英语七上外研 Unit 4 第5课时 Developing ideas (写作) 教学课件

Developing ideas (写作)第 5 课 时ReviewWho is the story about?What’s her job?What’s her duty?NameJobDutyLeng Wenying.An ER doctor.Stand by every minute to help her patients.Lead-inShe is often much busier. Sometimes she has to work without any breaks for 20 hours. Her patients are often in a bad situation. She needs to stand by every minute.ReviewWhat are her festival experiences?What do her patients say about her?Festival experiencesCommentTheir hard work shines brighter than fireworks.Before writingWhy does the writer write the story of Leng Wenying?To praise the people on duty.1. For Chinese people, festivals usually means ... But for …, festivals only mean …. 2. As a…, …misses ….Find useful expressions for writing passages of this kind.3. Sometimes, … has to... This makes…Before writing4. Festivals are a challenge because… 5. …’s duty means….6. … is only one of millions of… in China. … to answer the call of duty.7. In the heart of…, their hard work shines brighter than fireworks.WritingWrite a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.5Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.Step 1Read the information about a policeman, or choose another job and research it.Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.Step 2Organise the information and write your paragraph.SampleZhang Jian is a policeman. His job is to keep people safe and help those in trouble. For him, festivals often mean more work. He is much busier during festivals because there are usually more people in need of help. His duty means he has little time to be with his family, but he never regrets his decision to become a policeman. He is only one of millions of policemen and policewomen. In my heart, their hard work shines brighter than fireworks.Step 3Check.Did you: ☐ introduce the person clearly?☐ use the words and expressions from the reading passage?☐ give your comments on the person?Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.Step 4Share your paragraph with the class. 节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人他们在节日期间不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的安全幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。(1)张健 职业：警察 年龄：40 爱好：读书(2)对于张健，节日意味着更多工作；(3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助；(4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察；(5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息；(6)我认为……写作要求：(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名；(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；(4)70 词左右。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 40 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer. For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break. I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. because引导的原因状语从句even though引导的让步状语从句HomeworkLook for a person who works during festivals and talk with him.Write a paragraph about him，using expressions learnt in this section.