广东高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

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开放性作文1．请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.内容包括：1.微笑的作用；2.列举生活中的一个事例；3.你的个人感悟。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Smile________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．你校英文报开辟了“Readers’ Voice”专栏，邀请读者针对一些热点问题发表自己的看法，请你以“Does online learning benefit us?”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：1、分析利与弊;2、提出建议。注意：1、词数80左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．你校将举行英语作文竞赛。请你适当发挥想象力，以“Robots in the Future”为题写篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.机器人将来在工业和生活中的用途；2.你对未来使用机器人的看法。注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Robots in the FutureI think more and more intelligent robots will be used in the future.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．新学期开始了，你校英文报正在举行“诚信为本”的征文活动，你打算以 “诚信考试”为题投稿，内容包括：1. 考试不诚信的现象；2. 诚信考试的重要性；3. 你的呼吁。注意：1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Take Exams Honestly________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．今年，重庆山火和泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年榜样：00 后消防员，00 后志愿者等。你校正在组织 “We Should Shoulder the Responsibility” 英语征文活动，请你投稿。内容包括：1. 青年榜样的突出品质;2. 他们对你的影响;3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。注意：1. 词数 80 左右;2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。We Should Shoulder the Responsibility________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是李华，你校正在组织以“My Favorite Sports Role Model”为题目的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 你喜欢他或她的原因。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My Favorite Sports Role Model________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．你校正在举办主题为“My English Learning Experience”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1. 你遇到的困难;2. 你是如何克服的;3. 你的建议。注意：1. 80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My English Learning Experience________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李华，你校英文报举办以“Will On-line Teaching Replace Traditional Classrooms?”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Will On-line Teaching Replace Traditional Classrooms?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你校英文社团正在组织一次英文写作大赛，请你以“One of my impressive classmates”为题写一篇短文向社团投稿，内容包括：(1)简要介绍该同学；(2)该同学的具体情况；(3)你对该同学的评价。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．星光中学（Xing Guang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1. 时间与地点：12月11日，西樵山；2. 活动的过程；3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________          1．No body language can be more attractive/fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan/overlook Wenchuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldier from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.It is safe/no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生根据提示并结合生活中的事例写一篇英语短文，谈谈微笑的作用。【详解】词汇积累高兴的：delighted →happy例如：for instance →for example有时：Sometimes →At times挽救：rescue→save2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan/overlook Wenchuan.拓展句：A little boy who was named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan/overlook Wenchuan.【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. (运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2] His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness. (运用了which和who引导的定语从句)2．Affected by the COVID-19, many schools launched network course so as to guarantee the school hours are not delayed. However, not everyone is suitable for online learning, because it has its advantages as well as disadvantages.  Every coin has two sides. On the one hand, in online teaching, each teacher only needs to have one or two classes a day, leaving the teacher more time to grade and write comments for the students, so that the students can understand the shortcomings and highlights of their own work, and then know which direction they can work in. On the other hand, without teacher’s face-to-face teaching, some students cannot control themselves, playing games or chatting with friends when having classes online, which results in their bad performance in courses. So, as for its disadvantage, we students should learn to be independent, control ourselves wisely, and never confuse study with playing. All in all, I believe that, as long as we carefully carry out online learning and always maintain our confidence in learning, we will turn its disadvantage into advantage.【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇议论文，要求学生就“Does online learning benefit us?”发表自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累：影响：affect→influence/impact引起，导致：result in →lead to/cause /bring about确保：guarantee→ensure关于：as for→in regard to/with respect to2.句式拓展：原句：So, as for its disadvantage, we students should learn to be independent, control ourselves wisely, and never confuse study with playing.拓展句：So, as for its disadvantage, it is high time that we students should learn to be independent, control ourselves wisely, and never confuse study with playing.【点睛】【高分句型1】Affected by the COVID-19, many schools launched network course so as to guarantee the school hours are not delayed.（运用了过去分词作原因状语。）【高分句型2】On the other hand, without teacher’s face-to-face teaching, some students cannot control themselves, playing games or chatting with friends when having classes online, which results in their bad performance in courses.（运用了现在分词作状语和which引导非限制性定语从句。）3．