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专题9 读后续写课堂学案 汪星人与喵星人
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这是一份专题9 读后续写课堂学案 汪星人与喵星人，共5页。试卷主要包含了背景描写，女儿Iris的动作细节描写，猫咪Thula的动作细节描写，满分结尾句等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、背景描写
1.直到最近我才知道，一只小宠物可以成为一个无助的妈妈的助手。
Nt until recently __________________that a little pet can be such a helpful assistant t a helpless mm.
2.这都要归功于我们的新家庭成员，一只名叫苏拉的小猫。
This is all due t what ur new family member,__________________, has dne.
3.似乎在任何时候都她清楚Iris需要什么。
She seems t understand exactly _______________ at any given time.
二、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1.一天晚上，Iris睡不着。当她越来越沮丧时，她开始哭，她的抽泣声充满了安静的房间。
One night, Iris_____________.As her frustratins munted, she started t cry, and __________________________.
2. 除了她最喜欢的书，似乎没什么能安慰她。我渴望得到帮助，但除了我，她推开了所有的人，让我几乎崩溃。
Nthing seemed t cmfrt her apart frm her favrite bk and I lnged fr sme help, but she _____________ all wh tried except me, making me n the edge f __________________.
三、猫咪Thula的动作细节描写
1.在楼下，我丈夫惊讶地看着突然从他的腿上站起来的Thula。
Dwnstairs, my husband lked at Thula in surprise wh had suddenly __________ his lap.
2. 她的眼睛盯着门，一只爪子高高地抬起，悬在空中。
Her eyes fcused twards the dr and she ______________, perfectly pised in the air.
3. Iris的哭声吸引了她的注意力，然后她的四条腿飞快地动起来。
Smething _______________________ - the crying f lris. Then ________________________________________.
4.她嗖的一声转过拐角，跃上楼梯，进了Iris的卧室，跳到床上。
Zming rund the crner, she ________________ the stairs int Iris's bedrm and _________________ the bed.
5.她蜷缩在Iris身边，不搭理她的哭声，开始给自己梳理毛发，舔爪子，在耳朵上蹭来蹭去。
She __________________ next t lris, ignred the crying and started grming herself, ________________________________.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1. Iris放下书看着小猫,双眸满是好奇。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Iris’s eyes glittered with curisity.___________________________________
___________________________. (双连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________. （独立主格）
2. Iris的手搭在Thula的肩上，我听到了轻轻的咕噜声。
________________________ and I culd hear a gentle purr.
3.Iris伸出手，用手指拢了拢小猫蓬松的皮毛。
Iris ______________________ and ___________________________________ the puffy fur f the kitten.
二、猫咪Thula的动作细节描写
1.就像施了魔法一样，苏拉的大耳朵向前耷拉着，然后又向后弹。她对着苏拉的大耳朵咯咯地笑了起来。
As if by magic, she giggled at Thula's huge ears as they were _________________frward and then pinged back.
2.小猫咪发出一声柔软的喵喵叫，然后蜷成了一个毛茸茸的小球。
The little creature____________________ and ___________ int a furry little ball.（双连动词）
三 、“我”的动作和场景细节描写
1.我如释重负地溜出房间，在楼下等着，听着不可避免的哭声，那哭声会把我拉回到她身边。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①I was relieved. I________________________, waited dwnstairs, and listened fr the inevitable crying that wuld take me back t her side. (动词链， 三连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ________________________________the inevitable crying that wuld take me back t her side. (形容词做状语+分词做状语）
2.片刻之后，一片寂静：没有咯咯的笑声，没有翻书的声音，也没有哭声。
Mments later,_________________: n giggling, n pages being turned, and n cries. （排比）
四、满分结尾句
首尾呼应式
1.虽然Thula还是一只小猫咪，是我们家的新成员，但她已经开始照顾Iris了。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①-____________________________ and a new member f ur family, Thula was already caring fr Iris. (让步状语从句）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_____________________________________________, Thula was already caring fr Iris. (省略句）
2.这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是个开始。
This magical kitten was changing ur lives and _________________________.
尝试续写
Almst immediately, Iris's md changed. _______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I was curius abut the silence, then returned t the dr f Iris's rm and lked in. ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、背景描写
1.have I knwn 2.a little kitten named Thula
3.what lris needs
二、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1.refused t sleep； her sbs filled the quiet rm
2. pushed away；breaking dwn
三、
1. gt up ff his lap 2. had ne ft raised 3. had grabbed her attentin； her legs were mving fast 4.flew up the stairs； jumped nt 5.curled up；licking her paws and rubbing them ver her ears
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① She put dwn her bk and lked at the kitten = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Her eyes glittering with curisity, Iris put dwn her bk and lked at the kitten
2. Iris's hand rested n Thula's shulders 3. reached ut her hands； ran her fingers thrugh
二、 1.flded dwn 2. made a sft mew；curled itself
三、1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① slipped ut f the rm = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Relieved, I slipped ut f the rm, waited dwnstairs, listening fr 2.there was silence
三、满分结尾句
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Althugh Thula was still a tiny kitten = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Althugh still a tiny kitten and a new member f ur family 2.this was just the beginning
一、背景描写
1.直到最近我才知道，一只小宠物可以成为一个无助的妈妈的助手。
Nt until recently __________________that a little pet can be such a helpful assistant t a helpless mm.
