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Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。必须包含:
(1)你的选择;
(2) 你的理由。
解析：
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为建议信；
② 时态：一般现在时态；
③ 提示：项目内容已给出，学生应选一项活动，阐述理由，注意写信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己写信意图；
第二步，具体说明项目内容和选择的原因；
第三步，结尾可以表达自己的期盼。
【范文】
T whm it may cncern,
Hearing that ur schl will rganize a themed activity "Walk int histry",I am writing this letter with the aim f putting frward my pinins. As fr me, shting a shrt vide is a superb ptin. The reasns fr my preference are as fllws.
First f all, there is n dubt that shting a vide shall definitely mtivate we students t put what we have learnt t practice. Thrugh filming the perfrmance, nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. In additin, filming is a teamwrk. I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career.What's mre, the shrt vide will be widely spread, if it is psted n scial media. The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. Thus, the virtue f lder generatin will pass n.
I sincerely hpe my advice helps this activity. Thank yu fr taking my suggestins int accunt.
【好词好句】
1.Thrugh filming the perfrmance,nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. (nt als 倒装句）
通过拍摄，我不仅可以提高我的实践能力，还可以提高我的社交能力。
2.I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career. （which非限制性定语从句）
我可以在这个活动中学习如何与他人合作，这是一个职业生涯的重要素质。
3.The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. （wh 引导定语从句）
生动的画面和优美的音乐起到至关重要的作用，吸引数以百万计的年轻人想要了解一个特定的历史事件的历史背景。
2022年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7:30到7:50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晨跑的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求：
你认为晨跑安排中存在的问题；
提出改进的建议和理由。
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学霸作文（仅供参考）
Dear Student Unin ,
I am writing this letter t reflect n the schl's rganizatin f mrning running fr all teachers and students. Glad that the schl rganizes mrning running fr the health f students. Hwever, sme students reflected that they were uncmfrtable after mrning running which is an urgent prblem t be slved. T slve it, my reasns and suggestins are as fllws.
First f all, it is inapprpriate t set the time fr mrning running frm 7:30 t 7:50 in the mrning, because it is nly 5 minutes frm the first class. Students will be very tired, which will impact the learning efficiency f the first class. Meanwhile, just after breakfast in the mrning vigrus exercise is nt suitable fr human beings, therwise it will cause stmach discmfrt.Why nt try t put the mrning running time in the big break after the secnd class? What 's mre.I hld, befre rganizing mrning running, we shuld give students a cmprehensive physical examinatin t ensure that everyne's physical cnditin is suitable fr running. We can arrange sme ther warm-up exercises fr these students and teachers wh are nt suitable fr running preventing sme unexpected accidents. Last but nt least, the schl shuld cnsider students with physical discmfrt t ask fr leave in advance and infrm the reasn.
In shrt, what matters mst is that physical educatin is a crucial part f educatin. Only by strengthening ur bdy can we better prtect ur cuntry and build ur mtherland. I hpe sincerely students can experience happiness in reasnable sprts.
Yurs,
Li Ming
2021年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程;
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【参考范文】
I can't be mre thrilled t hear that yu are ging t learn Chinese, and I'm really glad t ffer yu a helping hand. After cmparing the tw curses carefully, I suggest yu chse Chinese reading and writing. Here are my reasns.
First f all, this curse ffers bi-language learning. Given that yu have never made cntact with Chinese,having the class with cmpletely Chinese might be an bstacle fr yu With the help f yur mther language, I'm sure that yu will accept Chinese mre smthly.
Secnd,'Chinese reading and writing’ prvides a less intense learning perid. As a student, yu are likely t be busier at Mnday and Thursday, and yu may have mre free time at Friday. What's mre, lnger learning perid can als make yu better adapt t the Chines envirnment.
In cnclusin I strngly recmmend ‘Chinese reading and writing’ as yur first tuch f Chinese. Shuld yu have anther prblems, I wuld always be glad t help.
2021年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”（infrmatin literacy）的课程。课程包含以下四个板块：“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件，要求：
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块；
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
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审题:
背景: 学校将要开设“信息素养”课程(infrmatinliteracycurse)
任务:
作出选择:(关联性较强/自己有所了解的容易写)
“网站设计”(web-design)a
“大数据处理”(big data prcessing)
“精确搜索信息”(smart-internet searching)
“辨别真伪信息”(infrmatin credibility evaluatin)
给出理由:(可以从兴趣爱好、日常经历或社会现象写起)“网站设计”:通过建立自己的网站来宣传自己喜欢的事物
或者推广一些公益性的活动，并且能够在移动设备上浏览。
“大数据处理”:课题研究要做调查、或者对于一些社会现象想要了解更多，甚至作为大学专业方向提前学起来。
“精确搜索信息”:平时接触到太多无效、误导或营销信息希望能够省时省力、快速定位到自己需要的内容。
d. “辨别真伪信息”:读新闻报道或科普文章不能确定真实性，仅靠权威信息源和常识未必够用(可以提疫情期间和社交媒体)。
参考范文：
Dear Lucy,
My name is Wang Jia, a senir 3 student at the schl. I’m deeply interested in the curse in infrmatin literacy that yu're planning t launch. S I’m writing this email t infrm yu f my chice f the tw sectins I'd like t learn abut, which are “smart internet searching” and “infrmatin credibility evaluatin”.
T begin with, I've based my decisin n the expectatin that the cmbinatin f the tw sectins can lead me t my desired results. It s, in my view, self-evident that searching fr the infrmatin I need and ensuring the authenticity f its cntent are intercnnected.
In additin, in tday's digitalized wrld and with the expansin f scial media, infrmatin is everywhere and misinfrmatin is prevalent. The challenge then is t separate fact frm falsehd，efficiently and effectively. Take practical preventive measures in the case f COVID-19 as an example——the general public can be easily verwhelmed by a hst f seemingly identical and ptentially false news reprts.
Cnsequently, if prperly instructed in the basic skills f using infrmatin technlgy, including hw t pinpint what I’m lking fr and t verily that what I've fund is valid, I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need f accurate infrmatin.
In a nutshell, in the hpe f imprving my infrmatin literacy level, I expect t learn mre frm yur curse abut the infrmatin wrld and the ways in which t safely navigate thrugh it with ease.
Thank yu fr yur time and have a great day. Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Best regards,
Wane Jia
2020年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括：
(1) 提出解决问题的方法；
(2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。
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【参考答案】
Versin 01
Dear Wang Lei，
It's been a while since I heard frm yu. Last time, I invited yu t attend the cncert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Thugh yu did nt reply t me, the hesitatin wearing n yur face ffered me a glimpse f what was ging n in yur mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather r the terrible traffic that hinder yu frm making up yur mind. Hwever, as far as I cncerned, it's still wrth ur effrts.
This cncert is nt a pp music cncert but a classic music ne where several prestigius symphny rchestras will perfrm many well-knwn cmpsitins. It must be a feast fr all the audience. Mrever, chances are that we may have an album with perfrmers autgraphs n it. Yu shuld never miss such a fabulus cncert !
