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译林版英语九下 Unit 2《Great people》2023-2024学年九年级英语下册单元写作深度指导【同步写作课】（解析卷）单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析一、单元主题及背景分析本单元的主题是“名人”，本单元通过独特的视角让学生认识并了解一些有关名人的词汇并了解一些名人的基本信息。在日常生活中，我们享受着前人的伟大创造和劳动果实，让学生了解并铭记为全社会全人类做出杰出贡献的人们是很重要的。通过本单元课程的学习，让学生明白在生活中需要努力进取的精神和无私奉献的勇气，以及专注地做好本职工作的定力，远比外表和形式上的华丽和时尚重要。现阶段的学生崇拜各种流量明星，他们认为帅、美、潮流是最重要的。让学生更深入地了解这些为人类社会做出杰出贡献的伟人，对青少年的成长大有裨益。这些前辈不以长相、声音或身材等外在形式博得短暂的喝彩，而是通过锲而不舍地对科学的贡献、对人类社会的无私奉献，或是在某一领域所取得的卓越成就，而为世人所敬仰。通过本节课学习，希望学生明白真正的美是伟人身上无私的精神和无畏的勇气，以及在某一领域不停歇的钻研和定力，这远比外表和形式上的华丽和时尚重要。希望学生能够从中汲取可指导我们更好地学习、生活和工作的养分，成为有理想有目标、有崇高理想、为了追求理想锲而不舍、努力奋斗的青少年。本节课主题及背景知识1.课时主题本课时的主题是“介绍名人”。写作任务是：读懂有关袁隆平的笔记，了解他的贡献，利用笔记补全短文，完成一篇介绍名人的文章。2.背景知识袁隆平，出生日期1930年9月7日，逝世日期2021年5月22日。毕业院校为西南农学院（现西南大学）。杂交水稻专家，是享誉海内外的著名农业科学家，中国杂交水稻事业的开创者和领导者，“共和国勋章”获得者，中国工程院院士，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。代表作品《袁隆平论文集》《两系法杂交水稻研究论文集》《杂交水稻育种栽培学》。教学目标通过本课节的教学，让学生达成以下目标:(一)知识目标学生理解并掌握词汇: hybrid, title, agriculture, hunger, advantage,contribution,increase, production, development, work as, die of, happen to, be introduced into, at present。(二)能力目标(1)读懂有关袁隆平的笔记，了解他的贡献。(2)利用笔记补全短文。(3)独立完成一篇介绍名人的文章。(三)情感目标学习袁隆平专注中国梦、实现中国梦的伟大精神。(四)教学重点(1)掌握描述名人几个主要方面的词组和句式。(2)读懂有关袁隆平的笔记，了解他的贡献。(3)利用笔记补全短文。(五)教学难点(1)能够向他人介绍一位名人，自由地发表看法和观点。(2)独立完成一篇介绍名人的文章。四、四会词汇advantage,increase,development五、四会词组work as,die of,happen to,at present,be introduced into六、四会句型(1)I think Yuan Longping is one of the greatest people that have ever lived.(2)In 1964,he happened to find a natural hybrid rice plant that had many advantages over others.(3)Because of his achievements,rice production has been increased by 20%-30%.(4)That is why I admire him so much.七、三会词汇Hybrid,title,agriculture,hunger,contribution,production（以思维导图的形式呈现）Paragraph 1: To introduce who your hero/role model is.The power of a good exampleParagraph 2:Explain major events and contributions.Paragraph 3:Why people admire him/ what you have learned from him or her.【词汇积累】①China’s space technology programme中国航天技术②the pioneer of ... .......的先驱 ③the right of ………的权利④all one's life一生，毕生⑤further research进一步的研究⑥manage to do sth设法做某事⑦be the pride of 是……的骄傲⑧receive his student pilot’s licence拿到他的飞行学员执照⑨further research进一步的研究⑩an inventor一个发明家⑪a composer of classical music 古典音乐作曲家⑫in ancient times/in the old days在古代⑬make a great difference to ... 产生重大影响⑭classical music古典音乐⑮English literature英国文学⑯a fighter for the rights of black Africans为非洲黑人的权利而斗争的战士⑰create over 1,000 inventions创造了1,000多项发明⑱search for information搜索信息⑲in history在历史上⑳serve as a pilot做飞行员【句式积累】※ 开头句 ①Lei Feng was a model soldier,On December 18,1940,he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province.雷锋是一名模范战士。1940年12月1日，他出生在湖南省一个小山村的一个贫苦农民家庭。②Whenever you turn on a light,listen to recorded music,or watch a motion picture you are enjoying one of the discoveries of Thomas Alva Edison.每当你开灯、听录音或看电影时，你都在享受托马斯·阿尔瓦·爱迪生的发现之一。③Most people see a hero as someone they look up to. If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be a great teacher named Zhang Guimei.大多数人把英雄看作是他们尊敬的人。如果你问我心目中的英雄是谁，我的答案是一位名叫张桂梅的老师。④We all know that there are many great inventors in Chinese history. And I look up to Cai Lun because of his great invention-paper making technology. 我们都知道中国历史上有许多伟大的发明家。我很尊敬蔡伦，因为他伟大的造纸技术发明。⑤Deng Qingming is one of China's first astronauts. His unbelievable experiences not only move me but also encourage me in my dream.邓清明是中国最早的宇航员之一。他令人难以置信的经历不仅感动了我，也鼓舞了我的梦想。⑥Everyone has a hero in his heart. The person I admire most is Dr. Zhong Nanshan.每个人心中都有英雄。我最钦佩的人是钟南山博士。⑦Chairman Mao called on the people to "learn from Comrade Lei Feng" sixty years ago. Lei Feng is a model soldier. He was born in December in a poor family in a small mountain village in Hunan Province. In his brief life, he stuck to doing good for others. He has made remarkable achievements in his ordinary post.毛主席号召人民向雷锋同志学习。60年前，雷锋是一名模范战士，12月出生在湖南省一个小山村的贫困家庭。在他短暂的一生中，他坚持为他人做好事。他在平凡的岗位上取得了显著的成就。