专题6 读后续写课堂学案 奇遇篇 肢体动作2（有答案）

这是一份专题6 读后续写课堂学案 奇遇篇 肢体动作2（有答案），共5页。试卷主要包含了动作细节描写，胖店主的动作描写，人群活动场景描写，人物外貌描写等内容，欢迎下载使用。

一、动作细节描写（构建动作链，双连动词或利用非谓语动词）
1. 查理走进那家商店，把那枚湿漉漉的五十便士硬币放到柜台上。
Charlie entered the shp and _______ the damp fifty pence n the cunter.
2. 查理抓住巧克力三两下撕去包装纸，狠狠咬了一大口。然后又是一口……再一口……啊，往嘴里赛进大块大块香甜而硬实的东西那滋味真是美极了！
Charlie ________ it and quickly _________ the wrapper and bite_____________. Then he tk anther... and anther... and h, the jy f being able t cram large pieces f smething sweet and slid int ne’s muth!
3.查理点点头，他的嘴里塞满了巧克力。
Charlie _________ , his muth bulging with chclate.
4.查理仍热狼吞虎咽地吃着那块巧克力。他根本停不下来。不到半分钟，整块巧克力就进了肚。
Charlie ______________. He culdn’t stp. And in less than half a minute, the whle thing ____________ dwn his thrat.
5.他伸手去取找头，却又停住了。他眼睛的高度刚好超过柜台，他睁大眼睛看着放在柜台上的银币。
He ____________ t take the change. Then he paused. His eyes were just abve the level f the cunter. They were ___________the silver cins lying there.

6.查理把它拿起来，撕开包糖纸……忽然之间……从包糖纸里……闪出一道耀眼的金光。
Charlie _________________ the underneath the wrapper.. .there came a brilliant flash f gld.
7.查理的心停止了跳动。
___________________________.
二、胖店主的动作描写
1.”当然罗！“肥胖的店老板说，又从身后架子上拿出了一块高级惠普尔奶油巧克力软糖，把它放在柜台上。
“Why nt?” the fat shpkeeper said, ________ him again and taking anther Whipple-Scrumptius Fudgemallw Delight frm the shelf.
2.店老板腾空跳了几乎一尺高，大叫着，“是一张金奖券！”
“It’s a Glden Ticket!” screamed the shpkeeper， __________________.
三、人群活动场景描写
不到几秒钟，二十几个人就围住了查理， 还有更多的人从街上挤进来。
In a few secnds, there was a crwd f abut twenty peple _________________ Charlie, and many mre ________________________________.
四、人物外貌描写
柜台后的男人十分肥壮。他脖子上面的肥肉肥都堆在了领口，就象套了个橡皮圈。
The man behind the cunter lked fat. The fat arund his neck bulged ut all arund the tp f his cllar __________________.
续写部分的细节描写（与原文语言特点一致）
一、查理的动作、情感细节描写
1.查理站在那里一动不动地，手指摸着那张金奖券。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Charlie was fixed t the grund，and fingers strked the glden ticket. (腿部+手部动作）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Charlie was fixed t the grund，________________________________. （独立主格结构）
2.想到他贫困的家庭使他想卖掉票换钱。
______________________________________urged him t sell the ticket fr mney. （无灵主语句）
3.他有一种奇怪的飘飘然的感觉，好像自己是个气球在空中飘来飘去。
There was a strange flating feeling cming ver him as thugh _________________________________________. （明喻）
4.他点点头，像鹿一样飞奔回家，急切地想分享这个令人难以置信的奇妙的消息。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①He ndded and darted hme like a deer, and he was eager t share the incredibly miraculus news. （双连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(形容词短语做状语）
二、胖店老板的动作、语言细节描写
1.他领着查理走到街上，看着查理的眼睛，低声说:“听着，孩子。不要卖掉它。没有什么比快乐更珍贵。”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①He ______ Charlie ut t the street, lked int Charlie’s eyes, and ________ ,“Listen, kid. Dn’t sell it. _______________. ” (三连动词）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② ________________, he lked int Charlie’s eyes, _________________,“Listen, kid. Dn’t sell it. ______________________________. ” （非谓语做哦状语）
2.“别打扰这孩子，好不好!”让让路!让他出去!”他把查理领到门口时，低声对他说:“别让任何人得到它! 赶快拿着它直接回家吧!”
"Leave the kid alne , will yu! Make way there! Let him ut!” And t Charlie, as he led him t the dr, he _______ ,"Dn't let anybdy have it! Take it straight hme quickly!”
人群活动场景描写
1.兴奋的人们伸出胳膊去抢他的票或拍他的肩膀，“卖给我吧!”我会给你很多钱!”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Excited peple reached/held ut their arms t grab the ticket r pat n his shulder, “Sell it t me! I will give yu a lt!” (手臂动作描写+语言描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_____________________________________________________________________________, “Sell it t me! I will give yu a lt!” (被动句）
2.人群在他周围推着、喊着，他听见心在嗓子眼砰砰跳着。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①The crwd pushed and shuted arund him, and he culd hear his heart thumping away ludly smewhere in his thrat. (肢体动作+无灵主语句）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②______________________________________, he culd hear his heart thumping away ludly smewhere in his thrat. （独立主格结构）
三、满分结尾句
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① 呼应标题式+场景描写式
那天晚上，查理紧紧地抓着票，进入了梦乡。香甜的巧克力奇迹般从机器里流出，工厂里满是甜甜的味道。
That night, ______________________, Charlie slipped int a dream, where the river f sweet chclate streamed ut f machines like a miracle, ____________________________. (非谓语做状语+定语从句+独立主格）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② 感悟升华式
晚上，查理躺在床上，脸上带着甜蜜的微笑。我们永远不知道生命中下一块巧克力的味道，但充满期待的巧克力总是最美味。
At night, Charlie laid n the bed with a sweet smile. Never wuld we knw the taste f next chclate in ur life, but _________________________________________________________.
答案
精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵
一、动作细节描写（构建动作链，双连动词或利用非谓语动词）
1. laid 2. grabbed；tre ff ；tk an enrmus bite 3.ndded
4. went n wlfing the chclate； had disappeared
5.reached ut a hand； staring at 6.picked it up and tre ff7.Charlie’s heart std still
二、胖店主的动作描写
1.reaching behind 2. leaping abut a ft in the air
三、
gathering arund ；were pushing their way in frm the street
四、人物外貌描写
like a rubber ring

一、查理的动作、情感细节描写
1. fingers strking the glden ticket
2.The thught f his needy family 3. he were flating up in the air like a balln
4.He ndded and darted hme like a deer, eager t share the incredibly miraculus news.
二、胖店老板的动作、语言细节描写
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① led； whispered； Nthing is mre precius than jy.
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Leading Charlie ut t the street； whispering；Nthing is mre precius than jy. ”
2.whispered
三、人群活动场景描写
1.Arms f excited peple were reached/held ut t grab the ticket r pat n his shulder 2.The crwd pushing and shuting arund him
三、满分结尾句
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① hlding the ticket tightly；the sweet smell filling the big factry
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② the chclate full f expectatin always tastes best