In terms f difficulties yu are wrried abut, I have already fund sme slutins. My father will be available n that day s that he can drive us t the scene. I have managed t persuade him t make his prmise. In additin, in case f a rainy day, I have prepared tw raincats. I am cnfident that we will indulge urselves int the elegant flw f ntes.
I am lking frward t hearing yur reply.
Yurs
,Li Hua
Versin 02
Dear Wang Lei,
I’m Li Hua. Having sent yu an invitatin t an utdr cncert fr sme days，I haven’t received yur reply. Are yu still hesitant t make a decisin just because the cncert will be held in the uter suburb which is nt s accessible t public transprtatin?
Hnestly speaking, transprt prblem is really nt a big deal. We can definitely find a way ut. If pssible, I can ask my father t drive me t the cncert, and certainly we can pick yu up as lng as yu make up yur mind t g there with us. In this case, there is n need t wrry abut the traffic.
T tell yu the truth, as a music lver like yu and me, this utdr cncert is really wrth ging t. Have yu seen its publicity materials? It reads that pp singers like Cheer Chen and music bands like Escape Plan will als perfrm at this cncert, where musicians, singers, sngwriters, music bands and music lvers like us will cntribute t and enjy a feast f music tgether. What’s mre, as senir three students wh have just finished the cllege entrance examinatin, we are desperate fr a chance t relax urselves and relieve ur enrmus pressure, and this cncert prvides us with a glden pprtunity t immerse urselves in ur pure jy fr music and rid urselves f the heavy academic burdens. Therefre, d nt hesitate, jin me in the cncert and let’s have fun tgether.
Since the utdr cncert is t be held next Friday, culd yu please tell me yur final decisin befre the end f this week? Really lk frward t yur early reply. Thanks.
Yurs, Li Hua.
Versin 03
Dear Wang Lei,
Hearing that yu are hesitating t attend the pen-air cncert held in the suburb next Friday due t the further distance and the incnvenience f transprtatin, I am writing t hpe that yu wuld like t jin us t enjy this fantastic music feast.
I really understand yur wrries and cncerns in regard t the tw aspects mentined abve. As fr the slutin, hw abut setting ut ne day ahead f schedule and taking public transprtatin with us t get there? In this way, nt nly can we relax urselves after stressful Gaka and explre sme ther wnderful places nearby, but als we can save mney t d smething mre meaningful. As fr the reasns, initially, we bth have great passin fr music and have determined t select classic music as ur majr in cllege. Whafs mre, I, undubtedly, believe that it is attending such grgeus live cncert that prvides us with a glden chance t enhance ur appreciatin f music, as well as cmmunicate and exchange ideas regarding prfessinal music knwledge with thse utstanding experts frm all ver the wrld. Additinally, immersed urselves in such beautiful meldies and agreeable atmsphere, we can escape frm the nise f the city temprarily and nurish ur inner-being t sme extent.
Hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin and lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs
Lihua
Versin 04
Dear Wang Lei,
Having heard that yu are still n the fence abut whether t attend an pen-air cncert in the suburbs, Td like yu t refer t sme f my feasible advice and reasns befre yu turn dwn my invitatin.
Yu mentined what yu dreaded mst was the lng distance and lack f transprtatin, which was my initial cncern as well. In fact, after ding a cmmuting guide based n Baidu Maps, the traffic is nt as incnvenient as we previusly thught since there are subways available in the suburbs nw. Yu can jin me t create a mre detailed travel strategy and chse the ptimal rute. Mrever, preparing smething t while away the time in advance is suggested, such as a bk r a Switch. As Einstein put it, time speeds up when yu9re with things and peple yu like.
Fr me, this cncert means a lt. D yu remember we made plans t g t the cncert tgether during the winter break? D yu remember that it was ur mutual lve fr music that kept us talking the whle night lng? This is the cncert we9ve been waiting fr and I am cnvinced it matters t bth f us. Althugh, due t the epidemic, the cncert was pstpned and will be held utdrs in the suburbs instead, it’s just lucky fr us that this cncert wasn’t cancelled. This hard-wn pprtunity deserves t be cherished.
What d yu think? I respect any thughts yu may have, but if we can g t the cncert tgether, we can definitely have a great Friday night.
Best regards,
Li Hua
2020年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
你是明启中学李华，看到电视台有报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台，表达想法，信件内容包含：
1）对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；
2）提出这些建议的理由。
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【参考范文】
T whm it may cncern,
Having watched yur recent reprt abut a huge stck f fd appraching expiry date, I’d like t ffer sme suggestins t help.
The Chinese New Year is arund the crner. Meanwhile, there are husing and railway cnstructin sites running rund the clck, where hundreds f migrant wrkers sacrifice their precius family reunin t meet the deadline. I suggest launching a New Year Purchasing Prgram fr these builders f Shanghai. Allwing them a special discunt n the fd in these supermarkets.
Shanghai culdn't have been such a cmmercial hub and financial center but fr the sweat these migrant wrkers shed. Thus they deserve sme favrable treatment fr their prime years devted t the city. Meanwhile, milk, bread, cffee and snacks are cnsumed by many, but are cnsidered dear by thse wh save every penny fr their faraway families. This prgram serves as a tken f ur lcals* gratitude, respects their needs and maintains the dignity f them, fr they can decide the amunt and srt f fd t buy by themselves. Last but nt least, it serves the need f supermarket managers as well. By n means can they find a mre meaningful and affrdable way t address this prblem.
I sincerely hpe my advice can help bth the super markets and the peple in need. Thank yu fr taking it int accunt.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
2019年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：
介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；
针对此事自己的态度以及理由。
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Dear Editr,
As an hnest reader f yur travel magazine, I'd express my pinin that the ticket prices f the ancient city fr dmestic turists at 5 dllars while 15 dllars fr verseas guests. I strngly advcate the equal fare and my reasns are as fllws.
Firstly, it can attract mre turists and dminate the pening-up dmestic traveling market. Mre and mre verseas turists are willing t visit the ancient city, which brings mre cnsumptin and jbs. In turn, the ancient city can be prtected well. Anther, mre and mre researchers will have mre mney deeply-explring the histry f the ancient city and display the ld days with new technlgy. Therefre,we can appreciate the past beautiful scenery f the ancient city.
Based n what I state abve, the fair price will benefit mre turists and turisms. Nt nly it attracts mre turists but als displays its beautiful scenery. What matters mst is that it has a cmprehensive influence n ur present days and cnstructs new relatinship between humans and the envirnment f ancient city.
I will highly appreciate it if yu can reply t me as sn as pssible!
Yur faithfully,
Li Min
2019年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明后中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。
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【答案】
Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea. Persnally speaking, I am willing t share my clthes n yur app. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes. It feels like yu are emtinally cnnecting smene in yur clthes. Then I may naturally wish t knw mre abut that particular “smene” and prbably further deepen ur relatinship. In the end, a gd friendship between me and my clthes mate might be built based n ur cmmn clthes. What’s mre, if ther students can try my clthes thrugh the app. In turn, I als can try their new clthes.