⑧What makes a great man great?The greatest person in my mind is Albert Einstein.I think he was great because he devoted all his life to researching the world of science. 是什么让一个伟人变得伟大？我心目中最伟大的人是阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦。我认为他之所以伟大，是因为他毕生致力于研究科学世界。⑨The person I admire most is Edison. He was one of the greatest scientists in the twentieth century, He was famous around the world as an inventor as well. 我最钦佩的人是爱迪生。他是二十世纪最伟大的科学家之一，也是世界著名的发明家。 ⑩In my mind, Yuan Longping, a rice scientist and a member of Chinese Academy of Engineering, is the greatest person in the world.As we all know, Yuan Longping has spent all his life to the research and development of better rice plants. 在我看来，世界上最伟大的人是中国工程院院士、水稻科学家袁隆平。众所周知，袁隆平一生都致力于更好的水稻品种的研究和开发。※ 中间句①In 1960, he saw people die of hunger, so he Began research into hybrid rice.1960年，他看到人们死于饥饿，于是他开始研究杂交水稻。②Because of his achievements, rice production has been increased by 20% -30%.由于他的成就，水稻产量增加了20%-30%。③In the past 25 years, he has shown great love for our country. He has never given up his dream of flying whatever happens.Besides, he has always challenged himself in times of difficulty.在过去的25年里，他对我们的国家表现出了极大的爱。无论发生什么事，他都从未放弃飞行的梦想。此外，他总是在困难的时候挑战自己。④He is the pioneer of China's space technology program.他是中国空间技术计划的先驱。⑤As for my dream, it is to be a writer. I know it's really hard to become a successful writer. From time to time, I'm moved by Deng's spirit of fighting for his dream. 至于我的梦想，那就是成为一名作家。我知道要成为一个成功的作家真的很难。我不时被邓为梦想而奋斗的精神所感动。⑥Many modern inventions have made a great difference in our life.许多现代发明对我们的生活产生了巨大的影响。⑦It was brave of him to go to a place that was unknown to humans at that time.他去了一个当时人类还不知道的地方，真是太勇敢了。⑧Cai Lun lived in the Eastern Han Dynasty. He thought hard to improve the technology a lot, so that paper was easy to make at that time. And it was also widely used. In the 1400s, paper making technology was spread to Europe. I can hardly imagine where we can write without fine paper.蔡伦生活在东汉。他苦思冥想，想把技术改进很多，所以那时候纸很容易制作。它也被广泛使用。14世纪，造纸技术传播到欧洲。我很难想象没有精细的纸张我们还能在什么地方书写。⑨She is of medium height and she has no children, house or health. She tried her best to help the poor girls who are in the mountain village to go to school.她中等身高，没有孩子，没有房子，也没有健康。她尽力帮助山村里的贫困女孩上学。⑩In 1879, he succeeded in inventing the lamp after thousands of times of tests. Edison devoted all his life to his research. During his life, he had over one thousand inventions and made a great contribution to the development of mankind. 1879年，经过数千次试验，他成功地发明了灯。爱迪生毕生致力于他的研究。在他的一生中，他有一千多项发明，为人类的发展作出了巨大的贡献。※ 结尾句①I will learn from her and try to help the people who are in trouble. As a teenager, I will give a hand to the people around me. I will work hard to make a good contribution to our motherland.我会向她学习，努力帮助那些有困难的人。作为一个十几岁的孩子，我会帮助身边的人。我会努力工作，为祖国做出贡献。②As a Chinese teenager, I'm ready to learn from Cai Lun. I won't be afraid of any difficulty no matter what I do. To do something meaningful for our country, I'll study harder and harder.作为一个中国少年，我准备向蔡伦学习。无论我做什么，我都不会害怕任何困难。为了做一些对我们国家有意义的事情，我会越来越努力地学习。③ I'll spend as much time as I can reading so that I can make myself full of knowledge. I'll keep writing anything I'm interested in every day.我会尽可能多地花时间读书，这样我才能使自己充满知识。每天都会写我感兴趣的东西。④I believe where there is a will, there is a way l my dream will come true.我相信有志者事竟成。⑤He is the person I admire most. I'm going to learn from him and become a useful person to society like him.他是我最钦佩的人。我要向他学习，成为像他一样对社会有用的人。⑥Helping others is our traditional morality. Not only can other people get along, but we can get happiness.帮助他人是我们的传统道德。不仅其他人可以相处，我们也可以获得幸福。⑦I also want to learn from him and become a doctor in the future to contribute my share to the construction of the country.我也想向他学习，将来成为一名医生，为国家建设贡献自己的一份力量。⑧All of these made him the greatest scientist in the world, I think. As a teenager, we should set this great person as an example. When we have difficulty in our life, we are supposed to move on until we realize our dreams.我认为，所有这些使他成为世界上最伟大的科学家。