2025年中考英语作文考前冲刺课件（全国通用）

这是一份2025年中考英语作文考前冲刺课件（全国通用），共28页。PPT课件主要包含了Proverbs，休息是最好的良药，安静的房间是心灵挚友，每次外出都书写新回忆，spring，walking，autumn等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1. East r west, hme is best.2. Rest is the best medicine.3. A quiet rm is a mind's best friend.4. Shared jy is duble jy.5. All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.6. Every uting writes a new memry.
金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。
分享的快乐是双倍的快乐。
只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
表达观点：①In my pinin,nthing is better than..②Frm my pint f view,I prefer ding ... t ③As far as I am cncerned, I cnsider ... as a gd ptin ... .④I prefer staying at hme, because
说明理由：①The reasn ②It is +被强调部分+that/wh +其它部分③ makes it pssible fr me t ④
1.An advantage f hanging ut with friends is that I can have fun with hanging ut attracks me mst is that I can enjy the envirnments which are ttally at hme prvides me with mre persnal time, which is gd fr me t develp my interests and achieve self-imprvement.In brief, it’s staying at hme n weekends that hlds a great place.Only in this way can I enjy my weekends.
写作过程中出现了一下问题：1.内容安排不合理，原因写的太长 P49 In my pinin, wrking with thers is nt nly a way f wrk but als a symbl f unity.Als, I have learnt a lt frm it and made great prgress.The reasns why I put it first are as fllws.First and frmst , nly when I wrk with thers can I be successful.After all, “Many hands make light wrk.” Furthermre, wrking with thers helps me get a deeper understanding f unity. Last but nt least, every time I get success thrugh wrking with thers, there will be a strng sense f achievement and happiness raising frm the bttm f my heart.
Firstand frmst, “Many hands make light wrk.” Only when we wrk with thers can we share ideas with each ther, which makes it pssible fr us t wrk ut prblems efficiently.
2.建议写的太空，不具体（修改下面的例子)A.In rder t imprve this life skill, we can d many things, such as eating fresh fd, having a relax by using the Internet, getting enugh sleep and s n.B. Firstly ,it is the mst imprtant t eat fd that is fresh and natural,like fruit and vegetables.Secndly, dn’t read in the pr r strng light, r it will hurt yur eyes.Last but nt least, ding sme utdr sprts every day can als relax urselves a lt, just like
Firstly, it’s imprtant t eat fresh fruit and vegebales in rder t stay away frm illness. Secndly, ding sme utdr sprts is a gd way.加 原因
3.人称混乱，给建议时用I （修改下面的例子)In additin, I d sme sprts every day t relax myself.What’s mre, it’s vital fr me t get enugh sleep each day.
4.观点表达混乱，错位 . 原因表达啰嗦，不简洁（修改下面的例子) The reasn why I think wrking with thers is imprtant is that wrking with thers prmtes cperatin.When we wrk with thers, we learn t share ideas with thers, which helps us imprve ur cmmunicatin skills.Besides, when we wrk with thers at schl, we can exchange ur pinins n the subjects, which will help us have a better understanding f the subjects.
5.最后一段，无法总结上文（修改下面的例子) I hpe my advice can be beneficial wt yur health.6.结构不合理。It can als imprves ur learning efficiently.Then I want t share sme advice t imprve the skill f keeping healthy. First and frmst, we’re suppsed t keep a balanced
5.s 和s that 引导的从句分不清1. "s" 引导结果状语从句（表示“因此，所以”）结构： 主句 + s + 结果从句（通常用逗号隔开）作用： 表示前因后果，强调主句的动作导致了从句的结果。It was raining heavily, s we stayed at hme. （雨下得很大，所以我们待在家里。）2. "s that" 引导目的状语从句（表示“以便，为了”）结构： 主句 + s that + 目的从句（通常用 can/culd/will/wuld 等情态动词）作用： 表示主句的动作是为了达到从句的目的。She studied hard s that she culd pass the exam. （她努力学习，以便能通过考试。）
扩写下面的句子 She was tired.(s)They saved mney .(s that)He frgt his keys.(s)He wke up early.(s that)
1.两个简单句之间不用连词。 (请看下面例子并修改) Besides, there are many wnderful things in AI, they make learning mre interesting.2.开头重复 With the develpment f science, AI is nw widely used.With the develpment f sciety,AI is becming mre and mre ppular.It has bth benefits and chanllenges.
3.主谓不搭（修改下面的例子) It nt nly finds infrmatin quickly, but als make learning mre interesting by prviding us a variety f videes.4.分不清主次。（修改下面的例子)AI has its disadvantages.If students wh can’t cntrl themselves well, AI will be an enemy.Fr example, AI will make students less creative,which plays an imprtant part in study.
5.观点没有表达出来（修改下面的例子) In my pinin, AI makes ur life mre cnvenient, and at the same time, it als harmful t us.6.人称错误 All in all, every cin has its tw sides.If we use it crrctly and carefully, we’ll ahieve ur gal and get a better future.
1.Amng all seasns, the ne that truly fascinates me I have t_____________________,withut dubt, it will be weather _______________________________, just right I lve mst abut _______ is that reasn why _______________is that can cmpares with I think f________, I feel me ,_______ is mre than a seasn--it’s _____________.
chse a favrite seasn
in autumn is neither t cld nr t ht
trees dress themselves in glden leaves
I enjy summer
I can spend endless hurs swimming in the lake
the jy f building snwmen with my family in winter.
hpeful and full f energy
a celebratin f freedm and sunshine.
1.Amng all seasns, the ne that truly fascinates me is I have t chse a favrite seasn,withut dubt, it will be weather in autumn is cl and cludy, just right fr I lve mst abut this seasn is that trees dress themselves in glden reasn why I enjy summer is that I can spend endless hurs swimming in the can cmpares with the jy f building snwmen with my family in I think f spring, I feel hpeful and full f me summer is mre than a seasn--it’s a celebratin f freedm and sunshine.
1.过渡连接词乱用 (请看下面例子并修改)First and frmst, when it cmes t winter, it will bring snw and the grund dresses itseself in white.Besides, the reasn why I like winter best is that it brings s much snw that I can make snwmen and g skating with my friends.
2.结构混乱（修改下面的例子)Amng all seasns , the ne that truly fancinates me is spring.Nw let me tell yu why I like spring best.Spring is the first seasn f a year,which brings us warmth and sft breeze.The weather is nt t ht r t cld.The reasns why I like it s much is that it is a warm seasn with beautiful and rmantic flwers and it’s a perfect time t d utdr activities.