Therefre, students can wear different types f clthes withut actually spending any mney.
What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them. In tday’s material sciety, there are s many parents wh prepare lts f clthes fr their belved children fr different ccasins, such as a dress fr the party, gym suit fr indr sprts. Mrever, the clthes can nly realize their true value after they are put n a persn’s bdy.
T summarize, sharing my clthes n yur app benefits thers and me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服；②表示祝贺；③自己的观点；④理由；⑤总结。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：develp a new app（开发了一款软件），share clthes（共享衣服），feel prud f（感到自豪），emtinally cnnect smene（情感上连接某人），realize their true value（实现真正的价值）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
定语从句的使用T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes.
名词性从句的使用What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them.
非谓语动词的使用Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea.
2018年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你校英语报向全体高三学生征文，题目为"My teachers"，你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 对遇到过的老师进行分类
2. 具体描述每一类老师的特征
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范文1
I've been studying in MingQi fr three years, and it's time fr graduatin nw! During the precius three years, it's lucky f me t meet with all these perfect teachers.
First, the“friend-kind”teachers. They are usually rather yung and active. Cmpared with being a strict teacher I may be afraid f, they are rather be my friends. During the breaks, I will usually have a relaxing and causal cmmunicatin with them, the tpic f which may be beynd the subjects. They teach ranging frm basketball, entertainment and chess.
Secnd, the “parent-kind” teachers. They are usually in their frties and may have a child the same age as me. Viewing all students and their children, the “parent-kind” teachers are always patient and caring in bth study and mental and physical health. They will make the classrm a secnd hunt all students.
Third, the “culture-kind” teachers. Regardless f their age, they are always strict t us which gave us great pressures. Students are demanded highly in class, f curse the amunt f hmewrk arranged by them is always the largest.
Regardless f the kind f teacher all f them are the peple wh I appreciate and admire and lve.
范文2
In my previus 12-year study life I've met three types f teachers f them left me a deep impressin.
The first type is very strict. It was my primary schl math teacher. The first day I saw him, he made it a rule that all f us shuld put ur hands n the desk and if anyne f us dare t cpe thers’ hmewrk, He wuld tell ur parents. He was very strict but had a remarkable educatin effect.
The secnd type is very kind. It was my middle schl P.E. teacher. He was in his twenties. Despite the fact that he was the teacher, he played basketball with us every day. Mrever, he brught us ice-creams fr many times.
The last type is the teachers wh are just like friends. My senir high schl teacher all this type. Their class atmsphere was a rather active and every ne f us were ready t interact with them. We learned a lt f knwledge as well as made friends with them. They were als ready t pint ut us what the right rad is.
The third type teacher is the ne that every students want t have. But whatever the teacher's character is we shuld respect them because all teachers are eager t cultivate us.
范文3
On the path f pursuing knwledge, numerus teachers we have encuntered may have a lifelng impact n us, and even cntribute t shaping wh we are. Lking back n my schl life, my teachers can be generally classified int three types: dedicated, apprachable, and irrespnsible.
Dedicated teachers are mst ppular amng students nt nly because f their utstanding prfessinal knwledge but als because f their devtin t the career f teaching. Yu can expect mre than class time f them. They may have a face-t-face cmmunicatin with yu after class t enlighten yu with a tricky math prblem. They may sacrifice their family time t keep yu cmpany s that yu can smth yur emtinal prblem caused by yur wn family. Needless t say, mst teachers fall int this categry.
The secnd type f teacher may seem less qualified in terms f their teaching skills, but they can als easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with ur deepest secrets. Childhd and adlescence are awkward perids when we struggle t explre ur wn way in the wrld. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while ur parents seemingly live n anther planet. S a friendly adult like apprachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend t be careful when labeling a teacher irrespnsible, but they d exist. Sme f them may have temper issue, while thers may disregard their wn jb. One f my teachers fit the descriptin, wh was directly linked t my pr academic perfrmance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning cntinues, I will have pprtunities t meet mre teachers. Whereas, never will I frget the assistance frm my previus teachers r their passin fr knwledge.
2018年1月高考真题
II. Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括:
1你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一;
2通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。
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Dear headmaster,
S appealing (倒装句)is yur plan t intrduce a rbt t ur schl that I decide t respnd t yur asking fr prpsals. Frm my perspective, a rbt is mre suitable fr the psitin f librarian.
With regard t the range f service, a librarian needs nt nly t classify different kinds f bks, put and find them in the right rder n the right shelf but als keep a recrd f what bks are brrwed and returned, while being a waiter in a restaurant invlves serving the right dishes t the right table, ding sme cleaning and cmmunicating with the diners. A rbt can accmplish three r fur librarians’ wrk f srting and labeling bks at the same time, whereas it is pale befre a man in cmmunicating and tackling the unexpected (unpredictable) ccasins.
In terms f wrking efficiency, a rbt may be mre efficient in ding the prgrammed, mechanical and repetitive kind f wrk. Therefre, it is mre advisable fr the rbt t undertake the duties f a librarian gruping cuntless bks repeatedly, thus cnsiderably imprving the efficiency f a human librarian. Hwever, when it cmes t the wrk f a waiter, wh needn’t wrk s heavily and fast as a librarian but d need react flexibly t the diners’ requirements, a rbt wn’t make a remarkable difference and even may nt be mre qualified than a man.
In a nutshell, it is the mechanical wrk f a librarian that the rbt is mre cmpetent at. Hpe that my advice will be f great help t yur decisin.
Wang lei
Technlgy is transfrming the wrld and rbtics is refreshing ur visin fr wrk. A recent BBS pst revealed that ur schl had been planning t intrduce sme rbts and sught students’ pinins. Sme students thught the rbts culd act as canteen servants while the thers recmmended them as librarians in the schl library. In my pinin, these rbts shuld be emplyed as e-librarians.
Frm the perspective f efficiency, the intrductin f rbts in the canteen may fail t make full use f them in that the prvisin f three meals a day is a highly regulated rutine, such as 6:30 t 8:00 fr breakfast. They can be idled away（闲置） fr the rest f the time. Cntrarily, the rbts in the library will be accessible t us at any time and even at any place if the rbt functins permit.
With regard t services, the rbt functins in the canteen are singular（单一的）, n mre than delivering meals in a splendid, autmatic and quicker manner, which will cnveniently cut labr expenses, the very aim f schl administratin. In the library, these e-librarians will prvide varied and favrable facilitatins, including instant, autmatic and accurate inquiry, exchange and delivery f bks. They are facilities f knwledge.
The rbts in the canteen will eventually evlve int an eye-catching shw f mechanical magnificence, but as e-librarians, their ptentials are fully tapped（实现）. In this sense, this applicatin essentially explains the cre f technlgy advancement: t liberate man frm til and serve peple in the deeper explratin f knwledge in a mre efficient and cnvenient way.
