高中英语2025届高考读后续写热点话题讲解练习（历险脱困+人与动物）

这是一份高中英语2025届高考读后续写热点话题讲解练习（历险脱困+人与动物），共5页。试卷主要包含了历险脱困，人与动物等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、历险脱困
【情节构思】
第一步：脱困之前环境的恶劣＋不安、绝望或恐惧等负面情绪；
第二步：脱困过程：转机描写——描写听见或看见了什么＋情绪描写(希望＋努力)；
第三步：脱困之后＋情绪描写(感恩＋高兴)＋主旨升华
1.历险相关的环境和情感描写
①It was cmpletely dark except the faint light given ut by a few stars in the sky.We had n idea where we were.
除了几颗星星发出微弱的光外，天完全黑了。我们不知道我们在哪里。
②When we reached deep int the frest, suddenlythe smg spread everywhere and we were nt able t see each ther clearly and lst ur way.
当我们到达森林深处时，突然烟雾弥漫，我们看不清彼此，迷了路。
③When buried under snw, Scttdrifted between terrr and panic, hping that his friend Paul was nt buried s deep.He held n t that faint pssibility like a rpe which culd pull him t safety.
当斯科特被埋在雪下时，他惊恐万分，希望他的朋友保罗没有被埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住这个渺小的可能性，就像抓住一根能把他拉到安全地带的绳子。
2.脱险相关的动作和情感描写
①Frightened and tired as I was, I cngratulated myself n returning safe and sund.
尽管我又害怕又累，我还是庆幸自己安然无恙地回来了。
②Heshk ff the snw, mved snw away with bare hands, and managed t pull himself ut.
他抖掉雪，徒手把雪弄开，然后设法爬了出来。
③Hepainstakingly tk nly tiny breaths, fighting t stay psitive by fcusing n this breathing.
他费力地做着微小的呼吸，努力把注意力集中在这种呼吸上，以保持乐观的心态。
④Time ticked away slwly.Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived.
时间慢慢流逝。就在他感觉要死了的时候，救援队赶到了。
【主旨升华】
1.Our being lst added a special taste t my adventurus vacatin which I wuld remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。
2.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerus vacatin befre.The special trip t the Wild West was deeply impressed in my mind.
我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。这次西部大荒之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。
3.Feeling frtunate, I made up my mind t cherish life and nt t try such adventure again.
我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。
4.Finally, we went ut f the frest that trapped us.What an unfrgettable experience! It turns ut that there’s always a way ut f any difficult situatin as lng aswe stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
【实战演练】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(济南高三3月模拟)
The incident tk place at Cheektwaga, a twn in Erie Cunty, New Yrk, in the middle f a histric and dangerus snwstrm.I had gne ut t visit my friend living in anther cunty, but unfrtunately I gt stuck and was unable t drive further.
I fully realized hw dangerus this wuld be as there was nt enugh gas left in the truck fr me t get thrugh the deadly snwstrm.The situatin gt even wrse in such a place withut any huses in sight.
I stayed in my truck, calling fr help anxiusly but the weak signal didn’t help me get cnnected.There was nthing I culd d but wait.At midnight, there came a knck utside the truck.I pened the dr and surprisingly fund an ld lady standing in the strm with just a thin cat, clearly nt enugh t survive the snwstrm.I invited her t get inside my truck at nce.She tld me in a weak vice that her name was Mary and her car brke dwn.She had walked a lng way befre finding my truck.
Misfrtune never came alne.Sn, we realized the air cnditiner burned all the fuel in my truck and it was getting clder and clder inside the truck.Mary clsed her eyes withut saying a wrd, shaking in the crner.Cnsidering Mary’s cnditin, I decided t take actin right nw.Luckily, the GPS f my truck still wrked.And with the help f GPS, I nticed that a schl was nearby.I decided t take shelter in the schl.Since Mary was t weak t mve, I carried her n my back, heading t the schl.After ten minutes’ struggle in the snw, we finally arrived, but fund the schl gate lcked.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
I hesitated abut what I shuld d.
The next mrning, a pliceman drve by and fund the gate brken.
[原文大意]作者在开车去看朋友途中遭遇严重的暴风雪，无法继续开车前行。周围没有居民，手机没有信号，正当作者待在车里等待救援的时候，一位衣着单薄的老妇人玛丽敲开了作者的车窗向作者求救。后来汽车的燃油用完了，作者只好背着虚弱的玛丽赶往附近的一所学校，以避免被冻死，但到达后却发现校门紧闭着。
[写作指导]
1.段落续写
(1)由第一段首句可知，此段可描写作者如何拯救情况危急的玛丽。
(2)由第二段首句可知，此段可描写警察发现作者和玛丽并帮助她们。
2.续写线索：打开门——取暖——警察询问——帮助——感悟
[参考范文]
I hesitated abut what I shuld d. The vilent tremble f Mary fr cld reminded me that we had n time t wait.BOOM.I kncked n the gate with all my strength.But n respnse.Withut hesitatin，Iplaced her n the flr，lefther waiting fr a while，andmade the best use f my legs t get sme tls as well as water and sme bread (动作链).Using the tls (现在分词短语作状语)，Ifrced pen the gate immediately.I switched n the lights，seatedMary n the chair，turned n the air cnditiner，and fed her sme biled water (动作链).Gradually，Maryfelt a little bit better and warmer.The threatening snwstrm went n and n.