作为一个青少年，我们应该以这位伟人为榜样。当我们在生活中遇到困难时，我们应该继续前进，直到实现我们的梦想。⑨ And I think he was very modest. He helped a lot of younger scientists.我认为他非常谦虚。他帮助了许多年轻的科学家。⑩All of these made him the greatest scientist in history.所有这些使他成为历史上最伟大的科学家。【谚语积累】①He knows most who speaks least.大智若愚。②Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。③Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.逆境出人才。④A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。⑤A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。⑥All rivers run into sea.海纳百川。⑦Diligence is the mother of success.成功来自勤奋。⑧知识就是力量。Knowledge is power.⑨A man is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。⑩A thousand mile trip begins with one step.千里之行，始于足下。​【万能写作模板】模板①________ (name of person) is a great scientist in the world. He is regarded as the pioneer of China's space technology. In ________(time), he graduated from ________ University (university name). Then he went to the _______ (place name) for further study in________(time). In _________(time), he returned to China. He made great contributions to China's _______ (career field) career. He is the pride of all the Chinese people. We all admire him very much. We can learn many things from him. We should love our country and try our best to make our country more powerful.模板②_______ (name of person) was a world-famous woman scientist. She was born in_______ (place name) in _______ (date of birth) and died in _______(time of death). When she was a child, she loved to study and hoped to become a scientist. She finished middle school at the age of _______(age) . At the age of _______(age) , she left for_______ (place) and entered _______ University (university name) . She lived a simple life and studied very hard. _______ (name of person) devoted all her life to the study of science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in _______ (time) and for Chemistry in _______ (time).It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work. It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. So ________ (name of person) will always be remembered as a great woman.模板③No one is an island, so without doubt, we are influenced by others. The person who influences me most must be ________ (name of person), a young Chinese idol. ________ (name of person) is ________ (age) years old now. As we all know, he is famous for his dance talent and good acting. Apart from that,he has done something meaningful for China. For example, he was once invited to the United Nations as a representative of China in ________ (time) and gave a speech in smooth English. That surely made me feel quite proud and I made up my mind to learn English well. Because of his influence, I have made great progress gradually. So lucky am I to have such a great example! It's the power of a good example that makes me become better. His behavior inspires me a lot and I learn that hard work will always pay off.本学期，我们通过课文浅尝了英语文学作品之美，假如你所在的校英语社团准备举办一次线上英语沙龙，沙龙主题为Mark Twain,作为团长李华，请你以主持人的身份写一段开场白 ,内容包含以下要点:参考词汇: humorist幽默家English Salon英语沙龙The Adventures of Tom Sawyer汤姆索亚历险记要求:1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3.书写工整;要点齐全:意思连贯;条理清楚:标点正确。Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today's salon is Mark Twain. That's all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today's salon!【解题思路】①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步,头已给出，引出本文主题;第二步，介绍关于Mark Twain的信息;第三步，介绍有关沙龙的信息。【满分作文】Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today's salon is Mark Twain.As far as we know, Mark Twain is one of the most gifted American novelists and humorists. He wrote more than 20novels and many short stories in his life. In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we'll have two online salon activities. The first event is a panel discussion on Mark Twain and his works. The other activity is watching clips from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon.That's all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today's salon!