评析：文章开头的动词使用可谓准确而丰富，均为考纲中的基本词汇，却给人耳目一新的感觉，完全没有生搬硬套“模板”的痕迹，这是本文的“与众不同”之一。也是诸君在日常词汇积累中要借鉴的地方---单词跟着例句走，活学活用。
其实中间段落完全可以构成另一篇佳作的核心部分。但由于本文入题篇幅较长，其他部分也都相应拉长，但这两段举例和说理“长而不腻”，调理清晰，没有重复“赘肉”。诸君在这里既要学到内容上的“与众不同”，也要时刻自省，自己的作品在结构上是不是合理。
结尾是文章的又一亮点，作者指出：“人工智能和机器人的存在，是为了解放生产力，让人类能够有时间精力去探索新的知识。”主题的升华是本篇范文的另一“与众不同”。
从头到尾，一气呵成，词汇使用没有深奥难懂，但看得出作者是在认真、自信地发表自己的意见，融入了“王磊”的角色，站在学校管理层的角度来探讨问题，think ut f the bx。
2017年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生的意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：
1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议;
2.需要改进的原因。
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范文1
Hearing the news that ur Students Unin will rganize a walking prgram and has put the drafted plan n the Internet, I’m writing t air my thughts abut it as fllws.
T begin With, frm my pint f view, the time planned is nt apprpriate. As is knwn t all, the first day f May is the first day f hliday in China s that the center city f Shanghai is sure t be crwded n that day. S the date had better be pstpned till the weekend befre r after the hliday, thus ensuring that we students have a gd taste f beauty f Shanghai. Mrever, I hld the idea that the rute shuld be revised. Persnally, after appraching at the Bund, it’s nt a desirable ptin t g back accrding t the riginate rute. Instead, we students can g t ther places f interest t g back t schl, which guarantees a glden pprtunity f witnessing the beauty f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, all the abve thughts are based n my persnal perspective and there may still leave smething t be desired, but as far as my strng wish t cntribute t the prgram is cncerned, I wuld be much bliged if yu culd take my suggestins int accunt.
范文2
Having been infrmed f the news that ur schl unin is seeking ur prpsals n an excursin t the urban area in Shanghai, I am mirthful t share my wn pinins. Frm where I stand ,the excursin is an appealing an advisable plan but there are still much rm fr imprvement. I intend t accunt fr it in three aspects.
First and fremst, the theme shuld be mre specific in large part because discvering Shanghai is a generalized idea that hinders students frm fulfilling the task perfectly as required. Thus, the theme can be translated int discvering the traditinal charm f Shanghai, enabling students t have a better taste f the vigrus city where they have lived fr almst a scre years.
Furthermre, the time fr the excursin shuld be changed. It is mre apprpriate and mre secure fr the schl unin t rganize the excursin n May 2nd instead f May Day, a natinal hliday that attracts thusands f peple flding int Shanghai. On May 2nd, with visitrs returning t their cities and white cllars ging back t wrk, students wuld elude heavy traffic and take mre delight f the excursin in particular
Last but nt least, the rute shuld be shrter. Given time and safety prblems, skipping Peple’s Square and just walking frm East Nanjing rad t the Bund assist students in discvering the charm f Shanghai mre efficiently. Of particular nte, the Bund serves as a landmark in Shanghai and has recrded vicissitudes f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, the excursin gives students the pprtunity t have a better understanding f Shanghai and sparks their interest t enjy life. T much pressure has been placed n them but the excursin amunts t an ideal avenue t ease their stress.
2017年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
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Dear LiHng,
Having heard that yu will participate in an verseas cmmunicatin activity in Britain which will last tw mnths, I’m nw writing t extend a helping hand, hping that my suggestin that yu shuld chse wrking as a vlunteer thirty hurs every mnth fr the lcal cmmunity nursing hme t gain an pprtunity t stay in it fr free may be beneficial t yu t sme extent.
There are three main reasns accunting fr my prpsal. First and fremst, nly by wrking as a vlunteer can yu attain a free stay. Apparently, in cntrast with the accmmdatin arranged by the hst, yu can save a substantial amunt f mney. In additin, staying at a cmmunity nursing hme, nt nly can yu be expsed mre t real life in sciety and enhance yur scial experiences, thus helping yu t get mre mature, but yur arrival will add clrs t the atmsphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but nt least, there is n denying that the interactin with the elderly can plish up yur scializing skills as well as raise yur awareness t cperate with strangers, which will cntribute t yur cmprehensive and crdinated develpment. As an ld saying ges, ‘We can gain bth things at the same time.’ S why nt chse it?
I genuinely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin. Best wishes that yu will have a gd time there. It is a glden chance fr yu in summer vacatin. In shrt, enjy yurself.
Yurs sincerely,
模拟练习（一）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．你校英文报正在开展以“Discvering Gd Bks”为题的讨论，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.描述发现好书的方式；
2.简单评论；
3.你的情况。
Hw d yu usually discver the bks yu read?
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Discvering Gd Bks
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【答案】 Discvering Gd Bks
Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce. This is fllwed by nline sellers at 22%, physical stres at 16%, scial media at 18%, and ther methds at 6%.
While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews. Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
Persnally, I rely n wrd f muth recmmendatins, but als brwse nline sellers and visit physical bkstres frm time t time t discver hidden gems.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果，并结合自身情况以“Discvering Gd Bks”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依据：Accrding t →In accrdance with
各种各样的：a variety f → varius
就我个人而言：Persnally →As far as I’m cncerned
依靠：rely n → depend n
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
拓展句：It is physical stres that ffer a unique brwsing experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce.（运用了hw引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
模拟练习（二）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展以“Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt”为题的讨论，就学生一般如何度过假期展开了调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.假期活动状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt
As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays.
Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. 45% f students think the hliday is an ccasin fr them t relax themselves, ging ut t travel. T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%. And 8% f the students chse t d sprts. The figures in the frm shw students attach great imprtance t study.
Frm my perspective, hlidays shuld be a meaningful time fr us students t enjy urselves r learn smething beynd the classrms. Taking part in sme scial activities is a gd chice fr us students t imprve urselves and make hlidays cunt.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显示：shw→indicate
高兴：delight→jy
重要性：imprtance→significance
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%.
拓展句：T ur delight, the percent f the students wh d husewrk is 15%.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. (运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句)
课程名称
汉语听说
汉语读写
课程内容
日常会话
故事读写
授课安排
每周一、四
晚7:00-8:00；共8周
每周五
晚7:00-8:30；共16周
授课语言
全中文
中英双语
主题
发现上海
时间
5月1日（周日）下午3点
路线
从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩(the Bund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。必须包含:
(1)你的选择;
(2) 你的理由。
解析：
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为建议信；
② 时态：一般现在时态；
③ 提示：项目内容已给出，学生应选一项活动，阐述理由，注意写信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己写信意图；
第二步，具体说明项目内容和选择的原因；
第三步，结尾可以表达自己的期盼。
【范文】
T whm it may cncern,
Hearing that ur schl will rganize a themed activity "Walk int histry",I am writing this letter with the aim f putting frward my pinins. As fr me, shting a shrt vide is a superb ptin. The reasns fr my preference are as fllws.
