2021届高考英语二轮复习短文改错精准练 (6)固定句型和结构
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2021届高考英语二轮复习短文改错精准练(6)固定句型和结构
1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
How is it going? Hearing that you have trouble make small talk with strangers in China, I’d like to offer you my advices.
Firstly, it is normal to feel a bit of nervous when approaching someone new. Everyone gets little shy first; after all, you don’t know how the person is like. The only way was to get over being shy and approach us. Secondly, Chinese people, especially youngsters, are general friendly, kind and enthusiastic. You can talk about almost everything range from sports, film stars, hot movies to music. Thirdly, there are some sensitive topics such like age, weight and income, which should be avoided.
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, Zhang Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the site she wanted to see. It was the Tower which she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. Many new buildings had expanded around it. Therefore, it was still part of a royal palace and prison combined. There followed St Paul’s Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in 1666. It looked splendidly when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting. Then just as he came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous sound of the clock Big Ben, ring out the hour.
The next day Pingyu was leaving London to Windsor Castle. “Perhaps I will see the Queen?” she wondered as she fall asleep.
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一橫线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nancy, aged 65, is one of my special friend. I like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It's nice of her to give me so many wise advice, from that I have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looked through the window, I was shocked to see her lying on floor. Immediately, I called 120. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked to me for having saved her life. I was happy to have done that.
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之同交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In your e-mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What's more, children or parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
答案以及解析
1.答案:
How is it going? Hearing that you have trouble small talk with strangers in China, I’d like to offer you my.
Firstly, it is normal to feel a bit of nervous when approaching someone new. Everyone gets little shy first; after all, you don’t know the person is like. The only way to get over being shy and approach. Secondly, Chinese people, especially youngsters, are friendly, kind and enthusiastic. You can talk about almost everything from sports, film stars, hot movies to music. Thirdly, there are some sensitive topics such age, weight and income, which should be avoided.
解析:
1. 第二句make改为making 【解析】考查固定搭配have trouble (in)doing sth。
2. 第二句advices改为advice 【解析】advice为不可数名词,故不用复数形式。
3. 第三句去掉a bit 后的of 【解析】a bit表示“有点儿”,修饰形容词或副词; a bit of 后接名词。
4. 第四句中get后加a 【解析】a little 表示“有点儿”。
5. 第五句how改为what 【解析】根据上下文语境表示某人怎么样,应用What sb be like句型,故应改为what。
6. 第六句was改为is 【解析】考查时态的用法。
7. 第六句us 改成 them 【解析】根据句意,应该是主动靠近他们。
8. 第七句general改为generally 【解析】修饰形容词用副词。
9. 第八句range改成ranging 【解析】谓语动词和非谓语动词的误用,此处应为非谓语动词做后置定语。
10. 第九句like改成as 【解析】本处考查固定搭配,表示部分列举用such as。
2.答案:
Last year, Zhang Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the she wanted to see. It was the Tower she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. Many new buildings had expanded around it., it was still part of a royal palace and prison combined. There followed St Paul’s Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in 1666. It looked when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting. Then just as came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous sound of the clock Big Ben, out the hour.
The next day Pingyu was leaving London Windsor Castle. “Perhaps I will see the Queen?” she wondered as she asleep.
解析: 1.paid∧a.考查冠词.pay a visit to…固定词组,参观…故在paid后加a.
2.site→sites.考查名词.site,可数名词,景点.她参观了好几个景点,所以用复数.故把site改为sites.
3.which→that.考查固定句型.根据分析,词句是强调句,构成是"It is/was +被强调部分+that+其它".故把which改为that.
4.去掉been.考查动词.remian,保持,仍然是,系动词,无被动,故把been去掉.
5.Therefore→However.考查副词.根据句意,虽然周围很多扩建的建筑,但是它仍然是皇宫和监狱的一部分,两句是转折关系.故把Therefore改为However.
6.splendidly→splendid.考查形容词.look为系动词,后面加形容词做表语.故把splendidly改为splendid.
7.he→she.考查代词.根据上文可知张平玉是女孩,故把he改为she.
8.ring→ringing.考查动词.根据分析,前半句为主句,包含谓语动词heard,所以ring应该用非谓语动词形式.ring的逻辑主语为the clock Big Ben,主动关系,故把ring改为ringing.
9.to→for.考查介词.leave…for…固定词组,离开…去…,故把to改为for.
10.fall→fell.考查动词.文章在描述过去发生的事情,时态为一般过去时,故把fall改为fell.