【亮点词汇】①thank you for doing sth因某事感谢你②as far as we know据我们所知③more than超过【高分句型】①In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we'll have two online salon activities. (动词不定式作目的状语)②We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon. (宾语从句)一、翻译（2023上·九年级单元测试）(英汉互译)creativity 2．n. 发明者，发明家 3．pollute 4．v. n.设计 5．blame 6．n.仪器;乐器 7．Stir_________________ 8. n.工程师，设计师 9．wire 10．n.钢 11．mirror 12．adv. 向后;倒 13．absent 14．n.武器 15．debate 16．adj. 核能的 17．power 18．n.产业;工业 19．modern 【答案】1．创造力 2．inventor 3．污染 4．design 5．责备，责怪 6．instrument 7．搅动，搅拌 8．engineer 9．金属丝 10．steel 11．镜子 12．backwards 13．缺席的；缺少的 14．weapon 15．辩论 16．nuclear 17．能；能量；权力 18．industry 19．当代的，现代的【解析】1．creativity意为“创造力”，是一个不可数名词。故填：创造力。2．发明者，发明家：inventor，是一个可数名词。故填inventor。3．pollute意为“污染”，是一个动词。故填：污染。4．设计：design，可作动词，名词，意为“设计图案，方案”时为可数名词，意为“设计，安排，布局”时为不可数名词。故填design。5．blame意为“责备；责怪”，可作动词，名词。故填：责备，责怪。6．仪器；乐器：instrument。故填instrument。7．stir意为“搅动；搅拌”，可作动词，名词。故填：搅动，搅拌。8．工程师，设计师：engineer，是可数名词。故填engineer。9．wire意为“金属丝”，是一个名词。故填：金属丝。10．钢：steel，是一个可数名词。故填steel。11．mirror意为“镜子”，是一个可数名词。故填：镜子。12．向后；倒：backwards，是一个副词。故填backwards。13．absent意为“缺席的；缺少的”，是一个形容词。故填：缺席的；缺少的。14．武器：weapon，是一个名词。故填weapon。15．debate意为“辩论”，可作动词，名词。故填：辩论。16．核能的：nuclear，是一个形容词。故填nuclear。17．power意为“能；能量；权力”，是不可数名词。故填：能；能量；权力。18．产业；工业：industry，是一个不可数名词。故填industry。19．modern意为“当代的，现代的”，是一个形容词。故填：当代的，现代的。二、补全对话（2022·湖南衡阳·统考中考真题）根据下面的对话情景，在每个空白处填上适当的句子，使对话的意义连贯、完整。(Kangkang met Michael at the airport.)K: Long time no see, Michael. Did you have a good time in your hometown?M: 20 . I visited many good friends there. But I’m sorry I missed your birthday party on April 16th.K: 21 . I had a meaningful birthday. Because on that day, Shenzhou -13 carrying three astronauts landed safely.M: Wow, how exciting! 22 ?K: They are Zhai Zhigang, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu.M: 23 ? K: They have been in space for 183 days.M: 24 ? K: They did lots of research there. They also had space-based lectures. By the way, Shenzhou-14 was launched at 10:44 a.m. on June 5th.M: Amazing! They’re heroes!K: You’re right. We Chinese are so proud of them!【答案】20．Yes, I did 21．Never mind/It doesn’t matter/Not at all/It’s nothing 22．Who are they 23．How long have they been in space 24．What did they do there【解析】本文是凯西询问迈克尔在家乡过得如何，二人还讨论了神舟十三号的三位宇航员的情况。20．根据“Did you have a good time in your hometown?”和“I visited many good friends there.”可知，此处应进行肯定回答，故填Yes, I did。21．根据“But I’m sorry I missed your birthday party on April 16th.”可知，此处应对对方的道歉表示谅解，故填Never mind/It doesn’t matter/Not at all/It’s nothing。22．根据“They are Zhai Zhigang, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu.”可知，此处应询问三位宇航员都是谁，故填Who are they。23．根据“They have been in space for 183 days.”可知，此处应询问三人在太空待了多久，故填How long have they been in space。24．根据“They did lots of research there. They also had space-based lectures.”可知，此处应询问三人在太空做了什么，故填What did they do there。三、读写综合（2023·广东肇庆·肇庆市第一中学校考三模）A．回答问题请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题，要求所写答案语法正确，语义完整切题。25．Where is Gabby Kanizay from? 26．When did Gabby Kanizay reach the top of Mount Qomolangma? 27．How long did Gabby Kanizay spend on top of Mount Qomolangma? 28．What did Gabby Kanizay think of the journey to Mount Qomolangma? 29．According to Gabby Kanizay, what will she do next? 30．B．书面表达根据要求完成短文写作。中国人征服世界之巅的脚步从未停止。2023年5月14日，16岁的湖南长沙女孩徐卓媛成功登顶珠穆朗玛峰。为了攀登珠峰，她一直进行着高强度的专业训练。“每个人心中都有一座山，它或许没有珠峰高，但将是我们为之奋斗的目标，需要我们一步一步奋力前行才能实现。”假如你叫李华，请你写一封信给中国的攀登者们，表达你的观点，内容包括：(1)你的感受；(2)你从攀登者们的身上学到了什么；(3)你为实现个人目标打算如何去做(至少两点)。作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Chinese climbers,We Chinese never stop trying to reach the top. Best wishes,Li Hua【答案】25．She is from Australia. 26．In May, 2022. 27．An hour. 28．She thought it was not easy. 29．She will climb whatever mountain that draws her next. 30．