First f all, there is n dubt that shting a vide shall definitely mtivate we students t put what we have learnt t practice. Thrugh filming the perfrmance, nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. In additin, filming is a teamwrk. I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career.What's mre, the shrt vide will be widely spread, if it is psted n scial media. The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. Thus, the virtue f lder generatin will pass n.
I sincerely hpe my advice helps this activity. Thank yu fr taking my suggestins int accunt.
【好词好句】
1.Thrugh filming the perfrmance,nt nly can I prmte practical ability but als I can imprve my scial skills. (nt als 倒装句）
通过拍摄，我不仅可以提高我的实践能力，还可以提高我的社交能力。
2.I can learn hw t cperate with thers in this activity, which is an imprtant quality in a career. （which非限制性定语从句）
我可以在这个活动中学习如何与他人合作，这是一个职业生涯的重要素质。
3.The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital rle in attracting millins f yung peple wh want t learn abut histrical backgrund f a given histrical event. （wh 引导定语从句）
生动的画面和优美的音乐起到至关重要的作用，吸引数以百万计的年轻人想要了解一个特定的历史事件的历史背景。
2022年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7:30到7:50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晨跑的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求：
你认为晨跑安排中存在的问题；
提出改进的建议和理由。
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学霸作文（仅供参考）
Dear Student Unin ,
I am writing this letter t reflect n the schl's rganizatin f mrning running fr all teachers and students. Glad that the schl rganizes mrning running fr the health f students. Hwever, sme students reflected that they were uncmfrtable after mrning running which is an urgent prblem t be slved. T slve it, my reasns and suggestins are as fllws.
First f all, it is inapprpriate t set the time fr mrning running frm 7:30 t 7:50 in the mrning, because it is nly 5 minutes frm the first class. Students will be very tired, which will impact the learning efficiency f the first class. Meanwhile, just after breakfast in the mrning vigrus exercise is nt suitable fr human beings, therwise it will cause stmach discmfrt.Why nt try t put the mrning running time in the big break after the secnd class? What 's mre.I hld, befre rganizing mrning running, we shuld give students a cmprehensive physical examinatin t ensure that everyne's physical cnditin is suitable fr running. We can arrange sme ther warm-up exercises fr these students and teachers wh are nt suitable fr running preventing sme unexpected accidents. Last but nt least, the schl shuld cnsider students with physical discmfrt t ask fr leave in advance and infrm the reasn.
In shrt, what matters mst is that physical educatin is a crucial part f educatin. Only by strengthening ur bdy can we better prtect ur cuntry and build ur mtherland. I hpe sincerely students can experience happiness in reasnable sprts.
Yurs,
Li Ming
2021年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程;
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【参考范文】
I can't be mre thrilled t hear that yu are ging t learn Chinese, and I'm really glad t ffer yu a helping hand. After cmparing the tw curses carefully, I suggest yu chse Chinese reading and writing. Here are my reasns.
First f all, this curse ffers bi-language learning. Given that yu have never made cntact with Chinese,having the class with cmpletely Chinese might be an bstacle fr yu With the help f yur mther language, I'm sure that yu will accept Chinese mre smthly.
Secnd,'Chinese reading and writing’ prvides a less intense learning perid. As a student, yu are likely t be busier at Mnday and Thursday, and yu may have mre free time at Friday. What's mre, lnger learning perid can als make yu better adapt t the Chines envirnment.
In cnclusin I strngly recmmend ‘Chinese reading and writing’ as yur first tuch f Chinese. Shuld yu have anther prblems, I wuld always be glad t help.
2021年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”（infrmatin literacy）的课程。课程包含以下四个板块：“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件，要求：
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块；
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
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审题:
背景: 学校将要开设“信息素养”课程(infrmatinliteracycurse)
任务:
作出选择:(关联性较强/自己有所了解的容易写)
“网站设计”(web-design)a
“大数据处理”(big data prcessing)
“精确搜索信息”(smart-internet searching)
“辨别真伪信息”(infrmatin credibility evaluatin)
给出理由:(可以从兴趣爱好、日常经历或社会现象写起)“网站设计”:通过建立自己的网站来宣传自己喜欢的事物
或者推广一些公益性的活动，并且能够在移动设备上浏览。
“大数据处理”:课题研究要做调查、或者对于一些社会现象想要了解更多，甚至作为大学专业方向提前学起来。
“精确搜索信息”:平时接触到太多无效、误导或营销信息希望能够省时省力、快速定位到自己需要的内容。
d. “辨别真伪信息”:读新闻报道或科普文章不能确定真实性，仅靠权威信息源和常识未必够用(可以提疫情期间和社交媒体)。
参考范文：
Dear Lucy,
My name is Wang Jia, a senir 3 student at the schl. I’m deeply interested in the curse in infrmatin literacy that yu're planning t launch. S I’m writing this email t infrm yu f my chice f the tw sectins I'd like t learn abut, which are “smart internet searching” and “infrmatin credibility evaluatin”.
T begin with, I've based my decisin n the expectatin that the cmbinatin f the tw sectins can lead me t my desired results. It s, in my view, self-evident that searching fr the infrmatin I need and ensuring the authenticity f its cntent are intercnnected.
In additin, in tday's digitalized wrld and with the expansin f scial media, infrmatin is everywhere and misinfrmatin is prevalent. The challenge then is t separate fact frm falsehd，efficiently and effectively. Take practical preventive measures in the case f COVID-19 as an example——the general public can be easily verwhelmed by a hst f seemingly identical and ptentially false news reprts.
Cnsequently, if prperly instructed in the basic skills f using infrmatin technlgy, including hw t pinpint what I’m lking fr and t verily that what I've fund is valid, I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need f accurate infrmatin.
In a nutshell, in the hpe f imprving my infrmatin literacy level, I expect t learn mre frm yur curse abut the infrmatin wrld and the ways in which t safely navigate thrugh it with ease.
Thank yu fr yur time and have a great day. Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Best regards,
Wane Jia
2020年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括：
(1) 提出解决问题的方法；
(2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。
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【参考答案】
Versin 01
Dear Wang Lei，
It's been a while since I heard frm yu. Last time, I invited yu t attend the cncert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Thugh yu did nt reply t me, the hesitatin wearing n yur face ffered me a glimpse f what was ging n in yur mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather r the terrible traffic that hinder yu frm making up yur mind. Hwever, as far as I cncerned, it's still wrth ur effrts.
This cncert is nt a pp music cncert but a classic music ne where several prestigius symphny rchestras will perfrm many well-knwn cmpsitins. It must be a feast fr all the audience. Mrever, chances are that we may have an album with perfrmers autgraphs n it. Yu shuld never miss such a fabulus cncert !
In terms f difficulties yu are wrried abut, I have already fund sme slutins. My father will be available n that day s that he can drive us t the scene. I have managed t persuade him t make his prmise. In additin, in case f a rainy day, I have prepared tw raincats. I am cnfident that we will indulge urselves int the elegant flw f ntes.