3.答案:
Nancy, aged 65, is one of my special . I like chatting with her she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and no secrets from each other. It's nice of her to give me so wise advice, from I have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as . When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. through the window, I was shocked to see her lying on floor. Immediately, I called 120. Minutes , an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked to me for having saved her life. I was happy to have done that.
解析: 1【答案】第一句的“one of my special friend”中的“friend”改为“friends”。
【解析】one of,意思是“....之一”,后边要加复数名词,所以friend要改成它的复数“friends”。
2【答案】第二句的“but she enjoys my company”中的“but”改为“and”。
【解析】第二句整句话的意思是,我喜欢和她聊天,而且她喜欢和我在一起。这是顺接关系,”but“是表示转折关系的,所以应该改成表示顺接关系的“and”。
3【答案】第三句的”We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other“中的”kept“改为”keep“。
【解析】"keep"是和前边的”talk“并列的,所以时态要一致,而且这不是过去发生的事,所以要用一般现在时。
4【答案】第四句的“give me so many wise advice”中的“many”改为“much”。
【解析】advice是不可数名词,修饰不可数名词应该用so much,so many后边要加可数名词复数。
5【答案】第四句的“from that I have benefited a lot”中的“that”改为“which”
【解析】在定语从句中that前不能加介词。改为which后变成了一个“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句,which 作介词from 的宾语,指代advice。
6【答案】第五句的”I visited her as usually“中的”usually“改为”usual“。
【解析】as usual是固定短语,像平常一样,照例,照常。
7【答案】第七句的”Looked through the window“中的”Looked“改为”Looking“。
【解析】现在分词短语作句首状语,所以look要用现在分词形式”looking“。
8【答案】第七句的”lying on floor“应该在on和floor中间加“the”。
【解析】固定搭配,lying on the floor,躺在地板上。
9【答案】第九句中”Minutes late"中的“late”改为“later”。
【解析】“minutes later”,固定搭配,几分钟之后。“minutes late”是晚了几分钟,迟到了几分钟。
10【答案】最后一句的“She thanked to me”中的“to”去掉。
【解析】感谢某人的表达是”thanked sb."。
4.答案:
My mom is really with the health of everyone in our . In order to make all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food is provided by Mom with appreciation.
解析:第一处:concerning改为concerned,形容词误用。此处表示主语(My mom)的状态,应使用-ed形容词,表示"关心的,关切的"。
第二处:families改为family。名词单复数误用。family表示整体时,多作单数看待;指多个家庭成员时,多作复数看待。此处指我和父母的家,故看作一个整体。
第三处:surely改为sure。搭配错误。make sure为固定搭配,表示"确保"。
第四处:删除and。连词多用。逗号前为状语,逗号后为主句,两者之间不用and连接。
第五处:the改为a,冠词误用。这里泛指"一碗鸡蛋汤",故用不定冠词。
第六处:had改为have,时态误用。全文中心时态为一般现在时。
第七处:don't改为doesn't。主谓不一致。主语为第三人称单数,此处应用doesn't。
第八处:eat前加to,不定式符号漏用。be forced to do sth."被迫做某事"。
第九处:he改为she,代词误用。此处指代my mom,应用she。
第十处:what改为that,关系代词误用。先行词被all,every,any,much,little(少),few,no等修饰时,关系代词用that。
5.答案:
In your e-mail, you me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is that parents should treat their children equally, is important for the family. What's more, children parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition, every member should give other right expectations. Finally, you should love own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
解析: 1. ask→asked【解析】考查时态。此动作是发生在过去的,所以要用过去式。
2. spoke→speaking【解析】考查非谓语动词。 Generally speaking置于句首,表示“一般说来”,只能用现在分词,不受后面主语影响。
3. obviously→obvious【解析】考查词性运用。此处 obvious是作表语,要用形容词形式。
4. that→which【解析】考查定语从句。此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词为前面描述的事,关系词不能用that,只能用 which。
5.or→and【解析】考查连词。根据句意及后面的both可知,此处是并列关系,故用and。
6.去掉the【解析】考查固定短语。 In addition是固定短语,意为“此外”,the多余。
7. member→members【解析】考查名词单复数。根据句意及前面的 other可知,此处是指家庭中的其他成员故不止一个,应用复数形式。
8. my→your【解析】考查代词。根据句意,此处应与主语保持人称一致·故用 your。
9. are→is【解析】考查主谓一致。此处系动词的主语是 attitude,是单数形式。
10.very前加it【解析】考查固定句型。 Sb would appreciate it if...是一个固定句型,此处it不可少。