例文：Dear Chinese climbers,We Chinese never stop trying to reach the top. I am so excited to see you climbers reaching the top of the mountains. And I have learned a lot from you, such as perseverance, courage to move forward, and never giving up. My goal is to be a teacher in the future. In order to achieve this goal, I will study hard so that I can get into a good university. Next, I will try to help as many classmates as possible with their study, because in this way, I can practice how to teach students.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】本文主要讲述19岁的女孩Gabby Kanizay成功登顶珠峰。25．根据“She is known as the youngest Australian”可知，她是澳大利亚人，来自澳大利亚。故填She is from Australia.26．根据“she reached the top of Mount Qomolangma successfully in May, 2022.”可知，2022年5月，她成功登顶珠峰。故填In May, 2022.27．根据“They spent an hour on top of the mountain”可知，她在山顶上待了一个小时。故填An hour.28．根据“In Kanizay’s opinion, the journey was not easy.”可知，她认为这趟旅程并不容易。故填She thought it was not easy.29．根据“I will climb whatever mountain that draws me next”可知，接下来她将攀登任何一座吸引她的山。故填She will climb whatever mountain that draws her next.30．【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③时态：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点以及“至少两点”的要求，做到语句通顺，表达正确。【写作步骤】第一步，表达自己对攀登者们登顶的感受；第二步，讲述自己从攀登者们身上学到的事情；第三步，讲述自己为实现目标打算做的事情。【亮点词汇】①give up放弃②achieve this goal实现目标③help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事【高分句型】①I will study hard so that I can get into a good university.（so that引导的目的状语从句）②I will try to help as many classmates as possible with their study, because in this way, I can practice how to teach students.（because引导的原因状语从句）(一)（2023·广东深圳·九年级深圳校联考期中）茅以升是我国著名的桥梁专家，被誉为“现代桥梁之父”。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍茅以升。要求：1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。Mao Yisheng was a pioneer in bridge building. Let me introduce him to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍他的个人经历和主要成就；第二步，介绍自己的感受。【满分作文】Mao Yisheng was a pioneer in bridge building. Let me introduce him to you.He was born in Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province. He was interested in bridges when he was young and studied very hard. He graduated from Tangshan Engineering College in 1916 and later studied abroad in the United States. In 1920, he returned to China and invested in the bridge industry. He built the Qiantang River Bridge, the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge, and so on.I am proud of his achievements. I also want to study hard and contribute my own strength to the suggestions of my country in the future.【亮点词汇】①be born in出生于②be interested in对……感兴趣③be proud of以……为傲【高分句型】①Let me introduce him to you.（祈使句）②He was interested in bridges when he was young and studied very hard. （when引导时间状语从句）(二)（2023·安徽滁州·校联考二模）在每个人的心中都有一位英雄，他的某个行为赢得了我们的赞叹或者他的某种品质让我们由衷佩服。你们学校英文校报以“The Hero in My Heart”为题开展了征文活动，请你根据以下内容提示和要求写一篇英语短文并进行投稿。 内容提示：1.Who is the hero in your heart? 2.What did he/she do? 3.What have you learned from him/her? 写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确；2.可适当增加细节，以便行文流畅； 3.词数80～100词。 The Hero in My Heart___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。【写作步骤】第一步，先总述每个人心中都有英雄，然后介绍自己心中的英雄是谁；第二步，具体介绍为什么自己心中的英雄是他/她，他/她做了什么伟大的事情；第三步，书写结束语，表达自己从心中的这位英雄身上学到了什么。【满分作文】The Hero in My HeartAs we all know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada. Dr. Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died. I am deeply moved by his stories. So I will work hard and do my best to help others.【亮点词汇】1 as we all know 众所周知2. be good at 擅长3. so...that... 如此……以至于……4. thousands of 成千上万5.stop to do 停下来去做某事6. take care of 照顾7. do one’s best 尽某人最大的努力【高分句型】1. As we all know, most people have heroes in their hearts.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）2.He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people.（so+形容词+that引导的结果状语从句）(三)（2023·安徽合肥·九年级合肥市第四十八中学校考期中）假设你是李明，你校英文社团正在举办主题为“Hero”的征文活动。请你根据下面表格提示写一篇短文，介绍中国药理学家——屠呦呦。要求：必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯。100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：药理学家pharmaceutical chemist；青蒿素artemisinin；中国中医研究院China Academy of Chinese Medicine；诺贝尔医学奖Nobel Prize in medicine；坚持不懈perseveranceHi, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，引出本文主题；第二步，介绍屠呦呦的情况；第三步，从她身上学到了什么。