2022年中考英语作文课件

这是一份2022年中考英语作文课件，共30页。PPT课件主要包含了感觉 ，为什么，学什么等内容，欢迎下载使用。
谋篇书面表达评分标准：第一档：(15 - 13分) 完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。 句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯， 表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：(12~9分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分)与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩（Lin Ha）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。请你就林浩同学的事迹，以“Learn frm the Her” 为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学的事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你要向他学习什么。提示词语：a student, nine years ld, happen, save, walk, t safety, be deeply mved, brave, give up
Lin Ha is a student. He is nly nine years ld. After Wenchuan Earthquake happened, he saved tw f his classmates. Then he walked fr seven hurs t safety. I was deeply mved by his stry. I think he is a brave by. He did his best when he faced great danger. I shuld learn frm him. I will think f thers first and help them as much as pssible. I will never give up when I face any difficulties.
改写范文 ---- 亮点句Lin Ha is a student. He is nly nine years ld.à I think he is a brave by. 12分作文 = 官方范文 = 单选语法点
I think he is the bravest by that I have ever heard f.
Lin Ha is a student wh is nly nine years ld.
13 – 15 分作文 = 阅读、完形、教材语言点中考卷阅读C篇“When a sentence desn’t make sense”中考卷 阅读D篇“ Perhaps we shuld give teenagers a little mre trust anyway.”中考满分作文“ I can abslutely make sense f what yu said” “ But if we make up ur mind t help ur friends, we shuld give them a little mre trust anyway.
话题篇 一、周围的人 二、难忘的经历 三、学习方法类 四、假期计划类 五、利与弊议论 六、中学生健康问题 七、环保主题八、时事类九、周围环境描述十、有效解压
真题一： 关键词 --- 模板河南“A persn I will never frget”话题：家人、朋友和周围的人写人七大要素： 一、外貌：1. My favrite teacher is Mr. Wang. He is handsme and f medium build. 2.My best friend is Linda. She is a beautiful girl with lng black hair.二、性格：1.Ms. Wang is nt nly a wnderful teacher, but als an excellent Li Lei is an utging by wh is always willing t help thers.三、爱好：1.He is nt nly gd at playing basketball but als des well in playing chess. 2. Swimming is his favrite thing t d in his free time and he als shws great interest in playing sccer.四、学习成绩1. She is very gd at lessns especially English, s she is ne f the tp students in ur class.
外貌、性格、爱好、学习成绩、
描述让你难忘（帮助过你）的一件事情、感想（体会）、祝福（祝愿）
五、描述让你难忘（帮助过你）的一件事情：模板一We became friends by accident. One day he was playing basketball n the playgrund. He did it s well that I wanted t learn. Therefre, I asked if he culd teach me.I was grateful when he agreed. Every time when I wanted t give up halfway, it was XXX wh encuraged me. With his help, I can play basketball as well as he des nw.
六、感想（体会）I feel lucky t have such a gd teacher / friend. He always hlds n t achieve his dream. That is his best quality I shuld learn frm him. -----I feel lucky t have such a gd teacher / friend wh always hlds n t achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I shuld learn frm him.感想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：
1. 感觉 I am deeply mved / grateful.2. 为什么？Because he helped and encuraged me when I was in truble.3. 决定Therefre, I have made up my mind t learn frm him.4. 学什么？ I will be the persn just like him wh always ffers timely help and supprt t ther peple when they are in need.
七、祝福（祝愿） sincerely hpe Li Lei will make greater prgress in a new high schl. I als wish he will have a bright future.
真题二：关键词 --- 借鉴 An Unfrgettable Schl Activity话题：描写经历 借鉴灵感 --- 人教版9年级英语教材P6 Being a vlunteer is great!节选：1. Our schl is hme t three special yung peple wh all vlunteer their free time t help thers.2. Huiping lves t read, and she puts this lve t gd use by wrking in the after-schl care center at her lcal primary schl. Here, she helps yung children t read.3. Zhu Ming wants t be a prfessinal singer. He sings fr grups f peple at the city hspital t cheer them up.4. “Vlunteering is great!” says Huiping. “Nt nly d I feel gd abut helping ther peple, but I get t spend time ding what I lve t d.”
真题三：关键词 --- 贯通 假设你叫李华，是英国中学生彼得的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给彼得写一封回信，回答他的有关压岁钱（lucky mney）的问题，提出你的建议。
§ Did yu get lucky mney this year? § Hw d yu usually spend it? § And what can I d with the mney?
同类话题： Survey f Pcket Mney Spending
§ buy bks --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks --- （健康）§ saving --- fr traveling（课余生活、兴趣爱好、假期计划、减压）--- fr buying gifts （感恩）§ dnatin / envirnment prtectin
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康”为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性；保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起；4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
官方范文：Bys and girls,It is very imprtant fr us students t keep healthy. There are many ways t be healthy. We’d better eat mre fruits and vegetables. Take exercise fr at least ne hur every day. We need enugh sleep and rest s it is imprtant t g t bed early and get up early. Besides, we shuld wash ur hands as ften as pssible. In my pinin, we mustn’t drink wine r smke. They are bad fr ur health.Thank yu.