I am lking frward t hearing yur reply.
Yurs
,Li Hua
Versin 02
Dear Wang Lei,
I’m Li Hua. Having sent yu an invitatin t an utdr cncert fr sme days，I haven’t received yur reply. Are yu still hesitant t make a decisin just because the cncert will be held in the uter suburb which is nt s accessible t public transprtatin?
Hnestly speaking, transprt prblem is really nt a big deal. We can definitely find a way ut. If pssible, I can ask my father t drive me t the cncert, and certainly we can pick yu up as lng as yu make up yur mind t g there with us. In this case, there is n need t wrry abut the traffic.
T tell yu the truth, as a music lver like yu and me, this utdr cncert is really wrth ging t. Have yu seen its publicity materials? It reads that pp singers like Cheer Chen and music bands like Escape Plan will als perfrm at this cncert, where musicians, singers, sngwriters, music bands and music lvers like us will cntribute t and enjy a feast f music tgether. What’s mre, as senir three students wh have just finished the cllege entrance examinatin, we are desperate fr a chance t relax urselves and relieve ur enrmus pressure, and this cncert prvides us with a glden pprtunity t immerse urselves in ur pure jy fr music and rid urselves f the heavy academic burdens. Therefre, d nt hesitate, jin me in the cncert and let’s have fun tgether.
Since the utdr cncert is t be held next Friday, culd yu please tell me yur final decisin befre the end f this week? Really lk frward t yur early reply. Thanks.
Yurs, Li Hua.
Versin 03
Dear Wang Lei,
Hearing that yu are hesitating t attend the pen-air cncert held in the suburb next Friday due t the further distance and the incnvenience f transprtatin, I am writing t hpe that yu wuld like t jin us t enjy this fantastic music feast.
I really understand yur wrries and cncerns in regard t the tw aspects mentined abve. As fr the slutin, hw abut setting ut ne day ahead f schedule and taking public transprtatin with us t get there? In this way, nt nly can we relax urselves after stressful Gaka and explre sme ther wnderful places nearby, but als we can save mney t d smething mre meaningful. As fr the reasns, initially, we bth have great passin fr music and have determined t select classic music as ur majr in cllege. Whafs mre, I, undubtedly, believe that it is attending such grgeus live cncert that prvides us with a glden chance t enhance ur appreciatin f music, as well as cmmunicate and exchange ideas regarding prfessinal music knwledge with thse utstanding experts frm all ver the wrld. Additinally, immersed urselves in such beautiful meldies and agreeable atmsphere, we can escape frm the nise f the city temprarily and nurish ur inner-being t sme extent.
Hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin and lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs
Lihua
Versin 04
Dear Wang Lei,
Having heard that yu are still n the fence abut whether t attend an pen-air cncert in the suburbs, Td like yu t refer t sme f my feasible advice and reasns befre yu turn dwn my invitatin.
Yu mentined what yu dreaded mst was the lng distance and lack f transprtatin, which was my initial cncern as well. In fact, after ding a cmmuting guide based n Baidu Maps, the traffic is nt as incnvenient as we previusly thught since there are subways available in the suburbs nw. Yu can jin me t create a mre detailed travel strategy and chse the ptimal rute. Mrever, preparing smething t while away the time in advance is suggested, such as a bk r a Switch. As Einstein put it, time speeds up when yu9re with things and peple yu like.
Fr me, this cncert means a lt. D yu remember we made plans t g t the cncert tgether during the winter break? D yu remember that it was ur mutual lve fr music that kept us talking the whle night lng? This is the cncert we9ve been waiting fr and I am cnvinced it matters t bth f us. Althugh, due t the epidemic, the cncert was pstpned and will be held utdrs in the suburbs instead, it’s just lucky fr us that this cncert wasn’t cancelled. This hard-wn pprtunity deserves t be cherished.
What d yu think? I respect any thughts yu may have, but if we can g t the cncert tgether, we can definitely have a great Friday night.
Best regards,
Li Hua
2020年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
你是明启中学李华，看到电视台有报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台，表达想法，信件内容包含：
1）对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；
2）提出这些建议的理由。
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T whm it may cncern,
Having watched yur recent reprt abut a huge stck f fd appraching expiry date, I’d like t ffer sme suggestins t help.
The Chinese New Year is arund the crner. Meanwhile, there are husing and railway cnstructin sites running rund the clck, where hundreds f migrant wrkers sacrifice their precius family reunin t meet the deadline. I suggest launching a New Year Purchasing Prgram fr these builders f Shanghai. Allwing them a special discunt n the fd in these supermarkets.
Shanghai culdn't have been such a cmmercial hub and financial center but fr the sweat these migrant wrkers shed. Thus they deserve sme favrable treatment fr their prime years devted t the city. Meanwhile, milk, bread, cffee and snacks are cnsumed by many, but are cnsidered dear by thse wh save every penny fr their faraway families. This prgram serves as a tken f ur lcals* gratitude, respects their needs and maintains the dignity f them, fr they can decide the amunt and srt f fd t buy by themselves. Last but nt least, it serves the need f supermarket managers as well. By n means can they find a mre meaningful and affrdable way t address this prblem.
I sincerely hpe my advice can help bth the super markets and the peple in need. Thank yu fr taking it int accunt.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
2019年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：
介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；
针对此事自己的态度以及理由。
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Dear Editr,
As an hnest reader f yur travel magazine, I'd express my pinin that the ticket prices f the ancient city fr dmestic turists at 5 dllars while 15 dllars fr verseas guests. I strngly advcate the equal fare and my reasns are as fllws.
Firstly, it can attract mre turists and dminate the pening-up dmestic traveling market. Mre and mre verseas turists are willing t visit the ancient city, which brings mre cnsumptin and jbs. In turn, the ancient city can be prtected well. Anther, mre and mre researchers will have mre mney deeply-explring the histry f the ancient city and display the ld days with new technlgy. Therefre,we can appreciate the past beautiful scenery f the ancient city.
Based n what I state abve, the fair price will benefit mre turists and turisms. Nt nly it attracts mre turists but als displays its beautiful scenery. What matters mst is that it has a cmprehensive influence n ur present days and cnstructs new relatinship between humans and the envirnment f ancient city.
I will highly appreciate it if yu can reply t me as sn as pssible!
Yur faithfully,
Li Min
2019年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假如你是明后中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。
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【答案】
Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea. Persnally speaking, I am willing t share my clthes n yur app. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes. It feels like yu are emtinally cnnecting smene in yur clthes. Then I may naturally wish t knw mre abut that particular “smene” and prbably further deepen ur relatinship. In the end, a gd friendship between me and my clthes mate might be built based n ur cmmn clthes. What’s mre, if ther students can try my clthes thrugh the app. In turn, I als can try their new clthes.
Therefre, students can wear different types f clthes withut actually spending any mney.
