译林版高中英语选择性必修第一册UNIT1表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开介绍你最喜欢的食物
本单元的写作任务是介绍你最喜欢的食物，属于说明文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出你喜欢的食物
主体(the body)——详细介绍你喜欢的食物
结尾(the ending)——阐述自己的观点
[常用词块]
1．high/rich in fiber高纤维
2．low in fat 低脂肪
3．be lacking in nutrition 缺乏营养
4．be particular about food 挑食；对食物很讲究
5．be closely related to health 与健康息息相关
6．do harm/damage to physical health 有害身体健康
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．My favorite food is Chinese dumplings; its pronunciation is jiao zi in Chinese.
我最喜欢的食物是饺子，它的中文发音是jiao zi。
2．Beijing Roast Duck is thought to be one of the most delicious dishes all over the world；most visitors coming to Beijing will never forget to have a try.
北京烤鸭被认为是世界上最美味的菜肴之一，大多数来北京的游客都不会忘记去品尝它。
★正文佳句
1．The whole duck must be sliced into 120 pieces and every piece has to be perfect with the complete layers of the meat.
整个鸭子必须切成120片，每片都必须与完整的肉层完美搭配。
2．Sweet and Sour Mandarin Fish is prepared with more than 6 main ingredients including fish，cooking wine，pine nut，pepper，salt and vinegar.
糖醋桂鱼是由桂鱼、料酒、松子、胡椒、盐、醋等6种主要原料配制而成。
★余味结尾
1．Now，Beijing Roast Duck has become the world's rare species，renowned overseas.
如今，北京烤鸭已成为世界珍稀品种，享誉海外。
2．So the dish is worthy of being called the most bright pearl of Jiangsu cuisine.
所以这道菜不愧为苏菜中最璀璨的明珠。
请你根据下面要点提示写一篇介绍北京烤鸭的英语短文。要点提示：
1．最美味的食物之一；
2．准备过程复杂而漫长；
3．可以蘸甜面酱，用煎饼包着吃；
4．有机会应该尝一尝。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：slice 薄片 sauce 酱 pancake煎饼
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[学生习作]
Beijing Roast Duck is one of the most delicious dishes in the world.
It takes a long time to prepare it before the duck is served to the dinners in the end.When you enjoy it，you can first cut it into slices and then dip the slices into sweet sauce.It will be better to eat it with a thin pancake wrapping it.
Do you think it is worth having a try?
点评：
1．能够涵盖基本要点，描述较为全面；
2．结构单一，内容不够充实；
3．词汇和句式有待提升。
[升格作文]
Beijing Roast Duck is honored as one of the most delicious dishes in the world.
Preparing it is a long process of many steps from selecting the duck to the dinners in the end.In the restaurant，ducks are roasted upon the order of the diners.You can dip the slices of duck into sweet sauce，and wrap the meat with some spring onions in a thin pancake.
If you have chances to Beijing，you are supposed to have a try.
请你根据下面要点提示写一篇介绍“粥”的短文。
要点：1.易于消化，适合病人食用；
2．没有浓郁的味道，你可以随意添加其他成分；
3．可以随时随地制作，燕麦或玉米是主料；
4．很受中国人乃至世界各地人们的喜爱。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：oats燕麦
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【参考范文】
Porridge is a type of food served for breakfasts，which is easy to digest，so it's a good choice for people who are ill.
Porridge alone doesn't have a strong flavour.You can add almost anything to it.You can make it almost everywhere in the world.Either oats or corn is main material for making porridge.You can buy either and then add local materials to make it more delicious.So it is popular with Chinese people and foreigners all over the world.