【满分作文】Hi, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce a famous scientist—Tu Youyou. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to her.Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930, Tu Youyou, a famous female pharmaceutical chemist, showed great interest in traditional Chinese medicine when she was young. In 1955, she graduated from Peking University. After that, she was trained in traditional Chinese medicine for two years and a half and has been working in China Academy of Chinese Medicine. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin. To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.From her, I learn some valuable spirit like hard-working and modest. We should learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research.【亮点词汇】①born in出生于②show great interest in对……表现出极大的兴趣③succeed in doing sth成功做某事【高分句型】①Born in Bobbing, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930, Tu Youyou, a famous female pharmaceutical chemist, showed great interest in traditional Chinese medicine when she was young.（when引导时间状语从句）(四)（2023·江苏盐城·统考三模）一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。《ABC Kids》报社正在举行“心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容提示：1. What does a hero mean in your opinion?2. Who is a hero in your heart?3. What can you learn from him or her?注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60~80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的关键信息，写短文介绍自己心中的英雄。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍在自己看来英雄意味着什么；第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄；第三步，介绍自己从这个英雄身上学到了什么。【满分作文】Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. I think a hero must be a good example for others. The hero in my heart is called Li Lanjuan. She is a doctor from Zhejiang. The reason I like her is that she, as well as her team, saved a lot of patients during the pandemic. She is not only brave in the face of the virus but also very professional. After taking her advice, thousands of people were saved. Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.【亮点词汇】①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……②in the face of 面对③thousands of 数以千计的【高分句型】①I think a hero must be a good example for others.（省略that的宾语从句）②Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.（but连接并列句）(五)（2023·江苏徐州·统考一模）“能吃苦，肯奋斗，有担当，似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上，如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。”这就是陆鸿，《感动中国》2022年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾，但他仍坚持学习。毕业后，由于身体残疾，陆鸿没有找到工作，他开始自主创业，从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂，他帮助许多残疾人就业，实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题，结合自身经历，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历以及他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质。参考词汇：相册album；坚持persistence注意：1.短文条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；3.词数90左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出）；第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。【满分作文】     Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong couldn’t find a job. He is not complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family. He started his own business, from selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album factory. He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life. Lu Hong is not afraid of hardship, willing to strive, responsible, and never gives up. He is a model for all of us. Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.【亮点词汇】①leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象②come from来自③be unwilling to do sth.不愿意做某事④become a burden to成为…的负担⑤be not afraid of hardship不怕吃苦⑥compared to与……相比，比起⑦due to由于【高分句型】①A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying.（时间状语从句、but连接的并列句）②Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year…（定语从句）③Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.