Robots in the FutureI think more and more intelligent robots will be used in the future.Robots will play an important role in factories. They can do some heavy and dangerous jobs there. In our daily life, robots can help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking and washing. They can also look after the elderly, babies and patients. They’ll even take exercise with us.In my opinion, robots will change our future life in many ways, making it more colorful. However, it’s unwise for us to depend heavily on them. As humans’ helpers, robots should be used properly.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文，要求考生适当发挥想象力，以“Robots in the Future”为题写篇短文参加学校英语作文竞赛。【详解】1.词汇积累运用：use →put into use重要的：important →essential每天的：daily →everyday在我看来：In my opinion →As far as I’m concerned2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Robots will play an important role in factories. They can do some heavy and dangerous jobs there.拓展句：Robots will play an important role in factories because they can do some heavy and dangerous jobs there.【点睛】[高分句型1] In my opinion, robots will change our future life in many ways, making it more colorful. (运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] However, it’s unwise for us to depend heavily on them. (运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语为不定式)4．Possible versionTake Exams HonestlyNowadays quite a few students make too much of test results to behave honestly in exams, such as looking at others’ papers or using their digital devices. They may obtain high grades by dishonest means but lose personal integrity and dignity. In my opinion, taking exams with integrity is of primary importance to a student. Honesty is cherished as one of the most important Chinese traditional virtues. It’s also the most prized qualities of a person. Besides, honesty is fundamental to academic and career success. As far as a student’s concerned, it’s a dishonest behavior and a shame as well to cheat in exams. As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating.  It’s highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. We should learn to be honest from an early age and behave with integrity in every way so as to excel morally and academically.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文，要求考生以“诚信考试”为题在你校英文报正在举行“诚信为本”的征文活动中投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累考试：exam →test方法：means →way此外：Besides →Moreover为了：so as to →in order to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays quite a few students make too much of test results to behave honestly in exams, such as looking at others’ papers or using their digital devices.拓展句：Nowadays quite a few students make much of test results so that they don’t behave honestly in exams, such as looking at others’ papers or using their digital devices.【点睛】[高分句型1] As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] It’s highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. (运用了that引导的主语从句和虚拟语气)5．One possible version:We Should Shoulder the ResponsibilityThis year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc.They showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility. What they did made me think about our responsibility. The young people are carrying too much responsibility.The contemporary young people are stressed out, and we have to work hard to serve the country. As a student,as long as we choose study, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly. We have to grow up with physical and mental health, and that is inseparable from all kinds of hardship parents endured.So we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care. In a word, all the young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility” 英语征文投稿。其内容包括：青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。【详解】1.词汇积累很多：many→plenty of  特别：especially →in particular  考虑：think about→reflect on  应该：should→be supposed to  2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc.They showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.拓展句：This year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc, who showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility. 【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.（运用了what引导的主语从句） 【高分句型2】As a student，as long as we choose study，we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly.（运用了as long as引导条件状语从句）6．One possible version:My Favorite Sports Role ModelWith the increasing popularity of sports, more and more sportsmen are familiar to us. There are many athletes that I admire. However, Lang Ping is always my role model in sports.As is known to all, Lang Ping, who is known as the “iron hammer”, was once a volleyball player, and then a volleyball coach. She won numerous honors during her career. What impresses me most is the Chinese women's volleyball team spirit she created, which inspires me all the time. So I will always follow Lang Ping's example.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“My Favorite Sports Role Model”为题，写一篇短文参加学校组织的英语作文比赛。【详解】1. 词汇积累渐增的：increasing → growing运动员：sportsman → athlete/player仰慕：admire → respect/look up to许多的：numerous → many/multiple/plentiful 2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：With the increasing popularity of sports, more and more sportsmen are familiar to us.同义句：As sports are gaining increasing popularity, more and more sportsmen are familiar to us.【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, Lang Ping, who is known as the “iron hammer”, was once a volleyball player, and then a volleyball coach.