考点22 书面表达 制胜2022年高考英语一轮复习考点讲练 学案

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制胜2022年高考英语一轮复习考点讲练考点22 书面表达  书面表达命题特点书面表达是对考生语言运用能力进行全面考查的一种综合性测试，它不仅考查考生词汇、语法等基础性的语言知识，更考查考生思考问题的能力、语言组织的能力和语言表达的能力等。从历年的书面表达题来看，考查的形式多样，有记叙文、说明文、描写文、日记、书信、通知和便条等，所涉及的内容繁多。根据高考考试大纲，书面表达的题目要求考生根据所给情境（包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等）和提供的形式（图画、图表、提纲等）写一篇100词左右的短文，要求考生能够做到清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思和有效运用所学语言知识。高考试题一向重视对英语应用文写作的考查。但是，近年来，新课标卷加大了对书信和电子邮件类书面表达的考查力度。通过研究近五年新课标卷的英语试题，我们可以发现书面表达试题呈现以下几个显著的特点：      命题形式：仍为半控制性、半开放式写作，以提纲方式呈现材料，词数100左右；全国卷书面表达题目中均采用提纲的形式引导学生明确写作要点，这种形式降低了写作难度，让学生有章可循，能在短时间内构思成文。同时提纲方式适当地增加了细节描述方面的写作任务，给了学生更多的想象空间，便于其写出具有不同特点的作文，有利于提高作文的灵活性。      写作体裁：命题仍然是多年来沿用的书信或电子邮件形式，交际性、应用性强；全国卷书面表达的体裁以书信（应用文）为主。近五年，全国卷I与全国卷II、II共有14道书面表达题，涵盖了邀请信、求助信（请求信）、告知信、道歉信、申请信、约稿信。其中邀请信五年内考查了五次。这种命题体现了较强的交际性特点。      写作话题：贴近现实和学生生活实际，话题场景性和真实性突出，体现中外交流和“正能量”；近五年，高考英语书面表达试题的话题基本围绕日常生活、学校生活／学习、课余活动、社会与文化等话题及相关情况进行设题。其中近三年趋向突出“中国传统文化”这个方向，如2018全国卷I介绍中国餐桌礼仪，2017年全国卷1介绍学习汉语，2017年全国卷II邀请外教参观剪纸艺术展等。      试题设计选取生活中的真实语料，符合考生的实际家庭生活和校园生活情境，考生可立足于现实体验，做到有感而发，有话可说，同时形成良好的情境互动性，增强考生的角色代入感，有效考查交际能力，营造良好人际关系的同时，也培养了考生的国际意识。全国卷高考书面表达的命题一直秉承“稳中求进”的方针。预计以后的高考还会在传播中国文化上求变化。中国文化博大精深，因此可选择的话题方向很多，中国文化仍是备考的重点。同时考生在备考中也一定要兼顾好“人与自我、人与社会、人与自然”三大主题下的各类子话题角度，做到备考的全面性。试题可能仍然会采用提纲类半开放式的命题方式，提纲作文考查的重点应在于“介绍现象”、“解释原因”、“提出建议”、“总结展望”等功能性段落。要求考生围绕写作材料和提纲将要点内容具体化，同时也给考生提供了更为广阔的思维空间，使考生有很大的自由发挥的余地，体现出高考对学生创新能力的考查。 【2021·全国甲卷】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
   1. 阐明写信事由；2. 征求建议；3. 表示感谢。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。解析：审题：三审：人称，时态，题材人称：第一人称时态：将来时和一般现在时，题材：求助信（征求意见）要点：介绍中国文化给外国朋友，发布在英文网站上，这是班会的内容，因此求助外国友人，征求他们的意见。拓展介绍中国传统文化是难点。【参考范文】Dear Chris,How is everything going? Recently our school is planning to hold a theme class meeting to introduce traditional Chinese cultures, which will be posted on some English websites. Therefore, I’m wondering what kind of traditional Chinese cultures attracts you foreigners most?As you know, China is one of the four ancient civilizations with more than 5,000 years history and countless profound (博大精深的) cultures. By choosing the cultures that most foreigners are interested in may trigger (引起) more people to learn about Chinese cultures. Our current plan is to introduce traditional Chinese festivals, operas and paper cutting. But that’s not our final decision, which is why I’m writing to you.Looking forward to your early reply and any suggestion is welcome. Thanks in advance.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【2021·全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足:2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。解析：审题：三审：人称，时态，题材人称：第一人称时态：将来时和一般现在时，题材：发言稿要点：注意发言稿的格式，提出话题、分析网络学习的优缺点并提出学习建议。【参考范文】Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honor for me to stand here to deliver my speech titled Be smart online learners.With the development of the Internet, more and more of us prefer to take advantage of online resource to improve our study.There is no denying that it has many advantages including flexibility and convenience. Just as a saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. Online learning often causes low efficiency because of a lack of self-discipline. As far as I am concerned, in order to be a smart online learner, you should work out a schedule first. Secondly, selecting  excellent resources will promote our productivity. Last but not least, complete devotion is of great importance.I am fully convinced that the tips above will benefits all of you a lot. That’s all! Thank you!   1、【2021·全国新高考1卷】你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目；  3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Youth and Me     【参考范文】Youth and MeTo begin with, I’d like to express my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. The paper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English.  Hopefully Youth will record more stories of positive energy and inspire more students in the next 10 years! 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh  dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意1. 续写词数应为150左右；        2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.  The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their  mother up.   【参考范文】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their depressed faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some pork porridge instead. Then he sneaked (溜进) back to bed. Meanwhile, the twins prepared the breakfast tray (托盘), added a card they had made and walked out of the kitchen.  The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged her and yelled “Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy!” Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to sleep. He acted astonished when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked (眨眼示意) at each other secretly.2、【2021 北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 表达歉意并说明原因；提出建议并给出理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】Dear Jim,  How is everything going? We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring. But I am afraid I couldn’t make it.  I was severely injured in a soccer game last night. The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could recover faster, yet the answer was negative. My condition doesn’t allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered.  It is a pity for me to miss this trip that I have been longing for. Shall we put it off until next weekend if the weather permits? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua3、【2020·全国高考1卷】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。【参考范文】The Person I respectThere are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one.To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady as you can imagine, slim figure(身材), fair skin(白皙的皮肤) as well as infectious (有感染力的)beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous(极好的) teaching ability and empathetic feature(同理心的特质) that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish.That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life.   4、【2020·全国高考II卷】  上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。My Weekend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My WeekendLast weekend, our class took part in/participated in an interesting picking activity on a modern farm, which turned out to be(证明是/结果是) extremely fruitful and meaningful. (总述事情的时间、地点、人物、事件) The farm is far from the city, so we set off at 6:00 am, and it took us around/about two hours to get there by bus. On/Upon arriving at the farm（一到达农场）, what came into sight （进入眼帘的东西）were varieties of（各种各样的） fresh vegetables and fruit trees. Then we were divided into(被分成) two groups for a picking competition. One group was responsible for（负责） picking tomatoes and the other was in charge of(负责) picking apples. After one and a half hours’ hard work, both groups picked/harvested(收获) a lot, with our group being the winner.（with的复合结构表伴随结果）（农场情况和采摘过程及结果） Tired as we were, we had great fun and a sense of achievement. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of how hard the farmers are and how precious/valuable the food is. Therefore, we should treasure/value the food and make efforts to make the world better.（个人感受）5、【2020·全国高考III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours ,Li Hua6、【2020·全国全国新高考卷】假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:1. 参加人员:2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3. 活动反响。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Cross-Country Running Race____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. (总述时间、地点、人物事件)The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions (四面八方). (参加人员、比赛线路及比赛过程)The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of（高度评价），which turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body, but also enriches our school life. (活动反响及意义) 7、【2020·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you.【参考范文】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet. 假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,I’m so glad to hear from you.____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin【参考范文】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin 8、【2019·全国1卷】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China currently studying in London. I am more than delighted to hear that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local gallery and volunteers are needed, I am writing to apply for the position.【自我介绍、写信背景及目的】
    The reasons for my application are as follows（如下）. First and foremost, I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, so not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stories behind them. In addition, I have a good command of English, which makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. Last but not least, I am so enthusiastic and responsible（热情负责的） that I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. 【个人优势及能做的事】I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. 【表达感谢盼回复】                                                            Yours,                                                            Li Hua  9、【2019·全国2卷】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1．比赛信息；2．赛前准备；3．表达期待。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Chris,  How is everything doing? I am Li Hua, captain of our school’s volleyball team. On behalf of (代表) the team members, I am writing to inform you of the volleyball match to be held in our school soon .【寒暄、自我介绍、写信背景及目的】The details are as follows. First of all, I would like to tell you that (我想告诉你的是) we will play against a team from No. 1 High School. Besides, I have to remind you that(我想提醒你的是) the game will be held in the school stadium from 9：00 am. to12：00 am. next Sunday. Last but not least, what calls for special attention is that (需要特别注意的是) you should make some preparations in advance so that (以便于) you can get into the state（进入状态） as soon as possible.【告知内容：比赛信息及赛前准备】For more information, please don’t hesitate to ask me. I sincerely hope that you won’t miss the match. I am looking forward to your early reply.【表达期待盼回复】Yours,                                                            Li Hua  10、【2019·全国3卷】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1．时间；2．活动安排；3．欢迎他表演节目。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Allen，How is everything doing? I am delighted to inform you that this year’s music festival will be held shortly．There will be a wide variety of activities to mark this unforgettable occasion．The details are as follows：Firstly,  the festival will start at 9:00 a．m．on August 15th, which will last 3 hours．At the beginning, the chair of the students’ union will give us a look into the past, present and future of the festival．Following this, staff and students from different clubs will stage singing, dancing and drama performances．You are welcome to give performances as well．I’d love it if you could attend the upcoming celebration．Please do not hesitate to ask me if you have questions or require more information．Yours ,Li Hua