（there be句型和定语从句）④ He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.（动词不定式作宾语补足语）(一)（2023·江苏无锡·统考真题）今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens英文报特辟了主题为“Who You Admire Most”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。注意事项：1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数；3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当地发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。【写作步骤】第一步:很幸运地认识了许多不同领域的名人,其中成龙给我的印象最深。他是我最钦佩的人。第二步:他的出生时间和地点，他获得的奖项，他的电影特点，性格特点，做慈善工作。第三步:表达观点，我应该向他学习强健的体魄。【满分作文】After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among whom, Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is the person I admire most. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar. He was born in Hong Kong on Apr. 7th, 1954. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully. So l admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself. He does many years of charity work. He helps people in over 30 countries. I should learn strong spirits from him.【亮点词汇】Awards,charity work【高分句型】1.In order to make the movies real and excellent, he plays the roles of the movies carefully.(目的状语从句)2.I should learn strong spirits from him.(虚拟语气)(二)（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。参考词汇：读唇语read lips注意：1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。【写作步骤】第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；第二步，介绍自己的梦想；第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。【满分作文】     A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.     Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.     I also have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream.【亮点词汇】①be full of充满②grow up长大③in order to为了④stick to坚持【高分句型】①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）②The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用）(三)（2021·湖南永州·统考中考真题）每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字，如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈×××……假如你是李华，请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，介绍你心目中的一位英雄。注意：（1）信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹；（2）信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名；（3） 80词左右(首段已给出，不计入总词数)。Dear Linda, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to share a story with you._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】1.题目解读：题目要求给自己的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，介绍自己心目中的一位英雄，信中需包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹。2.写作指导：本文在陈述事实和观点时，时态采用一般现在时为主，在描述发生在过去的事情时，时态采用一般过去时为主，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称；注意本文是一封电子邮件，要按照正确的格式来写作；可以先列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达，再进行写作，要条理清晰，行文连贯；最后写作完成时应检查文章的表达是否符合语言规范和英文表达习惯等。【写作步骤】第一步:打招呼并问好，写明写信的目的是分享一个故事。第二步:阐述钟南山博士是我心中的英雄。介绍他的基本情况和取得的成就。接着写钟南山积极参与到新冠肺炎工作。第三步:发表观点，对终南山博士的看法。【满分作文】Dear Linda,How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to share a story with you. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my hero in my heart. He graduated from Beijing Medical College. He is one of the famous doctors in China. In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against it. He worked hard day and night treating the patients. With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control.He is a good doctor as well as a great hero in my heart. I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others.Yours,Li Hua【亮点词汇】in their hearts,took an active part in,as well as【高分句型】1.He worked hard day and night treating the patients.（非谓语动词作状语）2.With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control.（介词短语作状语）3.I’m writing this email to share a story with you.（不定式短语作目的状语）(四)（2022·江苏南通·统考中考真题）华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。注意：1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you. __________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示，选择至少两个要点，向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。【解题步骤】第一步:开篇,向读者表示欢迎，并表达介绍中国的荣幸。第二步:介绍伟大人物,如袁隆平,强调他们对世界的贡献。