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这是一份专题10 读后续写课堂学案 做人与做事，共6页。试卷主要包含了人物动作细节描写，人物的语言细节描写，满分结尾句等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.她没有四处寻找，而是径直走进储藏室，偷了奶酪、巧克力、黄油和其他做蛋糕的原料，然后沿路跑走了。
Instead f searching arund, she ______________________ int the strage rm, ___________ cheese, chclate, butter and ther ingredients fr a cake, and then ___________________ dwn the rad.
2.她双手掩面坐到了地板上。
She _______________________________________ and sat dwn n the flr.
3.门打开出来一个瘦弱的女人。
The dr pened and ________________________________________________.
两个警察的动作细节描写
4. 两名警察迅速赶到商店，却发现现场根本没有犯罪迹象。
The tw plicemen quickly arrived at the shp, ______________________________ that the scene shwed n sign f crimes at all.
5. 另一名警官鲍勃掏出了一把枪，准备破门而入。艾伦却让他把枪收起来，轻轻地敲了敲门。
Bb, anther fficer, _________________________. But Alan tld him t put the gun away and ________________________________.
二、人物的语言细节描写
1. 就在那时，一个孩子的声音打破了沉默:“妈妈，有人来参加我的生日吗? 请把他们请进来。”
At that very mment, _________________________________, “Mm, is anyne cming fr my birthday? Invite them in, please.”
2. 克拉拉听了男孩的话后，站起来低声哀求道:“警官，我确实偷了东西，但我没办法。今天是孩子生日，而我既没工作也没钱。请不要把这些东西拿走。我刚用它们给他做了个蛋糕。”
After hearing the by's wrds, Clara ___________________________, “Officer, I did steal thse things, but there's nthing else I culd d. It's my baby's birthday, and I've gt neither jb nr mney. Please dn't take thse things away. I've just used them t make him a cake.”
续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、人物的动作和情感细节描写
1.在他眼前是一个营养不良的男孩，他忙着拿面粉，眉开眼笑。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① A undernurished by was in frnt f his eyes. ___________________________________ while wrking busily with flur at hand. （神态+动作描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_________________________________, ______________________________while wrking busily with flur at hand. （倒装句+非谓语动词）
2.听了这话，鲍勃感到很尴尬，他不停地搓搓双手，似乎想在这寒冷的十二月里暖和起来。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①At this, Bb felt embarrassed, ____________________________________________seemingly t get warm in this freezing December. （三连动词，情感+动作+环境描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②At this, Bb felt embarrassed, _______________________________________________seemingly t get warm in this freezing December. （非谓语动词）
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1.他抬头看到了艾伦，艾伦立刻解释道:“嘿，我是艾伦。我在这附近巡逻，是来祝你生日快乐的。”
He lked up and saw Alan，_____________________, “Hey, I am Alan. I cme t say Happy Birthday t yu as I am patrlling this neighbrhd.”
2.Alan走出来，递给Clara一张20美元的钞票，微笑着说:“既然我还在值勤，你能帮我给你儿子买一份漂亮的生日礼物吗?”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Alan ___________, _____________Clara a twenty dllar bill, and ___________,“Wuld yu help me buy a nice birthday gift t yur sn nw since I am still n duty?” (三连动词构成动作链+对话描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Alan _________________, and __________Clara a twenty dllar bill, ___________,“Wuld yu help me buy a nice birthday gift t yur sn nw since I am still n duty?” （非谓语动词）
3.看着Clara那消瘦的身影渐渐远去， Alan坚定地说:“我会帮助弥补店铺的损失。”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①As Alan saw Clara's bean-ple figure gne int the distance, _______________________,“I will help cver the lss f the shp.” （时间状语从句）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②______________________________________________________, ___________________________________,“I will help cver the lss f the shp.” （非谓语动词）
4.最后，他鼓起勇气说:“兄弟，我也可以帮忙。我付钱把它们作为我送给这位母亲和她的孩子的圣诞礼物。”
Finally, ____________________________________,“Buddy, I can als help. Let me pay fr them as my Christmas gift t the mther and her child."
三、满分结尾句
1.神态+场景描写
阿兰凝视着鲍勃的眼睛，看到了一种真诚的善良，天空中飘下小小的雪花，白而纯净。
_____________________________________, Alan saw the genuine kindness glistening with little sft snwflakes falling dwn frm the sky, white and pure. （非谓语动词）
2.自然式结尾
Clara承诺她将通过自己的努力改善她的生活，不再做任何非法的事情。
______________________________________________________________and wuld n lnger d anything illegal again.
尝试续写
Lking int the wman's teary eyes, Alan understd and walked int the huse.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Bb ndded thughtfully and asked, "What abut the things she stle?” ____________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.walked straight ; stle ; ran away
2.buried her face in her hands 3. ut came a very thin wman
4. nly t find 5. pulled ut a gun and was abut t break in; kncked gently
二、
1. a child's vice brke the silence 2. std up and begged in a lw vice
续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① He was beaming frm ear t ear = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②In frnt f his eyes was a undernurished by, beaming frm ear t ear 2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①twisted and rubbed his hands ver and ver again
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② twisting and rubbing his hands ver and ver again
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1. wh immediately explained 2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① stepped ut；handed ； smiled = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② stepped ut； handed ； smiling3. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① he answered in a firm vice = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Seeing Clara's bean-ple figure gne int the distance； Alan answered in a firm vice 4.he gathered his curage
三、满分结尾句
1.Staring int the Bb's eyes 2. Clara prmised that she wuld imprve her life by her wn effrts
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.她没有四处寻找，而是径直走进储藏室，偷了奶酪、巧克力、黄油和其他做蛋糕的原料，然后沿路跑走了。
Instead f searching arund, she ______________________ int the strage rm, ___________ cheese, chclate, butter and ther ingredients fr a cake, and then ___________________ dwn the rad.