What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them. In tday’s material sciety, there are s many parents wh prepare lts f clthes fr their belved children fr different ccasins, such as a dress fr the party, gym suit fr indr sprts. Mrever, the clthes can nly realize their true value after they are put n a persn’s bdy.
T summarize, sharing my clthes n yur app benefits thers and me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服；②表示祝贺；③自己的观点；④理由；⑤总结。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：develp a new app（开发了一款软件），share clthes（共享衣服），feel prud f（感到自豪），emtinally cnnect smene（情感上连接某人），realize their true value（实现真正的价值）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
定语从句的使用T begin with, it will be wnderful fr me if I learn that smene that I barely knw f can share my happiness f wearing my clthes.
名词性从句的使用What’s mre imprtant is that sharing my clthes will take full use f them.
非谓语动词的使用Hearing that yu have develped a new app f students sharing clthes, I feel truly prud f yur nvel idea.
2018年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你校英语报向全体高三学生征文，题目为"My teachers"，你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 对遇到过的老师进行分类
2. 具体描述每一类老师的特征
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范文1
I've been studying in MingQi fr three years, and it's time fr graduatin nw! During the precius three years, it's lucky f me t meet with all these perfect teachers.
First, the“friend-kind”teachers. They are usually rather yung and active. Cmpared with being a strict teacher I may be afraid f, they are rather be my friends. During the breaks, I will usually have a relaxing and causal cmmunicatin with them, the tpic f which may be beynd the subjects. They teach ranging frm basketball, entertainment and chess.
Secnd, the “parent-kind” teachers. They are usually in their frties and may have a child the same age as me. Viewing all students and their children, the “parent-kind” teachers are always patient and caring in bth study and mental and physical health. They will make the classrm a secnd hunt all students.
Third, the “culture-kind” teachers. Regardless f their age, they are always strict t us which gave us great pressures. Students are demanded highly in class, f curse the amunt f hmewrk arranged by them is always the largest.
Regardless f the kind f teacher all f them are the peple wh I appreciate and admire and lve.
范文2
In my previus 12-year study life I've met three types f teachers f them left me a deep impressin.
The first type is very strict. It was my primary schl math teacher. The first day I saw him, he made it a rule that all f us shuld put ur hands n the desk and if anyne f us dare t cpe thers’ hmewrk, He wuld tell ur parents. He was very strict but had a remarkable educatin effect.
The secnd type is very kind. It was my middle schl P.E. teacher. He was in his twenties. Despite the fact that he was the teacher, he played basketball with us every day. Mrever, he brught us ice-creams fr many times.
The last type is the teachers wh are just like friends. My senir high schl teacher all this type. Their class atmsphere was a rather active and every ne f us were ready t interact with them. We learned a lt f knwledge as well as made friends with them. They were als ready t pint ut us what the right rad is.
The third type teacher is the ne that every students want t have. But whatever the teacher's character is we shuld respect them because all teachers are eager t cultivate us.
范文3
On the path f pursuing knwledge, numerus teachers we have encuntered may have a lifelng impact n us, and even cntribute t shaping wh we are. Lking back n my schl life, my teachers can be generally classified int three types: dedicated, apprachable, and irrespnsible.
Dedicated teachers are mst ppular amng students nt nly because f their utstanding prfessinal knwledge but als because f their devtin t the career f teaching. Yu can expect mre than class time f them. They may have a face-t-face cmmunicatin with yu after class t enlighten yu with a tricky math prblem. They may sacrifice their family time t keep yu cmpany s that yu can smth yur emtinal prblem caused by yur wn family. Needless t say, mst teachers fall int this categry.
The secnd type f teacher may seem less qualified in terms f their teaching skills, but they can als easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with ur deepest secrets. Childhd and adlescence are awkward perids when we struggle t explre ur wn way in the wrld. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while ur parents seemingly live n anther planet. S a friendly adult like apprachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend t be careful when labeling a teacher irrespnsible, but they d exist. Sme f them may have temper issue, while thers may disregard their wn jb. One f my teachers fit the descriptin, wh was directly linked t my pr academic perfrmance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning cntinues, I will have pprtunities t meet mre teachers. Whereas, never will I frget the assistance frm my previus teachers r their passin fr knwledge.
2018年1月高考真题
II. Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括:
1你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一;
2通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。
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Dear headmaster,
S appealing (倒装句)is yur plan t intrduce a rbt t ur schl that I decide t respnd t yur asking fr prpsals. Frm my perspective, a rbt is mre suitable fr the psitin f librarian.
With regard t the range f service, a librarian needs nt nly t classify different kinds f bks, put and find them in the right rder n the right shelf but als keep a recrd f what bks are brrwed and returned, while being a waiter in a restaurant invlves serving the right dishes t the right table, ding sme cleaning and cmmunicating with the diners. A rbt can accmplish three r fur librarians’ wrk f srting and labeling bks at the same time, whereas it is pale befre a man in cmmunicating and tackling the unexpected (unpredictable) ccasins.
In terms f wrking efficiency, a rbt may be mre efficient in ding the prgrammed, mechanical and repetitive kind f wrk. Therefre, it is mre advisable fr the rbt t undertake the duties f a librarian gruping cuntless bks repeatedly, thus cnsiderably imprving the efficiency f a human librarian. Hwever, when it cmes t the wrk f a waiter, wh needn’t wrk s heavily and fast as a librarian but d need react flexibly t the diners’ requirements, a rbt wn’t make a remarkable difference and even may nt be mre qualified than a man.
In a nutshell, it is the mechanical wrk f a librarian that the rbt is mre cmpetent at. Hpe that my advice will be f great help t yur decisin.
Wang lei
Technlgy is transfrming the wrld and rbtics is refreshing ur visin fr wrk. A recent BBS pst revealed that ur schl had been planning t intrduce sme rbts and sught students’ pinins. Sme students thught the rbts culd act as canteen servants while the thers recmmended them as librarians in the schl library. In my pinin, these rbts shuld be emplyed as e-librarians.
Frm the perspective f efficiency, the intrductin f rbts in the canteen may fail t make full use f them in that the prvisin f three meals a day is a highly regulated rutine, such as 6:30 t 8:00 fr breakfast. They can be idled away（闲置） fr the rest f the time. Cntrarily, the rbts in the library will be accessible t us at any time and even at any place if the rbt functins permit.
With regard t services, the rbt functins in the canteen are singular（单一的）, n mre than delivering meals in a splendid, autmatic and quicker manner, which will cnveniently cut labr expenses, the very aim f schl administratin. In the library, these e-librarians will prvide varied and favrable facilitatins, including instant, autmatic and accurate inquiry, exchange and delivery f bks. They are facilities f knwledge.
The rbts in the canteen will eventually evlve int an eye-catching shw f mechanical magnificence, but as e-librarians, their ptentials are fully tapped（实现）. In this sense, this applicatin essentially explains the cre f technlgy advancement: t liberate man frm til and serve peple in the deeper explratin f knwledge in a mre efficient and cnvenient way.