写作思路之 ---点、线、面拓展法健康（点）1. 吃eat2. 运动 d sprts/exercise3. 睡sleep
点----线1. 吃eat(what) ---eat healthy fd, such as fruit and vegetables(why)---which will benefit us a lt(对比)---instead f/ rather than junk fd diet--- keep a balanced diet
或：It is well knwn that breakfast plays an imprtant rle in ur daily life.语言特色：被动 + play an imprtant rle in …
Eating healthy fd, such as fruit and vegetables and keeping a balanced diet will benefit us a lt.
2. 做运动d sprts
室内 / 室外个人 / 团体g jgging
It is f great help t g jgging in a park t breathe fresh air which will refresh yur mind and make yu energetic enugh t cncentrate n yur study better.
(where)---in a park (why)---t breathe fresh air which will refresh yur mind and make yu energetic enugh t cncentrate/fcus n yur study better
或：It is well knwn that ding exercises shuld be valued because we cannt study very well withut a strng bdy.
3. 睡sleepwhy
俗语 ---because there is a saying that “Early t bed, early t rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”It is necessary t get enugh sleep, because there is a saying that “Early t bed, early t rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”
面：连接词：首先 --- T begin/start with, / At the first place, …其次 --- Besides, / What’s mre, / Furthermre, / In additin, …最后 ---Last but nt the least, …总之 ---In a wrd, / T sum up, …
全国中考英语写作真题之环保类环保主题 （点）
具体做法罗列：1. 种树 2.骑车、走路上学3.关水龙头 4.使用购物袋5.重复利用纸张 6.乘坐公交车 … …
归类 --- （按目的 / 原因）1. 种树---净化空气，美化环境2. 走路、骑车、坐公交车上学---减少有害气体排放3.关水龙头、关灯、重复利用纸张、使用购物袋---节约资源
点-线 1. 种树plant treeswhere---in a parkwhen---n weekendswith whm---with yur parents / friendswhy---t make the air fresher and make the envirnment mre beautiful
润色过程：1. Ding … will be a gd chice 2. t ----- because by ding s … （原因状从）3. make the air fresher ------the air will be refreshed （被动）4.make the envirnment mre beautiful------ the envirnment where we live （定从）-------will be beautified （被动）
成品：Planting trees in a park n weekends with yur friends will be a gd chice. Because by ding s, the air will be refreshed and the envirnment where we live will be beautified.
润色：虚拟语气：If I were yu, I wuld …定语从句：the gas that des harm t ur health被动： will be reduced副词： effectively成品：If I were yu, I wuld walk t schl instead f driving s that the gas that des t ur health will be reduced effectively.
2. 走路上学 walk t schl对比 ---instead f drivingwhy ---in rder t reduce harmful gas
3. 关水龙头turn ff the tapwhen --- after washing handswhy --- t save water润色：顺序颠倒（先目的再做法）r （要不然的话）r we’ll run ut f fresh water very sn 成品：It is necessary t save water by turning ff the tap after washing hands. Or we’ll run ut f fresh water very sn.
t save water by turning ff the tap after using.
面1.开头 （the imprtance f / why 环保）2.做法（the ways t / hw t 环保）3. 结尾（强调重要性 / 号召大家行动 / 展望美好未来）
开头（零件）：重要性极高：be f great imprtance t …过低碳生活：lead a lw-carbn lifestyle环保的envirnmentally friendly
成品：It is f great imprtance t prtect the envirnment by leading a lw-carbn life style which is envirnmentally friendly.
或：Scientists have pinted ut that envirnmental pllutin has lng-term effects n ur earth.
结尾：The envirnmental prtectin is nt nly the business f the gvernment, but als the respnsibility f each f us.Even a small effrt can make a great difference, s let’s take actins frm nw n t prtect ur envirnment.
或：I d believe that the mre we d fr ur earth, the better envirnment we will have and enjy.
全国中考英语写作真题之假期计划类假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bb来信询问你的暑假计划,现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。 1. 至少写出你将要做的三件事。 2. 回信至少不少于80词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 所给英语词汇仅供参考。参考词汇：summer; grandparents; relax neself; husewrk; visit; ld friends and relatives Hi, Bb, Summer vacatin is cming sn. ________________________________One pssible versin：　　Hi, Bb, The summer vacatin is cming sn.After a tiring schl year, I’m ging t relax myself. I will spend my vacatin with my grandparents. I will stay with them fr abut three weeks. Of curse, I am ging t help them d sme husewrk. Perhaps we will take sme shrt trips. Besides, I am ging t visit sme f my friends and relatives. I think we will have a happy time tgether. What’s mre, I will be a senir high schl student in a new term, s I am ging t make sme preparatins. Hw will yu spend yur hliday?　　 Best wishes.　　 Yurs, Zhang Lin
方式 --- by ding1. relax I will relax myself.方式 ---- I will relax myself by swimming.地点 ---- I will relax myself by swimming in a beautiful lake near my grandparents’ huse.时间 ----I will relax myself by swimming in a beautiful lake near my grandparents’ huse when the weather is fine.原因 --- because …
2. husewrkI will d sme husewrk fr my grandparents.原因 --- I will d sme husewrk fr my grandparents because they used t lk after me.时间 --- I will d sme husewrk fr my grandparents because they used t lk after me when I was a little kid.感情 --- I will d sme husewrk fr my grandparents because they used t lk after me when I was a little kid and I am s thankful t them.