2.她双手掩面坐到了地板上。
She _______________________________________ and sat dwn n the flr.
3.门打开出来一个瘦弱的女人。
The dr pened and ________________________________________________.
两个警察的动作细节描写
4. 两名警察迅速赶到商店，却发现现场根本没有犯罪迹象。
The tw plicemen quickly arrived at the shp, ______________________________ that the scene shwed n sign f crimes at all.
5. 另一名警官鲍勃掏出了一把枪，准备破门而入。艾伦却让他把枪收起来，轻轻地敲了敲门。
Bb, anther fficer, _________________________. But Alan tld him t put the gun away and ________________________________.
二、人物的语言细节描写
1. 就在那时，一个孩子的声音打破了沉默:“妈妈，有人来参加我的生日吗? 请把他们请进来。”
At that very mment, _________________________________, “Mm, is anyne cming fr my birthday? Invite them in, please.”
2. 克拉拉听了男孩的话后，站起来低声哀求道:“警官，我确实偷了东西，但我没办法。今天是孩子生日，而我既没工作也没钱。请不要把这些东西拿走。我刚用它们给他做了个蛋糕。”
After hearing the by's wrds, Clara ___________________________, “Officer, I did steal thse things, but there's nthing else I culd d. It's my baby's birthday, and I've gt neither jb nr mney. Please dn't take thse things away. I've just used them t make him a cake.”
续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、人物的动作和情感细节描写
1.在他眼前是一个营养不良的男孩，他忙着拿面粉，眉开眼笑。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① A undernurished by was in frnt f his eyes. ___________________________________ while wrking busily with flur at hand. （神态+动作描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②_________________________________, ______________________________while wrking busily with flur at hand. （倒装句+非谓语动词）
2.听了这话，鲍勃感到很尴尬，他不停地搓搓双手，似乎想在这寒冷的十二月里暖和起来。
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①At this, Bb felt embarrassed, ____________________________________________seemingly t get warm in this freezing December. （三连动词，情感+动作+环境描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②At this, Bb felt embarrassed, _______________________________________________seemingly t get warm in this freezing December. （非谓语动词）
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1.他抬头看到了艾伦，艾伦立刻解释道:“嘿，我是艾伦。我在这附近巡逻，是来祝你生日快乐的。”
He lked up and saw Alan，_____________________, “Hey, I am Alan. I cme t say Happy Birthday t yu as I am patrlling this neighbrhd.”
2.Alan走出来，递给Clara一张20美元的钞票，微笑着说:“既然我还在值勤，你能帮我给你儿子买一份漂亮的生日礼物吗?”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①Alan ___________, _____________Clara a twenty dllar bill, and ___________,“Wuld yu help me buy a nice birthday gift t yur sn nw since I am still n duty?” (三连动词构成动作链+对话描写）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Alan _________________, and __________Clara a twenty dllar bill, ___________,“Wuld yu help me buy a nice birthday gift t yur sn nw since I am still n duty?” （非谓语动词）
3.看着Clara那消瘦的身影渐渐远去， Alan坚定地说:“我会帮助弥补店铺的损失。”
= 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①As Alan saw Clara's bean-ple figure gne int the distance, _______________________,“I will help cver the lss f the shp.” （时间状语从句）
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②______________________________________________________, ___________________________________,“I will help cver the lss f the shp.” （非谓语动词）
4.最后，他鼓起勇气说:“兄弟，我也可以帮忙。我付钱把它们作为我送给这位母亲和她的孩子的圣诞礼物。”
Finally, ____________________________________,“Buddy, I can als help. Let me pay fr them as my Christmas gift t the mther and her child."
三、满分结尾句
1.神态+场景描写
阿兰凝视着鲍勃的眼睛，看到了一种真诚的善良，天空中飘下小小的雪花，白而纯净。
_____________________________________, Alan saw the genuine kindness glistening with little sft snwflakes falling dwn frm the sky, white and pure. （非谓语动词）
2.自然式结尾
Clara承诺她将通过自己的努力改善她的生活，不再做任何非法的事情。
______________________________________________________________and wuld n lnger d anything illegal again.
尝试续写
Lking int the wman's teary eyes, Alan understd and walked int the huse.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Bb ndded thughtfully and asked, "What abut the things she stle?” ____________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
一、人物动作细节描写
女窃贼的动作细节描写
1.walked straight ; stle ; ran away
2.buried her face in her hands 3. ut came a very thin wman
4. nly t find 5. pulled ut a gun and was abut t break in; kncked gently
二、
1. a child's vice brke the silence 2. std up and begged in a lw vice
续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致
一、
1. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① He was beaming frm ear t ear = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②In frnt f his eyes was a undernurished by, beaming frm ear t ear 2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①twisted and rubbed his hands ver and ver again
= 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② twisting and rubbing his hands ver and ver again
二、人物的动作和语言细节描写
1. wh immediately explained 2. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① stepped ut；handed ； smiled = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② stepped ut； handed ； smiling3. = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① he answered in a firm vice = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②Seeing Clara's bean-ple figure gne int the distance； Alan answered in a firm vice 4.he gathered his curage
三、满分结尾句
1.Staring int the Bb's eyes 2. Clara prmised that she wuld imprve her life by her wn effrts
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