harmful to their studies.【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Some of us agree with the idea that music or songs should be played during the break, because they think music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere and bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness of study.句中使用because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2 ] However, some others hold a different opinion that music during the break will have a bad effect on their rest as it is too noisy.句中使用that引导的同位语从句。9．Nowadays, with the rapid development of electronic technology, our travel journey is becoming more and more colorful. Electronic devices like computers, cellphones, and iPads are filling our time on high-speed trains or planes. Personally, there is another electronic device that I will definitely take with me on the road, and that is power bank.Firstly, power bank is small in size and can be carried around. Today more and more people prefer to take photos with mobile phones instead of cameras because it is important to be lightly equipped when travelling, so power bank can help avoid the embarrassing moment when they want to record good moments but their phones suddenly run out of power. Power bank is clearly a portable and versatile electronic device.Secondly, for long distance travel, power bank can charge my mobile phone in time so as to avoid not replying to messages timely due to the sudden death of the battery. I remember once when I was on the train to Nanjing, my mobile phone was almost out of power when I was about to arrive at the station. Fortunately, the power bank I carried was a timely help, otherwise I might not be able to contact my friend in Nanjing to pick me up. Therefore, power bank is an electronic device that I will carry with me no matter I am traveling or going out.Finally, the security of power bank is trustworthy. The current power bank generally has the functions of charge control, charge protection and discharge protection, so when charging our mobile phones or iPads, we don't need to worry about excessive charging. In addition, the current power bank capacity is high, which means it can charge different electronic devices at the same time.For me, power bank is one of the greatest inventions in the age of science and technology. I feel more secure and convenient when traveling with it.【分析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"The electronic device that I must take while travelling"的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。【详解】词汇积累有趣的：colorful→interesting就我个人而言：personally→as far as I’m concerned避免：avoid→prevent…from可靠的：trustworthy→reliable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays, with the rapid development of electronic technology, our travel journey is becoming more and more colorful.拓展句：Now, electronic technology has developed，which makes our travel journey become more and more colorful.【点睛】[高分句型1] Personally, there is another electronic device that I will definitely take with me on the road, and that is power bank. (运用了that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] In addition, the current power bank capacity is high, which means it can charge different electronic devices at the same time.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)10．If I am the host of an educational program for teenagers, I will invite Jay Chou to be our guest and interview him instead of Jane Lang and Mo Yan. He is very popular with teenagers.The reasons for my choice are as follows.First of all, questions about how to overcome difficulties will be raised. As we all know, Jay Chou was not a successful figure when he released his songs for the first time. Like many ordinary people, he struggled, sought for jobs and felt frustrated. However, with his passion for music and hard work, he was discovered by many celebrities and started a different life. So I think he can give us many useful suggestions on how to undergo difficulties and overcome obstacles and share his lessons with us.Then I would like to ask for some suggestions about how to deal with social problems. We teenagers are about to step into our society and it is inevitable for us to be faced with sensitive affairs. With his patience, wisdom and thoughtfulness, Jay Chou has smoothly solved a recent issue between a writer and him, which is very tough and thorny. I think teenagers can learn a lot from his experiences and be more capable of solving social problems.In conclusion, as a successful and well-named celebrity, Jay Chou is a good choice/candidate to interview.【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。假如你是某电视台青少年教育类节目主持人，现在有机会可以采访三位名人中的某一位，他们是中国女排教练郎平、流行音乐歌手周杰伦和诺贝尔文学奖获得者莫言，那么你会选择采访谁？你会问些什么问题？为什么？按照这三个问题作为内容提示来写作。【详解】1.词汇积累经历：experience→ undergo/go through沮丧的：upset→frustrated/discouraged名人：famous people→ celebrity困难的：difficult →tough/ thorny/challenging  能够：can→be capable of/be able to总而言之：in a word →in conclusion/generally speaking/all in all/above all2.句式拓展简单句改为复合句：原句：So I think he can give us many useful suggestions on how to undergo difficulties and overcome obstacles and share his lessons with us.拓展句：That’s why I think he can give us many useful suggestions on how to undergo difficulties and overcome obstacles and share his lessons with us.【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, Jay Chou was not a successful figure when he released his songs for the first time.（该复合句中使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，as we (all) know：众所周知）[高分句型2] With his patience, wisdom and thoughtfulness, Jay Chou has smoothly solved a recent issue between a writer and him, which is very tough and thorny.（该复合句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代的是issue）[高分句型3] In conclusion, as a successful and well-named celebrity, Jay Chou is a good choice/candidate to interview.（该句子中使用了“主语（Jay Chou）+be+形容词/名词+to do”的句型，在这里该句型表示被动意义，主语（Jay Chou）承受interview的动作）