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，以及who引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】What impresses me most is the Chinese women's volleyball team spirit she created, which inspires me all the time.（运用了what引导的主语从句，省略作宾语的关系词的定语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。）7．参考范文：My English Learning ExperienceI’ve learned English for years and have made great progress in it. But the process used to be painful for me.When I was in primary school, I found it difficult to pronounce new words properly, let alone remembering them. With my teacher’s help, I began to set small, achievable goals and practiced more. Listening to English songs and watching English movies also helped excite my interest and increase my confidence. Now I’m no longer afraid of learning English and have become a passionate English learner who can communicate with foreigners fluently.In my point of view, the secret to learning English lies in hard work and strong belief in yourself. So be confident and try your best. I’m sure you can make it too!【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，参加学校正在举办的主题为“My English Learning Experience”的征文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累学习：learn→study困难的：difficult→hard在我看来：in my point of view→as far as I am concerned在于：lie in→consist in2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：In my point of view, the secret to learning English lies in hard work and strong belief in yourself.拓展句：I think that the secret to learning English lies in hard work and strong belief in yourself.【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was in primary school, I found it difficult to pronounce new words properly, let alone remembering them. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及it作形式宾语)[高分句型2] Now I’m no longer afraid of learning English and have become a passionate English learner who can communicate with foreigners fluently. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)8．Will On-line Teaching Replace Traditional Classrooms?On-line teaching is becoming more and more popular nowadays, providing a very convenient means of education. However, from my point of view, on-line teaching will not replace physical classrooms in the future.On the one hand, on-line teaching is obviously not a way to give the students chances to learn by doing. On the other hand, a traditional classroom in regular schools is a place not only for kids to learn, but also to make friends and cooperate with their fellow students, which is an advantage over on-line teaching, where kids learn mainly through watching and listening.【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以“Will On-line Teaching Replace Traditional Classrooms?”为题写一篇短文参加学校英文报征文活动。【详解】1.词汇积累变得：get→become方式，方法：way→means→method然而：yet→however机会：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：On-line teaching is becoming more and more popular nowadays, providing a very convenient means of education.拓展句：On-line teaching is becoming more and more popular nowadays, which provides a very convenient means of education.【点睛】【高分句型1】On-line teaching is becoming more and more popular nowadays, providing a very convenient means of education. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】On the other hand, a traditional classroom in regular schools is a place not only for kids to learn, but also to make friends and cooperate with their fellow students, which is an advantage over on-line teaching, where kids learn mainly through watching and listening. (运用了which及where引导的非限制性定语从句)9．One of my impressive classmatesLi Qun is one of my classmates, who impresses me most.She is pretty with a slim figure and big eyes. Whenever I meet with her, she is always wearing a sweet smile. Besides, she works hard and take exercises regularly. However, what impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others. My English is poor, but with her help I have improved a lot. As to her hobby, she likes reading best. We often go to the library together. On the way, she likes telling jokes, making us laugh all the time.She is so attractive that I am happy to study and make friends with her.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文。要求考生以“One of my impressive classmates”为题写一篇短文向社团投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累美丽的：pretty→beautiful乐意做某事：be ready to do→be willing to do差的，弱的：poor→weak提高：improve→make progress2.句型拓展陈述句改倒装句原句：She is so attractive that I am happy to study and make friends with her.拓展句：So attractive is she that I am happy to study and make friends with her.【点睛】[高分句型1]However, what impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）[高分句型2]She is so attractive that I am happy to study and make friends with her.（运用了so...that...句型，that引导结果状语从句）10． In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11. Hundreds of us took part in it.  It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Xijiao Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。星光中学（Xing Guang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：take part in→participate in出发：set out →start off到达：reach→arrive at令人愉快的：wonderful→cheerful2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11. Hundreds of us took part in it. 拓展句：In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on December 11, which hundreds of us took part in. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. （运用了when引导时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us.（运用了部分倒装）