介绍中国的一些著名景点，如长城，强调这些景点的世界地位，介绍中国的传统节日，如春节、端午节、中秋节等，强调春节在中国文化中的重要性。第三步:总结文章的主要内容，再次强调中国的丰富文化和历史。邀请读者来中国亲身体验中国的文化和历史。【满分作文】Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.First, there are many great men in our country, such as Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the world food supply. Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World. Third, China also has many traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and so on. Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.【亮点词汇】be known as,attach the most importance to【高分句式】1.Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”.（被动语态）2.It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World.（被动语态）3.Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.（不定式短语作状语）(五)（2021·江苏徐州·统考中考真题）去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。不久，钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。请你写一篇90词左右的英语短文,叙述这件事,并谈谈自己的感想。注意:1短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译。2短文已给出的部分不计入总词数。3短文中不得出现真实姓名校名和地名。参考词汇:抗击疫情anti-epidemic____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题思路】1.题干解读: 本文是一篇材料作文。去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信， 表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。要求就这件事情写一篇短文,谈谈自己的感想。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达:然后紧扣要点，动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。【解题步骤】Zhong Nanshan is a famous doctor. He led the experts in their battle with Covid-19 and saved many lives. He received the Medal of the Republic. Last summer vacation, a primary school student in our city wrote a letter to academician Zhong Nanshan, expressing his gratitude, respect and good wishes to Grandpa Zhong. Soon, academician Zhong Nanshan replied in his busy schedule. We can see his concern for young people. We wish him healthier and healthier.【亮点词汇】Academician,save lives,concern for young people,healthier【高分句式】1.Zhong Nanshan is a famous doctor who saved many lives. (定语从句)2.We can see his concern for young people. (宾语从句)3.We wish him healthier and healthier. (并列句)话题考查热度名人介绍名人关于Mark Twain1.最有天赋美国小说家和幽默家之一。2.一生写了20多部小说和很多短篇故事:他的历险故事世界闻名。关于沙龙活动一: 就Mark Twain及其作品进行小组讨论;活动二:欣赏《汤姆索亚历险记》电影片段;此次沙龙的目的(至少两点)。19-year-old teenager Gabby Kanizay has become famous around the world. She is known as the youngest Australian to climb Mount Qomolangma—the world’s highest mountain.According to Kanizay, to prepare for the climb was really hard work, which required a lot of training. Before she reached the top of Mount Qomolangma, she even made four trips to the Himalayas in 2018 and 2019 and also climbed Cho Oyu, the world’s sixth highest mountain. Thanks to her efforts, she reached the top of Mount Qomolangma successfully in May, 2022.Kanizay said the best part of the journey was that she and her mother reached the top together. They spent an hour on top of the mountain and watched the sunrise from the top.In Kanizay’s opinion, the journey was not easy. “Parts of it were harder than I thought it would be, but the mountain surprised me a lot,” Kanizay said.“I will climb whatever mountain that draws me next,” Kanizay said. “I want to improve myself. I love mountains and I just want to keep climbing.”出生地江苏镇江个人经历1、从小对桥梁感兴趣，认真学习；2、1916年毕业于交通部唐山工业专门学校（Tangshan Engineering College），后赴美留学；3、1920年回国，投入我国桥梁事业。主要成就修建钱塘江大桥（the Qiantang River Bridge）；武汉长江大桥（the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge）你的感受……简况1．1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波2．中国药理学家主要经历1．1955年毕业于北京大学2．毕业后接受中医培训两年半，并一直在中国中医研究院工作3．1972年成功发现青蒿素4．2015年10月5日被授予诺贝尔医学奖你学到了什么……Actors/Singers/…Scientists/Doctors/…●Jackie Chan (Chinese kung fu superstar)●Date of birth: Apr.7,1954(Hong Kong)●Achievements: act in nearly 100 films; many awards; many years of charity work; help people in over 30 countries●Yuan Longping (Father of Hybrid Rice)●Date of firth: Sept.7, 1930 (Beijing)●Achievements: develop a new type of hybrid rice (1970s; 20% more per unit); the World Food Prize(2004); save millions of lives