评析：文章开头的动词使用可谓准确而丰富，均为考纲中的基本词汇，却给人耳目一新的感觉，完全没有生搬硬套“模板”的痕迹，这是本文的“与众不同”之一。也是诸君在日常词汇积累中要借鉴的地方---单词跟着例句走，活学活用。
其实中间段落完全可以构成另一篇佳作的核心部分。但由于本文入题篇幅较长，其他部分也都相应拉长，但这两段举例和说理“长而不腻”，调理清晰，没有重复“赘肉”。诸君在这里既要学到内容上的“与众不同”，也要时刻自省，自己的作品在结构上是不是合理。
结尾是文章的又一亮点，作者指出：“人工智能和机器人的存在，是为了解放生产力，让人类能够有时间精力去探索新的知识。”主题的升华是本篇范文的另一“与众不同”。
从头到尾，一气呵成，词汇使用没有深奥难懂，但看得出作者是在认真、自信地发表自己的意见，融入了“王磊”的角色，站在学校管理层的角度来探讨问题，think ut f the bx。
2017年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生的意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：
1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议;
2.需要改进的原因。
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范文1
Hearing the news that ur Students Unin will rganize a walking prgram and has put the drafted plan n the Internet, I’m writing t air my thughts abut it as fllws.
T begin With, frm my pint f view, the time planned is nt apprpriate. As is knwn t all, the first day f May is the first day f hliday in China s that the center city f Shanghai is sure t be crwded n that day. S the date had better be pstpned till the weekend befre r after the hliday, thus ensuring that we students have a gd taste f beauty f Shanghai. Mrever, I hld the idea that the rute shuld be revised. Persnally, after appraching at the Bund, it’s nt a desirable ptin t g back accrding t the riginate rute. Instead, we students can g t ther places f interest t g back t schl, which guarantees a glden pprtunity f witnessing the beauty f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, all the abve thughts are based n my persnal perspective and there may still leave smething t be desired, but as far as my strng wish t cntribute t the prgram is cncerned, I wuld be much bliged if yu culd take my suggestins int accunt.
范文2
Having been infrmed f the news that ur schl unin is seeking ur prpsals n an excursin t the urban area in Shanghai, I am mirthful t share my wn pinins. Frm where I stand ,the excursin is an appealing an advisable plan but there are still much rm fr imprvement. I intend t accunt fr it in three aspects.
First and fremst, the theme shuld be mre specific in large part because discvering Shanghai is a generalized idea that hinders students frm fulfilling the task perfectly as required. Thus, the theme can be translated int discvering the traditinal charm f Shanghai, enabling students t have a better taste f the vigrus city where they have lived fr almst a scre years.
Furthermre, the time fr the excursin shuld be changed. It is mre apprpriate and mre secure fr the schl unin t rganize the excursin n May 2nd instead f May Day, a natinal hliday that attracts thusands f peple flding int Shanghai. On May 2nd, with visitrs returning t their cities and white cllars ging back t wrk, students wuld elude heavy traffic and take mre delight f the excursin in particular
Last but nt least, the rute shuld be shrter. Given time and safety prblems, skipping Peple’s Square and just walking frm East Nanjing rad t the Bund assist students in discvering the charm f Shanghai mre efficiently. Of particular nte, the Bund serves as a landmark in Shanghai and has recrded vicissitudes f Shanghai.
In a nutshell, the excursin gives students the pprtunity t have a better understanding f Shanghai and sparks their interest t enjy life. T much pressure has been placed n them but the excursin amunts t an ideal avenue t ease their stress.
2017年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
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Dear LiHng,
Having heard that yu will participate in an verseas cmmunicatin activity in Britain which will last tw mnths, I’m nw writing t extend a helping hand, hping that my suggestin that yu shuld chse wrking as a vlunteer thirty hurs every mnth fr the lcal cmmunity nursing hme t gain an pprtunity t stay in it fr free may be beneficial t yu t sme extent.
There are three main reasns accunting fr my prpsal. First and fremst, nly by wrking as a vlunteer can yu attain a free stay. Apparently, in cntrast with the accmmdatin arranged by the hst, yu can save a substantial amunt f mney. In additin, staying at a cmmunity nursing hme, nt nly can yu be expsed mre t real life in sciety and enhance yur scial experiences, thus helping yu t get mre mature, but yur arrival will add clrs t the atmsphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but nt least, there is n denying that the interactin with the elderly can plish up yur scializing skills as well as raise yur awareness t cperate with strangers, which will cntribute t yur cmprehensive and crdinated develpment. As an ld saying ges, ‘We can gain bth things at the same time.’ S why nt chse it?
I genuinely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int cnsideratin. Best wishes that yu will have a gd time there. It is a glden chance fr yu in summer vacatin. In shrt, enjy yurself.
Yurs sincerely,
模拟练习（一）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．你校英文报正在开展以“Discvering Gd Bks”为题的讨论，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.描述发现好书的方式；
2.简单评论；
3.你的情况。
Hw d yu usually discver the bks yu read?
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Discvering Gd Bks
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【答案】 Discvering Gd Bks
Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce. This is fllwed by nline sellers at 22%, physical stres at 16%, scial media at 18%, and ther methds at 6%.
While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews. Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
Persnally, I rely n wrd f muth recmmendatins, but als brwse nline sellers and visit physical bkstres frm time t time t discver hidden gems.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果，并结合自身情况以“Discvering Gd Bks”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依据：Accrding t →In accrdance with
各种各样的：a variety f → varius
就我个人而言：Persnally →As far as I’m cncerned
依靠：rely n → depend n
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Physical stres ffer a unique brwsing experience.
拓展句：It is physical stres that ffer a unique brwsing experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Accrding t a recent survey n hw peple discver bks, wrd f muth is the mst ppular methd, with 38% f respndents citing it as their primary surce.（运用了hw引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】While wrd f muth recmmendatins are seen as the mst reliable, scial media and nline sellers prvide a wide variety f ptins and easy access t reviews.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
模拟练习（二）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
56．假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展以“Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt”为题的讨论，就学生一般如何度过假期展开了调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.假期活动状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Hw t Make Hlidays Cunt
As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays.
Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. 45% f students think the hliday is an ccasin fr them t relax themselves, ging ut t travel. T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%. And 8% f the students chse t d sprts. The figures in the frm shw students attach great imprtance t study.
Frm my perspective, hlidays shuld be a meaningful time fr us students t enjy urselves r learn smething beynd the classrms. Taking part in sme scial activities is a gd chice fr us students t imprve urselves and make hlidays cunt.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显示：shw→indicate
高兴：delight→jy
重要性：imprtance→significance
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T ur delight, the percent f the students ding husewrk is 15%.
拓展句：T ur delight, the percent f the students wh d husewrk is 15%.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend hlidays. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 71%. (运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句)
课程名称
汉语听说
汉语读写
课程内容
日常会话
故事读写
授课安排
每周一、四
晚7:00-8:00；共8周
每周五
晚7:00-8:30；共16周
授课语言
全中文
中英双语
主题
发现上海
时间
5月1日（周日）下午3点
路线
从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩(the Bund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。
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