2.这都要归功于我们的新家庭成员，一只名叫苏拉的小猫。
This is all due t what ur new family member,__________________, has dne.
3.似乎在任何时候都她清楚Iris需要什么。
She seems t understand exactly _______________ at any given time.
二、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1.一天晚上，Iris睡不着。当她越来越沮丧时，她开始哭，她的抽泣声充满了安静的房间。
One night, Iris_____________.As her frustratins munted, she started t cry, and __________________________.
2. 除了她最喜欢的书，似乎没什么能安慰她。我渴望得到帮助，但除了我，她推开了所有的人，让我几乎崩溃。
Nthing seemed t cmfrt her apart frm her favrite bk and I lnged fr sme help, but she _____________ all wh tried except me, making me n the edge f __________________.
三、猫咪Thula的动作细节描写
1.在楼下，我丈夫惊讶地看着突然从他的腿上站起来的Thula。
Dwnstairs, my husband lked at Thula in surprise wh had suddenly __________ his lap.
2. 她的眼睛盯着门，一只爪子高高地抬起，悬在空中。
Her eyes fcused twards the dr and she ______________, perfectly pised in the air.
3. Iris的哭声吸引了她的注意力，然后她的四条腿飞快地动起来。
Smething _______________________ - the crying f lris. Then ________________________________________.
4.她嗖的一声转过拐角，跃上楼梯，进了Iris的卧室，跳到床上。
Zming rund the crner, she ________________ the stairs int Iris's bedrm and _________________ the bed.
5.她蜷缩在Iris身边，不搭理她的哭声，开始给自己梳理毛发，舔爪子，在耳朵上蹭来蹭去。
She __________________ next t lris, ignred the crying and started grming herself, ________________________________.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1. Iris放下书看着小猫,双眸满是好奇。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Iris’s eyes glittered with curisity.___________________________________
___________________________. (双连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________. （独立主格）
2. Iris的手搭在Thula的肩上，我听到了轻轻的咕噜声。
________________________ and I culd hear a gentle purr.
3.Iris伸出手，用手指拢了拢小猫蓬松的皮毛。
Iris ______________________ and ___________________________________ the puffy fur f the kitten.
二、猫咪Thula的动作细节描写
1.就像施了魔法一样，苏拉的大耳朵向前耷拉着，然后又向后弹。她对着苏拉的大耳朵咯咯地笑了起来。
As if by magic, she giggled at Thula's huge ears as they were _________________frward and then pinged back.
2.小猫咪发出一声柔软的喵喵叫，然后蜷成了一个毛茸茸的小球。
The little creature____________________ and ___________ int a furry little ball.（双连动词）
三 、“我”的动作和场景细节描写
1.我如释重负地溜出房间，在楼下等着，听着不可避免的哭声，那哭声会把我拉回到她身边。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①I was relieved. I________________________, waited dwnstairs, and listened fr the inevitable crying that wuld take me back t her side. (动词链， 三连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ________________________________the inevitable crying that wuld take me back t her side. (形容词做状语+分词做状语）
2.片刻之后，一片寂静：没有咯咯的笑声，没有翻书的声音，也没有哭声。
Mments later,_________________: n giggling, n pages being turned, and n cries. （排比）
四、满分结尾句
首尾呼应式
1.虽然Thula还是一只小猫咪，是我们家的新成员，但她已经开始照顾Iris了。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①-____________________________ and a new member f ur family, Thula was already caring fr Iris. (让步状语从句）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_____________________________________________, Thula was already caring fr Iris. (省略句）
2.这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是个开始。
This magical kitten was changing ur lives and _________________________.
尝试续写
Almst immediately, Iris's md changed. _______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I was curius abut the silence, then returned t the dr f Iris's rm and lked in. ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、背景描写
1.have I knwn 2.a little kitten named Thula
3.what lris needs
二、女儿Iris的动作细节描写
1.refused t sleep； her sbs filled the quiet rm
2. pushed away；breaking dwn
三、
1. gt up ff his lap 2. had ne ft raised 3. had grabbed her attentin； her legs were mving fast 4.flew up the stairs； jumped nt 5.curled up；licking her paws and rubbing them ver her ears
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① She put dwn her bk and lked at the kitten = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Her eyes glittering with curisity, Iris put dwn her bk and lked at the kitten
2. Iris's hand rested n Thula's shulders 3. reached ut her hands； ran her fingers thrugh
二、 1.flded dwn 2. made a sft mew；curled itself
三、1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① slipped ut f the rm = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Relieved, I slipped ut f the rm, waited dwnstairs, listening fr 2.there was silence
三、满分结尾句
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Althugh Thula was still a tiny kitten = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Althugh still a tiny kitten and a new member f ur family 2.this was just the beginning
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