The next mrning, a pliceman drve by and fund the gate brken. Shcked and cnfused(形容词短语作状语)，he entered the schl gate cautiusly.On finding us and knwing what had happened t us (介词短语作状语；宾语从句)，he called the plice fr help right away，and rushed the weak Mary t the near hspital.I was left t wait fr the plice and the schlmaster t deal with the incident.After knwing the whle stry，they all thught highly f what I did (宾语从句).The pliceman ffered t drive me t the nearest gas statin.As I waved gdbye t the pliceman，I culdn’t help but think abut hw lucky I was t have Mary’s unexpected appearance that night.Withut her，I might nt have been able t survive the dangerus snwstrm.It was true that helping thers is helping urselves (it作形式主语).
二、人与动物
【情节构思】
类型一 可爱型动物故事情节：可爱型动物，如狗、鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物(主要是狗)救人的生命等故事情节。
类型二 凶猛型动物故事情节：凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
主题升华设计：可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1.人与凶兽
①With the bear chasing behind, we waved ur hands wildly screaming“Help”.We were running and were trapped t a narrw crner, where I culd almst hear the gasps f it.
熊在后面追，我们疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着“救命”。我们跑着跑着被困在一个狭窄的角落里，在那里我几乎可以听到它的喘息声。
②When a tiger was appraching me, I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch.
当一只老虎向我靠近时，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。
③When I saw the wlf, I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
当我看到狼时，我感到非常害怕，我的喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
2.人与可爱型动物
①The puppy turned his head, lked int my eyes, and licked my face with his wet，warm tngue.
小狗转过头来，看着我的眼睛，用它湿润温暖的舌头舔我的脸。
②Appearing t be feeling better, the deer slwly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss t Lucy’s hand as if t express thanks.What a warm scene!
鹿似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻露西的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！
【主旨升华】
1.Frm time t time I lk at the pht as a reminder t shw respect fr all animals.After all, it is we wh are the visitrs t their wrld.
我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟我们才是动物世界的访客。
2.When we deal with them，it’s nt nly we whtake care f them，but mst f the time, it’s they that heal us.
在和它们相处的时候，不仅仅是我们要照顾它们，而且大多数时候，治愈我们的是它们。
3.Despite the chill winter wind, their hme wherethe tw lvely dgs played happily was filled with the warmth f lve and reunin.
尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。
4.After we returned hme safe and sund, we realized that smething shuld be dne fr bears.(2020·浙江7月卷)
当我们平安回家后，我们意识到应该为熊做点什么。
【实战演练】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(皖南八校高三第三次大联考)
Have yu ever nticed hw certain smells can call up particular emtins r memries? A whiff f perfume(一阵香水味)r after－shave recalls a favrite persn; the delicius smell f warm bread tickles the taste buds(味蕾).
Think abut newly－cut grass r hw the air smells after a thunderstrm.Burning leaves n fresh and cld fall days always remind me f the ftball at the weekend.Perhaps the smells that surrund Christmas carry the mst memries.The fresh green smell f pine trees; the fragrances f a variety f fd, especially the nes given ff by ckies being baked in an ven and ht chclate.Mrever, the scent f wd smke arund the burning fire can als bring warmth and the cmfrtable feeling t ur mind.It is amazing hw much lve and laughter they bring int ur lives and even hw much clser we becme with each ther because f them.
But the smell I assciate best with Christmas and winter is a wet dg.Our dg was mstly an utdr dg and was ften wet cmpletely in the rain.We tried t dry him ff as sn as he came in, grabbing the ld, dirty twel by the dr.He usually shk himself befre we culd catch him.The walls f the back entry were always sptted with brwn mud all winter.We brushed him regularly in spring and summer when winter fur fell ut by handfuls, but baths were rare.S, f curse, his smell built up ver time.Try as we might, we never culd cmpletely get rid f that smell.It lay hidden deep in his fur and skin.
The distinctive smell f the wet dg was a reminder f the Christmas vacatin when I was twelve, and the cusins frm Ohi were visiting.We had gtten shiny, slippery flying saucers as gifts and were als blessed with fresh snw.The fur f us spent as much time as pssible sliding dwn the shrt hill t the pnd.Naturally, we tested the ice n the pnd befre sliding the first day, and we knew we culd slide acrss it and lengthen ur ride.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
On the third day, we were s eager t play that we did nt check it.
I stepped dwn the bank carefully t reach him, but the dg was faster.
[原文大意]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者圣诞节和表亲们在池塘上滑冰，发生了意外的故事。
[写作指导]
1.段落续写
(1)由第一段首句可知，此段可描写作者和表亲们在池塘上滑冰突然发生了意外。
(2)由第二段首句可知，此段可描写作者的狗跳进水中，帮助作者一行人救出彼得。
2.续写线索：开心滑冰—意外—惊慌—狗帮忙—救出彼得—珍贵的记忆
[参考范文]
On the third day, we were s eager t play that we did nt check it.A few degrees f warmth added a small layer f water t ur slide (拟人),increasing ur speed and excitement(现在分词短语作状语).My brther Peter slid happily and rapidly dwn the hill and n t the pnd.Secnds later, he was struggling in the icy water.Peter was nly eight and nt a gd swimmer especially wrapped in a heavy winter cat and bts (过去分词短语作状语).It happened all f a sudden and made us all in panic and scream.
I stepped dwn the bank carefully t reach him, but the dg was faster.He jumped dint the water, grabbed Peter by his ailing hand, and pulled him t the bank (动作链).The cusins and I were able t finish pulling Peter ut f the frigid water.Yu can guess the rest f the stry.We managed t wrap Peter in ur cats and get him back up the hill t the huse in recrd time.Sipping cca by the heater (现在分词短语作状语), we patted and hugged that wet dg.The dg tk all day t dry ut.His wet dg smell lingered lnger and returned ften, reminding us f his herics and ur wn Christmas miracle (现在分词短语作状语).